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The seal had broken
Naruto's whole body seemed to contort in pain. A pulse seemed to radiate from him after the sudden rush of an immense chakra surge. More fire seemed to materialize in a swirling mass, knocking everything and anything ten feet away from the enraged fox spirit. Howling, the fox was in pain, the shift of one body to the other causing immense pain to the sight of any onlooker.
His human like ears were the first ones to go. They shrunk to nothingness on the side of his head as small patches of fur seemed to replace their positions. To small brown pinpricks grew rapidly from the top of his head into full fledged fox ears. Long and extremely acute, these ears swiveled on his head, catching any and all sound that would cause a threat.
Clawed fingers grew closer together, morphing themselves into large brown paws. Fur grew in patches downward along the arm and down to the fox paws. Naruto's thigh grew rounder and bent backwards into a haunch as the lower part of his leg, his shin, lengthened to form a backleg of a certain demon fox.
From the rear, sprouted a tail, a long tail that waved in the air and poofed out when it gained the fur, showing the owner of that tail was in immense pain. It didn't stop there, though, as four more tails flailed out one by one to join the other. Five tails now waved behind the half formed fox, swinging around as if wind socks at an air field.
Dropping to his now fully formed fox legs, Naruto's face lengthened. A snout stretched from his face, his nose forming into that of a shiny black fox nose. Normal molars in a mear human lengthened and sharpened to that of a fox's and twice as deadly. Those canines were shielded with his jaw, now a snarling maw that could snap steel in two.
The body lengthened considerably, the pre-formed legs lengthening, no sign of his original clothing anywhere except burning shreads on the ground. Now taking on the full body of the fox, Naruto was a magnificent sight, if he didn't look so deadly as to scare the grim reaper himself.
At the shoulder, he stood at least three and a half feet tall, half of Kakashi. His body stretched to a whopping six to seven feet, excluding the five tails waving behind him. However, he didn't look exactly like the full grown demon fox, but more as a regular fox and wider eyes that would look kind if they didn't seem to spit flames as they did now.
Standing protectively over the body of Sasuke, the fox's eyes were hidden. The trembling stopping to a complete halt as all pain fled his body, the weapons embedded in his body long ago shot at least fifty yards away to embed themselves in a tree or fall into the water.
Zabuza didn't know what the hell to think. He had no idea who Naruto was, though, now he couldn't help but have a mix of panic and fear seap into him at the mear sight of what could be the legendary demon fox. Shaking his head, he turned back to his fight with Kakashi......he could deal with the fox later.
Kakashi wasn't fairing as well, though he hoped the fox would pay attention to Haku to allow Kakashi to defeat Zabuza and get the fox under control.
Sakura was trembling as if an earthquake was going on. Naruto was the demon fox, the snarling animal that now crouched low to the ground, all five tails sweeping out behind him. How could this have happened? Wait.....didn't her mother say something about the fox never being destroyed? That was when her mother told her to stay away from the blonde blue-eyed boy. Matte......THAT was why! The fox was sealed inside Naruto......Sakura's eyes widened in realization.
Is that Sasuke?!
She now just recognized the body the youko seemed to be crouching over. Than maybe that was the reason the seal broke.......(Oo I am making her oddly smart in this story......)
Haku was beyond thinking ability. What was there to do? He could not defeat the ultimate enemy! It was impossible, the Hokages combined could not defeat it! A mear boy like him couldn't even lay a scratch on something so powerful as that. While he was sitting here thinking of a way to even touch the youkai, it had millions of ways to kill him flashing through its mind.
At this point the youko had regained its bearings, senses to their fullest and the inch long claws scraping the ground, testing. The crimson eyes leveled their gaze onto the most hated foe, the scared shitless Haku. Its lips pulled back into a sneer as it watched the enemy tremble in fear of his mear sight.
It was time for some payback........
________________________________________________________ Dude, sorry this may have been just as short as the last. I would like to
ask a few questions. It would help a lot if an experienced writer would
lend me a hand in creating italicized letters, bolding them, ect. I am
having a hard time with this because I DO use the html things and it
doesn't work. Thanx! Gawd I need a muse......
Review? Please?
would like to celebrate the last day of my school by posting the next
chapter!
___________________________________
The seal had broken
Naruto's whole body seemed to contort in pain. A pulse seemed to radiate from him after the sudden rush of an immense chakra surge. More fire seemed to materialize in a swirling mass, knocking everything and anything ten feet away from the enraged fox spirit. Howling, the fox was in pain, the shift of one body to the other causing immense pain to the sight of any onlooker.
His human like ears were the first ones to go. They shrunk to nothingness on the side of his head as small patches of fur seemed to replace their positions. To small brown pinpricks grew rapidly from the top of his head into full fledged fox ears. Long and extremely acute, these ears swiveled on his head, catching any and all sound that would cause a threat.
Clawed fingers grew closer together, morphing themselves into large brown paws. Fur grew in patches downward along the arm and down to the fox paws. Naruto's thigh grew rounder and bent backwards into a haunch as the lower part of his leg, his shin, lengthened to form a backleg of a certain demon fox.
From the rear, sprouted a tail, a long tail that waved in the air and poofed out when it gained the fur, showing the owner of that tail was in immense pain. It didn't stop there, though, as four more tails flailed out one by one to join the other. Five tails now waved behind the half formed fox, swinging around as if wind socks at an air field.
Dropping to his now fully formed fox legs, Naruto's face lengthened. A snout stretched from his face, his nose forming into that of a shiny black fox nose. Normal molars in a mear human lengthened and sharpened to that of a fox's and twice as deadly. Those canines were shielded with his jaw, now a snarling maw that could snap steel in two.
The body lengthened considerably, the pre-formed legs lengthening, no sign of his original clothing anywhere except burning shreads on the ground. Now taking on the full body of the fox, Naruto was a magnificent sight, if he didn't look so deadly as to scare the grim reaper himself.
At the shoulder, he stood at least three and a half feet tall, half of Kakashi. His body stretched to a whopping six to seven feet, excluding the five tails waving behind him. However, he didn't look exactly like the full grown demon fox, but more as a regular fox and wider eyes that would look kind if they didn't seem to spit flames as they did now.
Standing protectively over the body of Sasuke, the fox's eyes were hidden. The trembling stopping to a complete halt as all pain fled his body, the weapons embedded in his body long ago shot at least fifty yards away to embed themselves in a tree or fall into the water.
Zabuza didn't know what the hell to think. He had no idea who Naruto was, though, now he couldn't help but have a mix of panic and fear seap into him at the mear sight of what could be the legendary demon fox. Shaking his head, he turned back to his fight with Kakashi......he could deal with the fox later.
Kakashi wasn't fairing as well, though he hoped the fox would pay attention to Haku to allow Kakashi to defeat Zabuza and get the fox under control.
Sakura was trembling as if an earthquake was going on. Naruto was the demon fox, the snarling animal that now crouched low to the ground, all five tails sweeping out behind him. How could this have happened? Wait.....didn't her mother say something about the fox never being destroyed? That was when her mother told her to stay away from the blonde blue-eyed boy. Matte......THAT was why! The fox was sealed inside Naruto......Sakura's eyes widened in realization.
Is that Sasuke?!
She now just recognized the body the youko seemed to be crouching over. Than maybe that was the reason the seal broke.......(Oo I am making her oddly smart in this story......)
Haku was beyond thinking ability. What was there to do? He could not defeat the ultimate enemy! It was impossible, the Hokages combined could not defeat it! A mear boy like him couldn't even lay a scratch on something so powerful as that. While he was sitting here thinking of a way to even touch the youkai, it had millions of ways to kill him flashing through its mind.
At this point the youko had regained its bearings, senses to their fullest and the inch long claws scraping the ground, testing. The crimson eyes leveled their gaze onto the most hated foe, the scared shitless Haku. Its lips pulled back into a sneer as it watched the enemy tremble in fear of his mear sight.
It was time for some payback........
________________________________________________________ Dude, sorry this may have been just as short as the last. I would like to
ask a few questions. It would help a lot if an experienced writer would
lend me a hand in creating italicized letters, bolding them, ect. I am
having a hard time with this because I DO use the html things and it
doesn't work. Thanx! Gawd I need a muse......
Review? Please?