Silawen,
I sincerlly appologise, I agree with you on being able to voice any opion we wish. I was just telling you that I don't appriecate people ratting on my work just because I used Proffessor Tolkien's work. You are possibly judging my story because I used Tolkien's work. That's fine with me, but for writers that want to expand the world of J.R.R. Tolkien and are creative enough, people have lot's of fun re-writing somthing so grand.
What I don't understand from you Silawen, is that you are bitching people's stories becuase they are being creative enough to continue a epic that will always be remebered. If you were writing about somthing you really love, and then somone comes along and says they hate how you did somthing in it just because you used someone elses characters doesn't make thnigs right.
I'm not saying that I'm a perfect writer becuase I'm not. I only do fanfictions in my spare time to have FUN when I'm not working on my other novel Centurion. Writing is made to be fun; one of the four writing rules is writing to please yourself and the audeince, thier are some people who enjoy the work I put into this and other's people's fan fiction's as well. If people were not allowed to write fanfictions, then I think this place would be a pretty bored place. But hey, I like it that people do enjoy my work.So were all entitled to have our opions.
As for all the people who ARE reading my story I appologise immensly for the delays. My computer has busted and cannot get on the internet so I have to use another one downstairs. I promise that I'll have the next chapter up as SOON as POSSIBLE.
I would greatly love to know how/if Alavine is turning into a Mary-sue or a prefect little princess in the next few chapters, they are kinda put together so I'm not sure. If you guys aren't happy with how she/and or Eomer are let me know my review or email and I'll start re-writing the chapters!
See you in the next chapter!
-Alavine Chase Clair