Thank you to my first two reviewers! This was my first story ever, and I'm so happy that you liked it enough to comment.
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pinkie: Thank you for the comment! I wish Neal could've told her, but that's the way the plot bunnies work. Maybe I'll write a version witha a slightly different ending. I don't know, I kind of liked this. Anyways thank you so much for the review.
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The ORIGINAL Meathead: I know it's sad, but that's the way I wrote it. I was reading a few other stories where Neal gets to tell Kel how he feels before she dies, which gives the reader a sense of statisfaction (that he confessed, not that she died) but I like well written tragedy, where things are left unfulfilled. I do like happy stuff, don't get me wrong, but I think that well written angst is good. I read your TP story. Keep writing, I loved it.
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moonlightrider: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so happy you liked it. I didn't want to write about how Kel died, heroically or not, because the main focus of the fic was Neal, not Kel. I think that if I had written that Kel had maybe died tragically saving the realm of Tortall from Scanrans, or something, then it would take away from the focus on Neal. My idea was that I write about how sad he is, as opposed to how brave and heroic she is. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say. As to the Yuki thing, usually I like Yuki, but I was thinking that faced with a dying Kel, Neal wouldn't really be thinking straight, and could misinterpret his devastation at the death of his best friend as love. I guess you could look at it however you want.
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Erkith: Thanx for the review. I always appreciate people just saying that they like my work, even without any comments on it. Thank you for that. By the way, I read your profile. I'm Canadian too. I read your stories. Awesome.
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Also read my other story: "Destiny" and review.
Anna