Richard - Wowzah! You read a whole HFIL of a lot in a short period of time! Hats off to you! Thanks for the constructive criticizm. Hope I still have some of the spark left in me!
dijurico - Sorry, sorry a million times for the lateness!! My cmputer has been on the fritz.
chaos-bardock - see above
Quinn - See above
SilverWolfe - I'm tryin' with the fights! Now that I'm a major fan of Rurouni Kenshin, and I've wached the Matrix so many times, that'll help a lot!
Raid-Scion - Love the full name! Glad you're back again, Saiyan Vamp!
Purple Flare PJs - Sorry its not to your liking. I try to make it legable. Hopefully this will be okay.
Kativa-chan - Ah, my dear FB fellow fan! Chile is solely based on my younger brother. We are almost complete opposites, but he's my very very best friend! He really acts like this! (Plus he's a wrestler)
chibibaka - glomp Yeah! No OOCness! Thankies!!
Davifflaelan - Heeheeheeehee That would have been funny, but I'm no comedy writer. At least not primarily.
Zhang Zhen - Bardock will be in season 2, I promise. I need more setup first.
CatStar - Not interrupted, just delayed. Go on and tell me how it was!
Angel - You're gonna hate me.....
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Una: Yeah! I'm done with this episode! Meaning I now have the next half dozen ready to put up!! does the Happy Dance (retarded mix of the Mashed Potato and Chicken Dance
Bardock: Please don't do that on my time!
Yugi/Yami: cracking up
Una: more dancing
Bardock: Excuse us while we sedate our authoress!
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Episode 3
Vegeta VS Chile part II; Meeting Miss. Hino
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Bulma flipped a few switches. "Change number one: Heat." The temperature read-out sky-rocketed, passing 70 degrees Celsius and climbing. She pulled a rod, and flame shooters stuck out from various parts of the wall.
Vegeta and Chile both heard the clicking of fire guns cocking. Chile did not know what to expect, and Vegeta took advantage. He broke away from their round of punches and blocks to get closer to the walls, away from the direct flame. Chile followed, but ended up getting blasted.
Bulma's fingers tightened on the main power switch, in case Chile was seriously hurt. But the flames glided over Chile's like steams of water, emphasizing the small but well defined muscles. The younger Sayin smiled. "You must be rusty if you consider this intense training, Vegeta-sama."
Vegeta returned the smirk. "Not at all," he said lying slightly. "I figured if you could not handle this, you aren't worth my time." Without warning, Vegeta jumped from the wall and shot at Chile at top speed. Chile heard his breath change as he prepared the jump, so he managed to dodge the Sayin bullet. Vegeta landed on the opposite wall, shifted his weight slightly, and shot off again. Chile heard the shift and moved accordingly.
"Change number two: Gravity," said Bulma with hesitation.
"You're gonna increase the gravity," asked Goku. "That's not very complicated."
"Wrong, Son-kun," she said. "The gravity is on a random setting. It will change every ten seconds for the next two minutes."
The temperature dropped to normal, but the gravity increased to that of 500 times Earth's natural pull. The two understood the change and dropped to the floor. Chile took the offensive by charging on foot. Vegeta caught both of Chile's hands just as the gravity multiplied by two. Chile winced. Vegeta did not react. They pushed against each other until the next change (divided by five; 200xEG), when Chile pushed Vegeta away and tackled his midsection. Vegeta powered up a ball of ki in his fist, but Chile managed to flip Vegeta over his head and pile drive him.
Goku whooped. Bulma sweat-dropped. "What does he think this is? WWE?" [1]
But this put Chile at a disadvantage, since Vegeta still had more ki, and the gravity multiplied by 10 (2000xEG). Chile's body pinned to the floor, and Vegeta used the momentum in his legs to drop them down to Chile's chest, and roll away to his plan next move.
This sort of ground action continued for the next minute and a half. Goku determined that Chile was best at physical work, because he seemed to prefer the fist fighting as opposed to flying. But his body was not nearly as hard-wearing as Vegeta, who relied heavily on ki and endurance. Both were using their strengths well, but unless Chile had another trick in his arsenal, he wouldn't last in a longer fight against the prince.
"Change number three: Zero gravity." Goku leaned forward. Flight control depended on air to maneuver properly, so this change affected the use of the body rather than ki.
To make up for this, Chile transformed to SSJ2. Not much changed in his physical appearance, except the four-inch spikes turned into a brilliant gold. "Getting scared, boy," chuckled Vegeta, who likewise transformed.
"You wish," Chile replied. The ki boost gave him speed Vegeta did not expect, and Chile launched himself at the prince to deal a hard blow to the forehead. A trickle of blood slid down from Chile's knuckles; the first blood of the battle. But Vegeta did not flinch. "That hardly even tickled," he said softly. "This is how you deal a blow!"
The line was wasted, because Chile phased out and in behind Vegeta. Vegeta turned to kick him, but Chile blocked the kick with his forearm. The Super Sayins fought in the air for the remainder of the time period as if there was no difference in the atmosphere.
"Final change: Freezing Cold."
"Thought so," said Goku, not taking his eyes from the window.
Ice formed on the walls of the Gravity Room. The two continued their onslaught, blow for blow, punch for punch, quickly becoming a giant ball of steam. Bulma squinted. "I can't make them out at all," she complained. "Why can't Vegeta get this over with?"
"That must be what he's thinking," Goku commented. He followed the ki patterns rather then watching. "He's getting frustrated. He's not landing as many punches and striking at random. Chile's still at full force. Won't be long now 'til-"
Goku did not get a chance to finish his sentence before Chile dodged one of Vegeta's missed kicks, caught his leg, and threw him to the floor below. The ice, when impacted by Vegeta's hot body, took hold of him. His leotard clung to the ice. Vegeta roared, ripped off part of his gi, and stood to power up a Final Flash. Chile followed suit, powering up a Solar Strike. Steam blew away from both of them in ripples, and sped up as the screamed to send off their attacks.
Goku took the hint, grabbed Bulma by the waist, punched the door clean off its hinges, and bolted out before the explosion.
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[Commercial Break]
Una: Vegeta's hot, sweaty body… [drool]
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"I COULD HAVE WON THE BATTLE, ONNA," bellowed Vegeta an hour later, "IF YOUR BLOODY MACHINE HAD STAYED IN ONE PIECE!!!"
"Oh, quit griping," scolded Bulma, putting a bandage over Vegeta's cut above his eyes. "The time limit was almost over anyway. And from what I saw, you two were as good as equal. Just live with the draw, and get over it!"
Goku bit his lip. From Goku's point of view, they were not equal, but complimented each other in their strengths and weaknesses to the point of equality in a battle. The deciding factor would have been Vegeta's temper or Chile's endurance. Those were their greatest weaknesses.
'Better say something before he gets pissed at me.' "You were both awesome! You've gotten better since we last fought, Vegeta!"
"Of course I have, you baka," Vegeta snapped. "My mate's machines are far more competent training opponents than your puny son!"
Goku smiled. 'I'll take that as a "Thanks!"'
As Chile wrapped the white cloth over his injured arm, his heart bumped with excitement. Vegeta was the first opponent in over three years to make him turn SSJ2 and not completely bore him. In fact, for a second, he feared for his life! What a rush! He lived for this sort of thrill! He needed more! "Yo, Kakkarot! Care to step up next? I'm game!"
Goku's eyes sparkled for a moment, visualizing such a fight, but he shook his hands in front of him. "Iie iie! Bad idea! You need time to recover, and…"
"C'mon, cocksucker! What kinda Sayin are ya? 'He who denies himself a fight denies himself that which makes him a Sayin!'"
"Kakkarot doesn't know that proverb," said Vegeta.
Chile scoffed. "Then he's afraid!"
"No, he doesn't want to blow up the planet." Vegeta leaned back leisurely in his seat, secure in the fact that he knew more about his subject than they knew about each other. "Our fight would most certainly resulted in the destruction of a continent or two, if it had not been for the Gravity Room. Kakkarot knows this, and is more concerned about the well-being of innocent passer-bys."
"Fair enough," Chile consented.
Just then, the doorbell rang. "I'll get it," rang the high-pitched voice of Bulma's mother.
"So," added Chile. "Can I take a rain check on that fight?"
Goku face vaulted. "Get in line," muttered Vegeta.
"I'd better get outta here before I'm set up for a match with either of you!" That said, he went out through the back door. Chile frowned. 'So much for my next challenge!'
Shouts were heard from the other room, and Mrs. Briefs entered. "Um, Honey, Miss. Hino from the Shinto Temple wants a word with you." [2]
"Oh, great," grumbled Bulma. "Let her in."
Chile expected 'Miss. Hino' to be a little old spinster woman, but received a shock. Instead in walked a lovely teenager in a black and red outfit, long black hair, and a striking amount of energy for a human surrounding her presence. "Mrs. Brief? I have warned you many times to keep your son and his friend away from the animals that live around the shrine many times! This morning, I caught them both dumping rocks in the pond at the fish!"
"I'm very sorry," said Bulma in earnest. "I'll talk to them again, and make sure my husband gives Trunks a firm punishment."
Vegeta snorted.
"Next time I catch them around the shrine, my grandfather will place a curse on them! I'm warning you!"
Chile stood up and walked over to the woman. "Goten is my nephew, and I'll personally make sure he doesn't go anywhere near… where is it you live, Hino-san?"
Bulma smiled, with the look of a nosy matchamker crossing her pretty features. "Chile-san, this is Miss. Rei Hino of the Hikawa Temple. Rei, this is-"
She seemed taken aback by Chile's advancement. "I … I don't recognize you from the Son family. Who are you?"
Chile leaned against the wall beside the door, only a foot away from her. "Allow me introduce myself," he said in a suave manner. "My name is Chile, I'm 5'9", blood type O positive, and a Sagittarius." He raised an eyebrow. "And you? What's your sign?" He put up his arm so he slightly blocked her exit.
Rei blushed slightly. "Aries."
"Ah, the stubborn ram!" He gave a slight bow. "As the archer, you realize I cannot not a prize creature like you out of my sights now."
"I wonder how many girls you've used that line on," she said with a huff. She turned to Bulma. "Thank you for your time, Mrs. Brief! Vegeta-san. And," she turned to Chile, "Chile-san."
"Please, just Chile. After all, I'll be seeing you again soon."
"I seriously doubt that." She ducked under his arm and hurried off.
Bulma stood up. "Looks like we've got ourselves another arrogant Sayin with too much mouth for his own good. I'm surprised she didn't slap you!"
"She wouldn't," said Chile, cracking his knuckles. "I think I've found my new challenge!"
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The next day, Chile flew to the Hikawa Shrine to leave a present for Rei. The Shinto temple was small, but beautiful, sitting on top of a hill outside the urban area of Tokyo amidst the trees. Not many people visited the shrine during the week, but Rei herself was busy with her chores. She wore her miko outfit: a white robe top with long, red, billowy pants. Her hair shone with natural lavender highlights and swished gently at her ankles with each stroke of her broom. As she worked, she hummed a pop song she listened to on a hidden walkman.
'By the goddess, she's hott,' Chile thought from behind the tree. He took one step forward, sensed danger, and caught the broomstick an inch from his midsection. "A little forward, aren't ya," he teased.
"I was about to say the same," she said with a bite. "What are you doing, spying on me? Nothing better to do with your spare time?"
"What could be better than the hunt, my beautiful creature?"
"You know, I've killed people who sneak up on me."
"It'll be hard killing me off, I guarantee it!" He took the broom and handed it back to her. "Why're you so cynical about men, anyway?"
"none of your business! Now, if you will excuse me, I have to finish my chores before my friends get here. I'd rather them not see a strange man around, because they'll start to think-" She was cut off by a spark of warning. She caught something Chile threw at her chest. "Nan…?" It was a red hyacinth. [3] The card tied to it was in the shape of a ram's head, and said, "My arrow."
Rei blushed as red as the flower. She looked back up, and Chile was gone. A soft wind blew past. 'Wow… I wonder if this is how Usagi feels when Mamoru gives her those roses.' "Crap! I'd better put this away before Usagi-tachi starts teasing me!" [4]
[1] WWE - Danny watches it, and so does Chile. You'll see.
[2] Shinto Temple - A religion widely practiced in Japan.
[3] Red Hyacinth - In the language of flowers, this is a playful attraction. Sort of a "Chase me, chase me."
[4] If you haven't gotten who Miss. Rei Hino is, you have never watched Sailor Moon. She is Sailor Mars! Don't worry, she won't be in it that often. When I thought this up (back about, oh, about six yeras ago), my brother had a monster crush on her. Of course, he was ten at the time....
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Hey! I'm Chile!
On the outskirts of Hell, a young girl contemplates her place there, just as her caretakers sets up their escape! Next time on DragonballUF: Plot for Revenge! The Escape from HELL!!
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Bardock: That was... short.
Una: But hey, this means I have the next six or seven chapters done!
Bardock: Good, so you can update more often.
Una: You bet!! R&R, please!
dijurico - Sorry, sorry a million times for the lateness!! My cmputer has been on the fritz.
chaos-bardock - see above
Quinn - See above
SilverWolfe - I'm tryin' with the fights! Now that I'm a major fan of Rurouni Kenshin, and I've wached the Matrix so many times, that'll help a lot!
Raid-Scion - Love the full name! Glad you're back again, Saiyan Vamp!
Purple Flare PJs - Sorry its not to your liking. I try to make it legable. Hopefully this will be okay.
Kativa-chan - Ah, my dear FB fellow fan! Chile is solely based on my younger brother. We are almost complete opposites, but he's my very very best friend! He really acts like this! (Plus he's a wrestler)
chibibaka - glomp Yeah! No OOCness! Thankies!!
Davifflaelan - Heeheeheeehee That would have been funny, but I'm no comedy writer. At least not primarily.
Zhang Zhen - Bardock will be in season 2, I promise. I need more setup first.
CatStar - Not interrupted, just delayed. Go on and tell me how it was!
Angel - You're gonna hate me.....
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Una: Yeah! I'm done with this episode! Meaning I now have the next half dozen ready to put up!! does the Happy Dance (retarded mix of the Mashed Potato and Chicken Dance
Bardock: Please don't do that on my time!
Yugi/Yami: cracking up
Una: more dancing
Bardock: Excuse us while we sedate our authoress!
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Episode 3
Vegeta VS Chile part II; Meeting Miss. Hino
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Bulma flipped a few switches. "Change number one: Heat." The temperature read-out sky-rocketed, passing 70 degrees Celsius and climbing. She pulled a rod, and flame shooters stuck out from various parts of the wall.
Vegeta and Chile both heard the clicking of fire guns cocking. Chile did not know what to expect, and Vegeta took advantage. He broke away from their round of punches and blocks to get closer to the walls, away from the direct flame. Chile followed, but ended up getting blasted.
Bulma's fingers tightened on the main power switch, in case Chile was seriously hurt. But the flames glided over Chile's like steams of water, emphasizing the small but well defined muscles. The younger Sayin smiled. "You must be rusty if you consider this intense training, Vegeta-sama."
Vegeta returned the smirk. "Not at all," he said lying slightly. "I figured if you could not handle this, you aren't worth my time." Without warning, Vegeta jumped from the wall and shot at Chile at top speed. Chile heard his breath change as he prepared the jump, so he managed to dodge the Sayin bullet. Vegeta landed on the opposite wall, shifted his weight slightly, and shot off again. Chile heard the shift and moved accordingly.
"Change number two: Gravity," said Bulma with hesitation.
"You're gonna increase the gravity," asked Goku. "That's not very complicated."
"Wrong, Son-kun," she said. "The gravity is on a random setting. It will change every ten seconds for the next two minutes."
The temperature dropped to normal, but the gravity increased to that of 500 times Earth's natural pull. The two understood the change and dropped to the floor. Chile took the offensive by charging on foot. Vegeta caught both of Chile's hands just as the gravity multiplied by two. Chile winced. Vegeta did not react. They pushed against each other until the next change (divided by five; 200xEG), when Chile pushed Vegeta away and tackled his midsection. Vegeta powered up a ball of ki in his fist, but Chile managed to flip Vegeta over his head and pile drive him.
Goku whooped. Bulma sweat-dropped. "What does he think this is? WWE?" [1]
But this put Chile at a disadvantage, since Vegeta still had more ki, and the gravity multiplied by 10 (2000xEG). Chile's body pinned to the floor, and Vegeta used the momentum in his legs to drop them down to Chile's chest, and roll away to his plan next move.
This sort of ground action continued for the next minute and a half. Goku determined that Chile was best at physical work, because he seemed to prefer the fist fighting as opposed to flying. But his body was not nearly as hard-wearing as Vegeta, who relied heavily on ki and endurance. Both were using their strengths well, but unless Chile had another trick in his arsenal, he wouldn't last in a longer fight against the prince.
"Change number three: Zero gravity." Goku leaned forward. Flight control depended on air to maneuver properly, so this change affected the use of the body rather than ki.
To make up for this, Chile transformed to SSJ2. Not much changed in his physical appearance, except the four-inch spikes turned into a brilliant gold. "Getting scared, boy," chuckled Vegeta, who likewise transformed.
"You wish," Chile replied. The ki boost gave him speed Vegeta did not expect, and Chile launched himself at the prince to deal a hard blow to the forehead. A trickle of blood slid down from Chile's knuckles; the first blood of the battle. But Vegeta did not flinch. "That hardly even tickled," he said softly. "This is how you deal a blow!"
The line was wasted, because Chile phased out and in behind Vegeta. Vegeta turned to kick him, but Chile blocked the kick with his forearm. The Super Sayins fought in the air for the remainder of the time period as if there was no difference in the atmosphere.
"Final change: Freezing Cold."
"Thought so," said Goku, not taking his eyes from the window.
Ice formed on the walls of the Gravity Room. The two continued their onslaught, blow for blow, punch for punch, quickly becoming a giant ball of steam. Bulma squinted. "I can't make them out at all," she complained. "Why can't Vegeta get this over with?"
"That must be what he's thinking," Goku commented. He followed the ki patterns rather then watching. "He's getting frustrated. He's not landing as many punches and striking at random. Chile's still at full force. Won't be long now 'til-"
Goku did not get a chance to finish his sentence before Chile dodged one of Vegeta's missed kicks, caught his leg, and threw him to the floor below. The ice, when impacted by Vegeta's hot body, took hold of him. His leotard clung to the ice. Vegeta roared, ripped off part of his gi, and stood to power up a Final Flash. Chile followed suit, powering up a Solar Strike. Steam blew away from both of them in ripples, and sped up as the screamed to send off their attacks.
Goku took the hint, grabbed Bulma by the waist, punched the door clean off its hinges, and bolted out before the explosion.
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[Commercial Break]
Una: Vegeta's hot, sweaty body… [drool]
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"I COULD HAVE WON THE BATTLE, ONNA," bellowed Vegeta an hour later, "IF YOUR BLOODY MACHINE HAD STAYED IN ONE PIECE!!!"
"Oh, quit griping," scolded Bulma, putting a bandage over Vegeta's cut above his eyes. "The time limit was almost over anyway. And from what I saw, you two were as good as equal. Just live with the draw, and get over it!"
Goku bit his lip. From Goku's point of view, they were not equal, but complimented each other in their strengths and weaknesses to the point of equality in a battle. The deciding factor would have been Vegeta's temper or Chile's endurance. Those were their greatest weaknesses.
'Better say something before he gets pissed at me.' "You were both awesome! You've gotten better since we last fought, Vegeta!"
"Of course I have, you baka," Vegeta snapped. "My mate's machines are far more competent training opponents than your puny son!"
Goku smiled. 'I'll take that as a "Thanks!"'
As Chile wrapped the white cloth over his injured arm, his heart bumped with excitement. Vegeta was the first opponent in over three years to make him turn SSJ2 and not completely bore him. In fact, for a second, he feared for his life! What a rush! He lived for this sort of thrill! He needed more! "Yo, Kakkarot! Care to step up next? I'm game!"
Goku's eyes sparkled for a moment, visualizing such a fight, but he shook his hands in front of him. "Iie iie! Bad idea! You need time to recover, and…"
"C'mon, cocksucker! What kinda Sayin are ya? 'He who denies himself a fight denies himself that which makes him a Sayin!'"
"Kakkarot doesn't know that proverb," said Vegeta.
Chile scoffed. "Then he's afraid!"
"No, he doesn't want to blow up the planet." Vegeta leaned back leisurely in his seat, secure in the fact that he knew more about his subject than they knew about each other. "Our fight would most certainly resulted in the destruction of a continent or two, if it had not been for the Gravity Room. Kakkarot knows this, and is more concerned about the well-being of innocent passer-bys."
"Fair enough," Chile consented.
Just then, the doorbell rang. "I'll get it," rang the high-pitched voice of Bulma's mother.
"So," added Chile. "Can I take a rain check on that fight?"
Goku face vaulted. "Get in line," muttered Vegeta.
"I'd better get outta here before I'm set up for a match with either of you!" That said, he went out through the back door. Chile frowned. 'So much for my next challenge!'
Shouts were heard from the other room, and Mrs. Briefs entered. "Um, Honey, Miss. Hino from the Shinto Temple wants a word with you." [2]
"Oh, great," grumbled Bulma. "Let her in."
Chile expected 'Miss. Hino' to be a little old spinster woman, but received a shock. Instead in walked a lovely teenager in a black and red outfit, long black hair, and a striking amount of energy for a human surrounding her presence. "Mrs. Brief? I have warned you many times to keep your son and his friend away from the animals that live around the shrine many times! This morning, I caught them both dumping rocks in the pond at the fish!"
"I'm very sorry," said Bulma in earnest. "I'll talk to them again, and make sure my husband gives Trunks a firm punishment."
Vegeta snorted.
"Next time I catch them around the shrine, my grandfather will place a curse on them! I'm warning you!"
Chile stood up and walked over to the woman. "Goten is my nephew, and I'll personally make sure he doesn't go anywhere near… where is it you live, Hino-san?"
Bulma smiled, with the look of a nosy matchamker crossing her pretty features. "Chile-san, this is Miss. Rei Hino of the Hikawa Temple. Rei, this is-"
She seemed taken aback by Chile's advancement. "I … I don't recognize you from the Son family. Who are you?"
Chile leaned against the wall beside the door, only a foot away from her. "Allow me introduce myself," he said in a suave manner. "My name is Chile, I'm 5'9", blood type O positive, and a Sagittarius." He raised an eyebrow. "And you? What's your sign?" He put up his arm so he slightly blocked her exit.
Rei blushed slightly. "Aries."
"Ah, the stubborn ram!" He gave a slight bow. "As the archer, you realize I cannot not a prize creature like you out of my sights now."
"I wonder how many girls you've used that line on," she said with a huff. She turned to Bulma. "Thank you for your time, Mrs. Brief! Vegeta-san. And," she turned to Chile, "Chile-san."
"Please, just Chile. After all, I'll be seeing you again soon."
"I seriously doubt that." She ducked under his arm and hurried off.
Bulma stood up. "Looks like we've got ourselves another arrogant Sayin with too much mouth for his own good. I'm surprised she didn't slap you!"
"She wouldn't," said Chile, cracking his knuckles. "I think I've found my new challenge!"
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The next day, Chile flew to the Hikawa Shrine to leave a present for Rei. The Shinto temple was small, but beautiful, sitting on top of a hill outside the urban area of Tokyo amidst the trees. Not many people visited the shrine during the week, but Rei herself was busy with her chores. She wore her miko outfit: a white robe top with long, red, billowy pants. Her hair shone with natural lavender highlights and swished gently at her ankles with each stroke of her broom. As she worked, she hummed a pop song she listened to on a hidden walkman.
'By the goddess, she's hott,' Chile thought from behind the tree. He took one step forward, sensed danger, and caught the broomstick an inch from his midsection. "A little forward, aren't ya," he teased.
"I was about to say the same," she said with a bite. "What are you doing, spying on me? Nothing better to do with your spare time?"
"What could be better than the hunt, my beautiful creature?"
"You know, I've killed people who sneak up on me."
"It'll be hard killing me off, I guarantee it!" He took the broom and handed it back to her. "Why're you so cynical about men, anyway?"
"none of your business! Now, if you will excuse me, I have to finish my chores before my friends get here. I'd rather them not see a strange man around, because they'll start to think-" She was cut off by a spark of warning. She caught something Chile threw at her chest. "Nan…?" It was a red hyacinth. [3] The card tied to it was in the shape of a ram's head, and said, "My arrow."
Rei blushed as red as the flower. She looked back up, and Chile was gone. A soft wind blew past. 'Wow… I wonder if this is how Usagi feels when Mamoru gives her those roses.' "Crap! I'd better put this away before Usagi-tachi starts teasing me!" [4]
[1] WWE - Danny watches it, and so does Chile. You'll see.
[2] Shinto Temple - A religion widely practiced in Japan.
[3] Red Hyacinth - In the language of flowers, this is a playful attraction. Sort of a "Chase me, chase me."
[4] If you haven't gotten who Miss. Rei Hino is, you have never watched Sailor Moon. She is Sailor Mars! Don't worry, she won't be in it that often. When I thought this up (back about, oh, about six yeras ago), my brother had a monster crush on her. Of course, he was ten at the time....
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Hey! I'm Chile!
On the outskirts of Hell, a young girl contemplates her place there, just as her caretakers sets up their escape! Next time on DragonballUF: Plot for Revenge! The Escape from HELL!!
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Bardock: That was... short.
Una: But hey, this means I have the next six or seven chapters done!
Bardock: Good, so you can update more often.
Una: You bet!! R&R, please!