Im still waiting to heard my english mistakes, and i hope you enjoy this part. What this fics needs to be good? I made some change in the last chapter
THE TRUTH IS NOT AROUND THE CORNER
Chapter 4: Metting the victim
"Whata curious situation, we were going to a hotel, i hope you can join us" said Elrick Blood
"You mean live with you" Jinx saying nervuosly
"What Elrick what are you doing" said Robin
"Well if you dont wanted i understand you"
"No wait i accept"
"Well let me introduce myself, im Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Humm"
"If youre gonna said something about Brother Blood, im nothing to do of him, i not even know him"
"How did you"
"Youre the third person who will ask me?"
"And im Dick Grayson" said Robin who voice who paralyse Jinx
"You, You" said Jinx
"What" 'Oh No she found out'
"You you voice sounds like him"
"Like who?" ask Robin
"Like Robin"
"Well him not him" Robin as to said something, or he will be discovered
"Yeah you right" said Jinx calming down, she notice that the Dick was a handsome guy, wiht his blackjeans, his whiteshirt with the names of some rockbands, and hair like of a popstar
"That Robin has an awfull hair, but you look cute with that style"
'What, what its wrong with my hairstyle, well i thank that Elrick for the advice of changing my hair style, if i didnt maybe she could recognize me'
Meanwhile in the Lab
"What happen" said Cyborg looking the ab that was in ruins
"Who did this" said Strafire
"Some teenagers in black, came and stold some chemicals and scientific instruments" said an officer
"Can you describe us theyre charactheristics" said Raven
"Well theyre faces was covered by black masks and that all what i can tell"
"And what about youre security cameras?" said Beast Boy
"For some strange reason they dont work"
"Can you give us a list of what they stold" said Cyborg
"Yes i have"
"That´s strange this is the third Laboratory that its robbed in a week" said Raven
"And this time thats the only description that we had" said Beast Boy
"And the description of the criminals its the same" said Starfire
"I think theres something about those two and the guy who saw Robin" said Cyborg
"A connection?" said Beast Boy
"Yes and someone is planing something, but what" said Cyborg
"But why they make guilty Robin for some crime that he didnt do it" ask Starfire
"Maybe if will capture one of them, we could have some anzwers" said Raven
More of an half hour later
The three were in the hotel, Jinx was sitting in the bed. She still dont beleive that she is in a 5 stars hotel and without paying nothing
"If you want sleep do it, we will back in an two hours, we have some important things"
"I hope se you two sooner"
Then the boys got out and they were heading to the roof
At the hotel roof
"Okay Elrick what its all this, what are you planing or most important whos side are you in"
"Calm down Rob, it´s just i always look in the two faces of the coin"
"You mean you want to heard Jinx ´s version" said Robin
"Yes i just want to compare and decide what its true an what not"
"And how could you know the difference"
"Believe me i had a lot experience even if im 20 years old"
"Really?" ask Robin
"Really, tell me Robin why someone wants to rape Jinx and make you guilty"
"I think that someone want to ruin my reputation or destroy my image as a superheroe and as a Titan"
"Now can you tell me what happen when you was in the court"
"Maybe i will tell you the maybe when i was arrested"
I hope finish this chapter tomorrow
THE TRUTH IS NOT AROUND THE CORNER
Chapter 4: Metting the victim
"Whata curious situation, we were going to a hotel, i hope you can join us" said Elrick Blood
"You mean live with you" Jinx saying nervuosly
"What Elrick what are you doing" said Robin
"Well if you dont wanted i understand you"
"No wait i accept"
"Well let me introduce myself, im Blood, Elrick Blood"
"Humm"
"If youre gonna said something about Brother Blood, im nothing to do of him, i not even know him"
"How did you"
"Youre the third person who will ask me?"
"And im Dick Grayson" said Robin who voice who paralyse Jinx
"You, You" said Jinx
"What" 'Oh No she found out'
"You you voice sounds like him"
"Like who?" ask Robin
"Like Robin"
"Well him not him" Robin as to said something, or he will be discovered
"Yeah you right" said Jinx calming down, she notice that the Dick was a handsome guy, wiht his blackjeans, his whiteshirt with the names of some rockbands, and hair like of a popstar
"That Robin has an awfull hair, but you look cute with that style"
'What, what its wrong with my hairstyle, well i thank that Elrick for the advice of changing my hair style, if i didnt maybe she could recognize me'
Meanwhile in the Lab
"What happen" said Cyborg looking the ab that was in ruins
"Who did this" said Strafire
"Some teenagers in black, came and stold some chemicals and scientific instruments" said an officer
"Can you describe us theyre charactheristics" said Raven
"Well theyre faces was covered by black masks and that all what i can tell"
"And what about youre security cameras?" said Beast Boy
"For some strange reason they dont work"
"Can you give us a list of what they stold" said Cyborg
"Yes i have"
"That´s strange this is the third Laboratory that its robbed in a week" said Raven
"And this time thats the only description that we had" said Beast Boy
"And the description of the criminals its the same" said Starfire
"I think theres something about those two and the guy who saw Robin" said Cyborg
"A connection?" said Beast Boy
"Yes and someone is planing something, but what" said Cyborg
"But why they make guilty Robin for some crime that he didnt do it" ask Starfire
"Maybe if will capture one of them, we could have some anzwers" said Raven
More of an half hour later
The three were in the hotel, Jinx was sitting in the bed. She still dont beleive that she is in a 5 stars hotel and without paying nothing
"If you want sleep do it, we will back in an two hours, we have some important things"
"I hope se you two sooner"
Then the boys got out and they were heading to the roof
At the hotel roof
"Okay Elrick what its all this, what are you planing or most important whos side are you in"
"Calm down Rob, it´s just i always look in the two faces of the coin"
"You mean you want to heard Jinx ´s version" said Robin
"Yes i just want to compare and decide what its true an what not"
"And how could you know the difference"
"Believe me i had a lot experience even if im 20 years old"
"Really?" ask Robin
"Really, tell me Robin why someone wants to rape Jinx and make you guilty"
"I think that someone want to ruin my reputation or destroy my image as a superheroe and as a Titan"
"Now can you tell me what happen when you was in the court"
"Maybe i will tell you the maybe when i was arrested"
I hope finish this chapter tomorrow