Hey, peoples! OK, first and foremost, this is not my story. It's my younger brother's, and I'm putting it up here because he doesn't have an account. Second, this is all basically in his words. Third, he's just beginning to write, unlike most of us, so take it easy, 'k? And now may I present:

I Won!

One day, Sheen was sitting at the Candy Bar. "Brain FREEZE!!!" he yelled.

"shh!" Carl shushed him. "I'm trying to play 'Ninja Llamas 2'!"

"Sorry." He became quiet. "Hey, Jimmy, what would you do if you won the lottery?"

"I don't know, Sheen."

Carl jumped up. "I'd buy a llama!" He sat back down.

Cindy finished her sundae. "I need a root beer."

"I'll get it," Jimmy volunteered. Cindy looked at him strangely. "Uh...OK. Thanks."

Jimmy stood and walked to the counter, ordered a root beer, and brought it back to Cindy.

Sheen shifted in his seat. "Um, guys, I gotta go...check on something. Bye!" Then he left.

So...that's Chapter One. Please let Soldier know what you think. Bye!