I'm back! Wow I never expected such positive reviews. I thought I would have gotten reviews telling me to give up because I suck at writing or flames. (I really wasn't confident about this fic.) Well, after reading all these great reviews, I decided to make this a multi-chapter fic instead of a one-shot, which will be kind of hard (I need to think on how to get this fic running smoothly), so please be patient with me and feel free to give me suggestions on how to make my fic better.
I really want to individually answer all the reviews, but lately F a n f i c t i o n . n e t has been mercilessly deleting fics that they believe are in script format. I don't want to be one of their victims.
Thanks to: lucks, Sleepingbear, Bahamutzero94, yami-lor-kris, CFFJ, bobthebuilder, and Anime2000.
Thank you all for reviewing! I'm so happy!
On with the fic!
Forever With You: Chapter 1
By Mochi Dragon
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The Tendo Household:
It was a day after the incident with the Personality Splitting Incense, by this time everyone in the Tendo household had calmed down and forgotten about the incident already. After all, things out of the ordinary happened every day so everyone got used to it. There was however, one person who couldn't seem to get over the past day's events. Namely Ranma.
It's been a day already. Why can't I stop thinking about her? Damn that old fart, why did he have to use that damn incense to split my other self?
She was so cute... NO! She tried to make me her slave and she tried to hurt Akane, I can't think this way about her! Although it was Akane who started the fight.
Besides, she doesn't exist. She's me for god's sake! It's good riddance she was destroyed and returned to my body. But I can't help but wish I could see her again.
Ranma sighed and rubbed his temples furiously. He really needed to get some fresh air.
Ahh, this is much better. Fresh air, green grass, pretty flowers, bright sun, blue sky... Blue sky... Blue sky... Damnit!
Apparently the blue sky was reminding him of her eyes.
Somewhere in the other part of the house:
Happosai huffed angrily. I was so close to making Ranma's girl self my girl toy! What could possibly have gone wrong? Why didn't she listen to me when I told her to put on that bra? I don't understand!
The Cat Café:
Cologne busied herself cooking ramen while her great-granddaughter Shampoo cleaned and set the tables for the customers.
All of a sudden, Cologne felt a strange sensation similar to the one she felt when the Personality Splitting Incense was used. Cologne shook her head in confusion. The last time she had this feeling she was sure she had sensed evil, but this time she could not tell whether she sensed good or evil. What could this mean? Cologne thought with a worried expression.
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Heh, um, yeah. This chapter was very short, but keep in mind that most of you wanted me to just continue with this one-shot. This reason why this fic was originally a one-shot was because I didn't know where to go from here. But I will try my best to make this a multi-chapter fic. I promise much longer chapters in the future when I start to get the hang of this. But for now please be patient with me as this is my first fic (the last one I wrote didn't count). And as always, constructive criticism will be appreciated.
Oh and please read my one-shot songfic fic, "Malchik Gay". I haven't been getting any reviews on that one, and I can't fix whatever's wrong with it unless someone tells me what's wrong with it.
Review please! Flames are okay if you really need to send me one. But I prefer constructive criticism.