Thank you to EVERYONE who has been supportive so far. I know you're expecting another chapter but unfortunately it won't be out for a while. I'm tackling the HSC at the moment or for all you un-sydneysiders it's the university entrance exam. I'm afraid you'll all have to wait until at least 4th November to hear from me coz that's when my last exam is.
However, I will take some time out to answer a few queries and also provide a small preview of what's to come.
Lady of Enchantment: I know it's extremely close to the movie so far but I needed to establish the base of the story before I get to the exciting part – where Darien tries to find his princess. Although I said I wanted to finish the story before I saw the movie in case I'm too tempted to use their plot it looks like that won't happen due to the delay. HOWEVER, I'm happy to say that I've already figured out most of my plot and it won't be much like the story so expect a few twists, just like you asked.
Isabella: I'm sorry that you find it too unoriginal but please refer to the previous message as I think that answer also applies to your query.
Gezi: I'm sorry if you think the story is too cheesy for your liking but that's the way I write so if it doesn't suit your taste you can just not read it and refrain from leaving a snide review. However, online comments are prone to be misinterpreted in which case I apologise and you can ignore my message.
White Eternity: As tasty as the idea sounds I don't think I should be so cruel to Beryl...yet...muahahahaha
Melanie-chan: That problem with the mobile phone privacy is a big issue and another reason why the story has been delayed. Some good suggestions you made so I'll think over them. The mobile will be featured as a large part of one of my chapters.
Angel-Of-Serene: Lol yes sorry for the delay but as I explained, my schedule has been quite tight lately. And you made a valid point about Beryl which is one of the reasons why I think she should stay in the picture and torment our beloved couple some more.
Aforementioned, the plot for the remainder of the story has been almost completely mapped out and I can tell you that it will begin to steer away from the movie's idea a bit more in later chapters, especially how he finds out about the truth. As I mentioned to Melanie-chan, the mobile phone will be a large part of the plot later on. Also, I have decided that Beryl should stay as clingy as ever, so I apologise to those people who preferred otherwise but I think this suits my plot better. Serena and Darien's friendship is going to progress further than it did in the movie before the truth comes out so the 'big secret' isn't going to be revealed until near the end. If you have any ideas of what you'd like to see in my story please let me know and I will try my best to fit it in. Meanwhile please check out my other story and tell me what you think
- Angelz Pride -
