Author's Babble: Hey guys. I am having a really hard time with this fic. I
have no ideas how to keep going... Should I continue it with Roux living with
Vianne? Should Vianne go with Roux and the rest of the 'rats'? What should
I do??? I really need your guy's support here!!
To my reviewers:
Reese Sparrow: Hi! With will, it was sorta supposed to be a happy part. But member... we've all had a lil wee bit too much rum... heh heh. If you don't mind drinking that is. :) Luscinae? Hmm... that sounds right... maybe... lol. :) I cant think of anything else at the moment, thanks!
Mrsdepp: thank you! Thank you! So, how do you think I should continue?
Luinecu: Thanks! As stupid as it sounds... I like writing the disclaimers almost as much as the fic. Ooops...:)
PirateWHSG: Well, thanks for the note. I appreciate that you think that. But how should I correct it? And yes, I am always in Jack Sparrow Mode. :P hee hee.
Sara.tibbiani: Ooh! New reviewer! :) Yep, Vianne and Roux are one of my fave couples too. As you may be able to tell... Thankz! I like my disclaimer too! Hmm... Do you mind joining the next one? Cuz I've already done this one... thanks.
Metatrons-gurl: Oh, thanks. Yah, I still haven't found a script... :( Its near impossible. Oh well, keep reviewing! Oh, and if you have any ideas how to continue this, please let me know!
Astarte Katz: Hey, Hmm... I'd never be able to choose. I suck at long chappies... sorry...
Isabelle Depp: Thank you thank you thank yoU!!! A new reviewer! Yah! Keep reading and enjoying! -=-=-=
Disclaimer:
Will: Uh, hi. Who are you?
Reese: Don't you know? I'm Reese Sparrow. Captain Reese Sparrow (oh, reese, I hope you don't mind being Captain Reese... *wink wink* )
Will: Oh Hey, what's going on? *looks at the 5 people who are not fully dressed, and the pile of clothing on the floor*
Me: Oh, we're playing strip poker, you wanna join? *Grins*
Will: I guess I don't really have a choice. *looks at Lana who has barricaded the door so he cant get back out.*
Lana: Nope.
Jack: Hey ol' bud. What's new with you and Elizabeth?
Me: No! *Screeches* No talking about Elizabeth in here! She's *glares evilly* EVIL!
Will: Erm...... Ok... O.o
Elizabeth (out of nowhere): I Heard that!!
Me: So?
Jack: *gasp* voices! From the sky!?!?
===---===- Ok, that was a lame disclaimer... Oops. O, and by the way... I don't own Chocolat... or Johnny Depp. I can only wish.
=-=-=-
"Mama?"
'Yes dear?"
"Is Roux staying forever?" I looked at my daughter in surprise. It was about 6 months after he had first arrived again, and we had just celebrated Aliza's first birthday.
"I don't know Anouk." I shook my head. "Now, are you ready to go?" We were heading down to the river for a party. It was going to be a great night, full of music and dancing. I bundled Aliza up and slipped my cloak on. Anouk appeared at my side, ready and raring to go.
"Yes Mama." She skipped the whole way down to the river, but stayed close to me. We could hear the music almost from our front door, and I automatically started singing along to a song that I knew.
When we arrived, Marcia, one of the elderly ladies, came up to me, and started gushing about how cute Aliza was, and how big she was, and the next thing I knew, Aliza was being carried around by Marcia. I grinned, and threw my cloak on a table. I spotted Roux, playing with some of the little kids, and quietly snuck up behind him. I put my hands around his eyes, and he turned around. He smiled, and we shared a quick kiss. I almost laughed when I heard a little girl say, "Ewww..." The kids all scampered off, and left us to join the dancing.
The first song was a lively one, which we danced to along with Jo and some guy. I think his name was Mark. Some other couples joined us, and it turned into a quite large dancing group. The next song was a little less lively, but we still danced to it in the same fashion. The song after that was a slow song, and we swayed in time to the music. We weren't talking, but I knew I was where I needed to be.
After a while I went to go make sure that Aliza was Ok, and left Roux chatting with Jo and Mark. I found Aliza, asleep, with Bobby, asleep, with his arms wrapped around her. Bobby was a little boy, probably three or so. Even though he was two years older than my little girl, I could tell that one day they would be together. I smiled at the sight, they looked so sweet together. I turned away, and spotted Anouk dancing with Jack, a boy a year older than her. 'Good grief.' I thought. 'I guess we're just not the kinda people who settle in.' Falling in love with the river rats...
Anouk had actually kissed Jack a week ago. I thought it was adorable.
I headed back to find Roux, but he wasn't sitting on the bench anymore. I looked around, and spotted Helen with her back turned to me. I saw a figure sitting behind her, but I couldn't see who it was. Being the curious person I was, I headed over to see who it was. Before I reached her though, I saw her lean down and kiss the person. I realized in horror, when the person stood up, that it was Roux. What was he doing with... her?
I walked over quickly, and found Roux and Helen arguing.
"Why do you need her? She's just some chocolate seller who captured your heart through your stomach!" Helen said, not noticing me.
"Well, maybe so. But I love that woman with all my heart."
I stepped up behind Roux, and glared at Helen. But before I got the chance to say anything nasty, Roux led me away. But I heard her mutter. "It's not over yet, Vianne."
"What was that?" I asked Roux.
"What was what?" Roux looked confused. I later realized maybe he thought I was talking about how he stuck up for me.
"That kiss." I crossed my arms.
"That was some young girl who didn't know her place." He answered, wrapping his arms around my waist.
I smiled up at him. "So you do love me after all."
He just smiled and kissed me.
Author's Babble: Ok, I know, that chapter sucked. But I need IDEAS!!! And reviews... Yes, reviews would be helpful...
To my reviewers:
Reese Sparrow: Hi! With will, it was sorta supposed to be a happy part. But member... we've all had a lil wee bit too much rum... heh heh. If you don't mind drinking that is. :) Luscinae? Hmm... that sounds right... maybe... lol. :) I cant think of anything else at the moment, thanks!
Mrsdepp: thank you! Thank you! So, how do you think I should continue?
Luinecu: Thanks! As stupid as it sounds... I like writing the disclaimers almost as much as the fic. Ooops...:)
PirateWHSG: Well, thanks for the note. I appreciate that you think that. But how should I correct it? And yes, I am always in Jack Sparrow Mode. :P hee hee.
Sara.tibbiani: Ooh! New reviewer! :) Yep, Vianne and Roux are one of my fave couples too. As you may be able to tell... Thankz! I like my disclaimer too! Hmm... Do you mind joining the next one? Cuz I've already done this one... thanks.
Metatrons-gurl: Oh, thanks. Yah, I still haven't found a script... :( Its near impossible. Oh well, keep reviewing! Oh, and if you have any ideas how to continue this, please let me know!
Astarte Katz: Hey, Hmm... I'd never be able to choose. I suck at long chappies... sorry...
Isabelle Depp: Thank you thank you thank yoU!!! A new reviewer! Yah! Keep reading and enjoying! -=-=-=
Disclaimer:
Will: Uh, hi. Who are you?
Reese: Don't you know? I'm Reese Sparrow. Captain Reese Sparrow (oh, reese, I hope you don't mind being Captain Reese... *wink wink* )
Will: Oh Hey, what's going on? *looks at the 5 people who are not fully dressed, and the pile of clothing on the floor*
Me: Oh, we're playing strip poker, you wanna join? *Grins*
Will: I guess I don't really have a choice. *looks at Lana who has barricaded the door so he cant get back out.*
Lana: Nope.
Jack: Hey ol' bud. What's new with you and Elizabeth?
Me: No! *Screeches* No talking about Elizabeth in here! She's *glares evilly* EVIL!
Will: Erm...... Ok... O.o
Elizabeth (out of nowhere): I Heard that!!
Me: So?
Jack: *gasp* voices! From the sky!?!?
===---===- Ok, that was a lame disclaimer... Oops. O, and by the way... I don't own Chocolat... or Johnny Depp. I can only wish.
=-=-=-
"Mama?"
'Yes dear?"
"Is Roux staying forever?" I looked at my daughter in surprise. It was about 6 months after he had first arrived again, and we had just celebrated Aliza's first birthday.
"I don't know Anouk." I shook my head. "Now, are you ready to go?" We were heading down to the river for a party. It was going to be a great night, full of music and dancing. I bundled Aliza up and slipped my cloak on. Anouk appeared at my side, ready and raring to go.
"Yes Mama." She skipped the whole way down to the river, but stayed close to me. We could hear the music almost from our front door, and I automatically started singing along to a song that I knew.
When we arrived, Marcia, one of the elderly ladies, came up to me, and started gushing about how cute Aliza was, and how big she was, and the next thing I knew, Aliza was being carried around by Marcia. I grinned, and threw my cloak on a table. I spotted Roux, playing with some of the little kids, and quietly snuck up behind him. I put my hands around his eyes, and he turned around. He smiled, and we shared a quick kiss. I almost laughed when I heard a little girl say, "Ewww..." The kids all scampered off, and left us to join the dancing.
The first song was a lively one, which we danced to along with Jo and some guy. I think his name was Mark. Some other couples joined us, and it turned into a quite large dancing group. The next song was a little less lively, but we still danced to it in the same fashion. The song after that was a slow song, and we swayed in time to the music. We weren't talking, but I knew I was where I needed to be.
After a while I went to go make sure that Aliza was Ok, and left Roux chatting with Jo and Mark. I found Aliza, asleep, with Bobby, asleep, with his arms wrapped around her. Bobby was a little boy, probably three or so. Even though he was two years older than my little girl, I could tell that one day they would be together. I smiled at the sight, they looked so sweet together. I turned away, and spotted Anouk dancing with Jack, a boy a year older than her. 'Good grief.' I thought. 'I guess we're just not the kinda people who settle in.' Falling in love with the river rats...
Anouk had actually kissed Jack a week ago. I thought it was adorable.
I headed back to find Roux, but he wasn't sitting on the bench anymore. I looked around, and spotted Helen with her back turned to me. I saw a figure sitting behind her, but I couldn't see who it was. Being the curious person I was, I headed over to see who it was. Before I reached her though, I saw her lean down and kiss the person. I realized in horror, when the person stood up, that it was Roux. What was he doing with... her?
I walked over quickly, and found Roux and Helen arguing.
"Why do you need her? She's just some chocolate seller who captured your heart through your stomach!" Helen said, not noticing me.
"Well, maybe so. But I love that woman with all my heart."
I stepped up behind Roux, and glared at Helen. But before I got the chance to say anything nasty, Roux led me away. But I heard her mutter. "It's not over yet, Vianne."
"What was that?" I asked Roux.
"What was what?" Roux looked confused. I later realized maybe he thought I was talking about how he stuck up for me.
"That kiss." I crossed my arms.
"That was some young girl who didn't know her place." He answered, wrapping his arms around my waist.
I smiled up at him. "So you do love me after all."
He just smiled and kissed me.
Author's Babble: Ok, I know, that chapter sucked. But I need IDEAS!!! And reviews... Yes, reviews would be helpful...