Hiei17: Sorry I didn't really say anything at the end of the prologue. Yeah
sorry I figured I better restart the story because in simple terms it
sucked. I hope this version is better for all you Juri fans she is in this
chapter.
Hiei: Yes oh joy the fish lady is in this chapter.
Juri: Do you have a problem with me?
Hiei: To put in terms you would actually be able to understand yes.
Juri: To put this in simple terms ( Juri slaps Hiei 10 times on each cheek).
Hiei17: Now on with the chapter.
Hiei swiftly ran towards the accident. "Koenma informed me that his family would be here." He looked around and identified Ray's unconscious body. He dove into the water and swam to the unconscious body. Hiei soon caught a glimpse of a glowing orb and grabbed it. He felt a sudden shock of coldness. His whole body shivered and he held Rays body with one arm and swam towards shore.
He saw many ambulances arrive. Paramedics jumped out with rafts and plunged into the water. Hiei ignored the cries for help knowing that the paramedics and other people could handle that. He was soon confronted by three paramedics.
"You're in my way." Hiei said in a calm voice. "I suggest you move."
"No can do gotta make sure that boy is gonna be okay." Said Paramedic 1. Paramedic 2 and 3 nodded in agreement.
Hiei looked down at Ray with little concern. "He looks fine to me. I honestly don't see a problem." He said. His red eyes met those of the paramedics.
"Just hand over the kid we'll take care of him." Paramedic 2 said nervously as he met Hiei's eyes.
Hiei's eyes began to show anger and he unsheathed his katana. He advanced towards the Paramedics. He turned his sword to its dull side.
"Hey we don't want any trouble." Paramedic 3 stuttered
"Than you shouldn't have asked for it." Hiei grinned. He tossed Ray and the orb high in the air and swiftly hit each of them with the dull side of his sword knocking them out. He caught Ray and the orb. Hiei ran out of the area and soon arrived at an old abandoned building. He walked in and tapped the floor. A trap door opened and Hiei jumped down and arrived in an alley way. Hiei continued to walk down the dangerous part of spirit world. He was lost in thought thinking how to deal with his assistant. He wondered who it was. He doubted that he would get along with this person and wouldn't be surprised if he was right he barley got along with anyone. He also wondered how he could take care of Ray and how to train him he was after all a child.
Demons surrounded Hiei and drooled. They looked as if they had not eaten in a thousand years. They circled in closer and bared their sharp fangs and let their drool drop to the ground.
"Hey why don't you hand over that kid we'll take care of him I promise." The leader of this demon pack said. He walked closer and extended his hand.
Hiei unsheathed his sword and yelled "Sword of the darkness flame." Black and green flames surrounded his katana. He slashed threw Ray up in the air and put the orb in his pocket and with extreme velocity sliced through the slobbering pack of demons. He caught Ray and grinned. He sheathed his katana and entered Shitonaku forest.
After walking for an hour he reached his destination at the foot of the mansion. The mansion was in front of trees by stream that fell off a cliff and formed a waterfall and continued on down a river. To the left side was a clear water spring. The mansion had a huge garage to the right side.
Hiei walked on into the mansion and was shocked to see his new assistant. Standing in front of him was a girl about 17 years old with teal hair, tan skin, a mermaid tail, and purple eyes.
"Shouldn't you be studying the dark tournament rule book or something fish lady." Hiei said with his usual cold expression on his face.
"My name is Juri." The girl yelled with one hand on her hip.
"Whatever. It matters not to me." Hiei said with a bored tone in his voice. He walked over to the near by chair and set Ray down.
"Is this the kid? Ray right?" Juri asked looking at the boy with concern.
Ray woke up and stared at Juri. "What a dream." He said as he drifted back to sleep. Juri shook him and he woke up again. "This isn't a dream. Who are you? Where's mom and dad? Where am I?" Ray asked in a scared voice.
"I'm Juri and this is Hiei, you're in Shitonaku forest in spirit world. In a mansion." Juri answered most of his questions and sighed.
"As for your parents I'm afraid they're dead because I only found you floating in the water." Hiei said with no concern about how Ray would feel.
"Mom...Dad they're gone forever." Ray started to cry feeling pain in his heart. He sobbed and sobbed again.
Juri walked over to the sobbing Ray and hugged him. He cried into her breast. (because that was how tall he was.) "It will be all right." She said trying to comfort him.
Hiei turned around. "I will give you a week to morn for your loss and then I will train you." He said.
"What do you mean train me?" Ray sobbed.
"I was assigned to train you make you stronger so I'll be prepared to train to you limit and beyond." Hiei said and with that he vanished out the door.
"Calm down I'm here for you." Juri said in a sweet and happy voice.
Ray lifted his head and looked at her with a slight smile on his face. "Thank you Juri." He said.
"No problem Ray." Juri said with a smile.
Hiei17: Thanks for reading please review
Readers: Why?
Hiei: Because Juri knows where you all live.
Juri: Yep .
Readers: EEEEEEEP!
Hiei: Yes oh joy the fish lady is in this chapter.
Juri: Do you have a problem with me?
Hiei: To put in terms you would actually be able to understand yes.
Juri: To put this in simple terms ( Juri slaps Hiei 10 times on each cheek).
Hiei17: Now on with the chapter.
Hiei swiftly ran towards the accident. "Koenma informed me that his family would be here." He looked around and identified Ray's unconscious body. He dove into the water and swam to the unconscious body. Hiei soon caught a glimpse of a glowing orb and grabbed it. He felt a sudden shock of coldness. His whole body shivered and he held Rays body with one arm and swam towards shore.
He saw many ambulances arrive. Paramedics jumped out with rafts and plunged into the water. Hiei ignored the cries for help knowing that the paramedics and other people could handle that. He was soon confronted by three paramedics.
"You're in my way." Hiei said in a calm voice. "I suggest you move."
"No can do gotta make sure that boy is gonna be okay." Said Paramedic 1. Paramedic 2 and 3 nodded in agreement.
Hiei looked down at Ray with little concern. "He looks fine to me. I honestly don't see a problem." He said. His red eyes met those of the paramedics.
"Just hand over the kid we'll take care of him." Paramedic 2 said nervously as he met Hiei's eyes.
Hiei's eyes began to show anger and he unsheathed his katana. He advanced towards the Paramedics. He turned his sword to its dull side.
"Hey we don't want any trouble." Paramedic 3 stuttered
"Than you shouldn't have asked for it." Hiei grinned. He tossed Ray and the orb high in the air and swiftly hit each of them with the dull side of his sword knocking them out. He caught Ray and the orb. Hiei ran out of the area and soon arrived at an old abandoned building. He walked in and tapped the floor. A trap door opened and Hiei jumped down and arrived in an alley way. Hiei continued to walk down the dangerous part of spirit world. He was lost in thought thinking how to deal with his assistant. He wondered who it was. He doubted that he would get along with this person and wouldn't be surprised if he was right he barley got along with anyone. He also wondered how he could take care of Ray and how to train him he was after all a child.
Demons surrounded Hiei and drooled. They looked as if they had not eaten in a thousand years. They circled in closer and bared their sharp fangs and let their drool drop to the ground.
"Hey why don't you hand over that kid we'll take care of him I promise." The leader of this demon pack said. He walked closer and extended his hand.
Hiei unsheathed his sword and yelled "Sword of the darkness flame." Black and green flames surrounded his katana. He slashed threw Ray up in the air and put the orb in his pocket and with extreme velocity sliced through the slobbering pack of demons. He caught Ray and grinned. He sheathed his katana and entered Shitonaku forest.
After walking for an hour he reached his destination at the foot of the mansion. The mansion was in front of trees by stream that fell off a cliff and formed a waterfall and continued on down a river. To the left side was a clear water spring. The mansion had a huge garage to the right side.
Hiei walked on into the mansion and was shocked to see his new assistant. Standing in front of him was a girl about 17 years old with teal hair, tan skin, a mermaid tail, and purple eyes.
"Shouldn't you be studying the dark tournament rule book or something fish lady." Hiei said with his usual cold expression on his face.
"My name is Juri." The girl yelled with one hand on her hip.
"Whatever. It matters not to me." Hiei said with a bored tone in his voice. He walked over to the near by chair and set Ray down.
"Is this the kid? Ray right?" Juri asked looking at the boy with concern.
Ray woke up and stared at Juri. "What a dream." He said as he drifted back to sleep. Juri shook him and he woke up again. "This isn't a dream. Who are you? Where's mom and dad? Where am I?" Ray asked in a scared voice.
"I'm Juri and this is Hiei, you're in Shitonaku forest in spirit world. In a mansion." Juri answered most of his questions and sighed.
"As for your parents I'm afraid they're dead because I only found you floating in the water." Hiei said with no concern about how Ray would feel.
"Mom...Dad they're gone forever." Ray started to cry feeling pain in his heart. He sobbed and sobbed again.
Juri walked over to the sobbing Ray and hugged him. He cried into her breast. (because that was how tall he was.) "It will be all right." She said trying to comfort him.
Hiei turned around. "I will give you a week to morn for your loss and then I will train you." He said.
"What do you mean train me?" Ray sobbed.
"I was assigned to train you make you stronger so I'll be prepared to train to you limit and beyond." Hiei said and with that he vanished out the door.
"Calm down I'm here for you." Juri said in a sweet and happy voice.
Ray lifted his head and looked at her with a slight smile on his face. "Thank you Juri." He said.
"No problem Ray." Juri said with a smile.
Hiei17: Thanks for reading please review
Readers: Why?
Hiei: Because Juri knows where you all live.
Juri: Yep .
Readers: EEEEEEEP!