Lazuli: Thanks for the 'absolutely awesome' don't think I've had one of
them before :o) Hope you like this one just the same! Theres only 5 couples
left to do so Jez and Morgead will be coming soon.
DragonWriter :o) Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked :o)
Tamashii: L.J.Smith has inspired me loads and I think I know all her books of by heart so it was easy to combine her work in my own, and I think it adds a more realistic edge. :o) Thanks for the review, Maggie and Delos should be soon.
Kyla: I thought the smaller ones had more intensity too and yea you were right about how Mare would only have a hazy picture left of Ash, but since they were indeed in each others minds I didn't know how she would be able to picture him . . .but never mind! I found it hard to write Mare thinking about Ash when he wasn't there, I hope I did ok with this one :o) I still might keep them longer but in the same format as the first ones.
Anonymous: I'm glad you liked them both :o) Thanks for the review it was greatly appreciated-here's the update you wanted.
Anaita Redfern: I really loved your review, when I read it I couldn't help but smile :o) Thanks and I hope you like this one
Amy: I'm sorry that Mare's was sad . . . I didn't mean for it to be, I guess this one will be a little sad too. I guarantee that the others will be back to being happy, happy, HAPPY!!! :o)
Lady Lylia: I'm happy that you liked them and I hope you like the rest :o) I'll either be doing Jez and Morgead next or Maggie and Delos . . .it depends on how many people want witch . . .
Anonymous: here's the update that you wanted :o) hope you like
THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS. IT'S THE REVIEWS FROM YOU THAT KEEP ME WRITING :o)
ASH
Whenever I close my eyes I see her face. Her image has been imprinted in my mind. I could never forget the way she looks and I wouldn't want too. She is so beautiful-dark shiny hair reflecting the pale moonlight, clear blue eyes reflecting astonishment, wonder and then love, full rosy lips, the kind you just want to kiss and a body . . . a body that I would die a thousand deaths just to touch.
That's not all I love about her though. She's strong-willed and stubborn to an art, she's caring and loyal, intelligent and brave, she's witty and can handle me at my worst, but most of all she loves me too.
She loves me! After all the things I have said and done . . . she still loves me. I know she only loves me because of the soulmate bond, but maybe someday, when I've righted my wrongs . . .
If Quinn could hear me now he'd die with laughter.
Who would have ever thought, that me, Ash Redfern, would be a romantic at heart.
I guess I always have been- I study the stars, and I read Shakespeare, not to mention I know what a woman wants and what she most desires.
Well I used too. I used to know what flirtatious lines to use on any girl and I could charm the most frozen of hearts. But now I'm in love and this is a whole new territory to me. I ache and hurt when she's not around- its like a permanent hole in my heart. I find myself distracted and unable to look at other girls, and if I do I always compare them to Mary-Lynnette and they could never compete with her true beauty.
It's killing me not knowing what she's doing. Is she safe? Is she happy right now? Would she be sitting on that small hill gazing at the stars?
Looking up at the night sky I cant help but lock my eyes on the blazing point of light in the South-Vega, I remember Mare telling me the name as we sat gazing up at the stars. One of the first times we didn't argue . . . it was nice. More than nice actually.
I start the engine of my car again and put my foot down harshly on the accelerator. Concentrating my mind fully on driving I try to block out all thoughts and images of Mary-Lynnette but I know it won't last for long. And I'm right.
Pictures of her flood my mind and I find it hard to concentrate on the road. Shaking my head to clear them I suddenly spot an old lodge ahead. It looks deserted but I know better. I can hear the music and when I pull my car closer I see the black design on the door.
I cant help but smile as I climb out my car and walk towards the door. A scruffy-looking dog stares at me as I approach, but it doesn't bark or make a noise . . . it knows better than that!
I only have to state my name to the werewolf behind the door before he quickly opens it and ushers me in, and as I walk down the stairs and enter the dimly lit club I know that this is the distraction that I need. I let the loud pulsating music wash over me as I make my way over to the bar and for once my mind remains clear.
Maybe tonight wont be that bad.
**WELL WHO DO YOU WANT NEXT? GILLIAN? DAVID? THEA? ERIC? DELOS? MAGGY? JEZ? MORGEAD? KELLER? GALEN?**
**~~WELL LET ME KNOW AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF THIS ONE~~**
DragonWriter :o) Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked :o)
Tamashii: L.J.Smith has inspired me loads and I think I know all her books of by heart so it was easy to combine her work in my own, and I think it adds a more realistic edge. :o) Thanks for the review, Maggie and Delos should be soon.
Kyla: I thought the smaller ones had more intensity too and yea you were right about how Mare would only have a hazy picture left of Ash, but since they were indeed in each others minds I didn't know how she would be able to picture him . . .but never mind! I found it hard to write Mare thinking about Ash when he wasn't there, I hope I did ok with this one :o) I still might keep them longer but in the same format as the first ones.
Anonymous: I'm glad you liked them both :o) Thanks for the review it was greatly appreciated-here's the update you wanted.
Anaita Redfern: I really loved your review, when I read it I couldn't help but smile :o) Thanks and I hope you like this one
Amy: I'm sorry that Mare's was sad . . . I didn't mean for it to be, I guess this one will be a little sad too. I guarantee that the others will be back to being happy, happy, HAPPY!!! :o)
Lady Lylia: I'm happy that you liked them and I hope you like the rest :o) I'll either be doing Jez and Morgead next or Maggie and Delos . . .it depends on how many people want witch . . .
Anonymous: here's the update that you wanted :o) hope you like
THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS. IT'S THE REVIEWS FROM YOU THAT KEEP ME WRITING :o)
ASH
Whenever I close my eyes I see her face. Her image has been imprinted in my mind. I could never forget the way she looks and I wouldn't want too. She is so beautiful-dark shiny hair reflecting the pale moonlight, clear blue eyes reflecting astonishment, wonder and then love, full rosy lips, the kind you just want to kiss and a body . . . a body that I would die a thousand deaths just to touch.
That's not all I love about her though. She's strong-willed and stubborn to an art, she's caring and loyal, intelligent and brave, she's witty and can handle me at my worst, but most of all she loves me too.
She loves me! After all the things I have said and done . . . she still loves me. I know she only loves me because of the soulmate bond, but maybe someday, when I've righted my wrongs . . .
If Quinn could hear me now he'd die with laughter.
Who would have ever thought, that me, Ash Redfern, would be a romantic at heart.
I guess I always have been- I study the stars, and I read Shakespeare, not to mention I know what a woman wants and what she most desires.
Well I used too. I used to know what flirtatious lines to use on any girl and I could charm the most frozen of hearts. But now I'm in love and this is a whole new territory to me. I ache and hurt when she's not around- its like a permanent hole in my heart. I find myself distracted and unable to look at other girls, and if I do I always compare them to Mary-Lynnette and they could never compete with her true beauty.
It's killing me not knowing what she's doing. Is she safe? Is she happy right now? Would she be sitting on that small hill gazing at the stars?
Looking up at the night sky I cant help but lock my eyes on the blazing point of light in the South-Vega, I remember Mare telling me the name as we sat gazing up at the stars. One of the first times we didn't argue . . . it was nice. More than nice actually.
I start the engine of my car again and put my foot down harshly on the accelerator. Concentrating my mind fully on driving I try to block out all thoughts and images of Mary-Lynnette but I know it won't last for long. And I'm right.
Pictures of her flood my mind and I find it hard to concentrate on the road. Shaking my head to clear them I suddenly spot an old lodge ahead. It looks deserted but I know better. I can hear the music and when I pull my car closer I see the black design on the door.
I cant help but smile as I climb out my car and walk towards the door. A scruffy-looking dog stares at me as I approach, but it doesn't bark or make a noise . . . it knows better than that!
I only have to state my name to the werewolf behind the door before he quickly opens it and ushers me in, and as I walk down the stairs and enter the dimly lit club I know that this is the distraction that I need. I let the loud pulsating music wash over me as I make my way over to the bar and for once my mind remains clear.
Maybe tonight wont be that bad.
**WELL WHO DO YOU WANT NEXT? GILLIAN? DAVID? THEA? ERIC? DELOS? MAGGY? JEZ? MORGEAD? KELLER? GALEN?**
**~~WELL LET ME KNOW AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF THIS ONE~~**