AN: Piroko here. First, I want to apologize for the look of this week's update. I use Firefox instead of IE for internet browsing, and apparently FFN either doesn't like Firefox, or somethings just messed up and being stupid. Trust me, I've tried everything. That being said, I've been pretty prolific this week and was having a hard time deciding just which of the three poems I finished should be used for my update. I've also had to up the rating. my stuff is getting a little more serious than just PG. I decided this week that I'd pretty much double post. I'm putting two poems up at a time. The first one, "Fear", was written while I was in school on the 28th, supposed to be taking a World History test. I failed the test, but the poem turned out great. The second poem, "Lifeless", was what caused Piroko Filler Day 1. Technically speaking, "Lifeless" never got finished, BUT I got tired of trying to force it to end, so I gave up and decided to call it done.
For those of you that actually review, I wanted to ask you if you'd like me to update twice a week as opposed to once. I thought it might be a good idea, since I've been producing material at an alarming rate recently. I just need to know that people will come back to read and review if I update twice a week. If you think you'd be interested in paying attention to when I update and reviewing, either put it in you're review or email me Thanks everyone, and as always Read and Review."Fear"
The darkness deep inside
Something no one else will see
No one will ever understand
What it is that makes me be
I cannot show emotions
I cannot show fear
For if I were to let go these things
I would lose everything so dear
But deep inside I am afraid
I feel scared and all alone
This side of me
They'll never see
Because I appear as cold as stone
I want to scream
I want to cry
These tears run down my cheek
I cannot fight it
I cannot win
I'm just too goddamn weak
The saline stains upon my face
Still, I won't fall without grace
So as I lay, about to die
I'll make sure no one sees me cry
"Lifeless"Eyes of sadness
A warrior's heart
Internal madness
Will tear apart
A girl who remains unknown
Feels so hopeless
All alone
A face so sad
A soul so lost
Her touch so cold
It feels like frost
As if this girl is not whole
As if she lives without a soul
So many things that go unsaid
A lifeless body
She seems undead
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For Raven
AN: The last poem, "Lifeless", actually lead to one of my favorites, yet to be posted, called "The Raven's Song". It's what I consider my best work so far. It'll be up either Friday or Wednesday of next week, depending whether or not people want me to post once or twice a week. Well, thanks for reading.
-Piroko
