Well theyre its the second chapter, and i still whant to know mi english mistakes.
The Truth in not around the corner
CHAPTER 2: THE HIRED DETECTIVE
"I will not say nothing, I will sue you, Robin I will" said Jinx who was getting away with Raven´s cape
"Where are you going, dont go out there" said Cyborg
"Youre in undies" said Beast Boy
"And you have my cape" said Raven
"Robin it is true? you did that to Jinx?" ask Starfire
"Starfire what are you asking did you not trust me" said Robin angrily
"Sorry Robin it´s just that, in my planet this kind of this are abominable and im afraid of what she said"
"Sorry Star for yelling you it´s just that i dont like to be acused for something that i didn´t do"
8 days later
It had passed almost a week after the rape of Jinx she still remember the day when she turn in another victim of sexual violation, she sue Robin, for what she thinks he did to her . She was in a court, the Titans and the Justice League were too, Batman doesn´t believe that Robin commit the crime, Robin said something that Jinx doesn´t put attention, she starts to remember what happen in the bank that day
Flashback
Jinx finds an exit and when she was to come out, a hand with a rag gagg Jinx, and the other hand was holding Jinx one of her arms, she was struggling trying to look her captor but the smell of the chloroform affect her almost instantly, when she wake up, she was in dark room, she feel some rope aroud her chest and her hands, she cant move and notice that she was gagged and blinfolded.
"Mmmppphhhh" Jinx tried to scream but it was useless, she was in the floor, and tried to find the way to get out of the room and find some help.
"Good you awake" said a familiar voice in the dark, Jinx maybe cannot see him but she recognize the voice, it was Robin.
"Are you wondering what´s going to happen? Well i will give you a clue, i will let you in youre underwear" the guy was touching Jinx in smooth manner, he touches some private parts of her body, then he uses a knife to cut her pantyhose, then some of her clothes, Jinx doesnt like what its happening.
She, a villain who is now turned into a victim, feeling useless and defendless against the guy who capture her and using her as a pleasure toy.
"After look you in bra and panties im gonna rape you" said the guy who sounds like Robin
Jinx was trying to uses her powers to try or stop him, but she receives electric shocks from her neck every time when she try to use her powers, she dont notice till now, that she had something in her neck. She´s now afraid about the knife that it´s cutting her clothes, thinking that after the rape he will kill her. Jinx doesnt want to die in that manner.
The unknow guy who looks like Robin but with other clothes, finally could see Jinx in panties and bra, he begin to touching her, firts her breast then her panties, but then he take of her bra and pull down her panties and now touching firts her nipples then her other private and naked part. The guy doesn´t waste time he take of his pants and underwear he started to rape Jinx.
"MMMPPPPHHH, MMPPHH, MMMMMPPPPPPHHHHHHH" Jinx burst in tears she feels some pain and was been raped
end of Flashback
The Judge wakes Jinx, some people of the jury are doubting that Robin it´s guilty, one of the persons of the jury said that they need more time to think about the situation y theyre gonna tell the veredict when everyone are in agree. The Judge said that they give a week to take the decision.
The Judge said that the next week Robin will receive the veredict and the sentence, but by now he wouldnt not be with the Titans anymore,only if there are probes of his innocence. Jinx feels very disapointed she really wants to see Robin in jail.
"Dont worry Robin i will do all what i can, to demostrate youre innocense" said Batman
"Thanks Batman, but we dont need youre help, my friends will help me to resolve this situation even that im not part of the group for now, until we have probes that im innocent" said Robin
"Well if you want in that way, will let youre friends to help you, but if you or youre friends need help you know were to call" said Superman
In another dimmension a guy that look like 20 years was living in a high technology room waiting for somebody who hired him. The guy who clothes are like of an detective of the 20' or 30' of the XX century, in other words in old fashions, was been contacted yesterday for his new mission, he just talk a little to the person who hired him, he notice that its voice was annoying and creepy, then all the room turns dark.
"Are you Elrick Blood?" said an annoying voice
"Yes i am"
"Youre mission will be in another dimmension" said a small person, Elrick Blood cannot see him
"WHAT"
"Your mission consist in probe the innocence of this superheroe name Robin, who belongs to a team o superheroes called the Teen Titans, before a week"
Elrick saw some movie clip about Robin and theTeen Titans
"What are is charges"
"Sexual violation" said the annoying voice
"That a huge charge were i came from"
"Well did you want to accept it or not"
"Yes i do i want to know who are you"
"Im his fan number one"
"What"
"No time to talk i will send you right now"
"But wait how ahhhhhhh" Elrick Blood just saw a dark hole, it was sucked and dissapear.
Back in the Titan Dimension
Robin was trying to getting out of the court building but the reporters and paparazzis were bother him
"Robin did youre friends will demostrate youre innocence?"
"Robin why dont you let the Justice Legue help you?"
"What you think about youre fans?"
"It it´s true that Jinx it´s pregnat?"
"Go away dont bother Robin" Starfire was helping Robin, she fly with him.
In some place about some miles from the Teen Titans tower
A small dark hole was expulsing Elrick Blood, now he´s wondering how to find that Robin guy, then an old newspaper impact into his face.
"Well what have whe here" said the detective, he was reading about the court and a possible sentence for Robin. Then he saw a box with the news of today, he reads that it was today when the court will conclude
"What that its for today i need to hurry up" said Blood, then he saw far away the building in T form
"I wonder if those Titans live in that building?"
To be continue.
Well did this chapter got better than the other? I want to know my other english mistakes I decided to put some RobinxStarfire relations I want to thank Phoenix´s Soul for the help of some of my doubts
The Truth in not around the corner
CHAPTER 2: THE HIRED DETECTIVE
"I will not say nothing, I will sue you, Robin I will" said Jinx who was getting away with Raven´s cape
"Where are you going, dont go out there" said Cyborg
"Youre in undies" said Beast Boy
"And you have my cape" said Raven
"Robin it is true? you did that to Jinx?" ask Starfire
"Starfire what are you asking did you not trust me" said Robin angrily
"Sorry Robin it´s just that, in my planet this kind of this are abominable and im afraid of what she said"
"Sorry Star for yelling you it´s just that i dont like to be acused for something that i didn´t do"
8 days later
It had passed almost a week after the rape of Jinx she still remember the day when she turn in another victim of sexual violation, she sue Robin, for what she thinks he did to her . She was in a court, the Titans and the Justice League were too, Batman doesn´t believe that Robin commit the crime, Robin said something that Jinx doesn´t put attention, she starts to remember what happen in the bank that day
Flashback
Jinx finds an exit and when she was to come out, a hand with a rag gagg Jinx, and the other hand was holding Jinx one of her arms, she was struggling trying to look her captor but the smell of the chloroform affect her almost instantly, when she wake up, she was in dark room, she feel some rope aroud her chest and her hands, she cant move and notice that she was gagged and blinfolded.
"Mmmppphhhh" Jinx tried to scream but it was useless, she was in the floor, and tried to find the way to get out of the room and find some help.
"Good you awake" said a familiar voice in the dark, Jinx maybe cannot see him but she recognize the voice, it was Robin.
"Are you wondering what´s going to happen? Well i will give you a clue, i will let you in youre underwear" the guy was touching Jinx in smooth manner, he touches some private parts of her body, then he uses a knife to cut her pantyhose, then some of her clothes, Jinx doesnt like what its happening.
She, a villain who is now turned into a victim, feeling useless and defendless against the guy who capture her and using her as a pleasure toy.
"After look you in bra and panties im gonna rape you" said the guy who sounds like Robin
Jinx was trying to uses her powers to try or stop him, but she receives electric shocks from her neck every time when she try to use her powers, she dont notice till now, that she had something in her neck. She´s now afraid about the knife that it´s cutting her clothes, thinking that after the rape he will kill her. Jinx doesnt want to die in that manner.
The unknow guy who looks like Robin but with other clothes, finally could see Jinx in panties and bra, he begin to touching her, firts her breast then her panties, but then he take of her bra and pull down her panties and now touching firts her nipples then her other private and naked part. The guy doesn´t waste time he take of his pants and underwear he started to rape Jinx.
"MMMPPPPHHH, MMPPHH, MMMMMPPPPPPHHHHHHH" Jinx burst in tears she feels some pain and was been raped
end of Flashback
The Judge wakes Jinx, some people of the jury are doubting that Robin it´s guilty, one of the persons of the jury said that they need more time to think about the situation y theyre gonna tell the veredict when everyone are in agree. The Judge said that they give a week to take the decision.
The Judge said that the next week Robin will receive the veredict and the sentence, but by now he wouldnt not be with the Titans anymore,only if there are probes of his innocence. Jinx feels very disapointed she really wants to see Robin in jail.
"Dont worry Robin i will do all what i can, to demostrate youre innocense" said Batman
"Thanks Batman, but we dont need youre help, my friends will help me to resolve this situation even that im not part of the group for now, until we have probes that im innocent" said Robin
"Well if you want in that way, will let youre friends to help you, but if you or youre friends need help you know were to call" said Superman
In another dimmension a guy that look like 20 years was living in a high technology room waiting for somebody who hired him. The guy who clothes are like of an detective of the 20' or 30' of the XX century, in other words in old fashions, was been contacted yesterday for his new mission, he just talk a little to the person who hired him, he notice that its voice was annoying and creepy, then all the room turns dark.
"Are you Elrick Blood?" said an annoying voice
"Yes i am"
"Youre mission will be in another dimmension" said a small person, Elrick Blood cannot see him
"WHAT"
"Your mission consist in probe the innocence of this superheroe name Robin, who belongs to a team o superheroes called the Teen Titans, before a week"
Elrick saw some movie clip about Robin and theTeen Titans
"What are is charges"
"Sexual violation" said the annoying voice
"That a huge charge were i came from"
"Well did you want to accept it or not"
"Yes i do i want to know who are you"
"Im his fan number one"
"What"
"No time to talk i will send you right now"
"But wait how ahhhhhhh" Elrick Blood just saw a dark hole, it was sucked and dissapear.
Back in the Titan Dimension
Robin was trying to getting out of the court building but the reporters and paparazzis were bother him
"Robin did youre friends will demostrate youre innocence?"
"Robin why dont you let the Justice Legue help you?"
"What you think about youre fans?"
"It it´s true that Jinx it´s pregnat?"
"Go away dont bother Robin" Starfire was helping Robin, she fly with him.
In some place about some miles from the Teen Titans tower
A small dark hole was expulsing Elrick Blood, now he´s wondering how to find that Robin guy, then an old newspaper impact into his face.
"Well what have whe here" said the detective, he was reading about the court and a possible sentence for Robin. Then he saw a box with the news of today, he reads that it was today when the court will conclude
"What that its for today i need to hurry up" said Blood, then he saw far away the building in T form
"I wonder if those Titans live in that building?"
To be continue.
Well did this chapter got better than the other? I want to know my other english mistakes I decided to put some RobinxStarfire relations I want to thank Phoenix´s Soul for the help of some of my doubts