i'm feel so lazy! but i'm always like that..... really need to get checked
by the doctor! anyways, here's the review replies or should i say reply,
sob i only got one review for the last chappie, it was from KrysOfDeath
though, read her fan-fics, they make me crack up so bad XDXD anyways
(again) review reply!
KrysOfDeath
thx for the cookies!!!! yummi!! :3 munch you're a good cook!!!! i don't believe that my first fanfic is better than yours, i mean, you're KrysOfDeath! the one that so many people look up to!!! by the way, what was your first fanfic??
Disclaimer: i don't own Tokyo Mew Mew and never will!!!!!!!!!!!!! sob
This first part is Zakuro's diary entry. It's dated April 4, 1997 because it's part of something that i have planned for the story.
Chapter 5 - Before it all begins (A.N: i couldn't think of a title for this one --)
April 4, 1997
Dear Diary,
Many times now I have depended on you to keep all my deepest and darkest secrets. This one last time I want you to keep these precious and most happiest memories of my entire life. This morning when the dreadful news of a horrible event arrived, everyone was breaking apart. Why? I asked myself. Just when my life seemed to have meaning, it started to give away again. Because of this, I , Zakuro Fujiwara, will write my favourite and happiest memories in this diary to cherish and never forget.
Before I met any of the fabulous friends I have now, my life was miserable the the fullest. No one cared for me, no one really thought of me often. My family was a wreck and modeling was only to pass the time. Never did I think that my life would ever be happy like many people outside around me. The day the other Mews and I joined, my heart couldn't help but jump for joy. This new feeling made me feel all warm and soft inside. Was this a good feeling? I did not know because this was the first time I had ever experianced it. Many times before in this diary I have written all of my secret dark and gloomy memories, and everytime I read them, my world seems to collapse once again. For these memories are more like nightmares. This one memory I have is the only one that would make my spirits lift up anytime I was down. It amazes me how just one small thing could be such a strong way to make another's life a lot better. Because everytime I walked in to those pink and fluffy like doors of Cafe Mew Mew, I could actually feel my the joy and happiness in the atmosphere all around me. Now, because the bad news, everytime I walk in to those doors, the atmosphere will be filled with fear and worried thoughts. This may be the last time I ever write in this diary, so I will hide this someone secret and if anyone finds this, I hope that they will learn about the importance of the happy things in life.
Fearing the end,
Zakuro Fujiwara
(A.N: zakuro's diary entry seems like a will....-- never knew i could write something so serious o.o for some reason my tab key won't work right now so my paragraphs won't be indented)
As all six of the Mews thought about the situation, someone was lurking about watching their every move.
"They seem so fragile, they won't even notice any change until tomorrow."
At the park
Mango was still walking towards her destination when she heard a faint voice come from behind her.
"I'm coming.............be........prepared............." It sounded closer and closer until Mango suddenly stopped, breathless from trying to run from the voice.
She looked up to see where she had stopped, and there before her was Masaya's house. Mango walked up to the door confused, she was wondering why the voice had brought her to the place she originally wanted to go. Thinking about it no more, she rang the door bell. She waited patiently there for a good 5 minutes, before she started to turn around and go. Just then Mrs. Aoyama opened the door.
"Hello there, Mango! Are you looking for Masaya? He told me you might be coming over today. But he's not here right now, come back in half and hour and he might be back."
Mango thanked her and turned around. What she found puzzling was how Masaya knew that she might come over today. She didn't tell him, then how did he know? Mango was still trying to figure it out when she bumped in to someone.
"Oh my, I'm sorry! Are you ok?" Mango looked up and realized she had bumped in to Ivan.
"Hey Mango, what are you doing here?" Ivan said with smile on his face.
Mango didn't know if she should tell him that she was there to visit Masaya, since she knew that Ivan didn't like Masaya all that much.
"Oh, um...I was just walking around the park, um....until I bumped in to you. By the way, I'm extremely sorry!" Mango was sure that she was stuttering.
"In that case, would you like to go for walk with me? I'm headed for that cafe down the street." Mango knew that Ivan's sweet smile and invitation were all to get her to go on some sort of a date. So, she smiled back and agreed.
At Cafe Mew Mew
Mango was getting so interested in talking to Ivan that she didn't realize the cafe he was referring to was Cafe Mew Mew.
"Would you like to go in for lunch?" asked Ivan.
"Oh, um....sure!" Mango didn't know why she kept on stuttering in front of him. Atleast she was doing something that would make her happy.
When the two walked in, they were greeted by Keiichiro.
"Welcome to Cafe Mew Mew! How may we help you?" Mango found it amusing that Keiichiro was doing what she and the other mews usually did.
"Hi Keiichiro! Do you need help around here? It's certainly looks busy!"
Before Keiichiro could answer, Ivan spoke up.
"You work here, Mango? I didn't know you had a job!"
"Uh huh, I work here! Just wait Keiichiro, i'll go change and help you! Sit down, Ivan! I'll serve you!"
"Is she always that hyper at work?" Ivan asked Keiichiro. But Keiichiro only answered with a smile and a nod.
Later (A.N: don't ask me exactly how much later i'm not even sure! ;)
Mango got in to her pajamas and started towards the bathroom to brush her teeth. She stared in the mirror and remembered what was supposed to happen tomorrow. She was so happy with Ivan she didn't even think about it. Mango finished brushing and got in to bed. Just before she fell asleep, she thought to herself if she spent time with people she felt happy to be around, would it counter the "traitor's" plan?
End of Chapter 5
i'm going to fall asleep from to much time typing!!!!!!!! snore................................
Purin: since the authoress fell asleep from lack of rest, i'm going to end this chappie!
Taruto: yawn who's out there..?
Purin: TAR-TAR!!!!!!!!!!!! :3
Taruto: help..........
Dream-cloudstar: i just wuv tar-tar and purin! haha it's shooo cutesy!!
Taruto and Purin: weren't you just asleep?????
Dream-cloudstar: i had to see this! hehe anyways bye people!!!!
I'm high on sugar.......i just had to add that some how..........
KrysOfDeath
thx for the cookies!!!! yummi!! :3 munch you're a good cook!!!! i don't believe that my first fanfic is better than yours, i mean, you're KrysOfDeath! the one that so many people look up to!!! by the way, what was your first fanfic??
Disclaimer: i don't own Tokyo Mew Mew and never will!!!!!!!!!!!!! sob
This first part is Zakuro's diary entry. It's dated April 4, 1997 because it's part of something that i have planned for the story.
Chapter 5 - Before it all begins (A.N: i couldn't think of a title for this one --)
April 4, 1997
Dear Diary,
Many times now I have depended on you to keep all my deepest and darkest secrets. This one last time I want you to keep these precious and most happiest memories of my entire life. This morning when the dreadful news of a horrible event arrived, everyone was breaking apart. Why? I asked myself. Just when my life seemed to have meaning, it started to give away again. Because of this, I , Zakuro Fujiwara, will write my favourite and happiest memories in this diary to cherish and never forget.
Before I met any of the fabulous friends I have now, my life was miserable the the fullest. No one cared for me, no one really thought of me often. My family was a wreck and modeling was only to pass the time. Never did I think that my life would ever be happy like many people outside around me. The day the other Mews and I joined, my heart couldn't help but jump for joy. This new feeling made me feel all warm and soft inside. Was this a good feeling? I did not know because this was the first time I had ever experianced it. Many times before in this diary I have written all of my secret dark and gloomy memories, and everytime I read them, my world seems to collapse once again. For these memories are more like nightmares. This one memory I have is the only one that would make my spirits lift up anytime I was down. It amazes me how just one small thing could be such a strong way to make another's life a lot better. Because everytime I walked in to those pink and fluffy like doors of Cafe Mew Mew, I could actually feel my the joy and happiness in the atmosphere all around me. Now, because the bad news, everytime I walk in to those doors, the atmosphere will be filled with fear and worried thoughts. This may be the last time I ever write in this diary, so I will hide this someone secret and if anyone finds this, I hope that they will learn about the importance of the happy things in life.
Fearing the end,
Zakuro Fujiwara
(A.N: zakuro's diary entry seems like a will....-- never knew i could write something so serious o.o for some reason my tab key won't work right now so my paragraphs won't be indented)
As all six of the Mews thought about the situation, someone was lurking about watching their every move.
"They seem so fragile, they won't even notice any change until tomorrow."
At the park
Mango was still walking towards her destination when she heard a faint voice come from behind her.
"I'm coming.............be........prepared............." It sounded closer and closer until Mango suddenly stopped, breathless from trying to run from the voice.
She looked up to see where she had stopped, and there before her was Masaya's house. Mango walked up to the door confused, she was wondering why the voice had brought her to the place she originally wanted to go. Thinking about it no more, she rang the door bell. She waited patiently there for a good 5 minutes, before she started to turn around and go. Just then Mrs. Aoyama opened the door.
"Hello there, Mango! Are you looking for Masaya? He told me you might be coming over today. But he's not here right now, come back in half and hour and he might be back."
Mango thanked her and turned around. What she found puzzling was how Masaya knew that she might come over today. She didn't tell him, then how did he know? Mango was still trying to figure it out when she bumped in to someone.
"Oh my, I'm sorry! Are you ok?" Mango looked up and realized she had bumped in to Ivan.
"Hey Mango, what are you doing here?" Ivan said with smile on his face.
Mango didn't know if she should tell him that she was there to visit Masaya, since she knew that Ivan didn't like Masaya all that much.
"Oh, um...I was just walking around the park, um....until I bumped in to you. By the way, I'm extremely sorry!" Mango was sure that she was stuttering.
"In that case, would you like to go for walk with me? I'm headed for that cafe down the street." Mango knew that Ivan's sweet smile and invitation were all to get her to go on some sort of a date. So, she smiled back and agreed.
At Cafe Mew Mew
Mango was getting so interested in talking to Ivan that she didn't realize the cafe he was referring to was Cafe Mew Mew.
"Would you like to go in for lunch?" asked Ivan.
"Oh, um....sure!" Mango didn't know why she kept on stuttering in front of him. Atleast she was doing something that would make her happy.
When the two walked in, they were greeted by Keiichiro.
"Welcome to Cafe Mew Mew! How may we help you?" Mango found it amusing that Keiichiro was doing what she and the other mews usually did.
"Hi Keiichiro! Do you need help around here? It's certainly looks busy!"
Before Keiichiro could answer, Ivan spoke up.
"You work here, Mango? I didn't know you had a job!"
"Uh huh, I work here! Just wait Keiichiro, i'll go change and help you! Sit down, Ivan! I'll serve you!"
"Is she always that hyper at work?" Ivan asked Keiichiro. But Keiichiro only answered with a smile and a nod.
Later (A.N: don't ask me exactly how much later i'm not even sure! ;)
Mango got in to her pajamas and started towards the bathroom to brush her teeth. She stared in the mirror and remembered what was supposed to happen tomorrow. She was so happy with Ivan she didn't even think about it. Mango finished brushing and got in to bed. Just before she fell asleep, she thought to herself if she spent time with people she felt happy to be around, would it counter the "traitor's" plan?
End of Chapter 5
i'm going to fall asleep from to much time typing!!!!!!!! snore................................
Purin: since the authoress fell asleep from lack of rest, i'm going to end this chappie!
Taruto: yawn who's out there..?
Purin: TAR-TAR!!!!!!!!!!!! :3
Taruto: help..........
Dream-cloudstar: i just wuv tar-tar and purin! haha it's shooo cutesy!!
Taruto and Purin: weren't you just asleep?????
Dream-cloudstar: i had to see this! hehe anyways bye people!!!!
I'm high on sugar.......i just had to add that some how..........