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Well, I don't think I've ever got that many reviews on the first chapter of any story! Wow, y'all like this. Hmm, wonders never cease. Okay, here it goes!
"HEROES IN A HALF-SHELL, TURTLE POWER!" Daydream screamed in what seemed to be a singing voice. "Oh please, shut-up!" the voice pleaded with her. "No!" she screamed back. "Don't make me hurt you!" the voice said menacingly. Daydream stuck her tongue out at the wall. Danceingfae got up and grabbed the short writer. "Daydream, I don't think now's the right time for that." She told the girl who sat down and began to pout. All four of trapped fan fiction writers had been sitting in there for what seemed like forever, screaming and yelling for the voice to let them out. "I'm starving." whined Mily. LenniluvsBrian began whistling. Mily looked at her strangely. "You don't have any food, do you?" Mily growled angrily. Lenni jumped up and began to run, but Mily tackled her. Yells and screams were ringing around the white room as the two fought. Danceingfae and Daydream looked at each other. "I didn't do it." Daydream said absentmindedly. Danceingfae sighed and walked over to the two fighting girls, but before she got there. BANG! A girl with black hair pulled up into a ponytail had body-slammed her to the ground. Danceingfae pushed her off angrily. "I HAVE HAD IT UP TO HERE!" she yelled and stomped off into a vacant part of the room. The new girl looked offended. "Sor-ry!" She said and got up. She seemed to be confused, which would be expected. Mily, giving up on the idea of ever getting Lenni's food, went over to her. "It's not you." She said reassuringly, "It's just that Danceingfae has been through a lot lately."
The girl's eyebrows rose. "Did you say Danceingfae?" Mily nodded in response. "Nuh-uh." The girl exclaimed. Mily nodded more. "No way! That's not possible! Who are you?!" The girl asked accusingly. "Uh, Mily." "Nuh- uh." The girl repeated. Mily grabbed her by the shoulders. "UH-HUH!" she shouted. The girl jumped away. "Nuh-uh! You can't be Mily!" Mily got a look on her face that said she was gonna punch her hard. "I'll take that as a yes." The girl said quickly. "Good." Mily hissed. Lenni got up and decided to take over. "Yeah, that's Mily, that's Daydream, that's Danceingfae, and I'm LenniluvsBrian." She said and then covered the girl's mouth before she could say nuh-uh. "Dude, so like where are we?" the girl asked when Lenni let go. "Let's start with a name." Lenni told her. The girl nodded quickly. "Oh yeah. I forgot, my name's Ziptango." Daydream jumped up from the floor and ran over there at the sound of that name. "FURBY PERSON!" she yelled. LenniluvsBrian blocked her path before she could jump on Ziptango. "No tackling writers, Daydream." Daydream rolled her eyes and began chattering like mad with Ziptango who looked confused and happy at the same time.
In about an hour, part of the wall opened up, revealing a fridge, which Mily immediately flung open. "FOOD!" she yelled and dragged the first thing she could find out. "Oh no." Mily groaned as she looked at the stuff in her hands. It was tofu bars and celery sticks. Danceingfae held up the only thing she could find to drink. "Fresh water!? Is this a joke?!" she said unhappily. Daydream stared at the fridge. "I cannot live on celery alone, you sick minded person!" she yelled. Ziptango dragged something from the backpack she had on (don't ask why). "Uh, I have some candy bars if anyone wants some." She stated. The second Ziptango said this, the other four leapt on the book bag. "Chocolate!" Mily screeched. As they sat down on the floor, Lenni noticed what Danceingfae was eating. "What?!" Danceingfae said as the others stared at her. She was munching on a celery stick. "It's good, sort of." She said with an embarrassed look. "Uh-huh." Ziptango said and went back to devouring her Hershey's bar. By the time they had finished eating, a bunch of other people had arrived. Raphielle had fallen into Ziptango's pile of candy, which caused Ziptango to start yelling her head off. Sasami dropped in and was welcomed in better because she hadn't killed the candy. When Splinter arrived, she crashed against the wall and was knocked out for a while so no one knew who she was until the end of dinner. Snow White had a look of destruction on her face after she had popped in. She had tried to strangle Danceingfae, but the others got her off in time to prevent that. Sss979 had taken a lot of time to calm down because she hadn't stopped screaming until the voice had come on and yelled at her. TygeroftheWynd had just dropped in when they finished eating so they were still explaining everything to her. "So let me get this straight. There's someone holding us here for some reason and it's probably cause of our writing? WHY?!" she yelled. Everyone shrugged.
"Because I need all of you." The voice hissed, catching them off guard. "Why?" Splinter asked. One side of the room became a giant video screen. "Cool! Big screen! I like!" Sasami yelled and ran to hug the wall. As she was running, a face appeared. It was a boy's face and not a cute one at that. It had huge pimples all over it, tiny piggy eyes and the ugliest hair you can imagine. "EWWW!" The girls all said in unison and Sasami fainted because she was too close to the ugliness. "Eww, yes, my writers!" the boy thing said. "I shall tell you why you are here!" Splinter rolled her eyes angrily. "Good, cause I was getting a little bored around here." She muttered. The guy paid her no attention. "Ever since I was a young child, I have loved the Ninja Turtles. As I grew older my fascination grew. I have every action figure ever made, all the movies, comics, and books. THAT IS WHY I AM NAMED FANBOY!" He shouted. Giggling was heard. "STOP LAUGHING!" FanBoy shouted. "OH! Can I borrow movie number three?" Daydream piped up before Snow White bapped her on the head. "Not now." The other girl told her. FanBoy went on. "My parents began to worry about me, so I ran away and created this place. Ever since I have been here, I have tried to write a good fanfiction story, but have failed miserably. I have no talents in the field of writing. This is where you come in." he said with bitterness and danger. The writers tensed, ready for him to try something. "I want you to write for me. Become my writers and I will make you famous!" He said. The girls laughed. "Yeah, okay. That's such a stupid idea." Raphielle said. FanBoy's face darkened. "If you do not join you will be forced to enter the dimension of EVIL!" He said this last part in an evil way. "How?" Sss979 asked. FanBoy laughed. "With this machine!" Out of the wall, an intricate invention was revealed. "This is how I got you here, rigging it so when you updated a story, you automatically transported here." He grinned. "Soon, I will have all the writer's in my grasp and their stories will be for my enjoyment alone. MUHAHAHA!" The girl's all looked at each other. They decided that this dude was nuts. Mily stepped forward. "Can this machine take you to any dimension?" she asked. FanBoy nodded. "Yes, any dimension you set it for."
Splinter and Ziptango began to edge toward the machine. "Could you even go to the Ninja Turtles world?" FanBoy pondered this for a few seconds. "I suppose. Yes, it's possible, but only if you have the right number." Snow White stepped forward too. "Do you know the number?" she asked. "DUH!" FanBoy yelled. "Well what is it?" LenniluvsBrian asked. "You girls infuriate me! The number is 412! Are you happy?!" FanBoy yelled and then covered his mouth. "Uh-huh." Ziptango smiled as Splinter punched in the number and pushed "Enter". "NOOO!" He yelled. Once again, the girls were sent flying down a color tunnel, except this time it had turtle pictures on the sides. "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!" they screamed in unison. The screams ended abruptly as they were tossed into the lair. This is what happened to each girl.
Danceingfae tossed herself into Michelangelo's arm, who was before sitting innocently on the couch. Mikey freaked out and threw her across the room. On accident, oh course.
LenniluvsBrian was flung into Leonardo, who thought she was a demon, and drew his kantana. Lenni had screamed and hid behind the nearest couch.
Mily just sat on the couch, mesmerized by what was on T.V. Nobody noticed her until the terror episode ended.
Splinter disappeared into the kitchen and wasn't seen for quite awhile.
Sasami locked herself in a near-by closet and refused to come out until Leonardo finally came over and dragged her out.
Snow White kept her cool and tried to sort things out. No one listened to her though.
Raphielle flung herself on Raphael, who started yelling.
Sss979 sat there with Mily, waiting until everyone just chilled out.
Daydream dropped to the floor, squashing herself to it. Her mentality seemed to be the closer she got to the floor the safer she was. She was almost trampled by the others.
"QUIET!" Master Splinter shouted. The room stilled immediately. "Where's Ziptango?" asked Raphielle, detaching herself from Raph. "Who?!" Leo yelled. "Stop yelling!" Daydream shouted. Suddenly, Ziptango came running into the living room followed by a furious Donatello. "Who is she!? And why was he in my room?! " He yelled. The rest of the writer's gave Ziptango impressed looks. Master Splinter looked at the various girls. "We will soon find out." He said. The girls started to explain their story.
Okay next chapter later. Hope you liked this one!
Well, I don't think I've ever got that many reviews on the first chapter of any story! Wow, y'all like this. Hmm, wonders never cease. Okay, here it goes!
"HEROES IN A HALF-SHELL, TURTLE POWER!" Daydream screamed in what seemed to be a singing voice. "Oh please, shut-up!" the voice pleaded with her. "No!" she screamed back. "Don't make me hurt you!" the voice said menacingly. Daydream stuck her tongue out at the wall. Danceingfae got up and grabbed the short writer. "Daydream, I don't think now's the right time for that." She told the girl who sat down and began to pout. All four of trapped fan fiction writers had been sitting in there for what seemed like forever, screaming and yelling for the voice to let them out. "I'm starving." whined Mily. LenniluvsBrian began whistling. Mily looked at her strangely. "You don't have any food, do you?" Mily growled angrily. Lenni jumped up and began to run, but Mily tackled her. Yells and screams were ringing around the white room as the two fought. Danceingfae and Daydream looked at each other. "I didn't do it." Daydream said absentmindedly. Danceingfae sighed and walked over to the two fighting girls, but before she got there. BANG! A girl with black hair pulled up into a ponytail had body-slammed her to the ground. Danceingfae pushed her off angrily. "I HAVE HAD IT UP TO HERE!" she yelled and stomped off into a vacant part of the room. The new girl looked offended. "Sor-ry!" She said and got up. She seemed to be confused, which would be expected. Mily, giving up on the idea of ever getting Lenni's food, went over to her. "It's not you." She said reassuringly, "It's just that Danceingfae has been through a lot lately."
The girl's eyebrows rose. "Did you say Danceingfae?" Mily nodded in response. "Nuh-uh." The girl exclaimed. Mily nodded more. "No way! That's not possible! Who are you?!" The girl asked accusingly. "Uh, Mily." "Nuh- uh." The girl repeated. Mily grabbed her by the shoulders. "UH-HUH!" she shouted. The girl jumped away. "Nuh-uh! You can't be Mily!" Mily got a look on her face that said she was gonna punch her hard. "I'll take that as a yes." The girl said quickly. "Good." Mily hissed. Lenni got up and decided to take over. "Yeah, that's Mily, that's Daydream, that's Danceingfae, and I'm LenniluvsBrian." She said and then covered the girl's mouth before she could say nuh-uh. "Dude, so like where are we?" the girl asked when Lenni let go. "Let's start with a name." Lenni told her. The girl nodded quickly. "Oh yeah. I forgot, my name's Ziptango." Daydream jumped up from the floor and ran over there at the sound of that name. "FURBY PERSON!" she yelled. LenniluvsBrian blocked her path before she could jump on Ziptango. "No tackling writers, Daydream." Daydream rolled her eyes and began chattering like mad with Ziptango who looked confused and happy at the same time.
In about an hour, part of the wall opened up, revealing a fridge, which Mily immediately flung open. "FOOD!" she yelled and dragged the first thing she could find out. "Oh no." Mily groaned as she looked at the stuff in her hands. It was tofu bars and celery sticks. Danceingfae held up the only thing she could find to drink. "Fresh water!? Is this a joke?!" she said unhappily. Daydream stared at the fridge. "I cannot live on celery alone, you sick minded person!" she yelled. Ziptango dragged something from the backpack she had on (don't ask why). "Uh, I have some candy bars if anyone wants some." She stated. The second Ziptango said this, the other four leapt on the book bag. "Chocolate!" Mily screeched. As they sat down on the floor, Lenni noticed what Danceingfae was eating. "What?!" Danceingfae said as the others stared at her. She was munching on a celery stick. "It's good, sort of." She said with an embarrassed look. "Uh-huh." Ziptango said and went back to devouring her Hershey's bar. By the time they had finished eating, a bunch of other people had arrived. Raphielle had fallen into Ziptango's pile of candy, which caused Ziptango to start yelling her head off. Sasami dropped in and was welcomed in better because she hadn't killed the candy. When Splinter arrived, she crashed against the wall and was knocked out for a while so no one knew who she was until the end of dinner. Snow White had a look of destruction on her face after she had popped in. She had tried to strangle Danceingfae, but the others got her off in time to prevent that. Sss979 had taken a lot of time to calm down because she hadn't stopped screaming until the voice had come on and yelled at her. TygeroftheWynd had just dropped in when they finished eating so they were still explaining everything to her. "So let me get this straight. There's someone holding us here for some reason and it's probably cause of our writing? WHY?!" she yelled. Everyone shrugged.
"Because I need all of you." The voice hissed, catching them off guard. "Why?" Splinter asked. One side of the room became a giant video screen. "Cool! Big screen! I like!" Sasami yelled and ran to hug the wall. As she was running, a face appeared. It was a boy's face and not a cute one at that. It had huge pimples all over it, tiny piggy eyes and the ugliest hair you can imagine. "EWWW!" The girls all said in unison and Sasami fainted because she was too close to the ugliness. "Eww, yes, my writers!" the boy thing said. "I shall tell you why you are here!" Splinter rolled her eyes angrily. "Good, cause I was getting a little bored around here." She muttered. The guy paid her no attention. "Ever since I was a young child, I have loved the Ninja Turtles. As I grew older my fascination grew. I have every action figure ever made, all the movies, comics, and books. THAT IS WHY I AM NAMED FANBOY!" He shouted. Giggling was heard. "STOP LAUGHING!" FanBoy shouted. "OH! Can I borrow movie number three?" Daydream piped up before Snow White bapped her on the head. "Not now." The other girl told her. FanBoy went on. "My parents began to worry about me, so I ran away and created this place. Ever since I have been here, I have tried to write a good fanfiction story, but have failed miserably. I have no talents in the field of writing. This is where you come in." he said with bitterness and danger. The writers tensed, ready for him to try something. "I want you to write for me. Become my writers and I will make you famous!" He said. The girls laughed. "Yeah, okay. That's such a stupid idea." Raphielle said. FanBoy's face darkened. "If you do not join you will be forced to enter the dimension of EVIL!" He said this last part in an evil way. "How?" Sss979 asked. FanBoy laughed. "With this machine!" Out of the wall, an intricate invention was revealed. "This is how I got you here, rigging it so when you updated a story, you automatically transported here." He grinned. "Soon, I will have all the writer's in my grasp and their stories will be for my enjoyment alone. MUHAHAHA!" The girl's all looked at each other. They decided that this dude was nuts. Mily stepped forward. "Can this machine take you to any dimension?" she asked. FanBoy nodded. "Yes, any dimension you set it for."
Splinter and Ziptango began to edge toward the machine. "Could you even go to the Ninja Turtles world?" FanBoy pondered this for a few seconds. "I suppose. Yes, it's possible, but only if you have the right number." Snow White stepped forward too. "Do you know the number?" she asked. "DUH!" FanBoy yelled. "Well what is it?" LenniluvsBrian asked. "You girls infuriate me! The number is 412! Are you happy?!" FanBoy yelled and then covered his mouth. "Uh-huh." Ziptango smiled as Splinter punched in the number and pushed "Enter". "NOOO!" He yelled. Once again, the girls were sent flying down a color tunnel, except this time it had turtle pictures on the sides. "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!" they screamed in unison. The screams ended abruptly as they were tossed into the lair. This is what happened to each girl.
Danceingfae tossed herself into Michelangelo's arm, who was before sitting innocently on the couch. Mikey freaked out and threw her across the room. On accident, oh course.
LenniluvsBrian was flung into Leonardo, who thought she was a demon, and drew his kantana. Lenni had screamed and hid behind the nearest couch.
Mily just sat on the couch, mesmerized by what was on T.V. Nobody noticed her until the terror episode ended.
Splinter disappeared into the kitchen and wasn't seen for quite awhile.
Sasami locked herself in a near-by closet and refused to come out until Leonardo finally came over and dragged her out.
Snow White kept her cool and tried to sort things out. No one listened to her though.
Raphielle flung herself on Raphael, who started yelling.
Sss979 sat there with Mily, waiting until everyone just chilled out.
Daydream dropped to the floor, squashing herself to it. Her mentality seemed to be the closer she got to the floor the safer she was. She was almost trampled by the others.
"QUIET!" Master Splinter shouted. The room stilled immediately. "Where's Ziptango?" asked Raphielle, detaching herself from Raph. "Who?!" Leo yelled. "Stop yelling!" Daydream shouted. Suddenly, Ziptango came running into the living room followed by a furious Donatello. "Who is she!? And why was he in my room?! " He yelled. The rest of the writer's gave Ziptango impressed looks. Master Splinter looked at the various girls. "We will soon find out." He said. The girls started to explain their story.
Okay next chapter later. Hope you liked this one!