I've been noticing that I have not been getting reviews, and if I do, they're answers to a poll. Guys, I want some feedback on the story so I can make a better one for the sequel. But yes, there is a prize in the end.

Titania pictures:

Sand Crawlers - http:www.arwing.host.sk/gallery/albums/sf64/screens/1901.jpg

Titania (canyon) - http:www.arwing.host.sk/gallery/albums/sf64/screens/1903.jpg

Landmaster - http:www.arwing.host.sk/gallery/albums/sf64/renders/ships22.jpg

Chapter 6 – The Search for Homsar

Characters:

Fox – Homestar

Slippy – Homsar

Peppy – Coach Z

Falco – Strong Bad

ROB 64 – Grape Nuts Robot

General Pepper – Strong Sad

Goras (the original boss) – S is for Sucks Dragon

Location: In Great Fox

"Homestar, you must be crazier than you are today to go to Titania!" cried General Strong Sad through the radio.

"Uh, that'll mean your only best fwend will be stuck in Titania fowevew," answered Homestar.

"What did you do to Homsar?" asked General Strong Sad, but Homestar disconnected communication.

Location: Titania

The Great Fox was flying over the desert with Coach Z's and Strong Bad's Arwings. Homestar was in a Landmaster, a tank, in the Great Fox.

"Let's do this like bwutus!" said Homestar as the Landmaster left the Great Fox and hovered down to the desert. Then it began moving on the sand.

"Hey Wobot, whewe's Homsaw?" asked Homestar.

"Now spell: Homsar is at 12 o' clock," answered Grape Nuts Robot.

"Weally? I thought it's 8 o' clock," said Homestar.

"Oh man, you just get dumber and dumber," said Strong Bad.

Then Homestar drove by some pillars which fell in Homestar's direction. Then he saw three green landmines on the ground.

"A magnetic storm! I don't know what that's supposed to mean, but shoot the landmines!" ordered Strong Bad.

So Homestar shot a bolt at the landmines, blowing them up. Then Homestar drove through the desert before encountering a sand crawler.

"Just short it Homestar!" ordered Coach Z.

So Homestar shot at the sand crawler's belly, blowing it up. Then Homestar drove on where he encountered another sand crawler.

"Well, you do look good in a tank," admitted Strong Bad.

"Why not come hewe?" asked Homestar as he destroyed the sand crawler the same way.

"I'll pass," answered Strong Bad.

Then Homestar went through bone arches and destroyed another sand crawler. Then ships came towards Homestar.

"Enemy fighters coming towards you!" warned Strong Bad as another Sand Crawler appeared.

Homestar shot at the three enemy fighters, but only shot down one while he destroyed the Sand Crawler as well. Hey! Those enemy fighters require more than one hit to be destroyed! They have some kind of armor, or your laser's weak. Anyway, then there were many flying enemies ahead of him. Homestar shot the enemies he could shoot, which was not a lot, for Homestar was just getting used to the Landmaster. Then Homestar drove to a dip with a bridge and green ships that were flashing yellow. Homestar shot at one, and it flew into the air, which Homestar shot. Then Homestar saw two Sheild Rings right next to each other.

"Do a borral roll!" ordered Coach Z.

Homestar rolled off the bridge after getting the first Shield ring, getting the second one. Then more of those green ships either blew up or flew. Then there were some machines with really tall legs (not to be confused with the Yellow Dello or Modestly Hot Homsar) shooting lasers on the ground.

"You doin' fine Homestar?" asked Coach Z as Coach Z and Strong Bad helped shoot down some of those machines.

Homestar tried to shoot them down, but the laser was too much, so Homestar barrel rolled out of the way. He managed to destroy the second machine, though. Then there was another laser.

"Use the booost!" ordered Coach Z.

Homestar's tank did the boost to get out of the lasers way. Then he shot at the machine to destroy it. Then Homestar came to a dip where there were ships, flying enemies, tanks, and landmines.

"Use bormbs wisely!" ordered Coach Z.

"Coach Z? Why are you doing this accent on purpose?" asked Strong Bad.

Then Homestar locked onto a landmine and shot a bomb at it, blowing up all of the enemies, including the flying ones, ships, tanks, and landmines, clearing the area.

"Whoa, that was good," commented Strong Bad.

"Thanks Stwong Bad!" thanked Homestar.

"Now Homestar, are you doing that accent on purpose?" asked Strong Bad.

"I dunno," answered Homestar.

"Say your name," ordered Strong Bad.

"Youw name," replied Homestar.

"Ugh," groaned Strong Bad.

Then Homestar went through a Checkpoint, which he was used to, and needed. Then Homestar shot down some ships and then there were more of those pillars. They began to fall on Homestar.

"Incorming!" shouted Coach Z.

Homestar didn't know what to do, so he tried to drive away from them, but got hit by some.

"Try hoovering!" said Coach Z.

So Homestar hovered over some fallen pillars, dodging more pain. Then there were more falling pillars, but Homestar stayed in the center to dodge them. Then Grape Nuts Robot sent him a message.

"Now spell: Location confirmed, sending supplies," said Grape Nuts Robot.

Then Grape Nuts Robot sent a box in front of Homestar. Homestar shot it for a Supply Star.

"Please don't be dead Homsar," said Coach Z.

"I wish he's dead, I mean, uh, WHGT! JGTH! YES I'M AWESOME!!" shouted Strong Bad as he flew off.

Then Strong Bad got chased by a ship.

"Crap! He's onto me! That's not right!" shouted Strong Bad.

So Homestar shot it down. Then there were more ships and flying enemies flying by with Coach Z and Strong Bad flying around, shooting at the ships. Homestar shot some of them down. Soon, Homestar drove into a canyon; where there were robots hurling rocks at Homestar from above. So Homestar shot at the rocks, but wasn't able to shoot the robots. Soon, Homestar encountered some machines with blue screens attached to the canyon walls.

"Are you okay? Just a beet further," assured Coach Z.

"Well, the tank's okay. But I'm chafed! How do you enjoy it?" complained Homestar.

"Well, if you have a bad back, not play sports, you'll love it!" answered Coach Z.

"That, and you're forced to be in that position," said Strong Bad.

"True, true," admitted Coach Z.

Then Homestar shot at the blue screens of those aforementioned machines to destroy them. As he was nearing the end of the canyon, he heard a familiar voice.

"DaAaAa! I got shot by the FBI!" cried Homsar.

"Was that Homsaw?" asked Homestar.

"No, that was Marshie having lunch with the King of Town," said Strong Bad sarcastically.

"Weally?" asked Homestar.

"No, that was Homsar," answered Strong Bad.

Then Homestar drove by some yellow cacti and some falling pillars with Supply Rings and Shield Rings. He drove in the direction of a Shield Ring, but the pillar fell in that direction, so Homestar barrel rolled for the Supply Ring. Then he encountered another one of those pillars, but waited for the pillar to fall on the Supply Ring, so he could go for the Shield Ring. Then he encountered another one of those pillars, but the pillar fell on the Shield Ring before Homestar could barrel roll, so Homestar got the Supply Ring. Soon, Homestar came to four beefy arms in the ground. One of them was holding Homsar's Arwing.

Suddenly, two of the beefy arms began to punch down on Homestar. Homestar barrel rolled out of the arms' way and shot at them. Soon, all of the arms went underground, taking Homsar with them.

"I'm a sole sandy!" said Homsar.

Then, the S is for Sucks Dragon with four beefy arms broke out of the sand.

"Roar!" roared the S is for Sucks Dragon.

"Whoa! That dragon had some steroids, or something, something," exclaimed Strong Bad.

"Shoot the orms!" ordered Coach Z.

So Homestar shot at a beefy arm that punched at him. Homestar kept on shooting it, until it blew up.

"Get out of there Homsar!" shouted Strong Bad.

"I can't do the chickadee duo!" replied Homsar.

Then Homestar destroyed two more beefy arms. The dragon had no choice, so it let Homsar go.

"Thanks Sbu! I'll kill two hummingbirds with one pencil!" cried Homsar as he flew away from the armless dragon.

Then the dragon revealed a hole, revealing its heart. Homestar shot at the heart, damaging the dragon.

"To kill a mathematical mockingbird!" shouted Homsar as he gave Homestar the dragon's energy meter, which was blackened by shooting at the dragon's heart.

"Use bormbs!" shouted Coach Z.

"Let me have a piece of that action!" shouted Strong Bad.

Before Strong Bad could have his chance, Homestar shot the dragon's heart with bombs, blowing it up into pieces. Ew, it's innards were spread all over the place. That's gross. Anyway, Homestar drove through the desert.

MISSION ACCOMPLISHED

"Hey Homsaw, you all wight?" asked Homestar.

"I'm as grateful as Super Hera!" answered Homsar.

"We're always saving your bottom, weirdo," said Strong Bad.

"I'm sure he's lorned his lorson," said Coach Z.

"Okay guys, now let's go to Venom!" said Homestar.

Then the three Arwings flew away from Titania. Homestar put the tank on autopilot, making it hover all the way to the Great Fox, flying with the Arwings.

"Hey! How come I couldn't do that?" asked Homestar as he landed in the Great Fox.

Well, guess what? There's one more poll! Since the encounter at Bolse might be short, I've also added Star Fox in Venom in the next chapter. So here's the question:

Who should Homestar go with in the Venom maze?

a. Homsar

b. Coach Z

c. Strong Bad

d. Himself