Konnechiwa! Okay i love this chapter. PURE M/S FLUFF!!!
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inudog - um.........maybe they were playing for................an hour? 45 minutes? i dunno! i dun realli play soccer.......... :'(
Cyristal Tears- lol, thnx, i no my grammar improved.....but u need to improve on spelling, cuz u spelled congratulations wrong in the review.....lol oh well everyone makes mistakes!
Ks-Starshine--- maybe iy and kag will be together earlier, it depends how long the chapters are
Chapter 18: Wake up!
Kagome looked at herself in the mirror. " I've lost weight"
" We all have" Sango said " A month's worth of soccer games can make you lose weight"
" But it was worth it" Rin said. She was playing with Kilala. " What are we in? Top 2?"
" Yep" Sango said. " We're playing against Ayame's team in about half an hour"
Kagome sat down. Ayame told me that Kikyo said she was planning to do something to me, but that was a month ago, could she have forgotten?
" KAgome, you okay?" Rin asked
Kagome smiled. " yea i'm fine"
" Come'on you'd better get dressed for the final soccer game" Sango said " I hope we win"
" We Will" Rin said
Ayame walked with Koga to her dorm. She explained to him everything that she had heard a month ago.
" I'm worried" Ayame said " You know Kikyo as well as i do, she'll stop at nothing to get what she wants"
" You're right" Koga said " Kagome could get hurt"
They saw Ayame's dorm room open.
" What the-"
" Shh" Koga said. He walked beside the dorm. Ayame followed him. They heard Kikyo and Yumiko talking.
" This is it" Kikyo said " The day that little slut goes down"
" I don't think you should do this" Yumiko said " it might not even work"
" Of course it will work" Kikyo said " My aim is perfect" She walked over to the door and closed it
" Damn " Ayame said
" Did you try walking in on them?" Koga said
" yea, but then they stop talking" Ayame said
" Let's go tell Kagome" Koga said
" There's 10 minutes left until the game" Ayame said
" we'll have to hurry then"
Kagome, Sango and Rin walked over to the benches and sat down. Inu Yasha and Miroku were there already.
" We have to win" Inu Yasha said
" Don't worry, we're going to win" Rin said " Come'on let's go play"
Koga and Ayame ran onto the field. The game was starting.
" Shit we're too late" Ayame said
" Koga! Ayame!" Kikyo shouted. " We don't have all day!"
Koga and Ayame walked over to their teammates.
" Okay, me and Yumiko will play forward, Maraku will play goalie, and Koga and Ayame will play defense got it?" Kikyo said
" Who died and made you boss?" Ayame said
Kikyo glared at her
" Look Kikyo, me and Ayame are always forward-" Koga said
" Exactly, thats why you should let others try" Kikyo said,
" But when we were playing forward, we won all the games we played" Ayame said
" Point being?" Kikyo said
She's so dunse Ayame thought
" Fine we'll let you play forward" Koga said
" At least someboy will" Kikyo said
Ayame glared at her. Kikyo and Yumiko walked off. So did Naraku.
" What were you thinking?" Ayame said to Koga
" There's no way we were going to win that, you know that" Koga said
" What do we do then?" Ayame said. Yumiko walked over to them.
" Ayame, Koga" Yumiko said " You guys know as well as i do that Kikyo is up to something, and i don't like it one bit"
Ayame and Koga listened carefully.
" Wanna trade positions?" Yumiko said
" I thought you were on Kikyo's side" Ayame said
" I thought that too, but Kikyo's too evil for me, besides i don't want Kagome to get hurt" Yumiko said
" What's her plan?" Koga said
" It's not important what she is going to do, but all i know is that it is a 1 in a million chance of suceeding" Yumiko said
The referee whistled. " Take your places"
" Ayame, you trade with Yumiko" Koga said
Ayame nodded
Kagome looked at the score. 32-27. Damn, we're losing by 5 points
Koga kicked the ball to Ayame. Ayame kicked it and it landed in the net.
" 33- 27" The referee said
Kikyo ran over to Ayame
" Next time, pass the ball to me" Kikyo said
Ayame stuck out her tongue at Kikyo. Kikyo rolled her eyes.
Miroku threw the ball down the field to where Inu Yasha was. Inu Yasha ran with the ball and passed it to Kagome. Kikyo snatched the ball away and ran the other way. now's my chance
She ran slowly and waited for Kagome to catch up. kagome ran in front of Kikyo, trying to get the ball.
Kikyo smiled and kicked the ball.
And it aimned straight for Kagome's head.
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" KAGOME!"
Kagome fell the the ground.Blood was pouring from her heda.
" Oh my god!" Kikyo shouted " Someone call a doctor!"
Sango and Rin ran over to Kagome.
" Kagome" Rin shouted. She shook her gently.
" Please wake up"
Both teams stood in the waiting room. It was nightime and the doctor still didn't come out. Finally the door opened and the doctor came out.
" Doctor How's Kagome?" Inu Yasha said
Kikyo felt jealousy rush all over her.
" She's....in a coma" The doctor said
" A coma?" Miroku said " When will she wake up?"
" A day, a week, a year, who knows?, it could even be foreever" The doctor said " It all depends on the patient, if she gives up, she'll never wake up"
" Thank you doctor" Miroku said. The doctor nodded and walked away.
SAngo walked over to Kikyo and slapped her. ( whistles GO SANGO!)
" You BITCH!" Sango yelled. " WHAT DID SHE EVER DO TO YOU! KAGOME DIDN'T DESERVE THIS!"
Rin held her back. " Sango calm down"
" I CAN'T CALM DOWN WHILE THIS SLUT IS STILL ALIVE AND KAGOME IS IN THERE HALF LIVING BECAUSE OF HER!" Sango screamed
" it was an accident!" Kikyo said
" What kind of accident is that?!" Sango said " NOT EVERYONE IS BLIND YA KNOW, KAGOME WAS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU, AND YOU STILL KICKED! I SAW EVERYTHING!"
" Well there's such thing as the ball 'slipped'!" Kikyo yelled back
" BULLSHIT! I DON'T BELIEVE A WORD YOU SAY!" Sango shouted
" I DON'T EXPECT YOU TO AT THIS TIME OF CRISIS!" Kikyo yelled
" CRISIS MY ASS! THIS MUST BE LIKE HEAVEN TO YOU!" Sango yelled
Kikyo turned to Ayame. " You saw everything didn't you? Don't you think it was an accident?"
"Of course i do" Ayame said sarcastically. " What do you take me for?! The blind girl?!"
Kikyo glared at her and turned to Yumiko
" How about you Yumiko?"
" Um...From what i saw, i think it was an accident" Yumiko said
" Exactly" Kikyo said
" What was at the back of the field! She couldn't have seen everything perfectly!" Sango yelled
" Excuse me" A nurse said and walked up to them. " If you're going to keep on yelling, i going to have to ask you to leave"
" I woulnd't stay with this asshole even if you paid me to" Sango said
" Yea and i like would" kikyo muttered. She walked out of the hospital with Yumiko and Naraku.
" We'll come and chack on Kagome tomorrow" Ayame said.
" Okay" Rin said " See ya"
Ayame and Koga walked away.
" Sango?" Miroku asked. " Are you okay?"
Tears fell out of Sango's eyes. She ran out of the hospital.
" I'll go after her " Miroku said and walked out. Rin looked for Inu Yasha and didn't see him.
" Inu Yasha?" Rin said. She walked into the room and saw Inu Yasha sitting on the chair next to Kagome. Kagome looked like she was sleeping and not in a coma at all. Rin walked over to the window and saw white stuff falling onto the ground.
" It's....snowing" Rin said
Inu YAsha sighed. " It won't be a fun christman with Kagome in the hospital like this"
Rin nodded. " The only thin i want for christmas, is for Kagome to wake up soon"
That's something we all want Inu Yasha thought. He looked at Kagome. Please wake up soon Kagome
" Sango!"
Miroku ran all over the hospital grounds. Snow was now everywhere. He saw Sango sitting on the bench beside a pond. He walked over to her and sat down.
" Sango? Are you okay?" Miroku asked for the second time
Sango nodded. " I'm fine now"
" We should go back inside , you're going to catch a cold" Miroku said.
" I want to stay here a little longer" Sango said. She looked at Miroku. " Can you stay here with me?"
Miroku smiled. "Why wouldn't i?"
Sango smiled back. " But if you touch me anywhere unappropriate, i'll slap you like i slapped that slut"
Miroku sweatdropped. He suddenly looked at his hands and didn't face Sango.
" Sango"
" yea?"
" Can i....ask you for some advice?" Sango looked at him.
" Sure"
" There's this girl i liked ever since i met her, and i don't know if she likes me back" Miroku said. He didn't see Sango's dissapointed face. " I want to tell her, but i'm afraid she doesn't feel the same way as i do, i mean, she doesn't act like she cares about me, what should i do?" He looked up at Sango. She smiled.
" That's great Miroku, you found someone you really like" Sango said. "But i think that you should tell her that you like her, even if she doesn't act like she likes you, she might, you never know" She took a deep breath " If she doesn't feel the same way, i think you should find somebody eles"
" What if i don't want to find somebody eles?" Miroku said
" Then....I guess you could wait for her, but i wouldn't do that" Sango said
" Oh" Miroku said
" Can you tell me who this mystery girl is?" Sango asked
" No" Miroku said and stood up.
" Come'on Miroku, please?" Sango said and stood up.
" No" Miroku sand and turned his back to her.
" I'll keep it a secret" Sango said
"No" Miroku said and walked voer to the edge of the pond
" Miroku! PLease?!" Sango cried and walked over to him.
Miroku finally turned and faced her. " Fine, but you promise not to tell"
Sango nodded. " I promise"
Miroku pulled Sango into a hug and Sango gasped.
" M..Miroku?"
" I'll tell you who it is Sango" Miroku said " it's you"
" Wha....What? "Sango pulled away and looked at him." Are you serious?"
" Dead serious" Miroku said " I....just hope that you feel the same way"
Sango slowly smiled and leaned up to kiss him. She closed her eyes and brushed her lips against his. She put her arms around his neck.
Miroku pulled her closer and deepend the kiss.
They slowly pulled away and sango smiled.
" Does that answer your question?" Sango said
" Yes" Miroku smiled back. " I love you Sango"
" I love you too Miroku"
AWW!!! SO KAWAII!!! Okay i 've got some bad news. A-MUST-READ IF YOU WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
: Okay, i kinda got bored with Inu Yasha.....closes eyes tightly IM SO SORRY TO SAY THIS!! BUT I AM LOSING INTEREST IN THIS ANIME. IM KINDA WRITING NEW STORIES IN OTHER ANIMATIONS.
IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO CONTINUE THIS FIC FOR ME THESE ARE THE RULES
1. You must know alot of this Animation and must know how to write good.
2. Absolutely NO Lemon or Lime.
3. Send me a review saying you are interested. Leave your e-mail address and send me your ideas of how you are going to continue this Fanfiction. If i send you an e-mail and i do not get a reply in 2 weeks, you are off the list.
3. I have a few ideas for the next few chapters, so i am encouraging you to put it in.
5. Once the person is chosen, i will post an authors note saying where this fic is going to be continued.
ONCE AGAIN I AM REALLY SORRY! FOR BOTH NOT CONTINUEING THIS FIC AND NOT UPDATING IN A WHILE. I AM GOING TO CONTINUE THE OTHER IY FIC ( Singing Sensation), JUST NOT THIS ONE. BUT IF YOU GUYS REALLY WANT ME TO CONTINUE, I WILL, SEND ME A REVIEW TO WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS IDEA.
Review Responses
inudog - um.........maybe they were playing for................an hour? 45 minutes? i dunno! i dun realli play soccer.......... :'(
Cyristal Tears- lol, thnx, i no my grammar improved.....but u need to improve on spelling, cuz u spelled congratulations wrong in the review.....lol oh well everyone makes mistakes!
Ks-Starshine--- maybe iy and kag will be together earlier, it depends how long the chapters are
Chapter 18: Wake up!
Kagome looked at herself in the mirror. " I've lost weight"
" We all have" Sango said " A month's worth of soccer games can make you lose weight"
" But it was worth it" Rin said. She was playing with Kilala. " What are we in? Top 2?"
" Yep" Sango said. " We're playing against Ayame's team in about half an hour"
Kagome sat down. Ayame told me that Kikyo said she was planning to do something to me, but that was a month ago, could she have forgotten?
" KAgome, you okay?" Rin asked
Kagome smiled. " yea i'm fine"
" Come'on you'd better get dressed for the final soccer game" Sango said " I hope we win"
" We Will" Rin said
Ayame walked with Koga to her dorm. She explained to him everything that she had heard a month ago.
" I'm worried" Ayame said " You know Kikyo as well as i do, she'll stop at nothing to get what she wants"
" You're right" Koga said " Kagome could get hurt"
They saw Ayame's dorm room open.
" What the-"
" Shh" Koga said. He walked beside the dorm. Ayame followed him. They heard Kikyo and Yumiko talking.
" This is it" Kikyo said " The day that little slut goes down"
" I don't think you should do this" Yumiko said " it might not even work"
" Of course it will work" Kikyo said " My aim is perfect" She walked over to the door and closed it
" Damn " Ayame said
" Did you try walking in on them?" Koga said
" yea, but then they stop talking" Ayame said
" Let's go tell Kagome" Koga said
" There's 10 minutes left until the game" Ayame said
" we'll have to hurry then"
Kagome, Sango and Rin walked over to the benches and sat down. Inu Yasha and Miroku were there already.
" We have to win" Inu Yasha said
" Don't worry, we're going to win" Rin said " Come'on let's go play"
Koga and Ayame ran onto the field. The game was starting.
" Shit we're too late" Ayame said
" Koga! Ayame!" Kikyo shouted. " We don't have all day!"
Koga and Ayame walked over to their teammates.
" Okay, me and Yumiko will play forward, Maraku will play goalie, and Koga and Ayame will play defense got it?" Kikyo said
" Who died and made you boss?" Ayame said
Kikyo glared at her
" Look Kikyo, me and Ayame are always forward-" Koga said
" Exactly, thats why you should let others try" Kikyo said,
" But when we were playing forward, we won all the games we played" Ayame said
" Point being?" Kikyo said
She's so dunse Ayame thought
" Fine we'll let you play forward" Koga said
" At least someboy will" Kikyo said
Ayame glared at her. Kikyo and Yumiko walked off. So did Naraku.
" What were you thinking?" Ayame said to Koga
" There's no way we were going to win that, you know that" Koga said
" What do we do then?" Ayame said. Yumiko walked over to them.
" Ayame, Koga" Yumiko said " You guys know as well as i do that Kikyo is up to something, and i don't like it one bit"
Ayame and Koga listened carefully.
" Wanna trade positions?" Yumiko said
" I thought you were on Kikyo's side" Ayame said
" I thought that too, but Kikyo's too evil for me, besides i don't want Kagome to get hurt" Yumiko said
" What's her plan?" Koga said
" It's not important what she is going to do, but all i know is that it is a 1 in a million chance of suceeding" Yumiko said
The referee whistled. " Take your places"
" Ayame, you trade with Yumiko" Koga said
Ayame nodded
Kagome looked at the score. 32-27. Damn, we're losing by 5 points
Koga kicked the ball to Ayame. Ayame kicked it and it landed in the net.
" 33- 27" The referee said
Kikyo ran over to Ayame
" Next time, pass the ball to me" Kikyo said
Ayame stuck out her tongue at Kikyo. Kikyo rolled her eyes.
Miroku threw the ball down the field to where Inu Yasha was. Inu Yasha ran with the ball and passed it to Kagome. Kikyo snatched the ball away and ran the other way. now's my chance
She ran slowly and waited for Kagome to catch up. kagome ran in front of Kikyo, trying to get the ball.
Kikyo smiled and kicked the ball.
And it aimned straight for Kagome's head.
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" KAGOME!"
Kagome fell the the ground.Blood was pouring from her heda.
" Oh my god!" Kikyo shouted " Someone call a doctor!"
Sango and Rin ran over to Kagome.
" Kagome" Rin shouted. She shook her gently.
" Please wake up"
Both teams stood in the waiting room. It was nightime and the doctor still didn't come out. Finally the door opened and the doctor came out.
" Doctor How's Kagome?" Inu Yasha said
Kikyo felt jealousy rush all over her.
" She's....in a coma" The doctor said
" A coma?" Miroku said " When will she wake up?"
" A day, a week, a year, who knows?, it could even be foreever" The doctor said " It all depends on the patient, if she gives up, she'll never wake up"
" Thank you doctor" Miroku said. The doctor nodded and walked away.
SAngo walked over to Kikyo and slapped her. ( whistles GO SANGO!)
" You BITCH!" Sango yelled. " WHAT DID SHE EVER DO TO YOU! KAGOME DIDN'T DESERVE THIS!"
Rin held her back. " Sango calm down"
" I CAN'T CALM DOWN WHILE THIS SLUT IS STILL ALIVE AND KAGOME IS IN THERE HALF LIVING BECAUSE OF HER!" Sango screamed
" it was an accident!" Kikyo said
" What kind of accident is that?!" Sango said " NOT EVERYONE IS BLIND YA KNOW, KAGOME WAS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU, AND YOU STILL KICKED! I SAW EVERYTHING!"
" Well there's such thing as the ball 'slipped'!" Kikyo yelled back
" BULLSHIT! I DON'T BELIEVE A WORD YOU SAY!" Sango shouted
" I DON'T EXPECT YOU TO AT THIS TIME OF CRISIS!" Kikyo yelled
" CRISIS MY ASS! THIS MUST BE LIKE HEAVEN TO YOU!" Sango yelled
Kikyo turned to Ayame. " You saw everything didn't you? Don't you think it was an accident?"
"Of course i do" Ayame said sarcastically. " What do you take me for?! The blind girl?!"
Kikyo glared at her and turned to Yumiko
" How about you Yumiko?"
" Um...From what i saw, i think it was an accident" Yumiko said
" Exactly" Kikyo said
" What was at the back of the field! She couldn't have seen everything perfectly!" Sango yelled
" Excuse me" A nurse said and walked up to them. " If you're going to keep on yelling, i going to have to ask you to leave"
" I woulnd't stay with this asshole even if you paid me to" Sango said
" Yea and i like would" kikyo muttered. She walked out of the hospital with Yumiko and Naraku.
" We'll come and chack on Kagome tomorrow" Ayame said.
" Okay" Rin said " See ya"
Ayame and Koga walked away.
" Sango?" Miroku asked. " Are you okay?"
Tears fell out of Sango's eyes. She ran out of the hospital.
" I'll go after her " Miroku said and walked out. Rin looked for Inu Yasha and didn't see him.
" Inu Yasha?" Rin said. She walked into the room and saw Inu Yasha sitting on the chair next to Kagome. Kagome looked like she was sleeping and not in a coma at all. Rin walked over to the window and saw white stuff falling onto the ground.
" It's....snowing" Rin said
Inu YAsha sighed. " It won't be a fun christman with Kagome in the hospital like this"
Rin nodded. " The only thin i want for christmas, is for Kagome to wake up soon"
That's something we all want Inu Yasha thought. He looked at Kagome. Please wake up soon Kagome
" Sango!"
Miroku ran all over the hospital grounds. Snow was now everywhere. He saw Sango sitting on the bench beside a pond. He walked over to her and sat down.
" Sango? Are you okay?" Miroku asked for the second time
Sango nodded. " I'm fine now"
" We should go back inside , you're going to catch a cold" Miroku said.
" I want to stay here a little longer" Sango said. She looked at Miroku. " Can you stay here with me?"
Miroku smiled. "Why wouldn't i?"
Sango smiled back. " But if you touch me anywhere unappropriate, i'll slap you like i slapped that slut"
Miroku sweatdropped. He suddenly looked at his hands and didn't face Sango.
" Sango"
" yea?"
" Can i....ask you for some advice?" Sango looked at him.
" Sure"
" There's this girl i liked ever since i met her, and i don't know if she likes me back" Miroku said. He didn't see Sango's dissapointed face. " I want to tell her, but i'm afraid she doesn't feel the same way as i do, i mean, she doesn't act like she cares about me, what should i do?" He looked up at Sango. She smiled.
" That's great Miroku, you found someone you really like" Sango said. "But i think that you should tell her that you like her, even if she doesn't act like she likes you, she might, you never know" She took a deep breath " If she doesn't feel the same way, i think you should find somebody eles"
" What if i don't want to find somebody eles?" Miroku said
" Then....I guess you could wait for her, but i wouldn't do that" Sango said
" Oh" Miroku said
" Can you tell me who this mystery girl is?" Sango asked
" No" Miroku said and stood up.
" Come'on Miroku, please?" Sango said and stood up.
" No" Miroku sand and turned his back to her.
" I'll keep it a secret" Sango said
"No" Miroku said and walked voer to the edge of the pond
" Miroku! PLease?!" Sango cried and walked over to him.
Miroku finally turned and faced her. " Fine, but you promise not to tell"
Sango nodded. " I promise"
Miroku pulled Sango into a hug and Sango gasped.
" M..Miroku?"
" I'll tell you who it is Sango" Miroku said " it's you"
" Wha....What? "Sango pulled away and looked at him." Are you serious?"
" Dead serious" Miroku said " I....just hope that you feel the same way"
Sango slowly smiled and leaned up to kiss him. She closed her eyes and brushed her lips against his. She put her arms around his neck.
Miroku pulled her closer and deepend the kiss.
They slowly pulled away and sango smiled.
" Does that answer your question?" Sango said
" Yes" Miroku smiled back. " I love you Sango"
" I love you too Miroku"
AWW!!! SO KAWAII!!! Okay i 've got some bad news. A-MUST-READ IF YOU WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
: Okay, i kinda got bored with Inu Yasha.....closes eyes tightly IM SO SORRY TO SAY THIS!! BUT I AM LOSING INTEREST IN THIS ANIME. IM KINDA WRITING NEW STORIES IN OTHER ANIMATIONS.
IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO CONTINUE THIS FIC FOR ME THESE ARE THE RULES
1. You must know alot of this Animation and must know how to write good.
2. Absolutely NO Lemon or Lime.
3. Send me a review saying you are interested. Leave your e-mail address and send me your ideas of how you are going to continue this Fanfiction. If i send you an e-mail and i do not get a reply in 2 weeks, you are off the list.
3. I have a few ideas for the next few chapters, so i am encouraging you to put it in.
5. Once the person is chosen, i will post an authors note saying where this fic is going to be continued.
ONCE AGAIN I AM REALLY SORRY! FOR BOTH NOT CONTINUEING THIS FIC AND NOT UPDATING IN A WHILE. I AM GOING TO CONTINUE THE OTHER IY FIC ( Singing Sensation), JUST NOT THIS ONE. BUT IF YOU GUYS REALLY WANT ME TO CONTINUE, I WILL, SEND ME A REVIEW TO WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS IDEA.