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Starfire was the first one awake the next morning, as usual. She sat with her knees pulled to her chest as she watched the sunset. It was the most beautiful thing to her. She was mesmerized by how the sun changed the color of the sky to an incredible orange and yellow, and how it changed the look of everything the sunlight touched. These mornings were the best part of her day now...
Robin was next to wake up. He was groggy and felt like going back to sleep, but he knew that if he didn't make breakfast, Starfire would make some weird Tameranian food. Robin didn't even feel like taking any chances with Terra. The Boy Wonder rubbed his unique eyes and put his mask on. He changed into his usual rubber uniform and headed out into the hall. Once in the kitchen, Robin started making scrambled eggs and put biscuits in the oven.
Obviously, Terra was the last to awaken. She felt rested from a good night's sleep, and was ready to take on the day. She ran her hand through her golden, silky hair while she sat up in her bed. After changing into her normal shirt and pants, she headed to the kitchen, following the scent of eggs and biscuits. Terra finally reached the kitchen, said "Good Morning," and sat down in the booth.
"Mornin' Terra," Robin said without looking up from his frying pan. "Where's Starfire?" Robin responded, "Probably on top of the tower watching the sunrise like she does every morning." Robin smiled thinking about her. There was nothing he disliked about Starfire. In fact, he loved everything about her, from her beauty to her curious, naive personality. "So, Starfire tells me you two have a thing for each other," Terra said smirking. "Yeah, so?" Robin replied defensively. "Hey, I've got no problem with it...no need to be cranky." "Sorry, I had a long night..." "But, I thought you went right to bed? Did you have trouble sleeping?" Robin brought the eggs and biscuits to the table and sat down with Terra. He told her all about the night before, from Blaze's attack to his kiss with Starfire, which he had a little trouble telling Terra.
After the Boy Wonder finished his story, Terra looked at him with disbelief. "She kissed you?! Awesome!" "Yeah, I guess..." "First kiss?" "Yep." There was a long pause while they ate. Terra asked Robin, "How was it?" Robin looked up with a confused look. "How was what?" "You know, the kiss..." "Oh, that. It was...wet." Terra giggled.
They finished their meal, but there was still some food left for Starfire. "Well," said Terra as she stretched, "I'm gonna go check out the training gym." "Ok, I'm gonna go get Star down for breakfast." Without another word, Terra began walking down the hall, and Robin stepped into the elevator.
Robin finally reached the top of the tower, and saw Starfire sitting with her knees pulled to her chest, facing outward towards the horizon. "Hey, Star." "Hello, Robin." "You gonna eat breakfast? I made eggs and biscuits." Starfire stood up and turned around. She walked up to Robin, who was standing by the elevator, and said, "Robin, I cannot thank you enough for what you did last night." "Star it was nothing, really -" Robin was silenced with a big, warm, loving hug. "Thank you for being who you are," Starfire whispered. "Robin rubbed her back and replied, "You're welcome." After a few moments, they pulled away. She was truly the most beautiful girl Robin had ever laid eyes on. Her long, silky, orange hair moved gently in the breeze, and her emerald eyes sparkled with innocence and kindness. "Why don't you go grab some food? It's already on the table, and Terra and I already ate." "Ok," she said with a smile.
She and Robin stepped into the elevator. They got off at the hallway leading to the kitchen, and Starfire headed to her meal. Now Robin had nothing to do...
The Boy Wonder figured he'd go see how Terra was doing in the training gym. He walked in the opposite direction of the kitchen and down some halls. When he eventually reached the training gym, he walked in to find Terra punching away at a punching bag. She turned when she heard the door open. "Hey, Rob! Come to train with me?" "Nah, just thought I'd come in and see what's up." "Oh, ok. Well, I'm just finishing up here. I think I'm gonna go get a glass of water." "Ok, lets go." The two teens walked down to the kitchen, and Robin explained to Terra exactly how Blaze was able to get inside and grab Raven, Cyborg and Beast Boy. "I wonder what they're up to right now..." thought Robin.
As they entered the kitchen, Starfire was finishing up her meal. "Hello, friends!" "Hey, Star," Robin and Terra said. As Terra was filling her glass with water, the giant TV turned on, and Slade's head appeared. "Hello, Titans," he said darkly. "Slade!" roared Robin, scaring Starfire with his sudden anger. "Where are the Titans?!" "They are in good hands Robin...no need to be angry..." This just made Robin even more angry. "Where are they?!" Robin said, slamming his fist on the booth. "Actually, Robin, if you really want to see them, they're right here..." The image on the TV shifted to a picture of Raven, Cyborg and Beast Boy. They were standing upright with their heads down in containment tubes. Their eyes were closed. "If you hurt them, I swear I'll -" "What, Robin? Kill me? Good luck trying...I can awaken your friends at my command, and they will obey me...not to mention my good friend Blaze..." The picture on the TV shifted to Blaze, who was standing with his back against a wall, smirking. "Titans, lets move out! We've got friends to save!" Robin, Starfire and Terra ran quickly out of the tower, with Slade laughing menacingly.
Well? Comments? Please review! Also, I plan to have the final battle at chapter 10, so stay tuned. I will update soon (I promise). See ya at the next chapter...