Okay peoples I got reviews so I am going to continue. But first just a few
mentions:
CeNaZLiLDiVa: To be honest I didn't really think it was that good an idea at first. It just popped into my head so I used it. And yeah it is fun to write about 'cos this way I can take my two favourite characters and work them together. Dream come true. Though I do think I'll be adding another one of my favourite characters into the mix eventually
Lisa: Thanks a lot for you're brief but –I'm sure- heartfelt review. I'll try to keep it up to the same calibre as chapter 1
RemainNameless: You say the story is "awesome" would you say its Mike Awesome? Lol. Thanks for the compliment. If you wanna know what'll happen next then you'll need to read on, and as for saying that you wish there were more stories like this, that would mean there'd need to be more me's. But as Jericho said in his originals song "You won't ever be me" Not that I'm implying you'd want to be me dude.
Anyway On to the story, no crap wait I have something else to say. I think I need a tester, you know someone to read through it before I put it up on ff.net, tell me in your reviews if you want to be the person with that job, though it would slow down the writing process its all just to make a better story.
ON WITH THE FIC!!!!
WELCOME TO MONDAY NIGHTS
Chap 2.
Evolutions music blared through the Titantron™ as the three senior members ambled down to the ring in their usual, cocky, manner. Hunter and Flair ambled down to the ring seemingly ignoring the fans whilst Orton played to the crowds raising his arms and, as usual, smirking. Hunter took to the mike but as soon as he was about to talk the "You tapped out" chants started.
Hunter gave them a minute to die down then raised the mike and said, "We have some good news and some bad news. The bad news first though. As from now Evolution has been split up. We no longer have our 'cohort' David Batista. In a long war fought with Kurt Angle, Batista has been moved to Smackdown."
Hunter gave the crowd a minute to calm down. Some of them were boo-ing and others were cheering the majority, however, were chanting "Smackdown sucks" over and over again. Once again Hunter took to the mike.
"The good news however is that Evolution hasn't been reduced to a 3-man team. Let me introduce to you, the newest member of Evolution... JOHN CENA!"
* * * John was standing behind the curtain waiting for his cue. Then when his music started he was about to step forward, but one of the crew held their arm out to stop him for a few seconds to build up the crowd and then moved his arm and pushed him lightly on the beg to show him to go out. Cena ran out on full steam and raised his arms into the wordlife horns while running to the edge of the platform. He ran to the other side doing the same.
The crowd was giving him a mixed reception. A lot of the crowd had seen him on Smackdown! and were anxious to see what he could do on Raw. But many fans were upset that Batista had to leave and saw him as an intruder.
Cena ignored the boos and worked his way down to the ring. He sidled over to Orton whilst dusting his shoulder and clasped his hand, then he moved over to Hunter and they punched each others chest, finally he walked over to Flair and slapped each others hand whilst yelling "Whoo" all over the ring.
Cena then caught the mike that Hunter had tossed to him and signalled for the crowd to quieten.
"Yo yo yo chill chill... You all now Me, I'm here to represent, I'm gonna kick ass till my custom knucks get bent. I'm here in Evolution, the dominating force. Now that I've got the Paid, laid, made treatment, I'm gonna get me a Porsche. I'm here with Flair, Triple H and my man Orton, not that they need help, but we'll give some heads a sortin'. You can expect to see many great things while I'm here on Raw. For one that title's gonna be leaving Benoit. All you superstars are gonna be knocked on the jaw. C'mon crowd chant it loud 'WE'RE ON RAW!' ".
Orton looked on during all of this. He had to admit he admired Cena's control of the mike. He has only been on the show for five minutes and he has already made himself a fan-favourite. And that includes all the people that booed him.
Cena through the mike over to Flair and as he was about to speak when Benoit's Music blared. He came out with Shelton Benjamin came out along with him. Benoit brought a mike to his lips and said, "So you're here too Cena? I like that, but don't think that you really are going to get my title. I've grown accustomed to the weight around my waist, and nobodies gonna take that from me."
Cena picked up the mike and said, "Do you really think you have a choice in the matter. I am going to be the number one contender and after that, I am going to be The World Heavyweight Champion."
Benoit looked at him for a minute with an un-readable expression. Then he once again spoke into the mike. "So you think you're good enough then. Well I have a proposal for you're first match on Raw. You, John Cena, The Untouchable, against me, Chris Benoit, and Shelton Benjamin."
There was a gentle cheer from the crowd. They liked what they were hearing. But then Orton took a mike and said, "No no no, I don't like it. It's missing something. It's missing thunder, pizzazz, kaching it's missing, Me. So make it a tag match. Or are you afraid to be extinguished by The Legend Killer and the Legend in the making? Benoit took the mike and said, "I'm game."
Those two simple words made the crowd explode. Cheers could be heard from outside the arena as the fans got out of their seats and cheered as hard as they could. In this tumult Benoit and Benjamin backed away through the Titantron and Evolution soaked up the applause. This was going to be a match that no-one would forget in a while.
* * *
Once they were back in the locker room they collapsed on the sofas in there and collectively sighed. Orton got up and walked over to a mini-fridge and pulled out four cans of Cream Soda. He tossed them to his partners but stopped when he was about to throw one at Cena. Instead he walked over and stood in front of him. And handing him his can. He broke the seal on his can and Cena did like wise. They banged cans together and said "Cheers" and drank deeply.
After that they watched the show on the TV in their room. It was the usual stuff. "I disagree with you, fight you, I win" you know. Then the stage crew guy knocked on the door and yelled in for Orton and Cena to "Get ready!"
They put on the usual gear and Cena turned to Orton. But he noticed something strange. Instead of walking out in trunks only like he normally does Orton was wearing a deep blue cowboy hat in the same colour as his trunks.(AN~Like the Undertaker's one at Wrestlemania XX)
"I am the son and Grandson of the two great Cowboy Bob Ortons!" He said wearing a fake shocked look on his face. "I have to dress accordingly." He said while looking at himself in the mirror to make sure the hat was sitting right.
"Now... Let's go"
As they walked down the corridor towards the ring entrance they walked passed the Diva locker room. They got many appreciative whistles and Cena got a "Look at that's" for wearing his new trunks. Orton was wearing a smirk and apart from that he showed no signs of hearing them.
"Get used to that," he said without looking at Cena, "You're going to be getting it far more than you would expect these days, now you're part of Evolution."
They walked on until they reached the curtain for the ring entrance and waited for their cue. A stage crew guy said "Okay guys go now" and they stepped out under the lights of the Raw arena.
Well what did you think of that Chapter? Hopefully you'll have liked it. Please review I do appreciate them, but if you're going to point out the bad in my fic, please make it constructive. I just wanna make myself better. Cheers. R & R
CeNaZLiLDiVa: To be honest I didn't really think it was that good an idea at first. It just popped into my head so I used it. And yeah it is fun to write about 'cos this way I can take my two favourite characters and work them together. Dream come true. Though I do think I'll be adding another one of my favourite characters into the mix eventually
Lisa: Thanks a lot for you're brief but –I'm sure- heartfelt review. I'll try to keep it up to the same calibre as chapter 1
RemainNameless: You say the story is "awesome" would you say its Mike Awesome? Lol. Thanks for the compliment. If you wanna know what'll happen next then you'll need to read on, and as for saying that you wish there were more stories like this, that would mean there'd need to be more me's. But as Jericho said in his originals song "You won't ever be me" Not that I'm implying you'd want to be me dude.
Anyway On to the story, no crap wait I have something else to say. I think I need a tester, you know someone to read through it before I put it up on ff.net, tell me in your reviews if you want to be the person with that job, though it would slow down the writing process its all just to make a better story.
ON WITH THE FIC!!!!
WELCOME TO MONDAY NIGHTS
Chap 2.
Evolutions music blared through the Titantron™ as the three senior members ambled down to the ring in their usual, cocky, manner. Hunter and Flair ambled down to the ring seemingly ignoring the fans whilst Orton played to the crowds raising his arms and, as usual, smirking. Hunter took to the mike but as soon as he was about to talk the "You tapped out" chants started.
Hunter gave them a minute to die down then raised the mike and said, "We have some good news and some bad news. The bad news first though. As from now Evolution has been split up. We no longer have our 'cohort' David Batista. In a long war fought with Kurt Angle, Batista has been moved to Smackdown."
Hunter gave the crowd a minute to calm down. Some of them were boo-ing and others were cheering the majority, however, were chanting "Smackdown sucks" over and over again. Once again Hunter took to the mike.
"The good news however is that Evolution hasn't been reduced to a 3-man team. Let me introduce to you, the newest member of Evolution... JOHN CENA!"
* * * John was standing behind the curtain waiting for his cue. Then when his music started he was about to step forward, but one of the crew held their arm out to stop him for a few seconds to build up the crowd and then moved his arm and pushed him lightly on the beg to show him to go out. Cena ran out on full steam and raised his arms into the wordlife horns while running to the edge of the platform. He ran to the other side doing the same.
The crowd was giving him a mixed reception. A lot of the crowd had seen him on Smackdown! and were anxious to see what he could do on Raw. But many fans were upset that Batista had to leave and saw him as an intruder.
Cena ignored the boos and worked his way down to the ring. He sidled over to Orton whilst dusting his shoulder and clasped his hand, then he moved over to Hunter and they punched each others chest, finally he walked over to Flair and slapped each others hand whilst yelling "Whoo" all over the ring.
Cena then caught the mike that Hunter had tossed to him and signalled for the crowd to quieten.
"Yo yo yo chill chill... You all now Me, I'm here to represent, I'm gonna kick ass till my custom knucks get bent. I'm here in Evolution, the dominating force. Now that I've got the Paid, laid, made treatment, I'm gonna get me a Porsche. I'm here with Flair, Triple H and my man Orton, not that they need help, but we'll give some heads a sortin'. You can expect to see many great things while I'm here on Raw. For one that title's gonna be leaving Benoit. All you superstars are gonna be knocked on the jaw. C'mon crowd chant it loud 'WE'RE ON RAW!' ".
Orton looked on during all of this. He had to admit he admired Cena's control of the mike. He has only been on the show for five minutes and he has already made himself a fan-favourite. And that includes all the people that booed him.
Cena through the mike over to Flair and as he was about to speak when Benoit's Music blared. He came out with Shelton Benjamin came out along with him. Benoit brought a mike to his lips and said, "So you're here too Cena? I like that, but don't think that you really are going to get my title. I've grown accustomed to the weight around my waist, and nobodies gonna take that from me."
Cena picked up the mike and said, "Do you really think you have a choice in the matter. I am going to be the number one contender and after that, I am going to be The World Heavyweight Champion."
Benoit looked at him for a minute with an un-readable expression. Then he once again spoke into the mike. "So you think you're good enough then. Well I have a proposal for you're first match on Raw. You, John Cena, The Untouchable, against me, Chris Benoit, and Shelton Benjamin."
There was a gentle cheer from the crowd. They liked what they were hearing. But then Orton took a mike and said, "No no no, I don't like it. It's missing something. It's missing thunder, pizzazz, kaching it's missing, Me. So make it a tag match. Or are you afraid to be extinguished by The Legend Killer and the Legend in the making? Benoit took the mike and said, "I'm game."
Those two simple words made the crowd explode. Cheers could be heard from outside the arena as the fans got out of their seats and cheered as hard as they could. In this tumult Benoit and Benjamin backed away through the Titantron and Evolution soaked up the applause. This was going to be a match that no-one would forget in a while.
* * *
Once they were back in the locker room they collapsed on the sofas in there and collectively sighed. Orton got up and walked over to a mini-fridge and pulled out four cans of Cream Soda. He tossed them to his partners but stopped when he was about to throw one at Cena. Instead he walked over and stood in front of him. And handing him his can. He broke the seal on his can and Cena did like wise. They banged cans together and said "Cheers" and drank deeply.
After that they watched the show on the TV in their room. It was the usual stuff. "I disagree with you, fight you, I win" you know. Then the stage crew guy knocked on the door and yelled in for Orton and Cena to "Get ready!"
They put on the usual gear and Cena turned to Orton. But he noticed something strange. Instead of walking out in trunks only like he normally does Orton was wearing a deep blue cowboy hat in the same colour as his trunks.(AN~Like the Undertaker's one at Wrestlemania XX)
"I am the son and Grandson of the two great Cowboy Bob Ortons!" He said wearing a fake shocked look on his face. "I have to dress accordingly." He said while looking at himself in the mirror to make sure the hat was sitting right.
"Now... Let's go"
As they walked down the corridor towards the ring entrance they walked passed the Diva locker room. They got many appreciative whistles and Cena got a "Look at that's" for wearing his new trunks. Orton was wearing a smirk and apart from that he showed no signs of hearing them.
"Get used to that," he said without looking at Cena, "You're going to be getting it far more than you would expect these days, now you're part of Evolution."
They walked on until they reached the curtain for the ring entrance and waited for their cue. A stage crew guy said "Okay guys go now" and they stepped out under the lights of the Raw arena.
Well what did you think of that Chapter? Hopefully you'll have liked it. Please review I do appreciate them, but if you're going to point out the bad in my fic, please make it constructive. I just wanna make myself better. Cheers. R & R