Malfoy And The New Girl
AUTHOR NOTE: Hi! I'm kinda a new author....but i hope to be really great one day! if you want to help me review but no flames or critics please....you people really suck flaming new authors like us. -- oh well, its not a problem.
OKAY my sotry is about Draco Malfoy and a new girl. Her name is Solaria, which is a COOL NAME! LOL sry i just like it. its also about overcoming prejudices. or i hope it will be, i'm just starting. LOL.
ok let's get started!! :D
PROLOGUE
Draco Malfoy woke up to the sound of his house elf, Smelli. "Mister draco!" he squeaked.
"What, Smelli?"
"It's is time to go to the school, Mister draco sir!"
Draco groaned.
"Aw come on Smelli, must i now?"
The elf nodded.
"Okay, whatever. let me get dressed."
"SOLARIA!" Raven shouted.
Solaria awoke suddenly, screaming.
"We have to get ya to the station, girl." Solaria's mom, Raven, said with a smile. "Come on, you just transfered here from New York Magic Acadamy and you don't want to be late for your first day at Hogwarts."
"I wonder what a british school will be like." Solaria wondered. Raven laughed. "It's really fun but diferrent. They've got different "houses" over there. I was a Hufflepuff - see what your going to be."
"What are houses?"
Raven laughed. "Well, Solaria, they're special places in the school that you go to depending on what your like. Smart people go in Ravenclaw, brave people go in Griffyndor, strong-willed people go in Hufflepuff and evil people go in Slytherin."
"Thats not fair, ma. im sure not everyone in slytherin is evil or anything."
Raven laughed again. "Yah, that was kinda unfiar. well i guess slytherins are people with lots of ambition...the kind that grow up to be really powerful."
"Like dad?"
Raven frowned. "Let's not talk about your dad, hon. Come on, get ready. We need to be at the station in fifteen minutes!"
Raven left the room. Solaria sighed and got out of bed.
She wondered all about this Hogwarts place. Would it be any fun? Would she make any friends? What house would she be in? Would she meet her father when she was there?
She got undressed and slipped into a sweet black outfit. she put on her black makeup and walked out the door where her mom looked at her with dissaproval.
"Solaria Finn! Are you going to school like that?"
"Yeah why?"
"You look like a harlot! God! U should go get dressed like a proper English person right now!"
Solaria fumed and walked back into the room. Raven rocked, but she could kinda be stuffy sometimes. SHe looked in the mirror and for once liked what she saw. she had deep black hair that went down to her shoulders. her nose was kinda crooked, but it didn't make her look ugly. her eyes were ebony like the night. her makeup made her look like a goth, which was kinda neat. she always liked gothic music, like linkin park and evanesence.
but she complied with mother raven, and removed the makeup and dressed like a catholic schoolgirl. she went back downstairs and Raven nodded her approval.
"Lets roll."
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So waddya think? Should i make draco and solaria in love? should i give solaria a sister? should i maybe make blaise an important character (lol is blaise a girl or a guy? i picture him as a guy who looks kinda like the guy from smallville YUM) review please but dont flame that hurts. :(
MAGE 9 OUT!
AUTHOR NOTE: Hi! I'm kinda a new author....but i hope to be really great one day! if you want to help me review but no flames or critics please....you people really suck flaming new authors like us. -- oh well, its not a problem.
OKAY my sotry is about Draco Malfoy and a new girl. Her name is Solaria, which is a COOL NAME! LOL sry i just like it. its also about overcoming prejudices. or i hope it will be, i'm just starting. LOL.
ok let's get started!! :D
PROLOGUE
Draco Malfoy woke up to the sound of his house elf, Smelli. "Mister draco!" he squeaked.
"What, Smelli?"
"It's is time to go to the school, Mister draco sir!"
Draco groaned.
"Aw come on Smelli, must i now?"
The elf nodded.
"Okay, whatever. let me get dressed."
"SOLARIA!" Raven shouted.
Solaria awoke suddenly, screaming.
"We have to get ya to the station, girl." Solaria's mom, Raven, said with a smile. "Come on, you just transfered here from New York Magic Acadamy and you don't want to be late for your first day at Hogwarts."
"I wonder what a british school will be like." Solaria wondered. Raven laughed. "It's really fun but diferrent. They've got different "houses" over there. I was a Hufflepuff - see what your going to be."
"What are houses?"
Raven laughed. "Well, Solaria, they're special places in the school that you go to depending on what your like. Smart people go in Ravenclaw, brave people go in Griffyndor, strong-willed people go in Hufflepuff and evil people go in Slytherin."
"Thats not fair, ma. im sure not everyone in slytherin is evil or anything."
Raven laughed again. "Yah, that was kinda unfiar. well i guess slytherins are people with lots of ambition...the kind that grow up to be really powerful."
"Like dad?"
Raven frowned. "Let's not talk about your dad, hon. Come on, get ready. We need to be at the station in fifteen minutes!"
Raven left the room. Solaria sighed and got out of bed.
She wondered all about this Hogwarts place. Would it be any fun? Would she make any friends? What house would she be in? Would she meet her father when she was there?
She got undressed and slipped into a sweet black outfit. she put on her black makeup and walked out the door where her mom looked at her with dissaproval.
"Solaria Finn! Are you going to school like that?"
"Yeah why?"
"You look like a harlot! God! U should go get dressed like a proper English person right now!"
Solaria fumed and walked back into the room. Raven rocked, but she could kinda be stuffy sometimes. SHe looked in the mirror and for once liked what she saw. she had deep black hair that went down to her shoulders. her nose was kinda crooked, but it didn't make her look ugly. her eyes were ebony like the night. her makeup made her look like a goth, which was kinda neat. she always liked gothic music, like linkin park and evanesence.
but she complied with mother raven, and removed the makeup and dressed like a catholic schoolgirl. she went back downstairs and Raven nodded her approval.
"Lets roll."
-
So waddya think? Should i make draco and solaria in love? should i give solaria a sister? should i maybe make blaise an important character (lol is blaise a girl or a guy? i picture him as a guy who looks kinda like the guy from smallville YUM) review please but dont flame that hurts. :(
MAGE 9 OUT!