Hina-Chan:
Hahahaha, loved your review! Glad you liked it. It's because of you that I decided to write another chapter :). Don't know yet what I will write but I'll just go with the flow. Thanks again smiles.
It was out.
Finally.
Relief coursed through her.
Her energy left her.
She slumped forward.
Hands caught her before she reached the ground.
Her wings brushed the ground. Her blood, pus and pieces of her skin were everywhere. The walls, the ground, her wings, her companions. Dripping and slowly drying.
She didn't have any energy left. Slowly slipping away.
Sesshoumaru lowered her to the ground. She gently smiled at him and became unconscious. Softly he demanded cloth, water and some clothes. He looked at her wings. The feathers were a mess but he could see the shiny white colour shining through the blood and pus. He was still wondering what had happened. It was about a month ago that he saw her rubbing her shoulders with a hint off pain on her face. When it became clear that something was forming under her skinâ.
The elderly Miko and the taijia approached him with what he asked for. Luckily he had send Rin and Shippou away when the screams started so they weren't around to see the Miko's back bursting open when her wings came out. Ah yes, the wingsâ. How could she grow wings? She was human, was she not? He looked at her while her female companions began to clean up the mess. The elderly Miko turned to him and asked him to leave because they were going to change her clothes. He stood and with a last glance at the not so human Miko he left.
Freedom.
Freedom in every sense of the word.
Totally.
Free.
The wind touched the feathers.
Messing up her hair.
Her clothes were swaying in the wind.
She was gliding through the air.
Never had she felt like this.
Sure she had flown with Sesshoumaru on his cloud one time but this was nothing like that.
It was like the world was at her feet.
Bowing towards her.
Untouchable.
She felt she could do anything, would do anything, just to fly like this forever.
Up in the clouds.
Flying with the birds.
Touch heavenâ.
It was fantastic.
People from the village stopped what they were doing and stared at her in awe.
Her silvery white wings were glittering in the sunlight. Making them seem like crystallised air with a silver gleam.
She looked like an angel.
Heavens gift.
Untouchedâ..
Untaintedâ.
Unrealâ.
An apparitionâ.
Just,
Beautifulâ.
I know its short but I kinda like it. It was a nice place to finish as well. Hope you like it too. Oh yes, I had some reviews on my note at the end of the first chapter. Some people thought that it was a shame that I would give this idea away to anybody who would ask, but that was not what I meant. I am a muse, I like to be an inspiration to other writers. Okay, I posted this also for the fun of it, but it was bugging me for a time until I decided to write it down but I posted it here so that maybe I could inspire somebody to write a story where Kagome has wings or something that has got to do with this. I would like to read it. So I will not be giving this away or anything like that, I will keep it but if someone wants to use it for a story, they are welcome to do so, if they tell me :)
For more info see my profile. For those who reviewed, thank you very much, I wasn't expecting it and it was a nice surprise.
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Grz Aria-Chan
By the wayâ. Thanks Gil :D