Only one review....sits in a dark corner and draws little circles in the sand

MC: Nobody like me everyone is sick of me and its only my first chapter...

Mokuba: Noway MC you rock!

MC: Thanks Mokuba atleast someone is still sticking to me (glares at Marik)

Marik: (still mad at MC because she bashed him on the head and pouts)

Ryou: (shy) I...still like you MC

Marik: BETRAYER!!!

Ryou: Oh shut up you jealouse old loon!!! (Astonished that he piped up)

Marik: (shoked) xx

MC: Oh Ryou!!!! (runs over and hugs him to death)

Marik: (kicks MC away and sends her flying away)

MC: Looks like MC's blasting off agaaaaaiiiiinnnnnn

Marik: (Takes Ryou in his arms and squeezes him like a teddy bear)

Ryou: (blushes) Um...MC doesn't own...any...of the Yu-Gi-Oh

characters...this is just a made up story where...she is borrowing the...characters (gasps for air)

Marik: (Doesent let loose) On with the story!!!!

" "Speaking

, , thoughts or Ryou speaking to Bakura

/ / Bakura speaking

( ) me butting in !

Chapter 2 : Ryou and the Milleniumsring

"Hm?" Ryou looked over where Bandit Keith was waving for him to come over in the dark allyway. Ryou started to walk over. "Hes coming!!!"Bandit Keith said to the other. "Good" Bones laughed evily his yellow and brown teeth showing to their full extent.

/Ryou those guys have got bad written all over them why are you going in that dark ally?/

,I don't think they are alle that bad just because they have something to do with Pegasus,

/Well don't say I didn't warn you!/

Ryou turned into the dark ally. "Hi guys whats up?" They sniggerd first before Keith said something "I think you have something that belongs to us." "What do you mean?" "The milleniumsring you fool!!!" Bones snirred. "Quiet Bones!!! Let me handle this!" They slowley closed in on Ryou.

,Bakura help me!,

/Oh no kid your on your own I warned you but you didn't listen to me!!!/

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As they pounced on Ryou Bakura sat back on the bed in his soul room inside of the milleniumsring. /Ts kid needs to learn how to defend himself anyway... / But something tugged at his insides so it was hard for him to sit still so he fiddled around with his milleniumsring. He heard Ryous yelps and crys. /Don't get all soft now Bakura after all you did warn him and the stubborn asshhole didn't want to listen!!/ he growled to himself.

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Keith and Bones were swinging punches in every direction at Ryou. They closed him in in the corner of the alley so he couldn't make a run for it.

,Bakura...,

Bakura tried ignoring the pleese of help from his soft little white haired precious. Bakura growled /What the hell is wrong with you you never cared before what happened to the kid. Hell you even let him get robbed but that was before he... / Bakura stood up angerly and paced back forth.

/Before I what?!!! / He screamed pulling at his hair.

,Bakura im begging you... please help me. Im sorry that I didn't believe you!,

Finally Keith and Bones had enough fun. They ripped the Milleniumsring off of the bloody and bruised Ryou. "Hehe that was like taking candy from a baby!" Bones laughed glaring greedly at the ring. "He is still a baby!!" Keith said kicking Ryou one more time hard in the ribs before he walked off.

MC: Im so sorry Ryou I really don't want to hurt you but the story wont work if I don't go through with it.

Ryou: (wrapped in bandages) O...hehe its ok...MC

MC: I knew youd understand Ryou (slaps him on the back)

Ryou: Ow...ยด

MC: Oh my gods im sorry!!! 0

"Say Keith do we really have to give this thing to Pegasus? I mean what does he want with it anyway?? If we sell it we can get doubled as much as Pegasus is offering us."

"And what do you suppose we tell Pegasus?"

"Some nut from the street stole it from us?"

"You stupid fool!! Pegasus isint as stupid as you think he is! Hell if he wanted to he could be watching us at this very moment!!!!!" Keith yelled at Bones spit flying onto Bones face.

"OK OK...it was only a suggestion!!" They turned the corner to make a good getaway making sure no one saw them leave the ally.

But they couldn't get far because a holographic figure stood before them.

MC: I know the storys short but chapter 3 will be longer!! And some Anzu bashing will finally take place (I hope). Also...

Marik: Theres more??

MC: Ofcourse!!! Some fluff between Ryou and Marik!!!

Marik and Ryou: (blush)

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Review. I atleast want 10.... Im trying....And if you review you guys can suggest a scene youd really love to have between 2 characters or what you guys want to do to Anzu or a pairing or a really good lemon I don't know some suggestions would be great and ill get back to you guys on it in the chapters to follow!!!!

PLEASE R/R