Sorry for the cliffy. I wanna thank kmc99 for all of his/her reviews. Here it is!
"Ulrich get up!" odd shouted. No answer from Ulrich. Odd ran over and shook him. "Wha...what's going on?" he said confused. "Aelita just called-""You woke me up for that?!" he said enraged. "No, I know how you need your beauty sleep. It's just that it's, its Yumi." Odd said softly. "Oh what does she have to say this time?" Ulrich said meanly. "Will you just shut the hell up and listen? Ulrich this is serious. It doesn't have anything to do with you or the big fight you two had last night." Odd took a deep breath. "Ulrich, Yumi's gone." Ulrich mouth slowly dropped. "Aelita woke up, and she saw that Yumi wasn't in her bed. She went to relock the door, thinking that Yumi had just gone out, but the lock was done. No one had left the room, and yet there was no Yumi." "Do you think we should go see Jeremy? You know, see if he knows anything?" Ulrich said. Odd nodded and then bound out the door. They ran to Jeremy's, and pounded on the door. As they were running, Ulrich's mind was numb. He couldn't believe that Yumi was gone, but he knew she was. Yumi, his best friend and the first one he loved, kissed, (except for the down payment) or went on a date with, was gone. He never got to say that he was sorry. All of the mean things he said to her filled his mind. The heartbreaking look on her face when he had said everything, the tears streaming down her cheeks at the Christmas Ball, even her strange state of mind look, made Ulrich need her. "Einstein, rise and shine!" odd called out. "Hello" a gruff looking Jeremy answered the door. Just then, a wide awake Aelita came running in a pink tank top and pink shorts. "Well, what is this all about? I f you don't mind, I'd like to do the normal thing to do at 2:30 AM, which is, oh, I don't know if you've ever heard of it. It's called sleeping!" "Jeremy, when I woke up at about 2, I looked around and well..." A fumbling Aelita said. "Jeremy, Yumi's gone," Odd said quietly. "Gone? But how?" Jeremy said softly. "I woke up, and Yumi was gone, but the door was still locked, so she couldn't have left. I think this has Xana all over it. And I even think that Yumi so- called boyfriend has something very important to do with it. Especially because of what she said about the eyes." Aelita said. "Wait, what about the eyes?" Ulrich said. "Ulrich, Yumi told that this strange feeling comes over when she stares into Xavier's eyes. I have this feeling in the pit of my stomach that... that Xavier was stealing Yumi's soul." "Bravo," a voice said. They looked and saw Xavier sit up. "Really, I am impressed. I figured no one would figure it out." He said standing up. "What did you do to her?" Odd said concerned. "You're the reason why she's been acting so strange." Aelita said, pointing a finger in an accusing way. "Yes, so I have been having a little fun with Yumi. But I'm not done yet." "Who are you and what are you planning to do to her?" Jeremy said shouting. "You'll find out my plan very soon. As for my name, allow me to introduce myself as Xavier Nale. AS for my real name take the first two letters and put them togeth-""Xana! Shut the hell up you freaking loser. What id you do to her and where is she?" shouted Ulrich, who had been quiet the whole time. "Look if you wanna find out what happened to the girl; you'll just have to deactivate the tower." He said before disappearing into a black vapor. "Jeremy, do you know what he did to the computer when he was on it?" "No, I never looked at it. I figured that Lyoko would have been to frustrating for him to completely figure out. Oh no! He messed up the devirtualization program. This means he plans to destroy us once and for all. But why would he need to steal Yumi's soul?" Jeremy said think. "Maybe he did it to weaken Yumi, and bring her to Lyoko, and leave her for the monsters to destroy her." Odd said. "Before we go, I have something to show you. It was supposed to be a Christmas present to Jeremy from me and Yumi." Aelita said before she began to type. "What is it?" Odd asked. "Something that Jeremy has always wanted: an account on Lyoko.
All six eyes landed on Jeremy. "Aelita, how...how did know figure that out?" "Jeremy, you once told me that for once in your life, you wanted to be the hero, just like us four. Well, this is the time to be the hero. This time, you have to, for Yumi." She then stood up, and ran out.
At the Factory.
"But Aelita how are you going to get to Lyoko if you're here scanning us in?" Jeremy said. "I can scan all three of you in, then program the computer to scan me while I'm in the scanner. So, are you ready, J?" she asked. Jeremy nodded, gulped, and then headed for the scanners. "Scanner Jeremy. Transfer Jeremy. Virtualization!" she said. Jeremy's whole body was tingling with excitement he was transferred. "All ready boys?" Aelita's voice came on over the intercom in the Scanner room. "Scanner Odd, scanner Ulrich. Transfer Odd, transfer, Ulrich. Virtualization!" the two boys landed. As Aelita was programming the accounts she noticed something strange. She then got into the scanner.
A few moments later, She arrived. Aelita hadn't been back to Lyoko since she was virtualized. She was in a spandex pink top, pink camouflage skirt and boots (sort of army meets Barbie meets lara croft) She held two guns. "whoa, I think we got competition." Ulrich muttered. "So what's your super power?" Odd asked Aelita. Aelita giggled. "watch!" She took a step, and then all they saw was a blur of pink. "Aww, she got super speed!" Odd complained. "Wait, where's Jeremy?" Ulrich said. "uh, over here." Jeremy was hiding behind a rock. Aelita then joined them. Jeremy had black goggles, a black tank top, and black pants. He carried a mace. "What his super power?" "Super strength!" Aelita said. Jeremy decided to try it out by trying to pick up the boulder he had been hiding behind. He picked it up with one finger. "oh my God!" he said. "Jeremy! The accounts! Xavier changed, and harmed some of them." "wait what?" "Yumi's has been changed. What she looks like, what weapon she has, her power, everything is different. And the devirtualization bug only affected hers and Ulrich's." "Why?" "I'll tell you what happening now, if you want." Xavier said as he rose from the ground. "Where is she? What have you done to her?" Odd said. "Oh I will, but you might want to deactivate the tower now. Maybe by the time you get there, you'll figure it out." "there's a tower! We totally forgot!" Aelita shouted. She then ran, but not a super speed. Only a few feet later, Jeremy said, "there's a monster around here!" "How do you know?" "Jeremy has the computer programmed into the goggles. Ow!" Aelita said as her right shoulder began to glow because it was hit. "Well, there's the monster. I hope it's a crab. They're stupid." Odd said. They turned to face the monster. "That's not a monster!" the monster stood there. But it wasn't a robotic monster. Yumi, stood there, with a gun pointed out, still smoking. She had on a black racer back tank top, a short red skirt and red shoes. Her hair was twisted up and held with a red clip. She had black eye shadow, and bright red lip gloss. "It's called a laser gun, and you should be more careful, princess!" she sneered. "Yumi, what the f--- are you doing? We're you're friends." "No you're not. Xana is the only friend that I have." "Oh no. When Xana stole her soul, he did something to her mind. She's now part of his team." Aelita said worried. "Maybe if we get to the tower, it will erase this whole thing." Odd said. "Don't hold your breath." A voice filled the air, as Xavier rose out of the ground. He put an arm around Yumi. Yumi smiled. "Why did you do this to her?" "she knows the most about me and Lyoko! And now, I will let her destroy you, sending you three home, and Ulrich to the digital void, never to be uploaded again. Mwahahahaha!" he said before disappearing. "you know, that guy is really starting to get on my nerves," odd said. Yumi then shot him, causing him to fall. "Split up!" Jeremy directed. Odd went running, Aelita ran behind a rock, planning to run after Yumi was busy. Jeremy stood, creeping back slowly. Ulrich just stood there. "Ulrich, what the hell are you doing?!" Ulrich didn't say anything. He just stood there in the open. Jeremy slid toward Aelita. "It's like he's acting ...like...bait. Oh no. Ulrich going to offer himself to Yumi, so that you can go to the tower. Aelita, get a move on now." Aelita then jumped and used her super speed to reach the tower. "Odd, help Ulrich. He's down to 60 life points, and you don't want him to lose them." Then Xavier appeared, put his hand on Yumi's shoulder, and closed his eyes. Her body then began to glow red. It began to float. She squinted her eyes and gritted her teeth as if she were in pain. But this was the Yumi that they knew. Jeremy then noticed that Yumi's account appeared on the screen in his goggles. "Ulrich, she' no longer under his control!" He then saw that Yumi's life points were dropping drastically as the moments passed. "Ulrich, you're the closest one to her. You've got to get him to stop, or you can say good-bye to ever seeing Yumi in real person again!"
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