--Love is all that –
Alright I got 3 reviews...that's pretty good seeing I only put up the two chapters up today...since they're so short I'm putting up more than one a day. And no.. I'm not going to update everyday... I know...I'm sorry my chapters in this one are so short! I'm just trying to figure out the rest of my other story! Gimme a break.
Thanks to :
WritingSecrets for her advice ; yes I'm going to try that out in this chapter
sesshomaru's friend : for their advice
Sesslover : for their pointers
( ;;) I need a lot of help don't i....
Chapter 3
Kohaku and Rin slowly walked into the village Rin lived in. Villagers looked up from their work to stare at the bloody stranger walking with Rin. Rin led Kohaku to the doctor. The doctor turned around, surprise to find Rin and another person.
"what have we here?" the doctor walked over to Kohaku and examined his wounds.
"Ow!!" yelped Kohaku when the doctor pressed onto a specific spot on his arm , "That really hurt."
"Hmm...it's seems you have a broken arm then." Doctor examined Kohaku's other arm, and delclared that only his left arm was broken. Tension started to build and Rin couldn't take it anymore. She hated silence.
"His name is Kohaku," said Rin, trying to start up a conversation. The doctor gave Kohaku some herbsand put a sling around his arm.
"Kohaku, that's all I'm able to do now. You must get plenty of rest and try not to move around too much. I'm sure you can stay at Rin's house, she will take care of you. I'm going to be busy soon so you two better get going." Doctor shooed the two out and they headed for Rin's house. Rin introduce Kohaku to her familly and tols her parents he would be staying for a while.
-End
There still short...but three chapters in one day is good right? Anyhow I'm just trying to think up what's going to happen next... any suggestions?
Oh yeah! And I'm going to need you people to help me who should the evil villan be later on?
Kagura, Kanna, someone from the village, or someone else? R&R! thanks again for the reviews!