Disclaimer: Once again, I own no DBZ/GT. But Donovan and Zelda are my
original rp characters. (I actually just made Donovan up on the spot, but
hey, a girl's gotta try.)
Come on people, reviews are everything to a writer! I need motivation; if I don't see people reading and reviewing, then I don't have any reason to write these fics.
Sonne-chan: Thank you so much for all your support, its loyal fans like you that make fanfics possible. And a full twenty-four hours? I don't mean to sound rude or be controversial, but the first night I loaded the second chapter on at around seven forty five in the evening, then I got on the next morning and it was loaded, same with the other chappies I've loaded so far. So is it possible it could take somewhere around ten hours or so?
Chapter five: So many to fight, so little time
Zelda watched the battle go on. It was mostly Tien doing his best to dodge, and Donovan landing a good bunch of hits.
Trunks slowly edged over to Zelda. He was trying to do so without Donovan noticing without Donovan noticing what he was doing, and so far it was working.
When Donovan delivered two power punches and made contact, Tien went flying.
Zelda winced; she knew that one was going to hurt for a while. And since Tien wasn't a saiyan, he wouldn't get stronger after a blow like that.
Tien was unconscious when he hit the ground. Chouzu ((A/N: Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think that's how you spell it.)) hurried over to his friend to try and wake him.
Trunks froze when Donovan looked at him. "Who's next?" He asked as his eyes traveled over the group.
"I'm next." Yamcha said as he took a few steps forward. He flew at Donovan and tried to land a punch to his face, but the saiyan blocked and the battle went on.
Zelda noticed Trunks edging towards her again. Her eyes widened and she shook her head. If Donovan saw Trunks, then he would probably put the whole deal off and go ahead and destroy the earth.
Trunks stopped when Yamcha's battle with Donovan ended, Donovan of course won and sent the ex-thief flying quite a few feet away before he skid to a stop.
Donovan crossed his arms over his chest. He didn't have a single scratch, bruise, or a drop of sweat showing anywhere on him.
"And who is the next victim going to be?" He taunted. This time Krillin stepped up.
The bald monk only took a few rather harsh blows before going out. It was pretty obvious that Donovan was getting bored with this whole thing and wanted it done and over with.
Piccolo stepped forward before Donovan could ask. He took off his cloak, and it hit the ground with a loud thud. It of course was weighted. He untied the turban that he always wore on his head, and put it beside his cloak.
Ready to fight, Piccolo assumed a defensive stance, waiting for Donovan's attack.
As soon as Donovan moved forward to make his move, Piccolo easily dodged it and landed an attack on Donovan's right arm.
Trunks continued to edge towards Zelda. He finally was behind her and knelt down to untie her.
"Trunks, what are you doing? You could endanger the entire world if you make this guy mad!" Zelda said quietly to the half saiyan.
Trunks ignored her and continued untying her.
Once he was done Zelda stood up. She found out the hard way that she was stiff and off balance, and stumbled onto Trunks.
Trunks caught her, and helped her stand upright. He helped her over to Goku and the others.
Goku, Gohan, and Goten looked concerned, but Vegeta couldn't really care less as he paid attention to the fight.
Piccolo was dodging most of Donovan's attacks, and landing a few of his own. But so far Donovan was winning, Piccolo was taking much more damage and not dealing with it very well.
Zelda turned down the other's help and stood on her own, watching the fight.
She felt as if it was her fault that they were all there. If she hadn't been stupid enough to let herself get taken then they wouldn't be there.
Donovan ended the fight close to the same way as he did with Tien and the others.
The saiyan looked at the remaining Z senshi, not pleased to see Zelda among them.
"I thought we had a deal. Or do you want your planet to be destroyed? Nevertheless, I will let it pass... For now. Who's going to be the next victim?" Donovan asked.
Goten stepped forward. He powered up to super saiyan, his eyes going turquoise and his hair turning bright yellow and standing up more than it normally did.
"Lets go." Goten said. Donovan gave a small smirk.
"Very impressive. Like this?" Donovan taunted, turning super saiyan himself.
Goten stared for half a second before regaining his composure. Vegeta rolled his eyes, he wasn't very impressed.
Zelda frowned. Donovan was already strong, but a super saiyan as well? He might take a while to get rid of if Goten couldn't beat him.
Goten shot forward and attacked Donovan first. He landed a hit on his shoulder, then blocked the other saiyan's attack towards his head.
Zelda watched as each of the saiyans landed, blocked, dodged, and took hits. Goten ascended to SS2, and gained the upper hand in the battle.
The fight took to the air, and they pulled out of hand to hand fighting and switched to ki blasts and other long range attacks.
"Well Kakarot, it looks like your boy has a long way to go." Vegeta commented.
Goku didn't even look at the cocky prince. "He'll be fine. Remember, he's a saiyan too. Maybe only half saiyan, but he's got the will and determination of a full saiyan." He replied.
Vegeta gave his trademark smirk, his arms crossed over his chest. He eyed his son when Trunks moved behind Zelda.
Well, it's about time he's gotten himself a girl, Vegeta thought. At least she's a saiyan... But she's related to Kakarot, she's a third class saiyan. She might not have what it takes. On the plus side, her father worked with me for quite some time. If he had anything to do with her upbringing, she'll be a good fighter and have plenty of an education as well.
Vegeta continued to sum up Zelda's plus sides as well as her let downs. As much as he hated to admit it, there were more pluses. He was paying rapt attention to the fight as well.
Goten and Donovan's movements were too fast for a human eye to follow, but he and the other saiyans could easily follow them.
Zelda crossed her arms over her stomach. A plan was already forming in her head. She just had to wait for the right time to put it in action.
Donovan knew if he didn't do something he would lose. He landed a few powerful hits, then moved away from Goten.
It gave the saiyan just enough time to power up to super saiyan two as well. Goten attacked him as soon as he was done, and the battle continued.
Zelda winced as Donovan literally began pummeling Goten with a combination of powerful kicks and punches.
Trunks tensed, it was hard to see his best friend getting beaten without being able to do anything about it. He stepped beside Zelda, and her hand found his.
Zelda took comfort in knowing it was hard for Trunks to see Goten getting hurt as well.
Gohan finally couldn't take it anymore. He powered up to super saiyan, then went to super saiyan two as he flew at Donovan.
"Gohan, wait!" Goku called after his son. He seemed to disappear, then reappeared in front of his son, stopping his movement towards Donovan.
"Gohan, I know its hard to see him getting hurt, but you've got to let him fight his own battles. He's strong, and as hard as it is for me to admit, he's not a little boy anymore. So chill out and wait your turn." Goku told him.
Gohan reluctantly powered down to a normal saiyan. His ki level was still pretty high, but he wasn't trying to hide it.
Goku pretty much dragged Gohan back to the ground.
Donovan landed a punch to Goten's stomach, making him double over.
Donovan then landed a punch upwards to Goten's jaw, then another hitting him over the head.
Goten crashed to the ground, leaving a small crater around him. He powered down, losing his super saiyan glow and returning to normal.
"Goten!" Zelda exclaimed. She rushed over to him, kneeling beside his unconscious form.
She felt for a pulse; it was there, but it was very faint. Zelda glared up at Donovan.
"You'll pay for that." She shot at Donovan.
"Zelda, don't do anything you'll regret." Goku warned her.
"I won't regret kicking his sorry.." The last word was lost in the wind as she flew at Donovan, powering up all the way to SS3 as she flew.
Her first attack made contact, sending Donovan flying into the ground.
Vegeta was pretty impressed, he'd never seen a female saiyan go all the way to super saiyan three, much less land an attack as powerful as that.
Zelda wasn't finished with Donovan yet. She sent a barrage of ki attacks at the spot where he had hit ground.
It raised up quite a bit of dust and dirt, and she kept firing. Once she stopped firing she hung there, about seventy feet above the ground, breathing heavily and waiting for the dust to clear.
A/N: And that's the end of the chapter! What will happen next? Did Donovan live? Is he dead? What will happen to Goten and the other defeated warriors? Find out! But first you must review. No more reviews no more chapters. Come on people! Again, if I don't see anyone reading and reviewing, then there's no point in me continuing to post any more of this fic. In fact, I could just keep writing and not post anything.
Let me know what you think of this chapter, thanks!
Come on people, reviews are everything to a writer! I need motivation; if I don't see people reading and reviewing, then I don't have any reason to write these fics.
Sonne-chan: Thank you so much for all your support, its loyal fans like you that make fanfics possible. And a full twenty-four hours? I don't mean to sound rude or be controversial, but the first night I loaded the second chapter on at around seven forty five in the evening, then I got on the next morning and it was loaded, same with the other chappies I've loaded so far. So is it possible it could take somewhere around ten hours or so?
Chapter five: So many to fight, so little time
Zelda watched the battle go on. It was mostly Tien doing his best to dodge, and Donovan landing a good bunch of hits.
Trunks slowly edged over to Zelda. He was trying to do so without Donovan noticing without Donovan noticing what he was doing, and so far it was working.
When Donovan delivered two power punches and made contact, Tien went flying.
Zelda winced; she knew that one was going to hurt for a while. And since Tien wasn't a saiyan, he wouldn't get stronger after a blow like that.
Tien was unconscious when he hit the ground. Chouzu ((A/N: Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think that's how you spell it.)) hurried over to his friend to try and wake him.
Trunks froze when Donovan looked at him. "Who's next?" He asked as his eyes traveled over the group.
"I'm next." Yamcha said as he took a few steps forward. He flew at Donovan and tried to land a punch to his face, but the saiyan blocked and the battle went on.
Zelda noticed Trunks edging towards her again. Her eyes widened and she shook her head. If Donovan saw Trunks, then he would probably put the whole deal off and go ahead and destroy the earth.
Trunks stopped when Yamcha's battle with Donovan ended, Donovan of course won and sent the ex-thief flying quite a few feet away before he skid to a stop.
Donovan crossed his arms over his chest. He didn't have a single scratch, bruise, or a drop of sweat showing anywhere on him.
"And who is the next victim going to be?" He taunted. This time Krillin stepped up.
The bald monk only took a few rather harsh blows before going out. It was pretty obvious that Donovan was getting bored with this whole thing and wanted it done and over with.
Piccolo stepped forward before Donovan could ask. He took off his cloak, and it hit the ground with a loud thud. It of course was weighted. He untied the turban that he always wore on his head, and put it beside his cloak.
Ready to fight, Piccolo assumed a defensive stance, waiting for Donovan's attack.
As soon as Donovan moved forward to make his move, Piccolo easily dodged it and landed an attack on Donovan's right arm.
Trunks continued to edge towards Zelda. He finally was behind her and knelt down to untie her.
"Trunks, what are you doing? You could endanger the entire world if you make this guy mad!" Zelda said quietly to the half saiyan.
Trunks ignored her and continued untying her.
Once he was done Zelda stood up. She found out the hard way that she was stiff and off balance, and stumbled onto Trunks.
Trunks caught her, and helped her stand upright. He helped her over to Goku and the others.
Goku, Gohan, and Goten looked concerned, but Vegeta couldn't really care less as he paid attention to the fight.
Piccolo was dodging most of Donovan's attacks, and landing a few of his own. But so far Donovan was winning, Piccolo was taking much more damage and not dealing with it very well.
Zelda turned down the other's help and stood on her own, watching the fight.
She felt as if it was her fault that they were all there. If she hadn't been stupid enough to let herself get taken then they wouldn't be there.
Donovan ended the fight close to the same way as he did with Tien and the others.
The saiyan looked at the remaining Z senshi, not pleased to see Zelda among them.
"I thought we had a deal. Or do you want your planet to be destroyed? Nevertheless, I will let it pass... For now. Who's going to be the next victim?" Donovan asked.
Goten stepped forward. He powered up to super saiyan, his eyes going turquoise and his hair turning bright yellow and standing up more than it normally did.
"Lets go." Goten said. Donovan gave a small smirk.
"Very impressive. Like this?" Donovan taunted, turning super saiyan himself.
Goten stared for half a second before regaining his composure. Vegeta rolled his eyes, he wasn't very impressed.
Zelda frowned. Donovan was already strong, but a super saiyan as well? He might take a while to get rid of if Goten couldn't beat him.
Goten shot forward and attacked Donovan first. He landed a hit on his shoulder, then blocked the other saiyan's attack towards his head.
Zelda watched as each of the saiyans landed, blocked, dodged, and took hits. Goten ascended to SS2, and gained the upper hand in the battle.
The fight took to the air, and they pulled out of hand to hand fighting and switched to ki blasts and other long range attacks.
"Well Kakarot, it looks like your boy has a long way to go." Vegeta commented.
Goku didn't even look at the cocky prince. "He'll be fine. Remember, he's a saiyan too. Maybe only half saiyan, but he's got the will and determination of a full saiyan." He replied.
Vegeta gave his trademark smirk, his arms crossed over his chest. He eyed his son when Trunks moved behind Zelda.
Well, it's about time he's gotten himself a girl, Vegeta thought. At least she's a saiyan... But she's related to Kakarot, she's a third class saiyan. She might not have what it takes. On the plus side, her father worked with me for quite some time. If he had anything to do with her upbringing, she'll be a good fighter and have plenty of an education as well.
Vegeta continued to sum up Zelda's plus sides as well as her let downs. As much as he hated to admit it, there were more pluses. He was paying rapt attention to the fight as well.
Goten and Donovan's movements were too fast for a human eye to follow, but he and the other saiyans could easily follow them.
Zelda crossed her arms over her stomach. A plan was already forming in her head. She just had to wait for the right time to put it in action.
Donovan knew if he didn't do something he would lose. He landed a few powerful hits, then moved away from Goten.
It gave the saiyan just enough time to power up to super saiyan two as well. Goten attacked him as soon as he was done, and the battle continued.
Zelda winced as Donovan literally began pummeling Goten with a combination of powerful kicks and punches.
Trunks tensed, it was hard to see his best friend getting beaten without being able to do anything about it. He stepped beside Zelda, and her hand found his.
Zelda took comfort in knowing it was hard for Trunks to see Goten getting hurt as well.
Gohan finally couldn't take it anymore. He powered up to super saiyan, then went to super saiyan two as he flew at Donovan.
"Gohan, wait!" Goku called after his son. He seemed to disappear, then reappeared in front of his son, stopping his movement towards Donovan.
"Gohan, I know its hard to see him getting hurt, but you've got to let him fight his own battles. He's strong, and as hard as it is for me to admit, he's not a little boy anymore. So chill out and wait your turn." Goku told him.
Gohan reluctantly powered down to a normal saiyan. His ki level was still pretty high, but he wasn't trying to hide it.
Goku pretty much dragged Gohan back to the ground.
Donovan landed a punch to Goten's stomach, making him double over.
Donovan then landed a punch upwards to Goten's jaw, then another hitting him over the head.
Goten crashed to the ground, leaving a small crater around him. He powered down, losing his super saiyan glow and returning to normal.
"Goten!" Zelda exclaimed. She rushed over to him, kneeling beside his unconscious form.
She felt for a pulse; it was there, but it was very faint. Zelda glared up at Donovan.
"You'll pay for that." She shot at Donovan.
"Zelda, don't do anything you'll regret." Goku warned her.
"I won't regret kicking his sorry.." The last word was lost in the wind as she flew at Donovan, powering up all the way to SS3 as she flew.
Her first attack made contact, sending Donovan flying into the ground.
Vegeta was pretty impressed, he'd never seen a female saiyan go all the way to super saiyan three, much less land an attack as powerful as that.
Zelda wasn't finished with Donovan yet. She sent a barrage of ki attacks at the spot where he had hit ground.
It raised up quite a bit of dust and dirt, and she kept firing. Once she stopped firing she hung there, about seventy feet above the ground, breathing heavily and waiting for the dust to clear.
A/N: And that's the end of the chapter! What will happen next? Did Donovan live? Is he dead? What will happen to Goten and the other defeated warriors? Find out! But first you must review. No more reviews no more chapters. Come on people! Again, if I don't see anyone reading and reviewing, then there's no point in me continuing to post any more of this fic. In fact, I could just keep writing and not post anything.
Let me know what you think of this chapter, thanks!