This is the Intro chapter,
note: while this isnt my first serious story,... it is my second, so excuse me If I'm not entirely serious through the whole thing.
Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars
Chapter 1
He stood in the shadows across from the cantina. A man emerged from the cantina, and walked over to his speeder.
"Ahh, I found you" said the man in the shadows, softly, as he watched the man speed away.
He looked down, and pulled out a device, and it showed where the speeder was, from the homing beacon placed earlier.
"Ahh, I'm home" said Rodderik Yatz, the man from the cantina.
He walked inside, and flipped on the light, and sat down on his couch. He was about to watch the holovision (futuristic TV ok???) when he heard a click behind his head.
"Hello Mr. Yatz, I have a message from an old friend" said a man pointing a gun at Rodderik, standing right behind him.
"Wh-who are you?" asked Rodderik, highly afraid.
"My name Is Kalan Rouge, and Mr. Berridelli sent me" said the man with the gun.
"Mr. Berridelli?" said Rodderik, feigning ignorance.
"Yes, your quite a hider you know, there's over a dozen bounty hunters looking for you" Kalan replied.
"I... I d-don't know w-what your talking about" said Rodderik
"I don't care, I already have enough evidence to make Mr. Berridelli happy, and making him happy is a very, VERY good thing" Kalan replied
"Why arent you shooting me?" asked Rodderik.
"I already did" Kalan replied, "Ever hear of a substance called Tyritch?"
"What"
"Tyritch, its this little mineral that will kill a person in 2 hours... unless they get an antidote" Kalan said
"Why?"
"Ever drag a limp body a mile?"
"Ill have to say I havent"
"I have, and it's a pain, this way, you come with me, any trouble, like you running, and you die"
"How do I know you will give me the antidote anyway?"
"Theres a half million reasons I won't" Kalan said, "Now move"
Kalan lead Rodderik to his ship, a heavily modified Z-95 Headhunter.
"Get in the back, ill give you the antidote when your there" Kalan said
Rodderick got in the back seat of the Headhunter, and then asked, "Ok, give me the antidote!"
Kalan smiled, and climbed int the front seat (protected from the back seat), and began to take off.
"HEY, you said you would give me the antidote!" Rodderik protested
Kalan laughed to himself, "There is no antidote"
"WHAT? You said there was an antidote to Tyritch!"
"Heh," Kalan said, "Tyritch huh? Is that what I called it?"
"What do you mean?"
"There is no such thing as 'Tyritch' I just made it up so I wouldn't have to shoot you, or drag you"
"Wh... you mean I've been fine all this time?"
"In perfect health, exept your liver perhaps, with all that drinking"
"You never poisoned me?"
"No, are you mad?" Kalan replied, as he piloted the small craft out of the atmosphere of Nam Chorios.
"I don't understand, I thought you had poisoned me to keep me from escaping"
"What good is a simple poison for keeping you from running, all it will do is kill you if you run, and cost me a lot of money" Kalan said, "Come on, Im not all that evil, a little cold, but not evil"
The stars blurred, and faded into the glowing flowing pattern of hyperspace.
"Mr. Berridelli, theres someone here to see you" said one of Mr. Berridelli's assistants.
"Show him in"
"Hey there Mr. Berridelli, how is it going?" asked Kalan, as he brought Rodderik in
"Well well well, Kalan Rouge, I have always known that you were good, but I never thought that you would beat all those other hunters, I am impressed" said Mr. Berridelli
"Thank you, I am honored" said Kalan, a bit more formally.
"Naturally you want your credits..."
"Naturally"
"Excuse me," Mr. Berridelli said to his assistant, "Transfer the Rodderik money to Mr. Rouge's personal account."
"Thank you once again" Kalan said, and turned to walk away...
"Wait a second Kalan, I think I have another mission for you"
Please R/R, and tell me what you think... and I realize that this wasn't clear, but Kalan is force attuned, but he isnt really a jedi, and he dosent know that he can use the force, YET... this story is kinda him learning to use it