Lady Tigeress- I do like how I ended chapter one. I thought that it would be interesting to have Heero's daughter be like him in many respects. Oh, that's interesting about the Berlin wall, actually I was thinking about Hitler and how he worked. He even had a youth for Hitler program, but I can't think of the name of it. Thank you for your review.
Bama- How Relena raped Heero will be explained in this chapter. Yes, Heero is stronger than Relena. I know it is icky, but it is necessary to the plot I have worked out in my head. You already mentioned that Heero is stronger than Relena. If I have a messed up mind why do you claim to love me? Thanks for your review.
my spelling may be poor, but I have a point- I already understand that not all stories need a sequel, if you had bothered to even check on my other stories you would have seen that. This is, in fact, my first sequel. Again I have stories with longer chapters, but I wanted to have one with relatively short chapters. I had also started with short chapters because I wasn't sure if I was going to continue War. I understand that you don't like short chapters and usually I would agree with you, but this particular series will have some points which will be strengthened by the length of the chapters. I personally consider your reveiw criticism. I plan to keep writing, no matter what any one thinks. This review isn't a "crappy" review, because it gives me a idea of what some of my other reader's are thinking. Thank you for your frank opinions and review, both of which I truly appreciate.
Mithros- It is nice to see how enthusiastic some of my reviewers are. I don't think that being a philosopher would suit me, as I have a volatile personality and am only mildly interested in philosophy. I'm sorry then that you failed to terrorize me, better luck tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.
Chapter 2
Trowa is with me, as are Nick, Sarah, Heero, Candice, George, and Lucy. But none of those are as important to me as Tro is. Tro is my favorite and closest cousin, if he wasn't with me I would know I was wrong. But now I know I'm right.
Tro is a quiet blond haired boy. He is sweet and gentle, and forever right. When I said he was quiet, I gave the wrong impression, he quieter than quiet. He speaks only when necessary, and sometimes not even then. His blond hair is lighter than mine, it is almost white in fact. He wears it short in the back and long in the front and somehow gelled up. It is something he picked up from his namesake, I think. He is tallish and thin, so thin that he'll look like he will break in half if he bends over. He has bright purple eyes that seem to hide all of his feelings. And he is never wrong...
Don't get me wrong, I love him dearly, but he can be the most annoying boy, or girl for that matter, I know...
It is the fact that he's never wrong that gets me worried. It is something he said today...
He told me how my father was at the end...
He had no way to know that...
He said that R.P. drugged my dad the day before he died, and that's how I came about...
That is the one thing I never understood about me...
My dad was a strong man...
A Gundam pilot...
A trained assassin...
A bodyguard.
He could run for miles...
Pilot for hours...
And box as long as he had a partner...
I never understood how weak frail R.P. managed to do that to my dad...
Especially when he would have objected to it.
Now I know...
Or at least have a possibility of what could have happened.
We're going to try to get R.P. out of power...
I wonder if she was died if people would still follow her ideas...
Her insane, mad, crazy ideas...
Yes, I know that insane, mad, and crazy all mean the same thing, it's called poetic repetition.
Bama- How Relena raped Heero will be explained in this chapter. Yes, Heero is stronger than Relena. I know it is icky, but it is necessary to the plot I have worked out in my head. You already mentioned that Heero is stronger than Relena. If I have a messed up mind why do you claim to love me? Thanks for your review.
my spelling may be poor, but I have a point- I already understand that not all stories need a sequel, if you had bothered to even check on my other stories you would have seen that. This is, in fact, my first sequel. Again I have stories with longer chapters, but I wanted to have one with relatively short chapters. I had also started with short chapters because I wasn't sure if I was going to continue War. I understand that you don't like short chapters and usually I would agree with you, but this particular series will have some points which will be strengthened by the length of the chapters. I personally consider your reveiw criticism. I plan to keep writing, no matter what any one thinks. This review isn't a "crappy" review, because it gives me a idea of what some of my other reader's are thinking. Thank you for your frank opinions and review, both of which I truly appreciate.
Mithros- It is nice to see how enthusiastic some of my reviewers are. I don't think that being a philosopher would suit me, as I have a volatile personality and am only mildly interested in philosophy. I'm sorry then that you failed to terrorize me, better luck tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.
Chapter 2
Trowa is with me, as are Nick, Sarah, Heero, Candice, George, and Lucy. But none of those are as important to me as Tro is. Tro is my favorite and closest cousin, if he wasn't with me I would know I was wrong. But now I know I'm right.
Tro is a quiet blond haired boy. He is sweet and gentle, and forever right. When I said he was quiet, I gave the wrong impression, he quieter than quiet. He speaks only when necessary, and sometimes not even then. His blond hair is lighter than mine, it is almost white in fact. He wears it short in the back and long in the front and somehow gelled up. It is something he picked up from his namesake, I think. He is tallish and thin, so thin that he'll look like he will break in half if he bends over. He has bright purple eyes that seem to hide all of his feelings. And he is never wrong...
Don't get me wrong, I love him dearly, but he can be the most annoying boy, or girl for that matter, I know...
It is the fact that he's never wrong that gets me worried. It is something he said today...
He told me how my father was at the end...
He had no way to know that...
He said that R.P. drugged my dad the day before he died, and that's how I came about...
That is the one thing I never understood about me...
My dad was a strong man...
A Gundam pilot...
A trained assassin...
A bodyguard.
He could run for miles...
Pilot for hours...
And box as long as he had a partner...
I never understood how weak frail R.P. managed to do that to my dad...
Especially when he would have objected to it.
Now I know...
Or at least have a possibility of what could have happened.
We're going to try to get R.P. out of power...
I wonder if she was died if people would still follow her ideas...
Her insane, mad, crazy ideas...
Yes, I know that insane, mad, and crazy all mean the same thing, it's called poetic repetition.