I hope that more people read the fic, and i hope this chapter will like it. I was thinking to put some Robin and Star relations. I put some little changes in th other chapters
The Truth in not around the corner
CHAPTER 3: Metting the accused
Elrick Blood was looking the building
"I hope im rigth" but then someone was calling him
"Hey you there" said Strafire looking the guy
"Hey who are you and what are you doing" said Robin looking suspiciously
"My name it´s Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Nothing to do of Brother Blood" ask Robin
"What no i dont have brothers"
Strafire laughed
"That was funny" said Starfire
"Im here to help you Robin, i was hired to probe your innocence"
"Who hired you?" ask Robin
"Well i dont know who was but he said to be youre fan number one"
"I know who Larry"
Then the other Titans came
"Hey buddy why didnt you wait for us" said Cyborg
"Who´s the guy" said BB
"My name it´s Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Nothing to do of Brother Blood" said Cyborg angrily
"No i dont have brothers"
"JA JA JA thats was soooo funny" said Beast Boy
"Better than Beast Boy jokes" said Raven
"HEY"
"He is here to help me in my innocence, but thanks but we dont need youre help"
"Well i cant accept a no as an answer, i will do my mision whatever its"
"Look im a detective to, i dont need the help of another detective except from Batman"
"Robin i think that it will be usefull his help" said Starfire convince Robin that he need a little help
"Yeah remeber what the judge said, you dont belong with the Titans anymore, until there probes to demostrate your innocense"
"We are going to find the reponsable of this confusion" said BB
"Or trap" said Raven
"Well Titans i hope you well get something, but for now on, i will work alone, i mean with you Brother Blood i mean Elrick Blood"
"But Robin were did you gonna stay?" ask Starfire
"Dont worry Batman already had a place were i could live, and i will working too to find that strange guy that i beat he is the responsable of rapping Jinx and all this confusion and change the veredict of the jury if they think im guilty" said Robin
"What youre not in a sentence now?" said E.B.
"No the jury sade that they need time to think about the veredcit and i only got a week before the day i go to the court again" said Robin
"Well let´s go to work now we dont have much time to"
"But first i need to change my clothes"
"For what" said the rest of the titans
"In the hotel in registered as Dick Grayson, not Robin"
"One of youre identities"
"Yes"
In other part of the city, Jinx was walking and many people were staring at her, they knew that she is the girl who sue Robin, but Jinx doesnt care what they think she only wants to see Robin paying his crime.
"Soon Robin you will pay" said Jinx with anger and sadness
"Hey youre Jinx right the girl who sue Robin" said a guy who almost receive some hexes
"Dont talk to me"
In other part of the city near to a Lab, two people dressed in black and with dark mask were preparing to rob the lab.
"Tell me, what are doing here" said a voice like Terra
"Dont you get it, we need some chemicals and scientific artifact, or were not gonna survive" said a voice like Robin
"I prefer using that antigerms spraycan"
Back to the T tower
"Well im ready" said Robin who is now dressed like a normal teen
"Oh Robin how i will miss you" said Starfire hugging Robin and kiss his left cheek
"I will miss you to, but dont worry i hope this situation end early"
"It would end early if you move on" said E.B. Robin it was about to leave but then Star
"Wait" Starfire kiss Robin in his lips Robin was blushing, E.B. was looking in other part, because he dont want to interrup personal moments, the other titans were in shock, they dont believe what is happening
"But why did you...?"
"Its your lucky kiss, i hope it works" said Starfire
"I hope so to" said Robin
Then the alarm sound
"There is a robbery in a Lab" said Cyborg
"We most go now, im sorry that you cant go with us"
"But we promise you, to rpobe your innocence Robin"
"Thanks see you later" said Robin now traveling with Elrick Blood
Meanwhile in the HIVE
"What you wanna quit" said Gizmo
"Why" said Mammoth
"I dont want to be a criminal anymore i just want a change in my life" said Jinx
"The boss gonna be mad" said Mammoth
"I dont care"
"But were you gonna live" said Gizmo
"Thats my problem and dont interfere" said Jinx who decided lo leave the HAEYP
After an hour (Back to Robin and Elrick Blood)
Both they were walking in the street
"Hey Dick who is the girl who kissed you its youre girlfriend"
"Her name its Strafire and no she is not my girlfriend"
"And what about the kiss?" said with an expresion saying 'you casanova'
"I think its part of her culture you know some of the habits were she belongs"
"Can you tell what happend in the days when you was in the court" ask Elrick Blood
"I tell you later when we get into the hotel" said Robin
"Hey look its Jinx"
"What" Robin look at Jinx with her sad expresion 'Lucky that im not in my suit' said Robinin his mind feeling lucky to be Dick Grayson
"Hey you are Jinx right" said E.B.
Then Jinx attack them but without hurting them.
"Hey calm down, what do we do, to make you mad and attack us?" said Robin
"I dont want to talk to anyone"
"Jinx we know how that Robin hurt you" said
"What" said Robin 'what he is up to?, what its his plan?'
"You dont know nothing, you dont know what he did to me" said Jinx with more tears
"Well maybe i wanst in there to see how he was hurting you, but we can help you" sais EB
"In what"
"Try to probe that Robbin its guilty"
"What" said Robin 'who sides are you in?'
Jinx was thinking about what they offering to her, and wipping away her tears
"I dont need any help, i had a lawyer and other people that can probe that he his the responsible"
"But some more help could make the diference, besides we wont earn you, we just wan´t to help you in anything beacuse i know what you are passing through"
"Well if you really want to help me, i need a place to stay" said Jinx
To be continue.
Well how its my english what english mistakes i done?
NEXT CHAPTER Metting the victim
The Truth in not around the corner
CHAPTER 3: Metting the accused
Elrick Blood was looking the building
"I hope im rigth" but then someone was calling him
"Hey you there" said Strafire looking the guy
"Hey who are you and what are you doing" said Robin looking suspiciously
"My name it´s Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Nothing to do of Brother Blood" ask Robin
"What no i dont have brothers"
Strafire laughed
"That was funny" said Starfire
"Im here to help you Robin, i was hired to probe your innocence"
"Who hired you?" ask Robin
"Well i dont know who was but he said to be youre fan number one"
"I know who Larry"
Then the other Titans came
"Hey buddy why didnt you wait for us" said Cyborg
"Who´s the guy" said BB
"My name it´s Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Nothing to do of Brother Blood" said Cyborg angrily
"No i dont have brothers"
"JA JA JA thats was soooo funny" said Beast Boy
"Better than Beast Boy jokes" said Raven
"HEY"
"He is here to help me in my innocence, but thanks but we dont need youre help"
"Well i cant accept a no as an answer, i will do my mision whatever its"
"Look im a detective to, i dont need the help of another detective except from Batman"
"Robin i think that it will be usefull his help" said Starfire convince Robin that he need a little help
"Yeah remeber what the judge said, you dont belong with the Titans anymore, until there probes to demostrate your innocense"
"We are going to find the reponsable of this confusion" said BB
"Or trap" said Raven
"Well Titans i hope you well get something, but for now on, i will work alone, i mean with you Brother Blood i mean Elrick Blood"
"But Robin were did you gonna stay?" ask Starfire
"Dont worry Batman already had a place were i could live, and i will working too to find that strange guy that i beat he is the responsable of rapping Jinx and all this confusion and change the veredict of the jury if they think im guilty" said Robin
"What youre not in a sentence now?" said E.B.
"No the jury sade that they need time to think about the veredcit and i only got a week before the day i go to the court again" said Robin
"Well let´s go to work now we dont have much time to"
"But first i need to change my clothes"
"For what" said the rest of the titans
"In the hotel in registered as Dick Grayson, not Robin"
"One of youre identities"
"Yes"
In other part of the city, Jinx was walking and many people were staring at her, they knew that she is the girl who sue Robin, but Jinx doesnt care what they think she only wants to see Robin paying his crime.
"Soon Robin you will pay" said Jinx with anger and sadness
"Hey youre Jinx right the girl who sue Robin" said a guy who almost receive some hexes
"Dont talk to me"
In other part of the city near to a Lab, two people dressed in black and with dark mask were preparing to rob the lab.
"Tell me, what are doing here" said a voice like Terra
"Dont you get it, we need some chemicals and scientific artifact, or were not gonna survive" said a voice like Robin
"I prefer using that antigerms spraycan"
Back to the T tower
"Well im ready" said Robin who is now dressed like a normal teen
"Oh Robin how i will miss you" said Starfire hugging Robin and kiss his left cheek
"I will miss you to, but dont worry i hope this situation end early"
"It would end early if you move on" said E.B. Robin it was about to leave but then Star
"Wait" Starfire kiss Robin in his lips Robin was blushing, E.B. was looking in other part, because he dont want to interrup personal moments, the other titans were in shock, they dont believe what is happening
"But why did you...?"
"Its your lucky kiss, i hope it works" said Starfire
"I hope so to" said Robin
Then the alarm sound
"There is a robbery in a Lab" said Cyborg
"We most go now, im sorry that you cant go with us"
"But we promise you, to rpobe your innocence Robin"
"Thanks see you later" said Robin now traveling with Elrick Blood
Meanwhile in the HIVE
"What you wanna quit" said Gizmo
"Why" said Mammoth
"I dont want to be a criminal anymore i just want a change in my life" said Jinx
"The boss gonna be mad" said Mammoth
"I dont care"
"But were you gonna live" said Gizmo
"Thats my problem and dont interfere" said Jinx who decided lo leave the HAEYP
After an hour (Back to Robin and Elrick Blood)
Both they were walking in the street
"Hey Dick who is the girl who kissed you its youre girlfriend"
"Her name its Strafire and no she is not my girlfriend"
"And what about the kiss?" said with an expresion saying 'you casanova'
"I think its part of her culture you know some of the habits were she belongs"
"Can you tell what happend in the days when you was in the court" ask Elrick Blood
"I tell you later when we get into the hotel" said Robin
"Hey look its Jinx"
"What" Robin look at Jinx with her sad expresion 'Lucky that im not in my suit' said Robinin his mind feeling lucky to be Dick Grayson
"Hey you are Jinx right" said E.B.
Then Jinx attack them but without hurting them.
"Hey calm down, what do we do, to make you mad and attack us?" said Robin
"I dont want to talk to anyone"
"Jinx we know how that Robin hurt you" said
"What" said Robin 'what he is up to?, what its his plan?'
"You dont know nothing, you dont know what he did to me" said Jinx with more tears
"Well maybe i wanst in there to see how he was hurting you, but we can help you" sais EB
"In what"
"Try to probe that Robbin its guilty"
"What" said Robin 'who sides are you in?'
Jinx was thinking about what they offering to her, and wipping away her tears
"I dont need any help, i had a lawyer and other people that can probe that he his the responsible"
"But some more help could make the diference, besides we wont earn you, we just wan´t to help you in anything beacuse i know what you are passing through"
"Well if you really want to help me, i need a place to stay" said Jinx
To be continue.
Well how its my english what english mistakes i done?
NEXT CHAPTER Metting the victim