i'm so madddd! they changed TMM anime series so much! it's called Mew Mew now and Zakuro's called Renee, and Mint is called Karina!! i didn't get to hear the other ones but i'm sure they're also realllllllllly stupid! ah well....at least i can watch it on tv now! :D

i think it sounds like i'm stalling everytime i update.....i know i have to make the main events come soon! but i'm so lazy.......=.=

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Cinnamonkit15: thanks for the review! there isn't a Mango in the orignal TMM, she's my own character! i only own her, i think....that reminds me.....time for the disclaimer!

Disclaimer: I don't own Tokyo Mew Mew!!!!!! but if i did i wouldn't let people make the dub version so bad!!!

(A/N: i'm sorry for any typos, missing words or spelling mistakes in the previous chapters! i hate proof reading.....i have to make my chappies longer!!!)

Chapter 8 - Mew Mew Stake Out

In the Kitchen, Afternoon-

"Why do I feel like I'm a baked potato?!?!?!" complained Ichigo.

More and more problems started at Cafe Mew Mew, and no one seemed to be doing anything except for Keiichiro.

"That's probably because while attemping to make the boiler turn on, Keiichiro fixed it a bittttt too well." Lettuce wondered how Mint could still be so sarcastic while the cafe was heating up like a giant oven.

As usual everyone was doing what they did best, Ichigo was complaining, Mint was being extremely sarcastic, Lettuce was worrying and panicking, Purin was STILL counting her candies, Zakuro was standing off to the side, and Ryou was being rude! Mango knew that everyone else meant well, but something about what they did made her temper slightly rise.

(A/N: my temper would rise too! i'm so impatient......=.=)

Just as Mango was about to give in, someone walked through the door.

"Um...hello? Is anyone here?" Ivan looked around the cafe, but he didn't find anyone.

"Ivan? What are you doing here? I guessed that you were busy since you didn't come last Thursday." Mango didn't expect Ivan to come at a time like this, but she was glad he did.

"Oh....that....actually I came here to talk to you about that. Can you step outside for awhile? I'll explain." The flush in Ivan's cheeks told Mango that he didn't feel comfortable talking about it.

Outside the Cafe-

"What did you want to say?" asked Mango.

Ivan thought at first if he should tell her the truth, that he didn't check his e-mail until recently, or that he had something had come up that day and he couldn't go. He didn't know if Mango would trust him if he lied, so he stuck with being honest.

"I'm sorry, I didn't think anyone would send me mail. I usually get junk mail, so i don't check my e-mail very often, I'm sorry.....If only I had seen the letter earlier....Gomen Nasai....." Ivan didn't feel like doing anything if Mango didn't forgive him, he was the kind of person that didn't like to be guilty.

"No worries! I completly understand!" The smile on Mango's face made Ivan even more guilty than he was before.

"Um....maybe I could come over another time, say....tomorrow? But only if that's ok with you." Ivan felt embarassed asking to go to Mango's house like that.

"Mango!! Hurry up! We need your help!" yelled Ichigo from inside the cafe.

"Sure, Ivan. Looks like I need to go back now, I think Ichigo's getting desperate to go and see Kish. Bye!" Mango smiled and turned around to head back to the cafe.

Ivan watched Mango run back and wondered if he would make a fool of himself tomorrow. Would Mango laugh at him? Would he be able to help her on her assignment? And who was Kish????

"Mou, Ichigo! We all know that you want to go see Kish! But it would at least help if you could help a littleeee bit more than that!" Mango teased Ichigo, while flapping the picture of Kish, that Ichigo always kept with her.

(A/N: haha Ichigo and Kish fluffiness!!!!! :D and just to be clear, "mou" isn't Mango mooing! XD it means geez in japanese.)

That night-

Purin found it funny that she and the mews, were wearing black clothing, and snooping around everywhere. All the black made Purin think about Zakuro's expressions. Why was she always so gloomy? Purin thought Zakuro should be more like her. Maybe she should teach Zakuro a few of her tricks, that would cheer her up!

"WHY are we sneaking around Tokyo, dressed in black from head-to-toe, and staying in the shadows?!??! People probably think that we're robbers! I would!" Ichigo fussed on and on and on, about how she could be eating ice cream or watching a movie on tv with Kish at the moment, but how instead, she was helping go through this ridiculous plan that Mint had made.

"Because, If we want to know more about this traitor, we have to start finding clues. And will you stop obsessing over Kish?!?! You already see him everyday, and when you're not, you make it seem like you're going to die! Give it up already!" Mint furiously spat at Ichigo.

Purin and Lettuce stood back and watched Mint and Ichigo quarrel back and forth, while imagining Ichigo worshipping a giant statue of Kish.

(A/N: hahahha i bet a few fanfic writers wouldn't mind having a giant statue of Kish!)

Zakuro joined Lettuce and Purin, and the three of them continued wondering if they would ever finish doing what they were there on! We have more important things to do besides fighting!" Soon Mango found herself caught in the middle of the fight, and the more they argued, the redder each of them got.

Just as the fight was getting almost impossible to keep track of what each was saying, Zakuro noticed a shadow in the trees around them.

"Mews, I see someone in the trees. Or worse, something."

End Chapter 8

muahahhahahha! cliffy! i've decided to make a little side story for each chappie. it's about Taruto and Purin!!!!!

The Random Ramblings of Purin and Taruto (and sometimes me!) #1

Purin: Tarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-Tarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Where areeeeeeee youuuuuuuu!?!?

Taruto: meep! hope she doesn't find me here! (Taruto is in the fridge)

Purin: Tar-Tar!?! Why won't you come out? I have candyyyyy! huh? (hears a distant rattling)

Taruto: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THAT FRIDGE WAS GETTING SOOOO COLD!

Purin: There you are Tar-Tar! :3

Taruto: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! IT'S A CUTE MONKEY GIRL!!!! huh? oh, it's purin....AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PURIN!

Purin: cute monkey girl? would that be me???

Taruto: um.......yes?

Purin: YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! (goes around room dancing)

Taruto: um.......scary?

Purin: Tar-tarrrrrr! (glomp) want some candy???? :3

Taruto: um......sure?

Dream-cloudstar: what's with the um?

Taruto: um.......don't know?

Dream-cloudstar: stop it already!!!

Taruto: um.......why?

Dream-cloudstar: i have amazing authoress powers like other authoresses on this site!

Taruto: ha! what would you do to me?!?!?

Dream-cloudstar: hahaha! you didn't say um! and to answer your question, i would stick you with purin 24/7! muahhahah!

Taruto: O.O! help! (jumps on to purin)

Dream-cloudstar: what do you know? i didn't have to use my powers! :D

Purin: (Taruto still clinging on to her) um.......candy?

Dream-cloudstar: don't you start too!!!

Purin and Taruto: um.......help?

Dream-cloudstar: stop it or you'll never see Taruto again........

Taruto: woohoo! :D

Dream-cloudstar: (glare)

Taruto: ........

Purin: NANI!!??!?!?! never see Tar-tar again?!?!? nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

Taruto: what are you doing here anyways? this side story is clearly called: THE RANDOM RAMBLINGS OF PURIN AND TARUTO! it only says SOMETIMES for you! now shoo!

Dream-cloudstar: (shrug) sure, but you have to spend more time with purin! :D

Taruto: hm.....i guess i could do that.......

Purin: yay!!!! so what should we do first? we could go to the movies, then go shopping, and get candy and..................(purin is dragging taruto away)

Dream-cloudstar: i guess that worked out well! bye!!!!

dream-cloudstar