Authors note:
I know the first 2 chapters were horrible. Sorry!!! What happened was that my rough draft got posted instead of my final. That's why Alex is a Mary-sue. I saved my rough draft on a disk a long time ago, thinking it was the final, and my comp. crashed and I just posted the draft that was really bad. I don't get a chance to post a lot now that school started, and I'm still revising my 1st 2 chapters. I use my rough draft as more of a page to put ideas on, so If I do post one of my rough copies by mistake, u can bet it will be horrible.
I am also horrible at spelling and grammar (as you seem to have noticed) but I'm really glad you mentioned it and will try to work harder. I have some things to say to you:
David- I appreciate constructive criticism. I am glad you said that my story was horrible (and I agree whole heartedly w/ you). As I said, it was only my rough draft posted by accident.
Bitter Green-Tea: I know that she's a Mary Sue!! It's only my rough draft, like I said.
Sleepflower- I know that she is way to perfect to be normal. But It'll be better once edited.
kawaii&crazy- thank you! I'll update soon as I can!
LOTRPOTCfan63- I can't take criticism from you. Seeing as we got in fight a year ago, I take everything you say, that may be merely constructive criticism, offensively. If your name isn't Allie, and I got your sn confused w/ someone else's, then I'm sorry.
Once again, SORRY!!!!!!!!!