Ellie walked through the graveyard picking a flower from each grave she passed until she had a bunch for Kimi. She lay them down on her grave before taking another flower and putting it down on the next grave over. Tommy Pickles
"It's been a year guys" She gently said as she sat down infront of the 2 graves "I still miss you. Mom is no help.....Well you 2 don't hold up a conversation well. Later"
She got up and started to walk away, but as she did a crow landed on Tommys grave and 'Kawed'
"Oooh spooky" she said mockingly as she walked away
The crow 'kawed' again before starting to chip at his gravestone.
Ellie was walking slowly down the sidewalk when she saw a familiar car pull up next to her. She smiled before leaning in the window
"Hey Chuckie. How you been?"
"Not to bad. You want a ride somewhere?"
"Depends where your going"
"Just gonna get some eats. Your welcome to join me"
"You buying?"
"Yeah sure"
"Ok then"
She hoped into the car and they drove down the street.
"It's raining again" Chuckie started
"Just like last year"
They looked at each other as tears began to fall down her cheeks
"Is that where you've just been?"
"Yeah. It was wierd. The ground seemed warm for some reason"
=== Graveyard ===
The crow continued to peck at the stone until the ground infront began to move
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
"So were do you want to eat?" asked Chuckie as he tried to see through his rain covered windshield
"I'm not bothered"
"Just want to eat right?"
"Yeah. Mom's been out with that gang again. Could you arrest her?"
Chuckie laughed "I'll do my best"
=== Graveyard ===
The ground moved again as the crow 'Kawed'. This time a casket lid came up with it. And a man pulled himself out.
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
The 2 got out the car at a hotdog venders and ordered some food
"No onions" said Ellie as she sat down
"No onions?" asked Chuckie
"They make you fart big time"
=== Graveyard ===
The man shivered when he got out of the grave. Was it because he was cold or was he just terrified? He didn't know. He just knew there was something wrong
"KAWWW"
He turned in shock to see the crow standing on HIS gravestone.
"Tommy Pickles died October 31st 2003...I'm dead? Is this hell?"
'No this is the place for redemption' a voice said
"Who said that?" he looked around frantically, but didn't see anyone. Just the crow.
'I am your guide in this world. Now follow me'
And with that the crow began to fly away. Tommy watched it for a while before he looked to the grave next to his
"Kimi Finster died November 2nd 2003" He began to cry as he fell to his knees next to her grave. He finally decided to follow the crow down an alley.
=== Downtown ===
The 3 guys from the apartment were driving in a car with a women screaming at the top of her lungs in the back
"Shut the fuck up bitch" said the one in the back as he pushed his gun underneath her chin
She stopped screaming and cried harder. It wasn't long until they were finished with her and pushed her out of the car.
She rolled across the street until she came to a stop in an alley way.
As she did the crow flew passed her and Tommy stumbled around the corner. He saw her and picked her up and looked at her
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy was sitting in a similar position with Kimi. They were watching TV together and kissing.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy dropped her and took a few steps back
"Help me" she said weakly
"No...NO!!!" he screamed as he ran away
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
"What was that?" Chuckie asked as he heard Tommy scream
"I dunno" Ellie said as Chuckie began to run down the street
"Stay put I'll be back soon"
Chuckie ran down the street until he heard the faint sounds of the women crying out
"Hey I'm with the police are you ok?"
"I saw him....A ghost. He held me and the pain went away" she said gently
"Errr...ok well. Help will be here soon....Hey. Hey wake up"
But it was to late she had died
"Oh fuck"
=== Tommy and the crow ===
Tommy stumbled through another alleyway as the crow landed on a dustbin.
'Why do you hold on to these memories?'
"What memories?" he answered to 'the crow'
'Of her'
"I love her"
'It will just cause more pain'
"I don't care. I will never forget her"
'Very well. Now follow me'
The crow took off again and Tommy followed again
=== Chuckie ===
"...she said something about a ghost. Then she died." He started to tell another officer
"A ghost?" the officer said looking up from his paper
"She was probably mugged by some guy in a sheet. It is Halloween"
The other officer laughed as he finished his report and walked off
Chuckie looked down to the sheet the women was now under.
"Ghost? Jesus. This night get's wierder every year"
=== Tommy and the crow ===
Tommy continued down the street until he stood on a rusty nail
"AAHH"
He lifted his foot so he could see it. He pulled the nail out, but as he did he noticed the blood go back inside him and the wound heal over
"What am I?" he asked gently
'An avenger brought back to right the wrongs of last year'
"What happened on 31st of October. And what happened to Kimi on 2nd of November?"
'Something you must right. Now follow'
Tommy sighed and followed the bird until they reached a building he recognised
*FLASHBACK*
"It's perfect isn't it? I mean it's right in the centre of town" said Kimi as she dragged Tommy by his hand toward the house
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy winched in pain as he remembered.
"Why bring me here?"
'This is were it happened'
Tommy walked to the front door and pulled at the faded police tape around the door
*FLASHBACK*
"Now carry me" said Kimi with a giggle
"What?"
"I said carry me"
"Isn't it a loft apartment?"
"Yeah and you don't expect me to walk up there do you?"
He sighs "Ok ok. Get on"
Kimi begins to laugh as she jumps on his back and they head into the house
*END OF FLASHBACK*
He winced in pain again. He took a few seconds for him to regain his composure, but he carried on inside
He opened the door slowly. The ocassional lightning bolt illuminated the dark hall as Tommy began to enter. He continued up the stairs until he reached a door. When he reached out to grab it....
*FLASHBACK*
"Can I put you down yet?"
"You say that like I'm fat!"
"Well...."
She smaked the back of his head and got down
"Ow."
"Aww come here"
She pulled him close and kissed him
Tommy reached behind him and opened the door making the 2 fall. They were then in fits of giggles
*END OF FLASHBACK*
He pulled his hand away quickly. This flashback really hurt Tommy making him lash out and kick the door down
As it fell a huge cloud of dust lifted from the ground. No-one had been here for a year. He entered cautiously. He expected another flashback. He looked around. This room was full of happiness at one point. Her laughter would echo around this room, but now there was silence. Haunting silence.
"KAWW"
He turned to see the crow resting on top of his chair.
"Well I'm here"
'Look were you are standing'
He looked down to see a puddle of dried blood. He stepped back and kneeled down. Gently placing his hand on top of the puddle
"Kimi..." he said gently
He walked to the window and looked out toward the ground
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy was looking at the 3 guys who had shot him and he fell back out the window. He turned around mid-air and saw the ground get closer and closer until...
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy walked back and fell over he looked at the ceiling and it seemed to be smiling at him
"Why am I here?"
'You're here to righ...'
"Don't give me that shit! Why am I here? What am I?"
'You are what you are. Now get up'
Tommy jumped to his feet and began to walk to the bathroom.
He looked at himself. His face was mudied and he was wearing a burial suit.
"When have I ever worn a suit?" he asked no-one in particular
He pulled his jacket and shirt off throwing them on the floor before heading into the bedroom.
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy and Kimi are lying naked on the bed
"I love you" Kimi said gently
"Say that again"
She giggled
"I love you"
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy screamed in pain and kicked a small side table into a mirror. He falls to the ground and begins to cry
'GET UP!'
"FUCK OFF!!!!!" Tommy screamed at the top of his lungs
He scrambled to his feet and threw the side table at the crow who flew off and over to the kitchen. He looked over to were the table used to be. A smashed picture frame lay there. He picked it up and stood there for a few seconds just staring. It was Kimi. He dropped it on the bed as he headed for the wardrobe. He pulled out a black sweatshirt, a pair of tight leather trousers and a pair of heavy duty boots. He put them on quickly before sitting down at Kimis make up table. He picked out a make up box and applied white make up to the whole of his face and neck. He picked up her black lipstick and applied it to his lips and on his eyes. He drew 2 black lines down his forhead over his eyes and down his cheeks. He then drew an extended smile across his face.
He was about to leave the room when he saw the picture again. He picked it up and looked at it again before putting it into his pocket.
He walked out back into the living room and saw the crow staring at him
"Are we going then?" Tommy said to the crow before walking out were the door used to be
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I really love this movie. It's so cool. The comics are awesome to. Fans of this movie may have noticed a few changes I made (And I don't mean by adding the rugrats) Sorry about all the flashbacks, but they kinda make it more like the movie. Anyway please Review hope your enjoying
"It's been a year guys" She gently said as she sat down infront of the 2 graves "I still miss you. Mom is no help.....Well you 2 don't hold up a conversation well. Later"
She got up and started to walk away, but as she did a crow landed on Tommys grave and 'Kawed'
"Oooh spooky" she said mockingly as she walked away
The crow 'kawed' again before starting to chip at his gravestone.
Ellie was walking slowly down the sidewalk when she saw a familiar car pull up next to her. She smiled before leaning in the window
"Hey Chuckie. How you been?"
"Not to bad. You want a ride somewhere?"
"Depends where your going"
"Just gonna get some eats. Your welcome to join me"
"You buying?"
"Yeah sure"
"Ok then"
She hoped into the car and they drove down the street.
"It's raining again" Chuckie started
"Just like last year"
They looked at each other as tears began to fall down her cheeks
"Is that where you've just been?"
"Yeah. It was wierd. The ground seemed warm for some reason"
=== Graveyard ===
The crow continued to peck at the stone until the ground infront began to move
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
"So were do you want to eat?" asked Chuckie as he tried to see through his rain covered windshield
"I'm not bothered"
"Just want to eat right?"
"Yeah. Mom's been out with that gang again. Could you arrest her?"
Chuckie laughed "I'll do my best"
=== Graveyard ===
The ground moved again as the crow 'Kawed'. This time a casket lid came up with it. And a man pulled himself out.
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
The 2 got out the car at a hotdog venders and ordered some food
"No onions" said Ellie as she sat down
"No onions?" asked Chuckie
"They make you fart big time"
=== Graveyard ===
The man shivered when he got out of the grave. Was it because he was cold or was he just terrified? He didn't know. He just knew there was something wrong
"KAWWW"
He turned in shock to see the crow standing on HIS gravestone.
"Tommy Pickles died October 31st 2003...I'm dead? Is this hell?"
'No this is the place for redemption' a voice said
"Who said that?" he looked around frantically, but didn't see anyone. Just the crow.
'I am your guide in this world. Now follow me'
And with that the crow began to fly away. Tommy watched it for a while before he looked to the grave next to his
"Kimi Finster died November 2nd 2003" He began to cry as he fell to his knees next to her grave. He finally decided to follow the crow down an alley.
=== Downtown ===
The 3 guys from the apartment were driving in a car with a women screaming at the top of her lungs in the back
"Shut the fuck up bitch" said the one in the back as he pushed his gun underneath her chin
She stopped screaming and cried harder. It wasn't long until they were finished with her and pushed her out of the car.
She rolled across the street until she came to a stop in an alley way.
As she did the crow flew passed her and Tommy stumbled around the corner. He saw her and picked her up and looked at her
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy was sitting in a similar position with Kimi. They were watching TV together and kissing.
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy dropped her and took a few steps back
"Help me" she said weakly
"No...NO!!!" he screamed as he ran away
=== Ellie and Chuckie ===
"What was that?" Chuckie asked as he heard Tommy scream
"I dunno" Ellie said as Chuckie began to run down the street
"Stay put I'll be back soon"
Chuckie ran down the street until he heard the faint sounds of the women crying out
"Hey I'm with the police are you ok?"
"I saw him....A ghost. He held me and the pain went away" she said gently
"Errr...ok well. Help will be here soon....Hey. Hey wake up"
But it was to late she had died
"Oh fuck"
=== Tommy and the crow ===
Tommy stumbled through another alleyway as the crow landed on a dustbin.
'Why do you hold on to these memories?'
"What memories?" he answered to 'the crow'
'Of her'
"I love her"
'It will just cause more pain'
"I don't care. I will never forget her"
'Very well. Now follow me'
The crow took off again and Tommy followed again
=== Chuckie ===
"...she said something about a ghost. Then she died." He started to tell another officer
"A ghost?" the officer said looking up from his paper
"She was probably mugged by some guy in a sheet. It is Halloween"
The other officer laughed as he finished his report and walked off
Chuckie looked down to the sheet the women was now under.
"Ghost? Jesus. This night get's wierder every year"
=== Tommy and the crow ===
Tommy continued down the street until he stood on a rusty nail
"AAHH"
He lifted his foot so he could see it. He pulled the nail out, but as he did he noticed the blood go back inside him and the wound heal over
"What am I?" he asked gently
'An avenger brought back to right the wrongs of last year'
"What happened on 31st of October. And what happened to Kimi on 2nd of November?"
'Something you must right. Now follow'
Tommy sighed and followed the bird until they reached a building he recognised
*FLASHBACK*
"It's perfect isn't it? I mean it's right in the centre of town" said Kimi as she dragged Tommy by his hand toward the house
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy winched in pain as he remembered.
"Why bring me here?"
'This is were it happened'
Tommy walked to the front door and pulled at the faded police tape around the door
*FLASHBACK*
"Now carry me" said Kimi with a giggle
"What?"
"I said carry me"
"Isn't it a loft apartment?"
"Yeah and you don't expect me to walk up there do you?"
He sighs "Ok ok. Get on"
Kimi begins to laugh as she jumps on his back and they head into the house
*END OF FLASHBACK*
He winced in pain again. He took a few seconds for him to regain his composure, but he carried on inside
He opened the door slowly. The ocassional lightning bolt illuminated the dark hall as Tommy began to enter. He continued up the stairs until he reached a door. When he reached out to grab it....
*FLASHBACK*
"Can I put you down yet?"
"You say that like I'm fat!"
"Well...."
She smaked the back of his head and got down
"Ow."
"Aww come here"
She pulled him close and kissed him
Tommy reached behind him and opened the door making the 2 fall. They were then in fits of giggles
*END OF FLASHBACK*
He pulled his hand away quickly. This flashback really hurt Tommy making him lash out and kick the door down
As it fell a huge cloud of dust lifted from the ground. No-one had been here for a year. He entered cautiously. He expected another flashback. He looked around. This room was full of happiness at one point. Her laughter would echo around this room, but now there was silence. Haunting silence.
"KAWW"
He turned to see the crow resting on top of his chair.
"Well I'm here"
'Look were you are standing'
He looked down to see a puddle of dried blood. He stepped back and kneeled down. Gently placing his hand on top of the puddle
"Kimi..." he said gently
He walked to the window and looked out toward the ground
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy was looking at the 3 guys who had shot him and he fell back out the window. He turned around mid-air and saw the ground get closer and closer until...
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy walked back and fell over he looked at the ceiling and it seemed to be smiling at him
"Why am I here?"
'You're here to righ...'
"Don't give me that shit! Why am I here? What am I?"
'You are what you are. Now get up'
Tommy jumped to his feet and began to walk to the bathroom.
He looked at himself. His face was mudied and he was wearing a burial suit.
"When have I ever worn a suit?" he asked no-one in particular
He pulled his jacket and shirt off throwing them on the floor before heading into the bedroom.
*FLASHBACK*
Tommy and Kimi are lying naked on the bed
"I love you" Kimi said gently
"Say that again"
She giggled
"I love you"
*END OF FLASHBACK*
Tommy screamed in pain and kicked a small side table into a mirror. He falls to the ground and begins to cry
'GET UP!'
"FUCK OFF!!!!!" Tommy screamed at the top of his lungs
He scrambled to his feet and threw the side table at the crow who flew off and over to the kitchen. He looked over to were the table used to be. A smashed picture frame lay there. He picked it up and stood there for a few seconds just staring. It was Kimi. He dropped it on the bed as he headed for the wardrobe. He pulled out a black sweatshirt, a pair of tight leather trousers and a pair of heavy duty boots. He put them on quickly before sitting down at Kimis make up table. He picked out a make up box and applied white make up to the whole of his face and neck. He picked up her black lipstick and applied it to his lips and on his eyes. He drew 2 black lines down his forhead over his eyes and down his cheeks. He then drew an extended smile across his face.
He was about to leave the room when he saw the picture again. He picked it up and looked at it again before putting it into his pocket.
He walked out back into the living room and saw the crow staring at him
"Are we going then?" Tommy said to the crow before walking out were the door used to be
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I really love this movie. It's so cool. The comics are awesome to. Fans of this movie may have noticed a few changes I made (And I don't mean by adding the rugrats) Sorry about all the flashbacks, but they kinda make it more like the movie. Anyway please Review hope your enjoying