THIS IS AN AUTHOR'S NOTE THAT YOU SHOULD READ BECAUSE IT IS EXTREEMLY IMPORTANT!!!!!
Uhm... yeah. Anywayz...
I'm really, REALLY sorry I haven't updated in forever. I have a tone of the story written down, but haven't typed it up. I gave it to Greyson almost two weeks ago, but he got grounded and only typed up 3 out of 30 pages. ::steam comes out of ears::
OK, well, since I can't put the next chapter up, I'll answer reviews! If you are too lazy to read them, then go enjoy other fics I wrote! I just posted one called "A cruel past and a crueler fate" not as angsty as the title sounds. It's a Harry Potter crossover! Anyway, the reviews:
CHAPTER ONE:
Heavenly Awkward: We've decided on the same premise? Huh? Well, even if I had no clue what you were talking about, I'm still glad you reviewed! I hope you enjoy!
Raven A. Star: Yeah, you're right that WAS a long review. I still have it in my e-mail box!
Lost Inside: yep. Really, REALLY big problem. Guess what! It gets bigger!
CHAPTER TWO:
Heavenly Awkward: Ha, Stephanie really didn't appreciate being kicked off the roof twice more, but who cares! I'm trying as hard as I can to elaborate, and I think I'm getting better (not necessarily in this fic, but in others).
Raven A. Star: Thank you! I did!
TheDarkAzar: aww, it's ok. Parents are crazy! Well... hey look! I'm answering your review! Well, sorry, but I can't kill Cyborg. If I did, then the attention would be pulled away from raven and she would kill herself. Then everyone would think she killed herself to be with him, and it escalates into one of my least favorite couplings. I'm leaning towards a BB/Rae fic, even if I don't like that couple. Maybe I'll just keep them as really, really good friends then get Rae and OC bf... oh the possibilities!
CHAPTER THREE:
Heavenly Awkward: well, yeah they're noticing, but they'll brush it off until I throw in a couple more fainting spells. I don't know a whole lot on this subject, but one of my friends was an anorexic, so I'm basing the titans' reactions off of my own. When some one you're really close to goes through some thing like this, you automatically brush it off. It takes forever to notice. :( She lost 50 pounds because... well... I just typed in random numbers. It's not all that reasonable.
Raven A. Star: I'm glad you're reading it again, too!
YoJimbosBlade: Yeah... what? Yu didn't notice before? Hmm...
CHAPTER FOUR:
Keystone: Yeah, detail is what everyone wants from me. Well, please remember that from chapter four on, I was writing on pieces of scrap paper in spare time. I wrote the fight scene at midnight, first night of camp, in the dark, flashlight between my shoulder and ear, freezing to death, and there were two homesick girls in my cabin. Eesh. I'm getting better at dialogue. I SWEAR!!!
Heavenly Awkward: hey, you weren't the first to review this chapter! Keystone beat you to it! J/K. Oh, they aren't going to the tower... They're going to the hospital, but yes. There is confrontation.
Raven A. Star: yeah, you did! I let a girl at camp read my story just before I sent it to you (you have really neat writing, did you know that?) and she told me that I was "I can't a même lu les la plupart de ceci, mais l'oui certainement fol de you're, fou aliéné fou ! hé, voulez-vous aller nager ? I'm sûr vous pouvez nager dans une droit-veste !" Geez, these French people are mean. I've only translated some of it. (I have it cuz I asked her to write it down.)
Grumbumble: YAY! Made me happy that you took time out of your "rit of passage' writing life to come read and review my story! Ya!!!
Oceanlord: oh, don't be sad. She will get help. I WON'T LET RAVEN DIE!!!!
Blood Darkness: I SHALL CONTINUE!!!!!
Cielita: hey look! I'm not crying! Well, my uhm... in-tree-pur-soon-all-die-nom-eex... yeah... glad you like 'em... lol!
Kelly: I don't think you even read this story, did you?
Solareclipse117: They'll find out, don't worry! Don't cry! As for the button, I think it's lost... excuse me while I go look for it...
Incybincer: oh, yes! Angst! Uhm... I don't know why you said "review please"... unless you meant update! Yeeah!
Aninnymous: no, Raven doesn't go to counseling. Her friends will sit her down eventually, but she'll run away for a couple hours. Ok, I won't answer your question. COUGHyesCOUGH!!
Oceanave: glad you like!
The Soaring Falcon: yeah, Raven is out of character. There wouldn't be a story if she wasn't!
Lost inside: ok, it won't be discontinued!
Yojimbosblade: oh... you will find out.
Well, that's the end!! Lots and lots of reviews! (for me, anyway.)
That's all I needed to say, I suppose! Bye!
---Wild Spirit of Darkness
