omg i can't believe i'm updating so soon! must be something wrong with
me.....(goes to check temperature) oh i'm fine!!
DarkMewAngel suggested that instead of using all new characters I should use some of the original characters. plz review and tell me who you want from the original to be in my story. i only have the first 3 manga and haven't watched any of the tokyo mew mew anime on tv so I might not know much about deep blue and the blue knight. (i only know these from the other fan-fics XPXP)
Disclaimer: I don't own Tokyo Mew Mew. Only any characters you don't notice.
Chapter 2 - Left Out
Ivan spied the cute girl that had stole his heart the first day he came to Japan from America. He continued watching her chat with her friends until she seemed to end her conversation and walk his way. The closer she came the faster Ivan's heart beat. He wondered if she was coming to talk to him. No he thought, she would never talk to him. Lost in thought, Ivan didn't notice Mango come up to him.
"Hi! Aren't you that new student from America? I was wondering if you could give me some information about it. You see, me and friends are doing a project on....... hello?? are you listening?" asked Mango in her usual cheery voice.
Ivan felt a flush of red creep up in his cheeks and his heart beated faster than ever, intensifying the longer he stood there.
"Um...hi...and uh sure?" Ivan was embarassed from the stupid answer he had just given Mango and felt himself blush once again.
"Thanks!!!!" replied Mango and ran off to catch up with her friends.
Long after Mango was gone, Ivan still felt embarassed at what he had done.
"Can I ever tell her the way I feel?" Ivan murmured to himself. Just then he saw a big group of kids gather around the courtyard of their school.
As he walked closer to the crowd he heard bits of their conversation.
"He's the best....he's so cute....I wonder if he'll talk to me..." the conversation seemed to end there, but Ivan knew what they were talking about.
Masaya was the popular and smart boy on the kendo team that everyone liked. The guys wanted to be his friend to gain popularity, and the girls just loved him, especially Mango. Earspiltting screams came from all the girls around the group of fangirls as Masaya walked out from a kendo tournament.
Ivan didn't know what was so interesting about Masaya. Personally he thought that he was really annoying and boring. He turned around and started towards the school library. At least no one would disturb in there.
"Ivan!!" Ivan turned around in the direction he came from to see Mango waving at him.
Next to Mango was the one that he found so dull. Masaya.
"Have you met Masaya, Ivan? Masaya, this is Ivan. The one that came from America? Ivan, this is Masaya. But you probably already know him since he's really well known by everyone at this school." Mango seemed to be different than her usual self when she introduced them. She seemed a lot more......strange.
"Hi?...." Ivan attemped to try and make friends with someone he obviously loathed, but he couldn't help noticing how much Masaya was staring at him. Masaya had a glare in his eyes that made Ivan shiver all over.
End of Chapter 2
yay!!! i finished it!! and it's longer!!
Thanks to StarFighterHeart and sugerlump59 for your comments!! i'll try and not make it too confusing.
Also thanks to DarkMewAngel for suggesting that I add a original character. Putting Masaya in is kinda working. Thanks again to everyone.
dream-cloudstar
DarkMewAngel suggested that instead of using all new characters I should use some of the original characters. plz review and tell me who you want from the original to be in my story. i only have the first 3 manga and haven't watched any of the tokyo mew mew anime on tv so I might not know much about deep blue and the blue knight. (i only know these from the other fan-fics XPXP)
Disclaimer: I don't own Tokyo Mew Mew. Only any characters you don't notice.
Chapter 2 - Left Out
Ivan spied the cute girl that had stole his heart the first day he came to Japan from America. He continued watching her chat with her friends until she seemed to end her conversation and walk his way. The closer she came the faster Ivan's heart beat. He wondered if she was coming to talk to him. No he thought, she would never talk to him. Lost in thought, Ivan didn't notice Mango come up to him.
"Hi! Aren't you that new student from America? I was wondering if you could give me some information about it. You see, me and friends are doing a project on....... hello?? are you listening?" asked Mango in her usual cheery voice.
Ivan felt a flush of red creep up in his cheeks and his heart beated faster than ever, intensifying the longer he stood there.
"Um...hi...and uh sure?" Ivan was embarassed from the stupid answer he had just given Mango and felt himself blush once again.
"Thanks!!!!" replied Mango and ran off to catch up with her friends.
Long after Mango was gone, Ivan still felt embarassed at what he had done.
"Can I ever tell her the way I feel?" Ivan murmured to himself. Just then he saw a big group of kids gather around the courtyard of their school.
As he walked closer to the crowd he heard bits of their conversation.
"He's the best....he's so cute....I wonder if he'll talk to me..." the conversation seemed to end there, but Ivan knew what they were talking about.
Masaya was the popular and smart boy on the kendo team that everyone liked. The guys wanted to be his friend to gain popularity, and the girls just loved him, especially Mango. Earspiltting screams came from all the girls around the group of fangirls as Masaya walked out from a kendo tournament.
Ivan didn't know what was so interesting about Masaya. Personally he thought that he was really annoying and boring. He turned around and started towards the school library. At least no one would disturb in there.
"Ivan!!" Ivan turned around in the direction he came from to see Mango waving at him.
Next to Mango was the one that he found so dull. Masaya.
"Have you met Masaya, Ivan? Masaya, this is Ivan. The one that came from America? Ivan, this is Masaya. But you probably already know him since he's really well known by everyone at this school." Mango seemed to be different than her usual self when she introduced them. She seemed a lot more......strange.
"Hi?...." Ivan attemped to try and make friends with someone he obviously loathed, but he couldn't help noticing how much Masaya was staring at him. Masaya had a glare in his eyes that made Ivan shiver all over.
End of Chapter 2
yay!!! i finished it!! and it's longer!!
Thanks to StarFighterHeart and sugerlump59 for your comments!! i'll try and not make it too confusing.
Also thanks to DarkMewAngel for suggesting that I add a original character. Putting Masaya in is kinda working. Thanks again to everyone.
dream-cloudstar