Hey everyone. Im so very happy about how many reviews ive gotten for this story. I even got one flame! maybe I shouldn't be happy about that but oh well. So im going to respond to a few of the reviews for a sec k? here it goes.
Meepit - Thanks for the crit. Though, I don't exactly like being told that i look stupid and what not. And From things I've been told by friends and teachers I do not need SERIOUS work, i know i still have alot of improvements, like spelling and grammar which have never ever EVER been my strong points. But still, thanks for your honest opinion.
spirit demon - Oh my, I wouldn't dream of being so cruel. Your going to find out more as the story goes along about Ayame and her whole situation. And I don't expect to be killing her grandfather off anytime soon. But, then again, who knows what state of mind I'll be in while writing other chapters.
PhantomAngel17 & Mini Nicka - Yes, both Inuyasha and Miroku will be in this fic. I'm not sure as of yet whether or not they will be hooking up with Kagome or Sango, but they most definatly are in this fic. In fact they may make their first appearance in this chapter. I haven't decided yet.
outofplace- Sorry, I mentioned before, Im really bad at spelling. I promise to run it through spell checker this time. As for the next time, well, memory isn't my strong suit either but i'll try to remember.
Thanks to everyone one else who reviewed, I really cant beleive i got 10 reviews. I almost died when i checked my email on friday night.
Anyways that's all for now. A/N to be continued...
On with the Story!
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Ayame was busy bustling around her kitchen preparing her world famous spaghetti. Ok maybe it wasn't 'world' famous, but it was a hit with anyone who had ever tasted it. Ayame was an amazing cook. She had wanted to be a chef since before she could remember. She even had a small bank account that she put money into in hopes of opening a small diner one day. Currently though, she was bopping her head to the sound of Fefe Dobsons 'Don't Go (Boys and Girls)' as it blared from her CD player. She had even caught herself singing a few times. That was a dead give away as to how good of a mood she was in. The last time that she had sang to anything was about a year and a month ago when her ex-boyfriend had given her a promise ring. They had broken up a month later. But still, she only ever sang when she was in a brilliant mood. The phone rang as she finished preparing the meal and was about to add the decorative touches. "Ahoy hoy," She said dancing a little to the upbeat tune.
"Well, some ones in a good mood," came Kagome's cheery voice from the other end.
"Yes, I am in a very good mood right now, how 'bout you Kags?" Ayame asked humming a little.
"Can't complain," Kagome giggled. Then it hit her. Ayame was humming. That meant one of two things. Ayame was drunk, or she had met a guy. Finding the first on out of the question seeing as Ayame never drank when she was alone or around her grandpa, she squealed for joy. "Who is he? Do I know him? Is he hot?"
"Kagome, I have no idea what you're talking about." She said innocently. She couldn't help but laugh, she knew exactly what Kagome was talking about, and she just didn't want to admit that her friend knew her THAT well.
"Oh come on Ayame! You're singing! That either means your drunk or you met a guy. So unless your going to admit to being drunk, spill!" Kagome ranted at her friend.
"Ok ok!" Ayame started with a sigh. "His name is Kouga... he's tall, tanned, fit, has black hair and the most blue eyes I have ever seen!"
There was a loud squeal at the other end. "Oooooh he sound so SEXY!" Kagome said sound like she was off in la-la-land just picturing the guy.
"KAGOME!" Ayame said trying hard to sound shocked but failing miserably. There was no denying that Kouga was "SEXY!"
"So when do I get to meet him huh?" Kagome asked, sounding a little too enthusiastic about it.
"Well, that depends on how the date goes," Ayame said, finally beginning to add the finishing touched to the plates in front of her.
"Oh come on! You can't go out with a guy me and Sango haven't approved!" Kagome said trying to come up with a good reason why she had to meet this guy and fast.
"Well if that's a rule then I'm afraid I already broke it... every time I went on a date with someone. Well except for Jacob but that was a blind date so you can't pin that on me!" Ayame said defensively.
"sigh Fine, but we have to meet this guy soon. We don't want some jackass toying around with our best friend, Do we Songo?" Kagome said. Sango was obviously at Kagome's house cuz Ayame heard a 'No way!' in the background.
"I promise you'll meet him before I go on a second date with him ok?" Ayame bargained.
"Deal," Two voices came from the other end.
"Alright so, now that your all caught up in my love life, what did you call for?" Ayame asked grabbing the plates and bringing then out into the dining room and setting the table.
"Oh yeah," Kagome said. "We're going clubbing tonight, we were wondering if you wanna come with. We won't be going till, like, 10:30-ish so you'll have time to wash up and what not."
"Sounds great." Ayame said going back into the kitchen to grab some wineglasses for her and her grandfather, and of course some wine.
"Great! See ya then bye!" Kagome said hanging up before Ayame could respond.
Ayame finished setting the table and called her grandfather down for dinner.
"Looks and smells delicious Ayame," He said sitting down and placing a cloth over his lap in case he slopped.
"Thanks pops," she said sitting down across from him and doing the same.
The dining room was very large compared to the other rooms in the house. It had to be though. Her grandfather owned a construction company and did most of his business here. The table could fit about thirteen people. The walls were a deep forest green that went very well with the hardwood floors. The table and chairs matched the floors and walls perfectly. There was an elegant chandelier hanging above the centre of the table. The room looked like it belonged in a mansion, which was a change from the rest of the house. Sure it was big and all but nothing was as classy as that one room.
They managed to get through most of the meal before the conversation the Ayame knew was coming and was dreading, rolled around.
"So," Her grandfather asked. "Met anyone new recently?"
Ayame rolled her eyes. He was determined to see her get married ... and soon. He had been pressuring her since she graduated three years ago to find some guy and settle down. He, of course, had already picked out the guy he'd like her to be with. His name was Riku and he worked for her grandfathers company. He was two years older that her and was completely obsessed with her. It was really creepy. He was the reason she tried hard to avoid the company parties at Halloween and Christmas that were held at her house. "Actually, I met a guy today. We're going out on a date tomorrow night." She said matter-of-factly.
"I see," He said a small smile creeping onto his face. "So... what's his name?"
"Kouga. Kouga Ookami." She stated.
"Ookami, eh? As in-"
"Yes pops, as in Ookami Inc. It's his fathers company... Well actually it was his grandfathers company but it's his fathers now." Ayame explained.
"Do you think you love him?" He asked hopefully as he finished his plate of spaghetti.
"POPS!" She exclaimed looking at him wide eyed. "I just met him!"
"Well, it could have been love at first sight. Who knows!" He said with a chuckle.
Ayame sighed in exasperation and put her head in her hand. "Pops, believe me, when I fall in love, you will be the first to know."
"Good," He said with a satisfied smile on his face.
They finished their meal in complete silence. Finally, Her grandfather went back upstairs to take a nap, While Ayame cleaned up.
It was about 9:30 when she finished the dishes and had the kitchen sparkling clean. She decide now was a good a time as any to get ready to go clubbing. She hopped in the show to clean the hard days work off of her and to get her hair smelling like her strawberry scented shampoo. Once out she put her hair up in a towel to pit her make-up on. First she put on some white shimmery eye shadow and pitch black eyeliner. That really drew a lot of attention to her beautiful eyes, as planned. Then she put on some lightly tinted strawberry-kiwi chap stick, it tasted as good as it smelt but stayed on no matter what. She put on some light shimmery blush giving her a glowing look. Once fully satisfied with her make-up, she took off her rob and walked into her walk-in closet. She took her time deciding on what to wear. She still had about half an hour before her friends expected arrival, but you could always count on them to be late.
After about 15 minutes of putting on random items of clothing, Ayame decided to wear a light green halter dress. The dress was tight but not too tight, it hugged her curves perfectly while still being rather modest. It went to just past her knees. It really suited her, bringing out her eyes which were her (in her opinion) her best feature.
Now that her dress and makeup were out of the way she decided to tackle her hair. She knew exactly what she wanted. So she got out her curlers and put her hair up. She'd have to wait twenty minutes to get her desired curliness, good thing Kagome and Sango were always late. Twenty minutes later Ayame took her hair out of her curlers. Her hair fell in pretty ringlets down to just pasted her shoulders. She took the side pieces and curled them up and tied them above the hair at the back of her head. A few ringlets that weren't long enough to go to the back framed her face nicely. She looked like she belonged in Hawaii or something. So deciding to go with the whole tropical look, she took out some strappy, high healed sandals and put them on.
Now that she was completely ready appearance wise she grabbed a matching purse and threw a few things into it. Her cell phone, some make-up, a few Kleenexes a compact mirror, and her wallet which was full of cash and contained her ID.
She was about to head down stairs when she heard and oh so familiar honk. She walked downstairs and wrote a quick not e telling her grandfather where she was in case he woke up before she got home, and ran out the door. She was greeted with some whistles and an 'OW OWW!' from Kagome and Sango. Sango was in a sparkly magenta top and a black skirt. She was wearing some awesome knee high back sued boots. Kagome was in a light blue tube top and back leather pants. She was wearing some boots like Sango's only Ayame couldn't tell if they were knee high because of her pants. Ayame guess that they had bought those outfits while shopping today sinse she had never seen them before. Ayame hopped into the car.
"So where are we going tonight?" She asked as they started to drive.
"A new club in town called V6. I think it's owned by that Ookami Inc." Kagome said. Ayame couldn't help but smile. Maybe her friends would get to meet Kouga before they went on their date tomorrow.
"What are you smiling about?" Sango (who was driving) asked when she looked in the rear view mirror. "Your not thinking about this new guy are you?" A devilish smile creeped onto both her friends' faces.
"Actually yes," Ayame said confidently. "His dad owns Ookami Inc, so maybe if your lucky, you may get to meet him before our date tomorrow."
Kagome looked back at your friend. "You're going out on a date with a multi-billionaire?" Kagome looked like she was about to die.
"Please Kags, I'm not in it for the money. And he asked me out by the way." Ayame said answering the question that she knew was coming next.
Almost an hour later the girls pulled into the parking lot outside the club. Ayame looked up at it in awe. This was going to be a great night, she could just feel it.
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A/N: OMG! this took so long. Well really. But I typed up over half of it and then my comp locked up on me. so I lost it all. I was angry to say the least. I know it's a relativly short Chapter and I know, there was no Inuyasha, Miroku or Kouga, but i do promise they will be in the next chapter. I was contemplating whether or not inside the club should be in this one but I decided it would need its own chapter. so expect the next one really soon, I'm on a bit of a roll with this story at the moment. R&R pleasy please!
Meepit - Thanks for the crit. Though, I don't exactly like being told that i look stupid and what not. And From things I've been told by friends and teachers I do not need SERIOUS work, i know i still have alot of improvements, like spelling and grammar which have never ever EVER been my strong points. But still, thanks for your honest opinion.
spirit demon - Oh my, I wouldn't dream of being so cruel. Your going to find out more as the story goes along about Ayame and her whole situation. And I don't expect to be killing her grandfather off anytime soon. But, then again, who knows what state of mind I'll be in while writing other chapters.
PhantomAngel17 & Mini Nicka - Yes, both Inuyasha and Miroku will be in this fic. I'm not sure as of yet whether or not they will be hooking up with Kagome or Sango, but they most definatly are in this fic. In fact they may make their first appearance in this chapter. I haven't decided yet.
outofplace- Sorry, I mentioned before, Im really bad at spelling. I promise to run it through spell checker this time. As for the next time, well, memory isn't my strong suit either but i'll try to remember.
Thanks to everyone one else who reviewed, I really cant beleive i got 10 reviews. I almost died when i checked my email on friday night.
Anyways that's all for now. A/N to be continued...
On with the Story!
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Ayame was busy bustling around her kitchen preparing her world famous spaghetti. Ok maybe it wasn't 'world' famous, but it was a hit with anyone who had ever tasted it. Ayame was an amazing cook. She had wanted to be a chef since before she could remember. She even had a small bank account that she put money into in hopes of opening a small diner one day. Currently though, she was bopping her head to the sound of Fefe Dobsons 'Don't Go (Boys and Girls)' as it blared from her CD player. She had even caught herself singing a few times. That was a dead give away as to how good of a mood she was in. The last time that she had sang to anything was about a year and a month ago when her ex-boyfriend had given her a promise ring. They had broken up a month later. But still, she only ever sang when she was in a brilliant mood. The phone rang as she finished preparing the meal and was about to add the decorative touches. "Ahoy hoy," She said dancing a little to the upbeat tune.
"Well, some ones in a good mood," came Kagome's cheery voice from the other end.
"Yes, I am in a very good mood right now, how 'bout you Kags?" Ayame asked humming a little.
"Can't complain," Kagome giggled. Then it hit her. Ayame was humming. That meant one of two things. Ayame was drunk, or she had met a guy. Finding the first on out of the question seeing as Ayame never drank when she was alone or around her grandpa, she squealed for joy. "Who is he? Do I know him? Is he hot?"
"Kagome, I have no idea what you're talking about." She said innocently. She couldn't help but laugh, she knew exactly what Kagome was talking about, and she just didn't want to admit that her friend knew her THAT well.
"Oh come on Ayame! You're singing! That either means your drunk or you met a guy. So unless your going to admit to being drunk, spill!" Kagome ranted at her friend.
"Ok ok!" Ayame started with a sigh. "His name is Kouga... he's tall, tanned, fit, has black hair and the most blue eyes I have ever seen!"
There was a loud squeal at the other end. "Oooooh he sound so SEXY!" Kagome said sound like she was off in la-la-land just picturing the guy.
"KAGOME!" Ayame said trying hard to sound shocked but failing miserably. There was no denying that Kouga was "SEXY!"
"So when do I get to meet him huh?" Kagome asked, sounding a little too enthusiastic about it.
"Well, that depends on how the date goes," Ayame said, finally beginning to add the finishing touched to the plates in front of her.
"Oh come on! You can't go out with a guy me and Sango haven't approved!" Kagome said trying to come up with a good reason why she had to meet this guy and fast.
"Well if that's a rule then I'm afraid I already broke it... every time I went on a date with someone. Well except for Jacob but that was a blind date so you can't pin that on me!" Ayame said defensively.
"sigh Fine, but we have to meet this guy soon. We don't want some jackass toying around with our best friend, Do we Songo?" Kagome said. Sango was obviously at Kagome's house cuz Ayame heard a 'No way!' in the background.
"I promise you'll meet him before I go on a second date with him ok?" Ayame bargained.
"Deal," Two voices came from the other end.
"Alright so, now that your all caught up in my love life, what did you call for?" Ayame asked grabbing the plates and bringing then out into the dining room and setting the table.
"Oh yeah," Kagome said. "We're going clubbing tonight, we were wondering if you wanna come with. We won't be going till, like, 10:30-ish so you'll have time to wash up and what not."
"Sounds great." Ayame said going back into the kitchen to grab some wineglasses for her and her grandfather, and of course some wine.
"Great! See ya then bye!" Kagome said hanging up before Ayame could respond.
Ayame finished setting the table and called her grandfather down for dinner.
"Looks and smells delicious Ayame," He said sitting down and placing a cloth over his lap in case he slopped.
"Thanks pops," she said sitting down across from him and doing the same.
The dining room was very large compared to the other rooms in the house. It had to be though. Her grandfather owned a construction company and did most of his business here. The table could fit about thirteen people. The walls were a deep forest green that went very well with the hardwood floors. The table and chairs matched the floors and walls perfectly. There was an elegant chandelier hanging above the centre of the table. The room looked like it belonged in a mansion, which was a change from the rest of the house. Sure it was big and all but nothing was as classy as that one room.
They managed to get through most of the meal before the conversation the Ayame knew was coming and was dreading, rolled around.
"So," Her grandfather asked. "Met anyone new recently?"
Ayame rolled her eyes. He was determined to see her get married ... and soon. He had been pressuring her since she graduated three years ago to find some guy and settle down. He, of course, had already picked out the guy he'd like her to be with. His name was Riku and he worked for her grandfathers company. He was two years older that her and was completely obsessed with her. It was really creepy. He was the reason she tried hard to avoid the company parties at Halloween and Christmas that were held at her house. "Actually, I met a guy today. We're going out on a date tomorrow night." She said matter-of-factly.
"I see," He said a small smile creeping onto his face. "So... what's his name?"
"Kouga. Kouga Ookami." She stated.
"Ookami, eh? As in-"
"Yes pops, as in Ookami Inc. It's his fathers company... Well actually it was his grandfathers company but it's his fathers now." Ayame explained.
"Do you think you love him?" He asked hopefully as he finished his plate of spaghetti.
"POPS!" She exclaimed looking at him wide eyed. "I just met him!"
"Well, it could have been love at first sight. Who knows!" He said with a chuckle.
Ayame sighed in exasperation and put her head in her hand. "Pops, believe me, when I fall in love, you will be the first to know."
"Good," He said with a satisfied smile on his face.
They finished their meal in complete silence. Finally, Her grandfather went back upstairs to take a nap, While Ayame cleaned up.
It was about 9:30 when she finished the dishes and had the kitchen sparkling clean. She decide now was a good a time as any to get ready to go clubbing. She hopped in the show to clean the hard days work off of her and to get her hair smelling like her strawberry scented shampoo. Once out she put her hair up in a towel to pit her make-up on. First she put on some white shimmery eye shadow and pitch black eyeliner. That really drew a lot of attention to her beautiful eyes, as planned. Then she put on some lightly tinted strawberry-kiwi chap stick, it tasted as good as it smelt but stayed on no matter what. She put on some light shimmery blush giving her a glowing look. Once fully satisfied with her make-up, she took off her rob and walked into her walk-in closet. She took her time deciding on what to wear. She still had about half an hour before her friends expected arrival, but you could always count on them to be late.
After about 15 minutes of putting on random items of clothing, Ayame decided to wear a light green halter dress. The dress was tight but not too tight, it hugged her curves perfectly while still being rather modest. It went to just past her knees. It really suited her, bringing out her eyes which were her (in her opinion) her best feature.
Now that her dress and makeup were out of the way she decided to tackle her hair. She knew exactly what she wanted. So she got out her curlers and put her hair up. She'd have to wait twenty minutes to get her desired curliness, good thing Kagome and Sango were always late. Twenty minutes later Ayame took her hair out of her curlers. Her hair fell in pretty ringlets down to just pasted her shoulders. She took the side pieces and curled them up and tied them above the hair at the back of her head. A few ringlets that weren't long enough to go to the back framed her face nicely. She looked like she belonged in Hawaii or something. So deciding to go with the whole tropical look, she took out some strappy, high healed sandals and put them on.
Now that she was completely ready appearance wise she grabbed a matching purse and threw a few things into it. Her cell phone, some make-up, a few Kleenexes a compact mirror, and her wallet which was full of cash and contained her ID.
She was about to head down stairs when she heard and oh so familiar honk. She walked downstairs and wrote a quick not e telling her grandfather where she was in case he woke up before she got home, and ran out the door. She was greeted with some whistles and an 'OW OWW!' from Kagome and Sango. Sango was in a sparkly magenta top and a black skirt. She was wearing some awesome knee high back sued boots. Kagome was in a light blue tube top and back leather pants. She was wearing some boots like Sango's only Ayame couldn't tell if they were knee high because of her pants. Ayame guess that they had bought those outfits while shopping today sinse she had never seen them before. Ayame hopped into the car.
"So where are we going tonight?" She asked as they started to drive.
"A new club in town called V6. I think it's owned by that Ookami Inc." Kagome said. Ayame couldn't help but smile. Maybe her friends would get to meet Kouga before they went on their date tomorrow.
"What are you smiling about?" Sango (who was driving) asked when she looked in the rear view mirror. "Your not thinking about this new guy are you?" A devilish smile creeped onto both her friends' faces.
"Actually yes," Ayame said confidently. "His dad owns Ookami Inc, so maybe if your lucky, you may get to meet him before our date tomorrow."
Kagome looked back at your friend. "You're going out on a date with a multi-billionaire?" Kagome looked like she was about to die.
"Please Kags, I'm not in it for the money. And he asked me out by the way." Ayame said answering the question that she knew was coming next.
Almost an hour later the girls pulled into the parking lot outside the club. Ayame looked up at it in awe. This was going to be a great night, she could just feel it.
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A/N: OMG! this took so long. Well really. But I typed up over half of it and then my comp locked up on me. so I lost it all. I was angry to say the least. I know it's a relativly short Chapter and I know, there was no Inuyasha, Miroku or Kouga, but i do promise they will be in the next chapter. I was contemplating whether or not inside the club should be in this one but I decided it would need its own chapter. so expect the next one really soon, I'm on a bit of a roll with this story at the moment. R&R pleasy please!