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Comfort
Alrighty, Chapter 2. Wasn't expecting to do it but here it goes.
Goten went back to the small house on a riverbank that he called home. When the chibi went in his 'father', Piccolo and Gohan were playing cards. Piccolo lay a card down and smiled at Gohan who was on his left. "Miss a go," he said triumphantly, Gohan sighed and leaned back in his chair. Goten grinned. They were playing Blackjack, his favourite card game. Goku then began to laugh. He put his cards face up on the table and said "Gin!" Piccolo raised an eyebrow (Which was a habit Goten had also taken up) "Goku. We're playing blackjack!"
"Oh. I guess I don't win then!" he said with a very cheesy smile. Gohan sighed again and helped Piccolo put the cards away. Then Goku noticed his younger son watching him. "Hi Goten! Where've you been?"
"Just thinking"
"Don't do that too much or you'll turn into your brother" Goku joked.
Goten remained silent and walked into the living room after his brother and his mentor. Piccolo looked up as the demi-saiyan came in "Hey Goten. How was your day?"
"Ok. I just sat and thought for a while"
"In the meadow?"
"Yeah. How did you know?"
"I used to always go there to think when I lived here"
"Really?"
"Yeah. You actually do a lot of things like me"
Gohan then stuck his head out of the games cupboard "Hey Piccolo, if we all didn't know better you'd think you were Goten's father" Piccolo laughed as did Gohan and Goten. Neither of the other two new that Goten's laugh was forced or that a father is exactly what Goten wanted Piccolo to be.
Later that night Goten was asleep but then woke up in a cold sweat. He had had the most horrific nightmare a seven-year-old could have possibly dreamed up. He was scared; he couldn't go to Gohan for comfort as he was in the city with their mother because of a school thing. He didn't want to go to Goku; he wouldn't know how to comfort him. He didn't know anything about him. There was only one other person in the whole world that would comfort him properly.
Piccolo
Goten climbed out of his window and flew to Piccolo's usual resting place. As he thought the Namek was sitting in front of a dying fire staring into the embers. Goten sat down next to Piccolo, he didn't look at him but said, "What's wrong Goten"
"I had a bad dream"
Piccolo turned and faced the little boy; he had the look of someone who wants to help in his eyes.
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm alright. But I didn't want to be alone"
"Do you want to stay here for the night?"
"Yes please"
"Come here then"
Piccolo put one of his strong arms around Goten and pulled him close. He then realised that Goten was only in his pyjamas and would be cold; so he took off his cape and wrapped it warmly around his small companion. He then lay down and cuddled the chibi to comfort him. And that's how they stayed until morning, curled up together in front of a dying fire. Like a real father and son.
Chapter 2 done! PLEASE review. I've never done a story like this before so I need support!
Comfort
Alrighty, Chapter 2. Wasn't expecting to do it but here it goes.
Goten went back to the small house on a riverbank that he called home. When the chibi went in his 'father', Piccolo and Gohan were playing cards. Piccolo lay a card down and smiled at Gohan who was on his left. "Miss a go," he said triumphantly, Gohan sighed and leaned back in his chair. Goten grinned. They were playing Blackjack, his favourite card game. Goku then began to laugh. He put his cards face up on the table and said "Gin!" Piccolo raised an eyebrow (Which was a habit Goten had also taken up) "Goku. We're playing blackjack!"
"Oh. I guess I don't win then!" he said with a very cheesy smile. Gohan sighed again and helped Piccolo put the cards away. Then Goku noticed his younger son watching him. "Hi Goten! Where've you been?"
"Just thinking"
"Don't do that too much or you'll turn into your brother" Goku joked.
Goten remained silent and walked into the living room after his brother and his mentor. Piccolo looked up as the demi-saiyan came in "Hey Goten. How was your day?"
"Ok. I just sat and thought for a while"
"In the meadow?"
"Yeah. How did you know?"
"I used to always go there to think when I lived here"
"Really?"
"Yeah. You actually do a lot of things like me"
Gohan then stuck his head out of the games cupboard "Hey Piccolo, if we all didn't know better you'd think you were Goten's father" Piccolo laughed as did Gohan and Goten. Neither of the other two new that Goten's laugh was forced or that a father is exactly what Goten wanted Piccolo to be.
Later that night Goten was asleep but then woke up in a cold sweat. He had had the most horrific nightmare a seven-year-old could have possibly dreamed up. He was scared; he couldn't go to Gohan for comfort as he was in the city with their mother because of a school thing. He didn't want to go to Goku; he wouldn't know how to comfort him. He didn't know anything about him. There was only one other person in the whole world that would comfort him properly.
Piccolo
Goten climbed out of his window and flew to Piccolo's usual resting place. As he thought the Namek was sitting in front of a dying fire staring into the embers. Goten sat down next to Piccolo, he didn't look at him but said, "What's wrong Goten"
"I had a bad dream"
Piccolo turned and faced the little boy; he had the look of someone who wants to help in his eyes.
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah I'm alright. But I didn't want to be alone"
"Do you want to stay here for the night?"
"Yes please"
"Come here then"
Piccolo put one of his strong arms around Goten and pulled him close. He then realised that Goten was only in his pyjamas and would be cold; so he took off his cape and wrapped it warmly around his small companion. He then lay down and cuddled the chibi to comfort him. And that's how they stayed until morning, curled up together in front of a dying fire. Like a real father and son.
Chapter 2 done! PLEASE review. I've never done a story like this before so I need support!