:: Review Response ::
Thanks so much for taking the time to review me! ' Here's my responce to each reviewer:
Vixey Good story so far. I like the plot you have going. It's just that the chapters are WAY too short. :(
Thank-you! I'm really glad you like it so far. I noticed that about the chapters. You see, I did have this all pretty and stuff on MicroSoft Word, but, my computer is really screwed up, and, I couldn't open this uo. Normal Word Pad is messed up, too. So, when my friend, Ghina, reviewed one of my other stories, she had reminded me of it. So, I got it on Note Pad, and edited out all the unneeded html stuff and redid a little bit of it. I could have sworn they were longer ...o.o'
Yumi's Twin-Kagome Wicked Sweet Story! It Totally Rocks! So Can You Udate Soon?
Thanks for reading and reviewing! And, yes, since everyone is reviewing this one, I'll make this story my first priority on I'm probably gonna have these updated at night, I'm nocturnal o.o'. So, keep reviewing, and I'll keep writing!
Tanapopochan111 this is an uber good story! i love it! please update!
Yay! Thanxies for your feed back, and, for reading! I'm happy that you liked it! ' Like I said to Yumi's Twin-Kagome, This is my first priority on this site. I'll update as much as possible!
Inuya Gurl 2488 i am lovin this fic! where's the next chapters and who is Naraku thinking of. your a brilliant writter! i have read fanfics a long time. gone through severl different name but i am still known for giving the honost truth to the writters so they csn improve their work. believe me you are doing great so far. you are one of the few.
Inuya Gurl 2488
Wow! Thanks so much! That's so nice of you! Thank-you very much for the encouragement. I usually have ideas simply come to me, so, This story is going to have different little twists. I'm trying to slowly work the flashback that Naraku had in with this, whcih I know how I'll do, I just need it to happen latter on. Keep reading for more!
Thank-you all so much for these reviews, and, your encouragement. It's really nice. ' I hope you all keep reading, and, reveiwing!
:: Melena Estaine ::
:: Chapter VII ::
Inu Yasha was completely enraged! Why shouldn't he be? His Kagome was gone! This just proved that they should have never stopped! Why ddi he let his guard down like that? What was he thinking? God, she could be anywhere! What could he do? Look for her, of course! But, where the hell could she have gone?
"Kagome!" Inu Yasha yelled, trying to see if he could get any response. Nothing. "Dammit, Kagome!" he yelled her name out, even louder.
"Your missing your lover," Inu Yasha turned to his left, as he felt a chilling gush of wind. "Kagura! Is Naraku behind this? What has he done with Kagome! Where the hell have you creeps taken her? Answer me, now!" Inu Yasha was enraged!
"I didn't do anything with her," she gave him a disguisted look. "What would I want with your woman? Disguisting!" She flicked her fan, as her words went easily and fluent out of her glossy-painted lips.
Inu Yasha highly disliked Kagura, but, deep down, he did know she was attractive. He hated her more than almost anyone else, however. Ecxept for Naraku. Damn his soul to hell where it came from!
"You, meaning you! I know Naraku has her! Where is he at? Tell me!" He didn't have time to hear her play around by literalcy. He wanted the straigjht facts as to Kagome's status, and he sure as hell would get them, no matter what.
"Oh?" she had a slightly surprised, yet sarcastic, look to her mascared eyes. "But... what about Kikyo? Aren't you already searching for her?" she smirked as she giggled playfully. The look on his face as she spoke amused her greatly.
"Damn you!" Inu Yasha cursed her. What would he do? He had to find them both!
"Your taking your frustration out on me? Don't waste your time, now. You don't know how long Kagome might have." Kagura always seemed to pbey Naraku, yet, at the same time, use simple things to allow him to have just the smallest disadvantage. She would do anything to be freed. "Honostly, you ungrateful mutt," she sighed," you really should be thanking me. I've told you so much as to where your precious little Kagome is." With this, she whipped the decorative, yet magical, feather from her black hair, and, with a gust of wind, escaped from sight.
Inu Yasha rushed on after her for as long as he could. She did have a point. He could always go back for Kikyo. Soon, however, he lost sight of her, and his pace slowed. He couldn't even pick up her scent.
"Dammit!" he thought aloud. "I have no way of knowing where Naraku has her!" He sat down under a large oak tree, till he heard a rustle in the grass from behind him.
"Inu Yasha..."
:: Author's Notice ::
Hah! I wrote within a day! ::proud of self:: ' So, is this any longer? Hope so! Review, I'll write!
:: Melena Estaine ::