Chapter 20
Pjewel: The fic ist almost over. (SOB, SOB) everyone, sob with me!
Everyone: SOB, SOB
Pjewel: Okay, I ist done now.
Kaimara: --; okaaay...that was odd, but funny.
MR: yep. I need a good cry once and a while.
Black13: yea, and maybe then you could get a little of that extra energy outta you.
Pjewel: (gives everyone evil eye) anyone going hyper shall be EXECUTED!! Except for KuramaandHiei4ever, who doesn't know better. (LOL! Sorry if you're reading this, KH4ever.)
KH4ever: Yep. That's me...the person who gets hyper off of a whiff of sugar. Sometimes, I whiff it for breakfast!! Wheee!
Pjewel: --;
Kaimara: hm....
MR: Watcha thinking about? Or are you humming? What are you humming to? Can I hum too? Look at me! I am HYPER! (Slaps forehead )oh, great.
Pjewel: Where's Yami? Hey! Yami, go get the guillotine!!
Yami: . Okay!!! (Hums an executing the priestess song )
MR: Um... can't we be like reasonable? H...how about I just get thrown into the soul room with Baby China?
Pjewel: Um...well...
Black13: TO THE GUILLOTINE!!!!!
KH4ever: What's a gully tine?
Kaimara: No! No executing!
MR: THANK GOODNESS! Pjewel needs more influences like you!
Pjewel: (pout ) Kaimaraaaa! What's wrong with you? I thought you liked bloodshed!!
MR: She's saving the lives of innocent ppl! : P
Kaimara: What are you talking about? Time to call in the samurai from my story!!!
Pjewel: NOW we're talking!!! Hey Sam! Where are you?
Sam: HI! I'm hyper Sam! .
Kaimara: (slaps forehead ) this is ridiculous.
Pjewel: Now we have to execute the executioner!!! Yami, bring another guillotine!!
Yami: Whoohooo! Time to kill the samurai that killed Maiku from Kaimara's story!! (Runs to find another guillotine )
Pjewel: Whee! This is fun!!!
Kaimara: Executing always is. LOL!!!!
MR: Not if you're the one being executed.
Pjewel: Ok, I decided not to execute you.
Kaimara: WHAT???
Pjewel: I shall...er...um...like...sentence you both to cleaning the floors. Ok?
MR: (relieved ) it's better than getting your head chopped off. Hey were you serious?
Pjewel: No, I just wanted to get rid of your hyper state. I would never execute someone.
Sam: Wheeeeeee!!!!
Pjewel: --; unless they're singing hyperactive samurais. LOL! Where'd Yami go?
Yami: I'm right here!! Want the disclaimer, or the guillotine?
Pjewel: actually, we're not going to execute anyone.
Yami: (pout ) no fair.
Pjewel: Can I still have the disclaimer though?
Yami: --; fine. Pharaoh'sJewel does not own YuGiOh or any of the characters so there. Or I shall execute the lawyers.
Anyways, really, did some of you think that Yugi's going to be the sacrifice? --; You haven't been paying attention, have you? Well, it wouldn't be the first time. LOL! Anyway, why would I sacrifice a runt? He's like sooo not heroic. So unless you want to make assumptions, then I suggest that you read this chapter when 'ALL WILL BECOME CLEAR!!! Yes, it shall. Ok? Thank you for the reviews. This is a pretty long chapter compared to the others since some of you thought the others were too short. LOL!
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"Me?" said Yugi bewildered.
"Yugi's the sacrifice?" asked Joey. "Whoa, good luck, man."
"But..." started Yugi.
"Hold on, guys," said Ryushi looking closely at Umiko. "She's pointing to the puzzle."
"I have to sacrifice the puzzle?!" he asked even more confused than he already was.
"Yami." Said Umiko finally.
"Huh?" asked Duke. "What, are you in love with him or something?"
"NO BAKA! HE'S THE SACRIFICE!" she shouted.
Everyone was quiet.
"But..." started Tomoya. "If he's the sacrifice, then..."
"Then what?" asked Yugi.
"Then doesn't Yugi get sacrificed with him?" said Umiko gasping in realization.
"Oh..." said Yugi.
'Yami this is all your fault!' shouted Yugi to him in the mind link.
'MY FAULT?'
'Yes, your fault! If you didn't have to "save the world" then I wouldn't have to die!'
'But I can't help it! It was destined!'
'Blah, blah, blah. Say what you want, but it's all your fault.'
'Why are we fighting? I thought we were friends!'
'"Were" is the key word, Yami. If you hadn't trapped me in that soul room thing, we might still BE friends.'
'Look. I'm sorry, but I was under a lot of pressure at that time and...'
'Okay, you're forgiven'
'But I... what?'
'It's okay, and I'm sorry for...you know, yelling at you for no apparent reason.'
'Me too. And I'm really sorry that you have to you know and that I trapped you in the soul room.'
'That's okay. If it's for saving the world and letting our friends and family have a chance to lead normal lives once more, then it's okay and I'm totally for it.'
Yami was a little more than stunned. One minute they were arguing and now they're apologizing and making up their differences. Wow, he thought to himself. 'Talk about some major mood swings.
'Er...' said Yugi to Yami. 'What are you thinking about?'
'Nothing. Just wanted to know if I can...can you know, take over? If maybe I do, then there might be a possible chance that you may get saved. A little, at least.'
Yugi nodded. 'It might work.'
So he let Yami take over yet again.
"So." Said Yami thinking hard. "How exactly do we do this sacrificing thing? There most likely is a small ritual or something, yes?"
Umiko, Tomoya, and Ryushi nodded. Then Ryushi said,
"We must do the ritual soon or it might be too late."
"Yeah, by the time the Earth's heart stone is in line with the moon. I think." Said Tomoya trying to recall these facts.
"Heart stone?" asked Joey. "The earth has a heart? I'm confuzzled yet again."
"Heart stones have nothing to do with the earth's heart, Joey. It has to do with all of the people in the world's hearts." Explained Tomoya.
"Well, if it has to do with everyone in the world," said Duke. "Then it must be a pretty big stone."
Tomoya nodded. "Yes, and if we hurry and aren't seen, then we can show you, is that okay Umiko?"
"I don't see why not. Let's go!"
They got outside and looked around carefully. Everyone sort of crowded around Yami.
"We must keep him safe!" whispered Ryushi.
"Uh," started Yami a little nervously. "This really isn't necessary."
"Yes it is." Umiko said sternly putting the end to that little doubt.
Umiko and Ryushi picked Duke and Joey to help them defend if necessary. They would have normally have chosen Tomoya, but they seemed to have realized that she and Yami should have a little time together.
A little while later, they could see the peak of a huge mountain. They got to the base of the mountain and stopped.
"It's just a mountain, like any other." Said Tristan.
Umiko walked up to it and traced her finger on one part. She lifted up her finger and they saw a streak of brown dirt on it.
"Long ago," she started. "The heart stone was made. It gets bigger every time people are born and gets smaller when people die. For example, if ten thousand people die because of a war or something, then the mountain would get ten thousand times smaller. If they whole heart stone were wiped out, then the earth would be destroyed. That's why we have to defeat Bakura and protect the stone."
"But that doesn't explain why it's brown." Said Ryou. "You'd expect a heart stone to be a certain color or some thing."
Umiko rubbed away more dirt and told them to come closer. The moon reflected on the stone and it shined. They saw that it was a light pinkish color.
"People used to steal pieces of the stone, causing random people to die. So Master Kinshrew and his followers put a protective shield on it and made it look like dirt. Since then no one knew about the stone or stole pieces of it again."
Everyone was silent and staring at the stone. Suddenly behind them,
"Well, well, well." Said Bakura. "I knew you kids would be useful. Thanks for leading me to the heart stone. Now all I need is to put one more of you in the shadow realm and I shall be powerful enough to defeat you and take over the world!" he shouted laughing evilly.
He looked around at their defiant faces and saw that Serenity was one of the last ones without powers.
"Well little girl," he said. "Are you ready to join your other two friends?"
"Never!" she shouted.
"I'll take that as a yes." He said. He raised his arms and turned her to stone so fast that no one had time to blink.
"Not again!" groaned Joey.
"This has to stop!" shouted Seto.
"We can stop it!" whispered Umiko excitedly. "If we all attack him at the same time then we can restrain him long enough for the ritual!"
"Right," they said getting ready.
Bakura saw that they were suddenly grinning.
"What is the meaning of this?!" he shouted very surprised.
"Ready..." said Umiko. "NOW!"
They all aimed their attacks straight at Bakura at the same time. Once it hit Bakura, he fell to the ground and was instantly bound together by think golden ropes. Bakura swore loudly.
They stared at him, amazed at what they had done. Then Umiko snapped back to reality and said,
"Hurry! We have to do the ritual!"
They ran and followed her. Then suddenly, there was a loud noise, like thunder and a beam of light shot down. When the light cleared away, they saw that it was an old man.
"Master Kinshrew!" gasped Umiko, Ryushi, and Tomoya bowing low. The others followed their lead and also bowed. Master Kinshrew bowed also. Then he got up and said,
"What happened?"
Umiko launched into a full-length explanation.
"I see," he said knowingly. "You need help with the ritual, right?"
"Yes, Master Kinshrew." Said Umiko.
"All right." He said.
Kinshrew raised his arms and chanted some words from an ancient language. Then suddenly, a huge circle appeared and glowed. Everyone except Yami and Marik were drawn to a part of the circle.
"I want you all to raise both arms and face your palms toward the person next to you and chant after me." Said Kinshrew taking his place by the circle.
They raised their arms.
"Wind, water, fire, and light," Kinshrew said closing his eyes. "Under the moon you will unite, Ice and thunder rise, you will save us from demise, earth and darkness take your place, together we will save the human race."
They repeated together. Suddenly, the gaps in between them were filled with a multicolored light.
"Now," said Kinshrew. "Aim straight to the heart stone."
They did as told and aimed the power to the heart stone. When it hit it, the shield was gone and before them stood a giant pinkish mountain.
"You may stop now," Kinshrew said lowering his arms.
When they stopped, the power disappeared and they were shot backward from the circle.
"OW!" shouted Joey rubbing his head. "If I wanted to be ejected from something then I would have spent my life as a video tape in a VCR!"
Kinshrew ignored this and said, "We have 5 minutes until the heart stone and moon are in alignment and the sacrifice is made. Oh yes, and may I see who it is?"
Someone pushed Yami forward.
"Uh...I'm the sacrifice." He said nervously.
"Yes," said Kinshrew nodding. "It was foreseen that the pharaoh would be sacrificed. Now, I suggest that you all say your goodbyes. As for me, I am returning to the dojo, fully aware that this will work and that the world will be saved."
Master Kinshrew disappeared.
Everyone started saying goodbyes and giving sympathy and telling who took what on purpose and things like that.
"And last year, I stole your basketball and..." said Joey counting off on his fingers.
"That's enough Joey," said Tristan.
They finished and Umiko took over the countdown.
"We have one more minute!"
Tomoya quickly rushed into Yami's arms crying.
"Yami," she said through sobs. "I'm going to miss you so much!"
"So am I." He said quietly with tears in his eyes. Then he leaned down and kissed her. (A/N: They haven't had a decent kiss for a long time!)
"5 seconds!"
Yami broke the kiss and said,
"Go, its almost time," he said pushing her out of the circle.
"4 seconds!"
Tomoya started crying all over again. Joey rubbed his eyes and said,
"I'm gonna miss you, pal," he said, "We all will. It won't be the same without you."
"2 seconds!"
"Bye Yugi," they said sadly.
Yami waved sadly afraid that if he spoke, he would start crying.
"O...one se...second!" said Umiko, her voice breaking.
Suddenly, the heart stone mountain and the moon glowed and the circle that Yami was standing in suddenly burst into flames. Outside he could hear surprised screams. Then just before the flames engulfed him, he heard Tomoya whisper, "I love you, Yami," He was pleasantly surprised, but before he could think about it or return his love for her, his spirit was given up and it shot out of the fire. He stood with a stunned expression, his hand over his heart and then he closed his eyes and his lifeless body fell to the ground.
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(Sniff) I feel sooo bad about this that it isn't even funny. (Five seconds later) I still feel bad...ok, I have gotten over it. Ok FYI, there will be one more chapter after this and then is the epilogue. It's just to say who gets married to who and how many kids and stuff like that. I want your SERIOUS OPINIONS ON HOW THIS CHAPTER IS! Ok? Some people will, but others will not and will keep me in a dreadful suspense. I would like it if I could finish with at least 60 reviews for this story. If I do, I'll be super happy. If I don't, I'll be super disappointed. Ok, now, GET OUT THERE AND REVIEW!!!!!
Pjewel: The fic ist almost over. (SOB, SOB) everyone, sob with me!
Everyone: SOB, SOB
Pjewel: Okay, I ist done now.
Kaimara: --; okaaay...that was odd, but funny.
MR: yep. I need a good cry once and a while.
Black13: yea, and maybe then you could get a little of that extra energy outta you.
Pjewel: (gives everyone evil eye) anyone going hyper shall be EXECUTED!! Except for KuramaandHiei4ever, who doesn't know better. (LOL! Sorry if you're reading this, KH4ever.)
KH4ever: Yep. That's me...the person who gets hyper off of a whiff of sugar. Sometimes, I whiff it for breakfast!! Wheee!
Pjewel: --;
Kaimara: hm....
MR: Watcha thinking about? Or are you humming? What are you humming to? Can I hum too? Look at me! I am HYPER! (Slaps forehead )oh, great.
Pjewel: Where's Yami? Hey! Yami, go get the guillotine!!
Yami: . Okay!!! (Hums an executing the priestess song )
MR: Um... can't we be like reasonable? H...how about I just get thrown into the soul room with Baby China?
Pjewel: Um...well...
Black13: TO THE GUILLOTINE!!!!!
KH4ever: What's a gully tine?
Kaimara: No! No executing!
MR: THANK GOODNESS! Pjewel needs more influences like you!
Pjewel: (pout ) Kaimaraaaa! What's wrong with you? I thought you liked bloodshed!!
MR: She's saving the lives of innocent ppl! : P
Kaimara: What are you talking about? Time to call in the samurai from my story!!!
Pjewel: NOW we're talking!!! Hey Sam! Where are you?
Sam: HI! I'm hyper Sam! .
Kaimara: (slaps forehead ) this is ridiculous.
Pjewel: Now we have to execute the executioner!!! Yami, bring another guillotine!!
Yami: Whoohooo! Time to kill the samurai that killed Maiku from Kaimara's story!! (Runs to find another guillotine )
Pjewel: Whee! This is fun!!!
Kaimara: Executing always is. LOL!!!!
MR: Not if you're the one being executed.
Pjewel: Ok, I decided not to execute you.
Kaimara: WHAT???
Pjewel: I shall...er...um...like...sentence you both to cleaning the floors. Ok?
MR: (relieved ) it's better than getting your head chopped off. Hey were you serious?
Pjewel: No, I just wanted to get rid of your hyper state. I would never execute someone.
Sam: Wheeeeeee!!!!
Pjewel: --; unless they're singing hyperactive samurais. LOL! Where'd Yami go?
Yami: I'm right here!! Want the disclaimer, or the guillotine?
Pjewel: actually, we're not going to execute anyone.
Yami: (pout ) no fair.
Pjewel: Can I still have the disclaimer though?
Yami: --; fine. Pharaoh'sJewel does not own YuGiOh or any of the characters so there. Or I shall execute the lawyers.
Anyways, really, did some of you think that Yugi's going to be the sacrifice? --; You haven't been paying attention, have you? Well, it wouldn't be the first time. LOL! Anyway, why would I sacrifice a runt? He's like sooo not heroic. So unless you want to make assumptions, then I suggest that you read this chapter when 'ALL WILL BECOME CLEAR!!! Yes, it shall. Ok? Thank you for the reviews. This is a pretty long chapter compared to the others since some of you thought the others were too short. LOL!
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"Me?" said Yugi bewildered.
"Yugi's the sacrifice?" asked Joey. "Whoa, good luck, man."
"But..." started Yugi.
"Hold on, guys," said Ryushi looking closely at Umiko. "She's pointing to the puzzle."
"I have to sacrifice the puzzle?!" he asked even more confused than he already was.
"Yami." Said Umiko finally.
"Huh?" asked Duke. "What, are you in love with him or something?"
"NO BAKA! HE'S THE SACRIFICE!" she shouted.
Everyone was quiet.
"But..." started Tomoya. "If he's the sacrifice, then..."
"Then what?" asked Yugi.
"Then doesn't Yugi get sacrificed with him?" said Umiko gasping in realization.
"Oh..." said Yugi.
'Yami this is all your fault!' shouted Yugi to him in the mind link.
'MY FAULT?'
'Yes, your fault! If you didn't have to "save the world" then I wouldn't have to die!'
'But I can't help it! It was destined!'
'Blah, blah, blah. Say what you want, but it's all your fault.'
'Why are we fighting? I thought we were friends!'
'"Were" is the key word, Yami. If you hadn't trapped me in that soul room thing, we might still BE friends.'
'Look. I'm sorry, but I was under a lot of pressure at that time and...'
'Okay, you're forgiven'
'But I... what?'
'It's okay, and I'm sorry for...you know, yelling at you for no apparent reason.'
'Me too. And I'm really sorry that you have to you know and that I trapped you in the soul room.'
'That's okay. If it's for saving the world and letting our friends and family have a chance to lead normal lives once more, then it's okay and I'm totally for it.'
Yami was a little more than stunned. One minute they were arguing and now they're apologizing and making up their differences. Wow, he thought to himself. 'Talk about some major mood swings.
'Er...' said Yugi to Yami. 'What are you thinking about?'
'Nothing. Just wanted to know if I can...can you know, take over? If maybe I do, then there might be a possible chance that you may get saved. A little, at least.'
Yugi nodded. 'It might work.'
So he let Yami take over yet again.
"So." Said Yami thinking hard. "How exactly do we do this sacrificing thing? There most likely is a small ritual or something, yes?"
Umiko, Tomoya, and Ryushi nodded. Then Ryushi said,
"We must do the ritual soon or it might be too late."
"Yeah, by the time the Earth's heart stone is in line with the moon. I think." Said Tomoya trying to recall these facts.
"Heart stone?" asked Joey. "The earth has a heart? I'm confuzzled yet again."
"Heart stones have nothing to do with the earth's heart, Joey. It has to do with all of the people in the world's hearts." Explained Tomoya.
"Well, if it has to do with everyone in the world," said Duke. "Then it must be a pretty big stone."
Tomoya nodded. "Yes, and if we hurry and aren't seen, then we can show you, is that okay Umiko?"
"I don't see why not. Let's go!"
They got outside and looked around carefully. Everyone sort of crowded around Yami.
"We must keep him safe!" whispered Ryushi.
"Uh," started Yami a little nervously. "This really isn't necessary."
"Yes it is." Umiko said sternly putting the end to that little doubt.
Umiko and Ryushi picked Duke and Joey to help them defend if necessary. They would have normally have chosen Tomoya, but they seemed to have realized that she and Yami should have a little time together.
A little while later, they could see the peak of a huge mountain. They got to the base of the mountain and stopped.
"It's just a mountain, like any other." Said Tristan.
Umiko walked up to it and traced her finger on one part. She lifted up her finger and they saw a streak of brown dirt on it.
"Long ago," she started. "The heart stone was made. It gets bigger every time people are born and gets smaller when people die. For example, if ten thousand people die because of a war or something, then the mountain would get ten thousand times smaller. If they whole heart stone were wiped out, then the earth would be destroyed. That's why we have to defeat Bakura and protect the stone."
"But that doesn't explain why it's brown." Said Ryou. "You'd expect a heart stone to be a certain color or some thing."
Umiko rubbed away more dirt and told them to come closer. The moon reflected on the stone and it shined. They saw that it was a light pinkish color.
"People used to steal pieces of the stone, causing random people to die. So Master Kinshrew and his followers put a protective shield on it and made it look like dirt. Since then no one knew about the stone or stole pieces of it again."
Everyone was silent and staring at the stone. Suddenly behind them,
"Well, well, well." Said Bakura. "I knew you kids would be useful. Thanks for leading me to the heart stone. Now all I need is to put one more of you in the shadow realm and I shall be powerful enough to defeat you and take over the world!" he shouted laughing evilly.
He looked around at their defiant faces and saw that Serenity was one of the last ones without powers.
"Well little girl," he said. "Are you ready to join your other two friends?"
"Never!" she shouted.
"I'll take that as a yes." He said. He raised his arms and turned her to stone so fast that no one had time to blink.
"Not again!" groaned Joey.
"This has to stop!" shouted Seto.
"We can stop it!" whispered Umiko excitedly. "If we all attack him at the same time then we can restrain him long enough for the ritual!"
"Right," they said getting ready.
Bakura saw that they were suddenly grinning.
"What is the meaning of this?!" he shouted very surprised.
"Ready..." said Umiko. "NOW!"
They all aimed their attacks straight at Bakura at the same time. Once it hit Bakura, he fell to the ground and was instantly bound together by think golden ropes. Bakura swore loudly.
They stared at him, amazed at what they had done. Then Umiko snapped back to reality and said,
"Hurry! We have to do the ritual!"
They ran and followed her. Then suddenly, there was a loud noise, like thunder and a beam of light shot down. When the light cleared away, they saw that it was an old man.
"Master Kinshrew!" gasped Umiko, Ryushi, and Tomoya bowing low. The others followed their lead and also bowed. Master Kinshrew bowed also. Then he got up and said,
"What happened?"
Umiko launched into a full-length explanation.
"I see," he said knowingly. "You need help with the ritual, right?"
"Yes, Master Kinshrew." Said Umiko.
"All right." He said.
Kinshrew raised his arms and chanted some words from an ancient language. Then suddenly, a huge circle appeared and glowed. Everyone except Yami and Marik were drawn to a part of the circle.
"I want you all to raise both arms and face your palms toward the person next to you and chant after me." Said Kinshrew taking his place by the circle.
They raised their arms.
"Wind, water, fire, and light," Kinshrew said closing his eyes. "Under the moon you will unite, Ice and thunder rise, you will save us from demise, earth and darkness take your place, together we will save the human race."
They repeated together. Suddenly, the gaps in between them were filled with a multicolored light.
"Now," said Kinshrew. "Aim straight to the heart stone."
They did as told and aimed the power to the heart stone. When it hit it, the shield was gone and before them stood a giant pinkish mountain.
"You may stop now," Kinshrew said lowering his arms.
When they stopped, the power disappeared and they were shot backward from the circle.
"OW!" shouted Joey rubbing his head. "If I wanted to be ejected from something then I would have spent my life as a video tape in a VCR!"
Kinshrew ignored this and said, "We have 5 minutes until the heart stone and moon are in alignment and the sacrifice is made. Oh yes, and may I see who it is?"
Someone pushed Yami forward.
"Uh...I'm the sacrifice." He said nervously.
"Yes," said Kinshrew nodding. "It was foreseen that the pharaoh would be sacrificed. Now, I suggest that you all say your goodbyes. As for me, I am returning to the dojo, fully aware that this will work and that the world will be saved."
Master Kinshrew disappeared.
Everyone started saying goodbyes and giving sympathy and telling who took what on purpose and things like that.
"And last year, I stole your basketball and..." said Joey counting off on his fingers.
"That's enough Joey," said Tristan.
They finished and Umiko took over the countdown.
"We have one more minute!"
Tomoya quickly rushed into Yami's arms crying.
"Yami," she said through sobs. "I'm going to miss you so much!"
"So am I." He said quietly with tears in his eyes. Then he leaned down and kissed her. (A/N: They haven't had a decent kiss for a long time!)
"5 seconds!"
Yami broke the kiss and said,
"Go, its almost time," he said pushing her out of the circle.
"4 seconds!"
Tomoya started crying all over again. Joey rubbed his eyes and said,
"I'm gonna miss you, pal," he said, "We all will. It won't be the same without you."
"2 seconds!"
"Bye Yugi," they said sadly.
Yami waved sadly afraid that if he spoke, he would start crying.
"O...one se...second!" said Umiko, her voice breaking.
Suddenly, the heart stone mountain and the moon glowed and the circle that Yami was standing in suddenly burst into flames. Outside he could hear surprised screams. Then just before the flames engulfed him, he heard Tomoya whisper, "I love you, Yami," He was pleasantly surprised, but before he could think about it or return his love for her, his spirit was given up and it shot out of the fire. He stood with a stunned expression, his hand over his heart and then he closed his eyes and his lifeless body fell to the ground.
.................................
(Sniff) I feel sooo bad about this that it isn't even funny. (Five seconds later) I still feel bad...ok, I have gotten over it. Ok FYI, there will be one more chapter after this and then is the epilogue. It's just to say who gets married to who and how many kids and stuff like that. I want your SERIOUS OPINIONS ON HOW THIS CHAPTER IS! Ok? Some people will, but others will not and will keep me in a dreadful suspense. I would like it if I could finish with at least 60 reviews for this story. If I do, I'll be super happy. If I don't, I'll be super disappointed. Ok, now, GET OUT THERE AND REVIEW!!!!!
