Reviews received for this Chapter: *Spoilers*
Xw0kenn0wX: *waves flags* E! I want more . Now. lol Very good job, it's original, it's cute, and it's not a goddamned mary-sue lol ^_^ *applauds you* Update soon...*big shiny eyes* please? I'll...I'll give you a co0keh!
~kate
Pillian's reply: keep reading, and I'm happy!
PED-Sarah: I like this... I like how she already hates Jack. Do you already have ideas for this story? I can't wait to see what you write next. It would be cool is she waited a while to tell Jack who she really is, just to see if he would recognize her or notice her in any way... is this before or after the curse in the movie is lifted? Oh, never mind, I just saw the "Elizabeth Turner" But anyway, update soon!
Pillian's reply: I have the whole story planned out with no detail, now I just have to think of what going to happen to fill in time, and how the fights scenes are going to go.
PORT ROYAL
Port Royal was clean. Their was no scallywags tromping around. I felt very out of place. It was unfortunate that I had so much gold. Easy picking were the pocket in this establishment. I bought myself a carriage, and hired help to bring in my chest of gold.
Off I was. Strange looks I gathered when people saw a "lady" driving her own cart. But I was used to that.
The seamstress' was my first stop. The store was called "Stitches and Sews" and it was a nicely painted cottage of a pale turquoise and lavender- like blue.
The old women who ran the place had a quick bustle to her, and seemed to have endless amounts of jobs for everyone.
She sent Suzy to gather ready made dresses in the sizes Rachelle had taken. SO on and so forth. The whole store was a bustle even though I was the only customer. Natalie and Suzy looked to be the only ones I could see about my age. The others were either older or younger then us three.
Sam the delivery boy came by, at one point, to pick up the house drop-offs for the day. Although on Tortuga I had seen better, he was still good looking and Natalie and Suzy had sudden intakes of breath at the sight of him. When he smiled I feared they both might faint. I was very close to being right.
They smiled shyly at me, and I gave them a friendly reassuring smile back. Thank god among them I was not. No man had ever stunned me in any way such as that. None. Nor will anyone; ever.
In the end I purchased two "lady's gowns" and two "respectful" men's out fits for y "dear twin brother who's exactly my size, but was busy today." Incase I needed to become a man for what ever reason. Also I purchased for "My Dear Brother" one set of "play" clothes incase I needed to be comfortable.
I paid with the gold, undertaking a few strange looks, but after the gold had been tested I was smiled at, and just another customer with gold medallions to spare.
I asked one last favor of the already help people. "And, it's my twin and my birthday just a few days yonder, and he would LOVE a proper sword. Could you direct me to the finest sword smith in town?"
Their answer was no controversial. The Turner's made the best swords in town. It was up a mile left, left, then right. A little green and yellow shop, I was told. And hardly a mile on, left, left, and then right, was a fine tiny looking structure and looked to be a excellent shop. I knocked then entered.
The first thing I noticed, the inside was decently bigger then the out side. The room was also sunk in, and had a dirt floor. The room was dimly light and most of the sauntering light came from a roaring fire in a rather large hearth. Their was a table somewhat towards the door, and a woman looking to be about my own age was seated their. She smiled and stood. Reaching for my hand she smiled and said
"Hello, I'm Elizabeth Turner."
Xw0kenn0wX: *waves flags* E! I want more . Now. lol Very good job, it's original, it's cute, and it's not a goddamned mary-sue lol ^_^ *applauds you* Update soon...*big shiny eyes* please? I'll...I'll give you a co0keh!
~kate
Pillian's reply: keep reading, and I'm happy!
PED-Sarah: I like this... I like how she already hates Jack. Do you already have ideas for this story? I can't wait to see what you write next. It would be cool is she waited a while to tell Jack who she really is, just to see if he would recognize her or notice her in any way... is this before or after the curse in the movie is lifted? Oh, never mind, I just saw the "Elizabeth Turner" But anyway, update soon!
Pillian's reply: I have the whole story planned out with no detail, now I just have to think of what going to happen to fill in time, and how the fights scenes are going to go.
PORT ROYAL
Port Royal was clean. Their was no scallywags tromping around. I felt very out of place. It was unfortunate that I had so much gold. Easy picking were the pocket in this establishment. I bought myself a carriage, and hired help to bring in my chest of gold.
Off I was. Strange looks I gathered when people saw a "lady" driving her own cart. But I was used to that.
The seamstress' was my first stop. The store was called "Stitches and Sews" and it was a nicely painted cottage of a pale turquoise and lavender- like blue.
The old women who ran the place had a quick bustle to her, and seemed to have endless amounts of jobs for everyone.
She sent Suzy to gather ready made dresses in the sizes Rachelle had taken. SO on and so forth. The whole store was a bustle even though I was the only customer. Natalie and Suzy looked to be the only ones I could see about my age. The others were either older or younger then us three.
Sam the delivery boy came by, at one point, to pick up the house drop-offs for the day. Although on Tortuga I had seen better, he was still good looking and Natalie and Suzy had sudden intakes of breath at the sight of him. When he smiled I feared they both might faint. I was very close to being right.
They smiled shyly at me, and I gave them a friendly reassuring smile back. Thank god among them I was not. No man had ever stunned me in any way such as that. None. Nor will anyone; ever.
In the end I purchased two "lady's gowns" and two "respectful" men's out fits for y "dear twin brother who's exactly my size, but was busy today." Incase I needed to become a man for what ever reason. Also I purchased for "My Dear Brother" one set of "play" clothes incase I needed to be comfortable.
I paid with the gold, undertaking a few strange looks, but after the gold had been tested I was smiled at, and just another customer with gold medallions to spare.
I asked one last favor of the already help people. "And, it's my twin and my birthday just a few days yonder, and he would LOVE a proper sword. Could you direct me to the finest sword smith in town?"
Their answer was no controversial. The Turner's made the best swords in town. It was up a mile left, left, then right. A little green and yellow shop, I was told. And hardly a mile on, left, left, and then right, was a fine tiny looking structure and looked to be a excellent shop. I knocked then entered.
The first thing I noticed, the inside was decently bigger then the out side. The room was also sunk in, and had a dirt floor. The room was dimly light and most of the sauntering light came from a roaring fire in a rather large hearth. Their was a table somewhat towards the door, and a woman looking to be about my own age was seated their. She smiled and stood. Reaching for my hand she smiled and said
"Hello, I'm Elizabeth Turner."