Vows to You
By: Bren-chan
OOC: Dude! Are there really so many reviews?? Preposterous! XD You all must feel really sorry for me. n.n But I'm so happy nonetheless!
Okay, enough thanking… I must answer the reviewnesses! :o
Reviews:
chibilinnet: Nu… not Hurricane Mary. X.x I already had to deal with Ivan! u.u; And yes, Serra is full of kickass!
DeathsRain: Yup yup, another chappie and I'm grateful that you really like it! :D –pets Serra- And she reminds me a lot like Yuffie from FF7 for being pretty headstrong and of course a little from Selphie from FF8 due to her bouncy upbeat attitude. And I love both characters, so I just cant help but adore the pink haired Freak. n.n
But I feel accomplished to have people who normally hate her actually… maybe like her in this? O.o
… I must reply to /your/ H/E fics! :o –makes a note to do so in a bit-
avi17: Tee hee! :D I hope the fic I'm planning will turn out good. I guess I usually think of good plots, it's just that… I don't have the heart to ruin them by writing it. x.x But I'm confident with this one, so yeah, I'll write the summary. n.n
Oh, and the chapter title? If you're talking about last chapter's… At first, I thought it'd be a good title because Serra's hair is the color of most bubble gum, and she's also gonna be one of the main people in this fic.
But then later I began to think it was very similar to her personality. Bubble gum is very sweet, so one really enjoys chewing it. First, it's very stiff (Her being headstrong. ) and you gotta chew it a bit (Hang out with her) before it starts getting softer and more enjoyable to chew.
But if you begin to blow it (As in, if you make fun of Serra or are in an argument with her) sometimes, it becomes a nuisance and ends up bursting over your whole face. (Her 'whiny' attitude and stuff)
But yeah.
If that isn't the title you're talking about, you can tell me which one you don't get and I'll gladly be able to explain. :D
And update soon I shall!
flamefirefox: Yup! I worked nonstop on that chapter for you guys, which is why there's so many mistakes! :D
Erm… but anyway, yeah… Poor Hector, he needs to get laid. :3 But yeah, it'll work out /eventually/.
YAY! Another Serra liker! And I have to agree with you, Priscilla likes too many people. Xx I feel really bad now, because I used Priscilla in my game more than Serra. XD; But that's ONLY because she's mounted and can move around a lot more, and I really needed that.
… Smelly random Renault. :o He reminds me of the last boss on FF9. Just so… random. .
Whee, and I absolutely love a crazy blood lusting Karel. XD But it's only between Chapter 19-20 right now, so they no meet him yet. u.u
And Raven? … Maybe. XD Don't wanna spoil. But you'll see later on in this chapter.
Yay! That's 2 people wanting to listen about my fic! n.n I shall not fail you! … I hope!
Amethyst Bubble: Most of the time, my excuse is laziness too. XD Either laziness, or I'm inspirationally stressed (which happens a lot) So yeah.
Yeah, the hurricane was really bad. x.x A lot of people actually lost their entire homes, and some of my friends are still without power. So I'm really grateful that only our roof got damaged, and nothing more. And yes, Serra deserves A LOT more respect!
Nikki: XD; Actually, I'm sort of glad the hurricane came, gave me more time to think of what I was going to do with this instead of just rushing in, but yes…
Internet is MY life too! ;.; The only things that kept me alive was my SP (Which of course, had Fire Emblem in it. XD ) and the phone conversations I had with someone very special to me. :D
Whee! I get thumbs! :o Do I get fingers too? XD
Kate: Fweh, I knew I could of done better… but don't you just hate it when you proof read a chapter 50 million times and when you post it you notice an error?? X.x; And there really isn't much H/E fics… which there should. X.x Especially since they're like a canon couple!
… Maybe it's Nini. XD But I wont spoil you either!
Blitz: Ooh, cousins! :D Cousins are unbearably spiffy, like the younger one I have who's a GUY who read this. XD And it looks like 2 people are thinking Nini!
Korkiku: As for the same bed bit, I was trying to be a little realistic. X3 I mean, since Fargus' ship doesn't look very big in the first place, with 20 people suddenly joining in with a large enough crew as it is! … I don't really think there'd be a lot of people who'd get their own bed, let alone their own rooms! XD
And since Hector and Eli knew each other for 10 years, it'd be common sense to have them share one because… well… I dunno! It's common sense?? And of course, /what/ author wouldn't go and take advantage of 2 very /young/ and very /feisty/ men sharing the same bed? 3
And multiple pairings is a very good thing to write about, keeps the reader AND the author entertained instead of just seeing the same couple over and over again.
The formatting… I'm glad you're not annoyed by it. XD But I really gotta stop doing so much of it so often. So I guess this is good practice for helping me stop. I'd use italics, but then I'd be having to actually MOVE my mouse up all the way to the italic button… type in the word… and unitalicyzed the font again. XD Which of course, MANY people are too lazy to do.
Yay! Ficcy request thing. n.n Don't worry, the summary shall be put there.
And as for the title, avi17's review answering thing has it, but if you're too lazy, it's basically the title that portrays Serra since she's going to have a very big role in this, so the title is dedicated to her.
Icy AngelWings: Details? … What details? XD Oh, you mean the crappy excuses to try to sound smart and know what I'm doing? :D –gets smacked- x.x!
Aw, but thankyou. n.n And I shall try to update more often to bring all of you who read this into a world of contempt… and stuff.
Dark Viper: … What? What is /this/? o.o My cousin, who is seemingly homophobic, thinks that H/E is a good couple?? D –rubs it in your face- Aw, and everyone's opinions mean something! What you say is true, and if Eli or Hector were a girl, it'd probably be the official canon of the game.
Pff, and I totally disagree with you that this was made by a great person. XD But I'm touched nonetheless. Thank you, dear cousin. :D
Anime Sage: Kurai : Aw… you should give some of those girls another chance! I don't mind Ninian, I really like Serra… and well, I haven't used Vaida enough to get her personality yet. –shrugs- I also really love Nino and Lyn, but that's just me.
Fennix: My work is good? O.o Yay! :D And yes, I totally agree with you about not there being enough of those two together. But yeah…
And yes, Eliwood is very cute.
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Okay, before I start, some warnings…
First off, there WILL be more shounen-ai, shoujo-ai, and also a bit of het. Don't like shounen-ai? Think shoujo-ai is disgusting? Think that het is the work of Lucifer himself? Too bad!
Most of the time, the fic will be told from 1st person POV, but I will occasionally do 3rd person if it's necessary. Hector also won't be the only speaker. There'll be sides from different people, like from Serra, and even to Eliwood himself.
Um, and for you who are interested in my plot summary for my new fic, it's right at the bottom Author's Notes. n.n So you can decide to read that first, or just enjoy this fic for now.
I can also see some of you guessing about who the red-eyed enigmatic person is. Well… I'll just say this… I NEED an antagonist, so this'll probably be the only PURPOSELY made OOC. XD
One more added effect… my chapters shall now be LONGER (Hurray! :D ) Seriously, I cant stand writing chapters that's less than 3000-4000 words. X.x;;
Warnings: Yaoi, Yuri, mild swearing, sexual situations, FUTURE lemons, and all that lovely shit.
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor will I ever own, Fire Emblem. ULNESS Intelligent Systems feel sorry for me too and decide to give me all ownership of it. XD
(I write my OOC/ N/As too long. –smacks them-)
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Chapter 3: Jealousy is but only a Human Fault… right?
Hector's POV
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"We're here!"
" I think I can see that Serra, but I could just be mistaken of course." I spat out sarcastically as we reached the deck, her arm still tightly interlocked with mine.
"Seeing as it's you Hector, I can believe that." She replied heatedly back as she dragged me across the deck. Probably to find some people to 'mingle' with…
We caught only a few people's attentions, and even there it was only for a few seconds, which I was eternally grateful for. People can mind their own goddamn business.
… But I couldn't help but inwardly agree with the girl's proposition to going up outside. Breathing in the salty atmosphere of the sky, my previous migraine had completely disappeared, only leaving a shell of relaxation.
Or… as relaxed as I /can/ be with all the twist of events.
But still, it was nice. Calm breeze, gentle rocking-
"Hugh-!" And of course, Guy's sickened voice ringing through the ears of anyone within a 50 foot radius. With the noise coming from my left, I let my head reflexively turn that way, not surprised to spot the young Sacaen leaning ungracefully over the side of the ship.
Matthew was next to him, reassuring the green haired youth while gently rubbing his back, a smirk lying over his pale lips.
"I don't see why you should eat if you're just going to waste it like that…" The thief started, giving Guy a good pat on the back while the latter continue to chuck out his dinner, getting up sluggishly a moment after to glare at him.
"S-shut up, Mathew! C-cant you go and b-bother so-… so… Hugh-!" The kid gets motion sickness on horses! It's fully expected for him to get seasick too.
"Poor Guy, I almost feel sorry for him…" Serra piped up, almost making me jump. Damn, I'm so used to having her chatter, that I nearly forgot she was standing right next to me, watching the same scene take place.
But I couldn't blame her. It was always entertaining to see the two young men bicker over the most trivial things.
"Guy… Guy, how much did you eat anyway? "
"Hugh…" Guy couldn't… and probably didn't even /want/ to answer that question. Because that meant thinking of food, and thinking of food probably wasn't the smartest thing to do right now.
"At least we know the fish aren't gonna waste it."
"Ew! Gross, Matthew!" The aforementioned thief quickly turned his attention over to us and gave a mischievous smirk, but didn't move from his spot behind the Sacaen.
"Greetings Lady Serra and Lord Hector. How are you this fine evening?"
"Hugh…"
"How rude, Guy! Don't you have any manners?" The thief taunted, giving a hard pat to the youth's back, triggering another series of unpleasant noises. I felt Serra wince at the sound next to me.
"Guy can be excused from his… er… 'manners'. I think he's sort of preoccupied right now."
"Ah, no no Lady Serra. He must be punished for his actions! We should toss him off this very ship!" At an instant, Guy's head lifted up again, braid smacking threateningly on the thief's forehead, receiving a slight wince from him. Must of hurt…
"W-WHAT?!"
"You heard what I said, Guy! We should toss you off this ship and forget you all together. Such a waste of good favors though…" I sensed that the Sacaen was about to haughtily reply back, yet a rather conveniently timed wind resulted in the gentle slow rocking of the large vessel, immediately silencing the young teen.
And so we all watched, watched as Guy's head disappeared over the ship once again, followed by such lovely sounds of pure… agony shall we say?
But instead of giving a look of grotesque like Serra, or cackling maniacally like Matthew, my face was covered with pity.
"Maybe… Maybe we'll see you later, Matthew?" A hand has now tugging almost violently on my arm, and I turned to meet her pleading face, silently nodding.
"Er, yeah. Maybe we'll see you two later when Guy is feeling better?"
"Oh, alright then! Damnit Guy, you ruined a possibly nice conversation between the nobility!" A silent mutter came from Guy's throat as we continued our way passed them, but I couldn't get a good majority of what he was saying, only 'water', 'hate', and… more hate.
But what's expected to come from his mouth whenever he was nearby the sandy-haired colored thief?
"I'm glad I don't get seasick like that, right Hector?" I snapped my head over to Serra, giving her the best reassuring grin I could muster.
"Um, yeah."
"What's wrong? Is something bothering you?"
"Oh… oh no Serra, everything is just fine! We're just coming back from a nice cruise, Lord Elbert's alive and well and having a good time with his son, who is NOT crying alone in the dark on our room, and-" Serra's hands were quickly waving in front of her in a defensive notion.
"Alright! Alright, I get it Hector! Sheesh…" The smile I once mustered was now completely wiped from my face. Damn it all…
"Why don't we just go and find someone else to talk to, okay?" My voice shown how tired I was, but I knew better to heed the girl's warnings with not bothering Eliwood. I mean, it /was/ the right thing right? … Right?
"Hmm, oh! I know! Let's go bother Erk!" My step stopped midway and slowly faltered a bit.
"Do you think that's wise? I don't think he'd like to see you…"
"Nonsense! He /always/ likes to see me!" I smacked my forehead.
"What if he's with Priscilla?"
"Then we can go and talk to her too!"
"What if they're kissing?"
"Well… uh… we can talk to them when they're done!"
"What if they're doing more?"
"… Hector, are you implying that I can't do things like that because I'm under the order of St. Elimine?"
"No, I just felt like getting you mad."
"Too bad, I'm not mad, but I'm starting to worry about /you/." It seemed our feet had let us to the other side of the ship, where a few other members of our small army were residing. I ignored them for a few moments to reply back to Serra's remark.
"Worry about me?" I saw her lips form a pout and punched my arm, only to give a slight squeak and recoil back a second later.
"Ow… oh, oh what? Yeah, I'm really worried about you Hector, asking all these weird questions like that!"
"I told you I was only doing it because-"
"Because what?" As if on cue, mine and Serra's heads followed the sound of that third voice, finding a very confused Canas lethargically holding onto a book he was probably reading when we strode over absent mindedly. The scholar blinked at us once before recognizing his fault.
"Oh, oh dear me, I'm sorry. I was just curious with your conversation and couldn't help but add my own dialogue in it. How rude of me…" I saw Serra frown before skipping over to the violet haired man and patted his back in reassurance.
"Aw, it's okay Canas! Me and Hector were just trying to find some people to talk to. Because, I mean, it /is/ a nice night tonight, right? We can talk to you if you're not too busy with that book of yours."
"Oh, certainly not Serra, I can continue it later. We can converse with Erk and Priscilla as well." Erk?
… Oh. While I was too busy keeping my attention at one space, I now noticed the young mage with equally violet hair sitting a few feet away, whispering something to the young redhead. Both seemed pretty deep in their conversation though, which is probably why Erk hadn't gone up and flee yet.
Serra, after giving the confused shaman a swift pat on the head, finally noticed the presence of the mage and gave out a loud squeak, which I like to call her battle cry, and firmly wrapped her arms around the latter's neck, nearly choking him.
"S-Serra-!"
"Erky! Here you are! I was looking for you!"
"You mean, you suggested to look for him, but you didn't really."
"Shut up Hector…" I shrugged, instantly feeling sorry for Erk. She seemed to have pretty much a death grip on him. And from the looks of it, he also seemed to be losing air.
"S… Serra!"
"Yes Erky?"
"Breathe…!"
"Oh? It /is/ a really nice night tonight. With so much air you can breath that-… Erk? Erk??" Finally understanding, Serra quickly let go and watched as the teen fell over and began gasping to renew his loss.
I stole a glance at Priscilla, who was sitting quietly as usual. I could see a small pang of… something from the look of her face as she watched the two, but I instantly shrugged it off. I shouldn't worry about other people's feelings since I already have to deal with my own and a certain redhead's.
"I'm so sorry Erk! You should of told me I was choking you!" Lavender orbs glared at her before the owner sighed, slowly getting up from the wooden floor as to not get a dizzy spell. I was surprised that he didn't pass out from that attack.
And I was even more surprised that Canas hadn't gotten back to reading, since of course, this is what usually happened between the two young teens. Readjusting his monocle, the shaman suddenly stood up and gave a quick bow.
" I just realized I must accompany someone somewhere else at the moment. Good evening to you, Lord Hector." And with a whisk of a cape he was gone. Odd… wonder what he was in such a rush for?
"Um… bye?" Serra's voice quickly caught my attention back though.
"Aren't you glad to see me, Erky??"
"No."
"Even just a little?"
"No."
"Are you absolutely sure?"
"Yes."
"Erk, you're so mean!" He simply shrugged.
"I'm just telling the truth." Priscilla's reaction, which once proclaimed sadness, was starting to become a bit lighter, either because she found this amusing… or she found this amusing /and/ that the two magic wielders were bickering at one another.
Jealousy perhaps?
"Erk, you should really do something with your hair. It's all frizzy now!"
"It is /not/ frizzy!"
"Whenever in doubt, go speak to a trout!"
"Serra… that made absolutely no sense whatsoever…"
"Don't blame me! I read it in some book a while back!"
"What a bunch of useless nonsense. Trouts can't even speak!"
"The book never said that the trout could speak back, idiot!" In my opinion, it made sense, and from the look of Erk's face it made sense in his mind too.
"…"
" Ha! I got you there! 1 for Serra, zip for Erk! I'm on a roll!"
"… Don't you have anything better to do than plague us with your presence?" The mage asked after taking a few deep breaths to reassure himself.
"Not really, me and Hector were just wandering around…" I gave a slight cough to get their attention.
"… You and Hector?" Oh no, don't say that Priscilla… Her glance met mine and I frowned.
"What? Oh! No no, Erky! It's not like that…" Serra started, twirling her hair onto one of her fingers.
"Besides, Hector already loves-" With speed that I did not know that I possessed, my hand quickly clamped over the girl's mouth, dragging her away from Erk.
"I'm completely single. Now shut up Serra."
"Mm! Mmhmmmph!" From the corner of my eye, I saw the young mage give us both a questionable look… or at least as questionable as he could muster from his permanently serious face.
"… Who?" My glare quickly silenced his curious mind, receiving a small 'Eep' from Priscilla as well.
…
"AUGH! SERRA!" Feeling a sharp bite on my palm, my hand recoiled back almost instantly from the girl's mouth. Now… how was I supposed to predict something like that??
"… Ew, Hector. You should wash your hands, Ick. Ick…" Well, at least I got her back somehow, even though I decided to ignore the insultive side to it as well. Why spoil your semi-victory?
"Erk…" Through Erk's laughter and Serra's random noises, I heard Priscilla speak quietly to the mage in her normal demeanor. That caught his attention quickly and gave her a questioning glance.
"I would really like it if we talked… alone." At an instant, Serra froze and pouted, crossing her arms.
"Oh, flux it! We were about to leave anyway, you don't have to imply your rudeness!" I saw Priscilla give a light glare before making a silent pleading notion towards the mage, who just shook his head.
"Ah, no, we can leave. We were just about to before you came." The pink haired teen's pout quickly turned into a small frown as she watched Erk tug Priscilla away to who knows where.
"Erky…"
"Jealous?"
"Huh?? Me? Jealous?? Ha! Erk and Pris must be talking about something important. No harm done in that." I saw her try to force out a cocky grin. Oh how fake it really was.
"Serra…"
"Hector, don't worry about me! I've got my own back on this one. You should worry more on Eli." Oh right… Eliwood. I gave a quick glance at the stars and asked curiously.
"Do you think he'd be asleep by now?" Her grin faltered a bit.
"Hardly. It's still too early."
"Damnit, when is it going to /not/ be early??"
"Woah! It's only been 10 minutes you know, since we came here. You're so impatient, you big oaf…"
"Can you really blame me for being impatient?"
"Nah, I couldn't blame you. But you have to stop worrying a bit! You'll get gray hairs before you can even blink!" I snorted at her comment, not even noticing my hand flinging itself into my hair until it was already midway deep. I only glared even more at the young teen's snorts of laughter.
"Come on! Lets go talk to some other people. See, there's Lucius!" My glance quickly edged to the monk and sighed.
"Fine fine, let's go…"
"Yippee!"
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2nd POV
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I silently watched as his eyes met mine, and I glared into them with all my might to show my infuriated state.
How dare… how /dare/ he!
If my steps were more skilled and slick, I knew I would of made it to Lord Eliwood's presence before the latter, but alas I faltered, and my chance for comforting his Lord's emotions were nearly shredded into bits and pieces by the man that stood quite close to my presence then.
"…" I could feel my sudden sigh filling through the empty corridors as I made my way back to my room, where Nils waited patiently.
It's just… not fair. I knew I could have been better company with him than Lord /Hector/. My smile only grew as I let his name drip like acid in my mind. He wasn't even fully fit to be a noble in the first place.
I've heard stories about his arrogance in the nobility, which seemed to lighten my previously dark mood. But… that still didn't change the little scene that took place in the cargo room.
I winced. I could only describe it as sudden desperation on Lord Eliwood's part, but why did it have to be him? Him out of everyone else?? If it had been Lady Lyndis instead, I would of shrugged it off easily, awaiting for another chance to be with the redhead alone.
I just… ugh!
And out of absent minded judgment, my chest lightly bumped into the door of my shared room, knocking my thoughts off.
"Oh…" Hand reaching for the doorknob, I felt myself turn it and push, revealing the dimly lighten room with my sibling partially tucked in bed. His unruly light green hair flowing over the pillows effortlessly.
"Nini!" The smile on his face only made me smile as well. Nils… my brother, the closest person I have to me…
"Evening, Nils. Were you just about to go to sleep?"
"Uh-huh, but I'm waiting for Canas to show up so he can read me a story!" And as if on cue, I heard a slight rapping noise on the recently closed door behind me.
My hand trailed over the brass knob once again and opened it, showing in the young shaman into the small room.
"Ah, Good Evening! I'm sorry I'm late, but I was caught up in conversation with Lady Serra and Lord Hector." I flinched at his name, silently cursing under my breath. And from the looks of it, the latter seemed to sense my distress with a look of confusion. I only smiled sheepishly back.
"I think, I'm going to go and take a walk." Nils gave a noise of protest in my direction.
"But Ninian! Don't you want to hear a story?" The shook of my head gave him his answer.
"No, I don't… really feel in the mood to listen. But that doesn't mean you can't enjoy it yourself!"
"Okay…" His frown only stood there for a second before covering it up with a large grin, hopping off the bed to drag a chair over to the aforementioned object before jumping back in.
"Well, don't stay up late too long, Nini. You know how early a lot of the people here wake up!" My nod was swift, as were my feet when I approached his form.
It wasn't much, but the kiss I gave to him on his forehead seemed to calm his previously excited demeanor and pulled back.
"Goodnight Nils…"
"Night Ninian. Don't trip over anything!" I gave a quick nod and let Canas move over to the chair to sit down, opening an old brown book before him.
"I think you'd like this story. It's about a young man who finds these magic beans and sprouts a magic beanstalk that reaches high up into the clouds, where a giant lives."
"It sounds so exciting, Canas!" I retreated a few steps back, watching as the two conversed quietly to each other. My form slowly hit the door and I reached for it, silently exiting out of the small room.
"Alright, let's start then… Eh-hem… Once upon a time, there was a poor village, where…"
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My feet seemed to have a mind of their own as I was guided down the darkened hallways of this ship, stopping in the corridor where…
… Why, where Eliwood's quarters were! Maybe he'll be there? It's a good possibility that he would, with the stunt he managed to pull off shortly ago.
…
My mind was made up. This would probably be the only chance on this ship that I'd be able to have his company all to myself.
And so, slowly, yet very surely, I walked lightly over to the wooden door. My actions hesitated a bit before I finally brought my hand up to knock gently on the object.
…
No answer.
I frowned. I was sure he would he here, I could almost feel-
"Y… Yes?" I heard his voice then and there, even though it was probably even barely a whisper, a possible figment of my imagination. But I heard a slight shuffling noise there after before the door in front of me opened completely.
There he stood, looking quite weary already without the added accessories to accompany it. A simple white cotton nightgown that was probably a size or two too large hung lethargically over his thin form. The headband he usually wore wasn't in his presence, letting semi long strands to shape over his face.
My teeth absent mindedly clung to my lip as I caught a sight of his eyes. They were… empty.
… I'd have to get Hector back at this some how. How /dare/ he make Lord Eliwood turn into this pitiful sight!
But instead of showing hatred, my scarlet eyes shown sadness at this picture.
"Lord Eliwood… May… May I accompany you for a few minutes?" I smiled when his eyes seemed to light up a little, and stepped back a bit.
"Of course, Ninian. Please, do come in." He motioned me inside and closed the door, his hand lightly over my shoulder as he guided me over to his bed and sat down, motioning me to do so as well.
So I did.
"Lord Eliwood… are you sure I should invade your privacy like this? You look quite tired…" I really didn't want to go, but right now his well-being was more important than my own selfish goals.
"Of course not, Ninian. I'd really like some company right now, if you really don't mind…"
"Of course I don't mind! You've been feeling down lately, and I thought it would be appropriate to try to cheer you up." My smile only grew wider as his did as well.
"Ninian…"
"/But/… you look so tired now. You should get some sleep to rest your mind." His smile faltered a bit into a frown.
"… but…" I pressed my finger over his lips, silencing him. How soft and velvety they were…
"We can talk tomorrow in the morn. Right now, you really need sleep, Lord Eliwood… But I'll stay with you until you fall asleep." His smile slowly formed again and gave a soft nod, silently laying himself on the bed while I draped the blanket over his thin form.
He was like a child… So innocent there, I almost felt guilty for feeling like I had a few minutes ago.
…
He was a sleep already? I blinked. I never had quite expected him for be /that/ exhausted, but I was relieved that he would be able to rest easily tonight.
"…" Forward… gently forward, I placed my lips over his forehead, stroking his pale cheek lightly before retreating back with a soft frown.
"Sweet dreams, Lord Eliwood…"
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Finally! X.x This took me a bit, but it's longer than the other chapters, so I'm content. XD Sorry for the grammatical errors you find. I read it a few times, and so did my beta reader, but yeah…
Um, and a lot of couples were implied in this thing. XD
… And no, Canas/Nils isn't one of them. :D;
Pedophile fans: Aw…
Oh, don't worry, I think they're a great couple too! n.n
PF: Yay! :D
Other people: … -throw rotten tomatoes at her .o
x.x!
… And I know this is sorta light since it's supposed to be rated R, but I needed just a few random fillers… but I promise the angst shall come back soon! :o
But um… what was I going to say? Oh yes… here's a short summary for my upcoming fic, which I might either write very soon, when I get to being half complete with this fic, or when I complete this fic all together… or maybe I might not write it at all. X.x It's an AU. :D
In the dirty streets of an unknown metropolis, hope lies faint in that of the current citizens of this nightmarish scene. Adults are covered in the robes of greed and hate, while children lie helpless in the streets for those who are sadistic. Rich and poor are at the utmost ends of each other, where either one was bathing in pools of diamonds while others have yet to bathe in years…
This dark, dreary atmosphere was something they were all used to, especially what lies underground, where organizations from all kinds earn their living by picking off those they were assigned to kill…
But all is not completely dark, for a single sanctuary is placed away, far away from this enigmatic conspiracy. Where children were fortunate enough to be taken in and given the purities and moralities of that who is named St. Elimine…
2 people, both tainted with their stained hands holding the bloods of thousands of their victims, seem to find content in each other's lives by advertising their false love.
Yet, when a single child, who's often radiance was beyond any form of innocence, is targeted upon, by what ends will they meet to obtain this soul's love?
… Yeah, crappy I know. :D –smacks it-
ONE more think before I leave you all to… maybe review. XD I've been wondering about this setting for a bit… should it take place ALL throughout their voyage back to land? Or throughout the rest of the game? Just wondering…
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Touch please. ;.;
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