Disclaimer: Once again...nods head left and right while stares at the ground Aw, nope. Don't Own Anything of Naruto. Wish I did !!! But I Don't T-T
'Thoughts'
"Talking"
[New Scene]-
{Time}
Rating- well this rating is going to be rated R because of some of the swearing that goes on. Other then that theirs nothing else that's going to happen...
Previously on- Hidden Affections of the Amazing Race
'She looks pretty cute when she's sleeping' Naruto thought.
'Ah! Naruto-kun' Hinata mentally thought, got up and hid behind the any large object she could find. She hid behind Tazuna. When she looked up she didn't know who he was so she let go of the old man, and took a step back. That step back was air, as she leaned back she was falling off of the chariot.
'Oh no!' Naruto thought. "Hinata!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Naruto exclaimed.
-Plays Intro Music (The Amazing Race theme) and shows pic's of each team and their names !!-
Hidden Affections of the Amazing Race
Phase 3: Jealousy, Sadness and Anger
By: PorkyDragon
[Chariot The Path]-
{8:26am}
Naruto called out as he threw one of his hands out to try and catch the falling Hinata. He didn't manage to catch the falling Hinata, so he fell with her but managed to grab hold of her and threw her back onto the chariot safely, at the cost of himself getting hurt.
"Naruto-kun!" Hinata cried as Naruto crunched up into a little ball before the rough impact to the ground. Once he hit the ground large scrapes and bruises were already forming on almost every exposed spot on Narutos body. Wipeout. All Hinata could do was stand and watch Naruto roll and flip on the rocky terrain. Soon after Tazuna had stopped the Chariot, Hinata started bursting out in tears and ran out the back of the chariot to check on the battered up Naruto.
"NARUTO-KUN!!!" Hinata screamed as she lifted his body up and wrapped her arms around Naruto who was unconscious. Her screams of the name Naruto echoed through the forest even Kiba, the one who liked Hinata got worried and jealous at the fact that she was screaming out Naruto's name instead of his.
"Naruto-kun! Daijoubu desu ka?" Hinata cried out as she rested her head against Narutos' shoulder and bawling on his shirt. "NARUTO-KUN!!" Hinata cried out again making a certain Inuzuka more jealous.
[Somewhere out of nowhere in the Country of Wave]-
'Naruto-kun this. Naruto-kun that. That stupid asshole making Hinata cry, once I see him, I'm going to fucking beat his ass down...yes.' The Inuzuka thought of many plots to himself as he stood there.
"Hmm, I wonder what's wrong with Hinata..." Shino said confusedly. Kiba just gave a glaring evil eye at Shino and continued to walk and find a home near the beach and seaside.
[Chariot]-
{8:30am}
Tazuna had a few tears trickle down the side of his face, 'Naruto...' he thought to himself as he picked up the blondes body and carried him over to the carriage. He set him down and checked his heart pause for a beat.
"Is he going to be okay old-man?" Hinata asked curiously as she stared down at Naruto as she was yelling at herself in her mind. 'This is all my fault, why'd I have to be so clumsy.'
"Aye. Don't worry missy. You'll be in the hospitality of my family later" The old said as he sat on the chair and singled to the horses to go.
"Besides...what's your name? And why are you here?" Tazuna questioned as he turned his head fully to his right to see a depressed girl staring down at Naruto. He turned back around and continued to control the horses.
"...I'm...Hi...Hinata, we...we got signed up...for a...promotional race thing, to encourage people to come to Konoha because of the decrease in tourism in Konoha. So we did the race. We had...had to travel to The Country of wave and look for some kid...a kid named...Inari for our next envelope" Hinata mumbled over her breath.
"Inari you say...? My grandson?" Tazuna questioned Hinata as she made a quick shrug.
"Well, you can ask him yourself then...we're here," and with that Tazuna suddenly stopped the chariot and they were in front of a house.
[Some path near...somewhere?]
{8:45am}
"Do you know where your going Gaara?" Temari questioned him, as he just shook his head, left and right...trying to find a path to take. They saw a house with a familiar little patch of blonde hair that they remembered.
'Naruto!' Temari and Gaara both thought.
'Get out of my head! No. You're in my head! Get out...GET OUT... GET OUT!!!' Gaara and Temari yelled at each other in their minds.
"Oh my god. Let's just finish this god damn race together, kay?" Temari asked and started walking to the nearby house. "C'mon, lets ask some people where that person is."
"...Fine..." Gaara replied and walked slowly to Temari.
[Inside Tazunas' House]
{8:49am}
"Let's bring him onto the bed...Hinata" Tazuna said as he was carrying Naruto's arms' and Hinata was holding onto Naruto's two legs.
"Hai!" Hinata remarked as she followed him.
"Who's tha..." the kid paused.
"Naruto nii-san!" The small kid ran up to Naruto, who was still knocked out. "What's wrong with him?" The concerned little kid asked.
"Uh... he just fell...and now he's sleeping..." Hinata said as a cover-up.
"Oh...I see...ill be extra quiet then" The small kid smiled and tiptoed out the door.
"Wait." Hinata commented said before he left.
"What's your name?" Hinata asked as she twiddled her fingers.
"...Inari," the boy said and made his way out of the room. Hinata turned her face back to Naruto and sat on the nearby chair, and buried her head onto the blankets that Naruto was sleeping under.
[Market Place]
{9:00am}
"Hello?" Shino asked randomly to anyone who listened.
"Does anyone know the way to a child name Inari's House?" Kiba yelped out. "Huh...my son Inari? What do you want with him?" a Woman asked.
"Oh. We are doing this race and were susposed to find a kid named Inari to get our next clue..." Kiba quoted from the first route marker they got.
"Oh...he said something about race and envelope but I don't know anything more...here follow me and you can ask him yourself," the woman mentioned to the two as she carried a basket of goods and started walking.
"C'mon Shikamaru, you can look at the clouds later on, I got some information on where that kid is!" Ino remarked as she started dragging him along the ground, as he remained starting at the clouds.
"Are you sure it's the correct information? Or are you just following Kiba?" Shikamaru questioned her motifs.
"Hmmph!" Ino mumbled over her breath as she immediately dropped Shikamaru on the ground and slowly stalked Kiba and Shino.
'...Ugh.............................................girls...' Shikamaru thought over his yawn as he dragged one foot after the other to catch up to his teammate who was already 50 meters ahead of him.
10 meters behind Shikamaru were Chouji and Lee. They overheard the conversation between Shikamaru and Ino and started stalking them.
"Should follow them Neji?" an annoying Tenten asked as she linked one arm around Nejis, turned her head to the left and looked at him.
"Yes, and for the last 129 times. I'm not interested in you, TENTEN! So stop trying to get into my pants!" Neji yelled out aloud shrugging off the linked arm, threw her to the ground and walked away as he left a sobbing pink vested teammate in the quiet crowds of the market. Everyone stared at that kid angrily and confused.
"How could you yell and push someone to the ground, who just likes you more than a friend" an old man commented as he walked up to Neji.
"Leave me alone," was all Neji said as he pushed the elderly man away.
"Hey don't be mean to my dad you little punk," as the man came up to Neji with a rake in his hand.
"I don't think you want to fight me" was the successors remark as he went into a fighting stance and looked into the man's eyes in fury.
'Shit...I can't use any jutsu's here. Fuck...I'll need to bluff it,' as Neji thought as he sensed a presence coming from behind. He looked around and was embraced by a person with a pink vest and 2 little bulbs on her head (sort of like Princess Leia from Star Wars 4 and up).
"Stop Neji! Please stop..." a sobbing Tenten asked as she grasped onto Neji's shirt and continued to cry.
"...............hmmph," Neji mumbled as he signaled Tenten to follow him. During the walk Neji kept on thinking about the things that the old man said
They continued to walk as Neji suddenly stopped and leaned on a tree, Tenten followed him and leaned as well.
"Hmm...?" Tenten asked as she was hugged by her fellow teammate in shock.
"I'm sorry...sorry for making you cry, sorry for pushing you to the ground. Sorry for everything bad that I've done to you," Neji calmly spoke into Tenten's ear as she stared blankly into the sky in shock. He sighed and continued to speak, "after what I heard that old man say...I started to think, think about you Tenten."
Tenten blinked her eyes and was out of her little blank out, and started to blush as Neji spoke some more. "I started to feel bad for all of those times that I've hurt you with my words, my actions..." he said as he broke the embrace and stared deep into her black eyes as his arms were still straddled around Tenten's waist as he was contemplating what he was going to say next. Neji closed his eyes and continued his speech to Tenten. "Therefore after all of the thoughts that I've had about everything, I've decided to...I've decided to...I've decided to give you a chance, Tenten" Neji paused and slowly opened his eyes to see Tenten's lips met those of his and their lips locked in a fiery kiss as Neji pinned Tenten to the tree. The moment passed by so slow as both of them enjoyed the moment, when they were done, they opened their eyes and smiled at each other.
"Arigatou, Neji" Tenten commented as she placed another kiss on Neji's lips, rested her head onto his shoulder and placed her arms around his waist, as they enjoyed the simple morning breeze. They saw kids about the same age as them walk by with a look of disgust on their faces.
"GROSS!" A kid with black hair said, opened his mouth, stuck his tounge out and kept putting one finger in and out of the mouth.
"COOOOTIES!" Another black haired kid said as he ran around in circles chirping out the word in a panic.
"Shut up you two. What are you talking about...gross? That guy is so HOT!" One girl said as she slowly made her way towards the two and stopped 2 meters before reaching them.
"Agreed!" Another girl said as she followed the other girl and felt a glaring eye hitting her.
"Don't come near him" Tenten commented as she released Neji's arms around her and pointed a finger towards her.
"Pfft. What will you do?" One of the girls said as they saw Tenten raise a sleeve, and turning her hand into a fist.
"I got an idea, we can use them to lead us to Inari...go along with the act," Neji commented into Tentens ear as Tenten nodded to his comment.
"Sorry about my friend. She just craves me, and my nicely sculpted body...she's very over-protective of me and she doesn't like to share" Neji said as the other two girls started drooling. Tentens jaw dropped as he said that.
"I'd be willing to go on a date with both of you cuties if you could direct me to me long time friend- Inari," Neji remarked as he could see the raging jealousy in Tentens eyes. She walked away crying as the act of it all, but it looked pretty real.
"At least that bitch is gone, eh Neji-KUN!!!" Both of them tugged at Neji's arms, as one of them put a hand inside Neji's shirt and felt his finely shaped body.
'SOOOOOO FUCKING HOT!!!' one of them thought as they both blushed. Neji saw Tenten looking at him behind the tree as she gasped at the scene of both of them touching Neji's skin, which he had never let anyone even get near him...why them? Tenten thought as she felt the many trickles of tears coming down the side of her cheecks.
Neji saw Tenten sitting behind the tree and wanted to know what was wrong with her, he felt a tug on his shirt as he saw that the girls were trying to take his shirt off.
"Please. Direct me to Inari's house, then I shall take it off for you" Neji said sarcastically as both girls jaws drop and started dragging Neji to Inari's house.
"This way!" one girl directed as they both followed.
"Wait!" Neji commanded as both girls suddenly stopped and looked at him?
"Yes? Neji-KUN?" Both girls chirped.
"Hold on," Neji asked as he went back to Tenten. He bent his knees to look at her face, as he was about to see the full image, Tenten gotup and pushed his body to the ground.
"I should of known...fucker..." Tenten mumbled over her crying as she started to walk away.
"Tenten, wait!" Neji commented as he grabbed one of Tentens wrist and pulled her towards him.
"Let go of me!" Tenten screamed while she started hitting him lightly on the chest still crying. Neji closed his eyes and let her head rest on his shoulder.
"I'm sorry, I was just eager to find that kid and would of done anything to get to him. But I clearly forgot about your emotions, Tenten" Neji whispered as he put his forehead onto hers and stared into her eyes for the second time today. Her eyes were still watery from all of the crying, her face covered in mad red, as she wanted to speak but was cut off by Neji placing his lips on his as they shared another kiss. Both girls were confused and mad at themselves more making the couple sad.
"Sorry...Tenten. You win him, we'll still help you get to Inari's if its okay with you" one of the girls asked as she looked at them and nodded.
"Arigatou," Tenten mumbled as she started to drag her feet one after the other.
[Path to Inari's House]
{9:45am}
"Whats wrong?" Neji asked as he saw that she was limping.
"Nothing. Just tired from all..." Tenten couldn't finish her sentence as she was lifted up by Neji and was carried wedding styles, as Neji continued to follow both girls.
"Why...?" Tenten asked as she yawned and leaned her head onto his shoulder, and started fake sleeping to see what he would do.
"Because...ive never felt this way about anyone else...I guess you can say, I love you, Tenten" Neji whispered into Tentens ear as he placed a kiss onto her forehead and continued to walk.
"I love you too, Neji" she whispered to Neji and smiled.
As Tenten and Neji continued to follow the two girls, 2 teams were following them in a distance. Chouji was eating away at his bags of chips that he spent about $60 on as Lee was flushed with pictures of Neji and Tenten, their former teammates smooching.
Tenten twitched as she shivered, as the wind passed by. Neji saw the cold Tenten and placed her to the ground. Took his shirt off. Wrapped it around Tenten as one of the girls were blushing madly at his fine body.
"Stop that! Remember last time we blushed wildly and lusted crazily over his body?" She whispered into her friend's ear.
"So what? I don't care...I'm still going to win him over that whore," she said as she continued staring at his body. As his eyes met hers, she blushed and he just shook his head, looked down at Tenten and continued walking as he smiled at her sleepy face.
[In front of Inaris House]
{10:00am}
"Ohayo old man, do you know where a kid named Inari lives?" Temari questioned the man as he stopped raking and pointed to the route marker.
"...Let's go" Temari said as she ran towards the route marker and saw a kid sitting on a chair taking little sipps on his soup.
"Hey kid? Do you have something for us?" Gaara asked as he stared out to the lake.
"Here..." the little kid walked up to the blood red haired genin and gave him another envelope.
"Arigatou!" Temari commented as she brushed his hair with her free hand and walked away. Inari smiled and went back to his seat and started sipping on more soup.
"Inari! I'm home! There's 2 two people that would like to see you." Tsunami said as she went to water the plants.
"Hey Inari! Got something for us?" Kiba bent down to his level and asked him.
"Uh huh..." Inari said as he handed the envelope to him.
"Inari? Are you full? Theres still some left soup and steak left," Hinata asked as she stepped outside the porch to see Kiba.
"Hi..." Hinata said quietly.
"Why are you making food for him Hinata? Why are you here" Kiba asked as he saw the eyes of Hinata get watery.
"Yes! I'd love some more of your soup and that steak" Inari commented as he rubbed his tummy and drooled for some more.
"Its so tasty!" Inari remarked as he signaled her to put more into his bowl.
"Can you cut it for me too?" Inari asked as Hinata smiled and cut the steak as more tears came down the side of her cheeks as she poured the rest of the soup into his bowl and walked back inside.
"Wait Hinata! What's going on down there? What's that nice smelling food? He said as he rubbed his eyes.
"Na...Naruto-Kun!" Hinata said as she placed the pot on the table and started running towards Naruto who had woken up from his injury with his hand taped up in bandages.
"And why is my hand taped up like this?" Naruto asked as Hinata hugged Naruto as Kiba watched it all.
"Get out of the way Hinata..." Kiba said with rage in his eyes.
"I'm gonna kill that bastard; Naruto for what he did to you, you crying...putting you into pain..." Kiba screamed as he took the knife that Hinata used to cut steak with and charged it at Naruto. Hinata turned around too see Kiba charging at Naruto and her, and she took a stance.
"I'm not moving." Hinata said.
"ILL FUCKING CUT YOU TOO HINATA!!!" Kiba ran at both at them with full speed. When Naruto heard that sentence, he immediately pushed Hinata to the ground and...
{Playing ending music}
[Does some hand seals and screams out, CLIFFHANGER NO JUTSU!]
Well...this episode is finished!!! Yay.....Episode 4 is starting...should be posted soon I guess... I hope all of you people reading this like it so far!
Episode 4- Sorry, no I'm sorry!
Some stuff in epi 4 are:
-ShikaIno Parts (somewhat?)
-SasuSaku Parts...(somewhat also?)
-NaruHina Parts (some)
-No NejiTen parts..there was a lot here and I wanted to even it out
-and the [DETOUR Part] of –the 1st leg- of the race XP!
Author's Response:
Chiisuchine: Yeah...I made it like that...I forgot how she acts afterwards...can you tell me how she acts ! I kinda forgot...sorry! lol
Iluvsasuke: Yeah...don't worry about that eh! Theres some stuff that happens later on that's good... =P
TimeShifter: As you read above. Yes he saves her... and Yes he saves her again from the crazy Kiba (SORRY ALL KIBA FANS....i needed some jealousy in this story too XD)
Cya all my fans (so far...not many though )
.::Porky::.