celwriter: I'm back on track with this story, but I might get a little slow when the fight scenes come. I usually act them out, but you can't exactly do that on fanfiction, but i'll try to write them. Please review, i did not get any the day after I uploaded the last chapter. If three chapters go by and I get no reviews, I may just have to abandon the story until it shows more interest.
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Chapter 15
"Ricky?" Cel asked, surprised to hear him and very surprised to hear him jealous, "I found my brother. I dressed like this to blend n with the crowd."
"That land-lover didn't seem like a brotherly lad and seemed a bit too young to be 18," Ricky stated, not believing.
"That's not my brother, that's one of his clients who won't leave me alone," Cel said. Since when is seeing you twice not on purpose not leaving someone alone? a voice inside her head asked. "My brother is a blcksmith."
"No!" Ricky was shocked, but trusted Cel was telling the truth about him and the other guy.
"Yes, and he's in love with the governor's daughter."
"Oh, no!" Ricky replied, "You're still gonna be a pirate, aren't you? You won't become on of those high-class citizens with their noses in the air, will you?"
"No. wil won't make me either because he played pirate and helped capture the Black Pearl," Cel said. "You know what the worst part is?"
"No, what?"
"The govenor's daught is in love with Will, too." Sigh. "anyway, I have to find Jack so we can get after the escaping pirates."
"Okay, I'll come, too." Ricky did not want to leave Cel's side. Even the short time that she had been gone had made hime sick with worry. He still did not know what the lad's intentions had been with his Cel.
My Cel? Since when was she my Cel? Ricky asked himself.
Since you fell in love with those sparkling eyes and that flowing hair, but more or less your heart belongs to her, but does she love you in return? a voice answered. The question repeated in his mind as he and Cel pushed through crowd towards the stands.
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celwriter: so Ricky loves Cel, for sure, but does she love him or has she fallen for Philip? Does Philip love Cel or if he doesn't, will he soon?
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Chapter 15
"Ricky?" Cel asked, surprised to hear him and very surprised to hear him jealous, "I found my brother. I dressed like this to blend n with the crowd."
"That land-lover didn't seem like a brotherly lad and seemed a bit too young to be 18," Ricky stated, not believing.
"That's not my brother, that's one of his clients who won't leave me alone," Cel said. Since when is seeing you twice not on purpose not leaving someone alone? a voice inside her head asked. "My brother is a blcksmith."
"No!" Ricky was shocked, but trusted Cel was telling the truth about him and the other guy.
"Yes, and he's in love with the governor's daughter."
"Oh, no!" Ricky replied, "You're still gonna be a pirate, aren't you? You won't become on of those high-class citizens with their noses in the air, will you?"
"No. wil won't make me either because he played pirate and helped capture the Black Pearl," Cel said. "You know what the worst part is?"
"No, what?"
"The govenor's daught is in love with Will, too." Sigh. "anyway, I have to find Jack so we can get after the escaping pirates."
"Okay, I'll come, too." Ricky did not want to leave Cel's side. Even the short time that she had been gone had made hime sick with worry. He still did not know what the lad's intentions had been with his Cel.
My Cel? Since when was she my Cel? Ricky asked himself.
Since you fell in love with those sparkling eyes and that flowing hair, but more or less your heart belongs to her, but does she love you in return? a voice answered. The question repeated in his mind as he and Cel pushed through crowd towards the stands.
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celwriter: so Ricky loves Cel, for sure, but does she love him or has she fallen for Philip? Does Philip love Cel or if he doesn't, will he soon?