Good job you guys, it took al little while but you guys eventually got
enough reviews for me to bless you with an update lol. I will have to
write this bit by bit because it is soooo hot outside and inside that I
can't stand being in my room for very long. Also I am having my birthday
party tomorrow so if I don't finish today then you will be getting this on
Sunday or Monday...not that you care because you will already have what you
want (coughuserscough) I am just kidding I love you all so here is your
well earned chapter! Oh and I know I kinda abandoned Tinkerbell...partly
because I don't like her and partly because I have plans for her... hehe.
Penisoris- I know you didn't review this story but from the sound of it you have been reading it. Thank you so much for your review and lecture; it inspired me to update both stories. Thank you so much again and I hope that you won't be disappointed!
Hannah/Nano/Guess who- Thanks for reviewing many, many times. Hope you like it bestest buddy!
Niki Waters- Sorry for the suspense but this chapter is even MORE suspenseful. Thanks for the review.
Rolletti- Thanks for being such a great, great reviewer! I 3 u! Hope I didn't make you explode with impatience!
Thanks also to: jessygrl, hunsel, becc-gallanter, little cosette, pink- sneakers85, and everyone else who reviewed. I don't have time to name you all but you taking the time to review means a lot to me! You can email me if you have any suggestions on the story!
Wendy awoke to the birds twittering outside and light shining through cracks in the walls and ceiling. She began to sit up but was startled by someone moaning next to her and she turned to see Peter, lying down, sleeping. Then she remembered the night before and smiled. They had kissed then dozed off in each other's arms and Wendy had never had such good dreams as she had, had that night. She stood up, careful not to wake the sleeping boy, or teenager as he now was, and slipped outside onto the dew, strewn grass and flowers. Everything was so alive outside and it filled Wendy with a happiness that she had never felt before. She felt as it every particle of her was vibrating with a love for life and she couldn't contain herself as she skipped through the meadow like a little girl.
When she reached the tree she slipped inside and slid down the passage, into the living quarters. The boys were all happily eating berries and roots at the giant wooden table, chattering away about their latest adventures. When she came inside they all hushed and looked at her, their eyes wide with surprise and, to Wendy's surprise, fear.
"W-Wendy?" Nibs stammered.
"Yes Nibs, whatever is the matter with you all?" Wendy asked. She felt as if she had grown another head or arm. Then she remembered drinking the blue elixir (A/N: thanks to the person that described it as just that) and how she and Peter had aged and grown.
"Your older Wendy..."Michael said, getting up and walking over to her. The other boys did the same and soon she was surrounded by boys all staring at her in awe and disbelief.
"Yes, Peter and I found a secret room in the Jolly Rodger and we found a blue elixir and drank it and it aged us." Wendy said all at once, hardly able to contain herself.
"You mean Peter is...older too?" Slightly asked and was answered by Peter's now deeper voice from the passageway.
"Aye! I am older as well!" Peter said, and Wendy turned to look at him. His chest was still bare and his hair was a bit more disheveled than usual but he was still a fine specimen of a boy. All of the boys rushed over to him asking him millions of questions while Wendy stood around and watched. Peter had a different air about him today, one that Wendy had not seen today. She thought that it might have been from growing but, deep in her heart, she hoped that it was because he loved her. She was interrupted by Peter calling her name. "Hey Wendy! We are going to go battle the new pirates! Wanna come?" Peter asked excitedly.
"Yes, but Peter, are you sure that is such a good idea? I mean she almost killed us yesterday!" Wendy said and Peter looked at her like she was a sissy.
"Don't be silly Wendy, we can take them. And if WE can't then I certainly can!" He said cockily and put his hands on his hips. Wendy jut rolled her eyes and grabbed a sword from the table. Peter led the way out of the hideout and through the woods, eventually stopping at the edge of the forest where they could see the large pirate ship. It was still anchored in the same place as yesterday and still looked just as menacing.
"So what's the plan Peter?" Wendy asked.
"Well we fly over there, attack, and take the ship." Peter said simply.
"That's what he said about Captain Hook." A female voice said from behind them. They all snapped around only to find Tigerlily and a few other Indians. "We are here to help." (A/N: Sorry if that is not how Tigerlily talks but I am going to have her talk that way so there.)
"Wendy, you and me will fly over to the ship and spy, when we find that the coast is clear we will signal and everyone else will attack." Peter said and, taking Wendy's hand, he flew into the air with Wendy following. They flew swiftly across the water, eventually stopping at the side of the ship, there they peered over the edge. The ship was like any other one, it had a crew of disgusting, barbaric pirates, many cannons, and even a parrot. But chills went down Wendy's spine when she lay eyes on the captain for the very first time.
The captain was a tall woman with long, raven hair. She wore black pants and a black, long sleeved shirt, buttoned low. She had on a crimson bandana to hold her glossy, flowing hair back, and it came down just to the middle of her forehead. Wendy could see that she had sapphire blue eyes, much like Wendy's, and full, crimson lips. Wendy could not help but think that the woman was beautiful, but she looked deadly at the same time.
"Get to work ye scabberous dogs!" She yelled in a deep, strong voice, sending the crew running about. They were obviously terrified of her. Peter turned to Wendy and nodded. She took a deep breath and they bolted up onto the deck together, brandishing swords. The whole crew turned to look at the intruders, then began laughing at the sight of them.
"Thought I would introduce myself properly!" Peter called to the captain who stood, hand on the hilt of her sword, smiling coldly. "I am Peter Pan and YOU are not welcome in Neverland!"
"At last we meet, boy. But you are not such a boy anymore are you? You have grown...into a man! I am Captain Ebony Raven before, I am your worst nightmare." The woman said, taking a step forward and unsheathing her long, silver sword. "Ah, but who is that pretty girl you have with you?" The woman said, turning her cold gaze to Wendy, who, despite her fear, forced herself to look back.
"My name is Wendy Darling you cold hearted woman!" Wendy called, bravely. The woman turned and rolled her eyes at the crew who, in turned, laughed nervously.
"Really Peter, couldn't you do better?" Captain Raven said and Wendy blushed furiously. Peter dove at the woman, dagger brandished, and they began fighting. Peter had the advantage of flight but the woman was an excellent opponent, diving and swinging on ropes. Wendy watched, open mouthed, and didn't even notice the pirate creeping up behind her on the rigging until it was almost too late. She hit him with the hilt of her sword and he tumbled into the ocean. Then Wendy flew on to find some more pirates to dispose of. After a time of fighting the lost boys and the Indians appeared on deck and aided in the fighting. Wendy was almost having a good time until she heard the anguished cry of Peter.
She whirled around to see Peter, clutching his upper left arm and trying to fight with one hand. Wendy flew over to help Peter and slashed at the Captain, cutting off a lock of her black hair. Raven turned around sharply and began slashing at Wendy who wasn't expecting a fight of this magnitude. All around the deck they fought until Wendy saw Peter coming up behind Raven, raising his blade. The woman punched Wendy, sending her flying across the deck, then turned around and slashed Peter across the stomach. Wendy cried out, regaining her control and flew over to Peter who was stumbling away, clutching his bleeding wound. She lifted him up with all of her might, and flew them away, across the water, to the beach, laying him down gently on the soft sand. He was gasping for air and Wendy could tell that the wound was deep. She heard a few splashed and saw that the lost boys and Indians were swimming towards shore.
"Peter, stay conscious, I don't want to have to save your life twice in two days!" Wendy told him, fear clutching her racing heart. Blood was spilling out of Peter's stomach, drenching the sand he lay on. Wendy tore off some of her pants and pressed it to the wound, trying to stop the blood. The boys crowded around her, worried expressions on all of their faces. "Pick him up, we have to get back to the fort!" Wendy said and the boys lifted him up and they walked as fast as they could back to the fort where they finally lay him down on a bed of animal skins. The blood had soaked through the cloth now and Peter had gone pale, his eyes glassy. "Fetch me some rags, fresh water, and anything else you use to treat wounds!" Wendy ordered and a few boys went and came back with the rags, water, and a few dried leaves. She began dabbing at the profusely bleeding wound with the towel, turning them all crimson. Then she wrapped the remaining seven towels around the cut, putting pressure on it. "Peter! Don't die. Please don't die." She whispered under her breath, cold beads of sweat dripping down her face. Peter opened his eyes for a moment and looked down at her.
"W-Wendy...I love you." He said and lost consciousness. Wendy began crying, the sobs wracking her body as she watched her one true love pass beyond her help. A/N: Heh heh heh, yeah I know I'm evil with my nasty cliffhangers! Don't flame me, if you do it will just make me give up on the story! Hehe. So that was really sad sniff.... review and I will update sooner.
Penisoris- I know you didn't review this story but from the sound of it you have been reading it. Thank you so much for your review and lecture; it inspired me to update both stories. Thank you so much again and I hope that you won't be disappointed!
Hannah/Nano/Guess who- Thanks for reviewing many, many times. Hope you like it bestest buddy!
Niki Waters- Sorry for the suspense but this chapter is even MORE suspenseful. Thanks for the review.
Rolletti- Thanks for being such a great, great reviewer! I 3 u! Hope I didn't make you explode with impatience!
Thanks also to: jessygrl, hunsel, becc-gallanter, little cosette, pink- sneakers85, and everyone else who reviewed. I don't have time to name you all but you taking the time to review means a lot to me! You can email me if you have any suggestions on the story!
Wendy awoke to the birds twittering outside and light shining through cracks in the walls and ceiling. She began to sit up but was startled by someone moaning next to her and she turned to see Peter, lying down, sleeping. Then she remembered the night before and smiled. They had kissed then dozed off in each other's arms and Wendy had never had such good dreams as she had, had that night. She stood up, careful not to wake the sleeping boy, or teenager as he now was, and slipped outside onto the dew, strewn grass and flowers. Everything was so alive outside and it filled Wendy with a happiness that she had never felt before. She felt as it every particle of her was vibrating with a love for life and she couldn't contain herself as she skipped through the meadow like a little girl.
When she reached the tree she slipped inside and slid down the passage, into the living quarters. The boys were all happily eating berries and roots at the giant wooden table, chattering away about their latest adventures. When she came inside they all hushed and looked at her, their eyes wide with surprise and, to Wendy's surprise, fear.
"W-Wendy?" Nibs stammered.
"Yes Nibs, whatever is the matter with you all?" Wendy asked. She felt as if she had grown another head or arm. Then she remembered drinking the blue elixir (A/N: thanks to the person that described it as just that) and how she and Peter had aged and grown.
"Your older Wendy..."Michael said, getting up and walking over to her. The other boys did the same and soon she was surrounded by boys all staring at her in awe and disbelief.
"Yes, Peter and I found a secret room in the Jolly Rodger and we found a blue elixir and drank it and it aged us." Wendy said all at once, hardly able to contain herself.
"You mean Peter is...older too?" Slightly asked and was answered by Peter's now deeper voice from the passageway.
"Aye! I am older as well!" Peter said, and Wendy turned to look at him. His chest was still bare and his hair was a bit more disheveled than usual but he was still a fine specimen of a boy. All of the boys rushed over to him asking him millions of questions while Wendy stood around and watched. Peter had a different air about him today, one that Wendy had not seen today. She thought that it might have been from growing but, deep in her heart, she hoped that it was because he loved her. She was interrupted by Peter calling her name. "Hey Wendy! We are going to go battle the new pirates! Wanna come?" Peter asked excitedly.
"Yes, but Peter, are you sure that is such a good idea? I mean she almost killed us yesterday!" Wendy said and Peter looked at her like she was a sissy.
"Don't be silly Wendy, we can take them. And if WE can't then I certainly can!" He said cockily and put his hands on his hips. Wendy jut rolled her eyes and grabbed a sword from the table. Peter led the way out of the hideout and through the woods, eventually stopping at the edge of the forest where they could see the large pirate ship. It was still anchored in the same place as yesterday and still looked just as menacing.
"So what's the plan Peter?" Wendy asked.
"Well we fly over there, attack, and take the ship." Peter said simply.
"That's what he said about Captain Hook." A female voice said from behind them. They all snapped around only to find Tigerlily and a few other Indians. "We are here to help." (A/N: Sorry if that is not how Tigerlily talks but I am going to have her talk that way so there.)
"Wendy, you and me will fly over to the ship and spy, when we find that the coast is clear we will signal and everyone else will attack." Peter said and, taking Wendy's hand, he flew into the air with Wendy following. They flew swiftly across the water, eventually stopping at the side of the ship, there they peered over the edge. The ship was like any other one, it had a crew of disgusting, barbaric pirates, many cannons, and even a parrot. But chills went down Wendy's spine when she lay eyes on the captain for the very first time.
The captain was a tall woman with long, raven hair. She wore black pants and a black, long sleeved shirt, buttoned low. She had on a crimson bandana to hold her glossy, flowing hair back, and it came down just to the middle of her forehead. Wendy could see that she had sapphire blue eyes, much like Wendy's, and full, crimson lips. Wendy could not help but think that the woman was beautiful, but she looked deadly at the same time.
"Get to work ye scabberous dogs!" She yelled in a deep, strong voice, sending the crew running about. They were obviously terrified of her. Peter turned to Wendy and nodded. She took a deep breath and they bolted up onto the deck together, brandishing swords. The whole crew turned to look at the intruders, then began laughing at the sight of them.
"Thought I would introduce myself properly!" Peter called to the captain who stood, hand on the hilt of her sword, smiling coldly. "I am Peter Pan and YOU are not welcome in Neverland!"
"At last we meet, boy. But you are not such a boy anymore are you? You have grown...into a man! I am Captain Ebony Raven before, I am your worst nightmare." The woman said, taking a step forward and unsheathing her long, silver sword. "Ah, but who is that pretty girl you have with you?" The woman said, turning her cold gaze to Wendy, who, despite her fear, forced herself to look back.
"My name is Wendy Darling you cold hearted woman!" Wendy called, bravely. The woman turned and rolled her eyes at the crew who, in turned, laughed nervously.
"Really Peter, couldn't you do better?" Captain Raven said and Wendy blushed furiously. Peter dove at the woman, dagger brandished, and they began fighting. Peter had the advantage of flight but the woman was an excellent opponent, diving and swinging on ropes. Wendy watched, open mouthed, and didn't even notice the pirate creeping up behind her on the rigging until it was almost too late. She hit him with the hilt of her sword and he tumbled into the ocean. Then Wendy flew on to find some more pirates to dispose of. After a time of fighting the lost boys and the Indians appeared on deck and aided in the fighting. Wendy was almost having a good time until she heard the anguished cry of Peter.
She whirled around to see Peter, clutching his upper left arm and trying to fight with one hand. Wendy flew over to help Peter and slashed at the Captain, cutting off a lock of her black hair. Raven turned around sharply and began slashing at Wendy who wasn't expecting a fight of this magnitude. All around the deck they fought until Wendy saw Peter coming up behind Raven, raising his blade. The woman punched Wendy, sending her flying across the deck, then turned around and slashed Peter across the stomach. Wendy cried out, regaining her control and flew over to Peter who was stumbling away, clutching his bleeding wound. She lifted him up with all of her might, and flew them away, across the water, to the beach, laying him down gently on the soft sand. He was gasping for air and Wendy could tell that the wound was deep. She heard a few splashed and saw that the lost boys and Indians were swimming towards shore.
"Peter, stay conscious, I don't want to have to save your life twice in two days!" Wendy told him, fear clutching her racing heart. Blood was spilling out of Peter's stomach, drenching the sand he lay on. Wendy tore off some of her pants and pressed it to the wound, trying to stop the blood. The boys crowded around her, worried expressions on all of their faces. "Pick him up, we have to get back to the fort!" Wendy said and the boys lifted him up and they walked as fast as they could back to the fort where they finally lay him down on a bed of animal skins. The blood had soaked through the cloth now and Peter had gone pale, his eyes glassy. "Fetch me some rags, fresh water, and anything else you use to treat wounds!" Wendy ordered and a few boys went and came back with the rags, water, and a few dried leaves. She began dabbing at the profusely bleeding wound with the towel, turning them all crimson. Then she wrapped the remaining seven towels around the cut, putting pressure on it. "Peter! Don't die. Please don't die." She whispered under her breath, cold beads of sweat dripping down her face. Peter opened his eyes for a moment and looked down at her.
"W-Wendy...I love you." He said and lost consciousness. Wendy began crying, the sobs wracking her body as she watched her one true love pass beyond her help. A/N: Heh heh heh, yeah I know I'm evil with my nasty cliffhangers! Don't flame me, if you do it will just make me give up on the story! Hehe. So that was really sad sniff.... review and I will update sooner.