Disclaimer: I admit it's sort of...different, but it would be considered as a love poem, so tell me what you think....do you like this style or the style of the last two.
Silence...A segue into the oblivion of memories of the loud moments,
Of exhausting amusement,
Of the symphony of feelings,
Of you.
I was bound to the shadow
Willing slave to a world without words, feelings...you
But you denied me of ignorance
You destroyed my chains of traditional routines,
And forced me into a world of your artificial light.
Making feel emotion I envied for so long
Laughter filled the soul,
Colorful raiment of melodies, and the songs filled with ice-cream, sun , smiles, dreams, and stars.
Everyone that was you wrapped me in a warm cocoon to start my transformation.
But my previous master was jealous,
We fought and fought and when the battle was almost over,
As close and strong as we were,
He lured you into the embrace of another...
As I screamed, cried, mourned, being taken hostage again.
Now I lay in remorse as my dark master enfolds me with his glee,
Yet a spark is what it takes for a beginning.
Cannot go back to the useless skin I have shed.
I am unwilling.
And though without your precious daylight I have came to freedoms realization.
Turn on the light... with or without you.
Guess what? I have tried sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many bloody times to put spaces inbetween the paragraphs that I have gone crazy and am very mad at QuickEdit. Help me?
anyway review tell me if you like it okay?