Hola! Once again thanks SOOO much for the reviews. You don't know how happy it makes me. It makes me very happy. Who doesn't want to see what people think of their story! :] But I have to do this :]
To the Actually reviewer: I totally agree with you man, or uh...girl. I agree with most everything you said. :] I just still don't see why they can't help him. I don't want him not to have the ring. I know he should be the one to have it. I think that they could help him by destroying the spirit inside the ring. They can help Marik with his little psycho problem. You're prolly going to say that that's because he wasn't really a spirit inside of something. Or something like that. But if they had destroyed the evil spirit inside the ring before, they could've helped Ryou and save their own asses from a lot of what happened after all the Doom crap and stuff. So that's what I meant by getting rid of the spirit. Also, yea I agree that he was able to hang out with them at duelist kingdom. And yea he did comment and talk and he had some funny scenes with the Bandit Keith bit. But even when he does comment, no one seems to notice. Or they just ignore it. It's all "Yugi you can do it! We're here for you!" I've never seen anyone have a real conversation with him, besides the part when he was introduced because then it was inevitable. And, first you told me that Yami Kura was the evil one and was the one ruining Ryou's life and hurting others. Now you tell me that he actually protects Ryou and helps the others. But I think Yami Kura is just basically, evil. And a bastard. I do think he's done more to Ryou than just hurt his grades and social life. Stabbing him is one thing :]. Well it doesn't really matter. Are you reading my mind? Because you're right about what I'm going to say. It's just fan fiction! People want to have a little fun writing totally untrue stories about their fave characters! I'm one of them. And what's with the anonymous thing? Do you not have a pen name? Or are you afraid I'm going to get mad or something? Cause I think that you should tell me and people your opinion! I wont yell and scream and call you names. :] And if you're afraid that other people are gonna get mad, well then that's just uh...silly. If they say anything negative just tell them to shove it up their ass.
So finally they will actually start planning something evil. Ya know...I'm sorry. I haven't really made Yami B very...evil. But he will be I promise! Hey has anyone heard that new song from uh...that american idol girl....Kelly Clarkson? Break Away I think it's called. Well I heard it last night and it really reminds me of Marik. :]
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Ryou and Bakura just stood there. Finally Marik and Malik came out of the bathroom. They walked over to Ryou and the Spirit.
Malik wouldn't stop grinning. "That was fun." Marik smiled triumphantly. Ryou just rolled his eyes.
"Well you had your little visit. You put me in a worse mood than I was already in and you soiled my bathroom. So you can leave now. I hope you've had your fun." Ryou said sadly. Then he added, "I bet when Yugi and his friends get together, they don't have sex in each others bathrooms."
"AGGGHHH! That name!" Marik hissed between clenched teeth. "How dare you utter that name in front of me!" He growled at Ryou. Bakura and Malik also frowned.
"Really Ryou. What are you saying? That Yugi and his friends are better than us?" Bakura asked angrily.
"Yea that's exactly what I'm saying!" Ryou shouted at them. "Anyway I'm going to go rest. If you bother me at all, I swear you'll regret it." Ryou yelled and then he walked back to his room and slammed the door. They heard a little click noise that made it apparent he had locked it.
Malik looked at Bakura. "What the heck is his problem?"
"Yugi didn't invite him to his little sleepover party." Bakura replied.
"That's a good thing."
"That's what I told him. But I guess he wants more friends than just us. Yugi and his friends are never nice to Ryou. I think it really gets to him. Not sure why, but he wants to be friends with them." Bakura explained.
"That's just sick." Malik said disgusted.
"Yea I know. But I don't know why they are so mean to him. It's not like he does anything to them."
"I don't really care if they are mean to him."
"Well...it's like they are insulting you too, ya know." Bakura lied.
"What?! No one insults me! I hate them anyway. Do you know when that party is?" Malik asked.
"No I don't but I can ask Ryou."
"I thought you weren't allowed to disturb him."
"What's he gonna do? He's a wuss." Bakura stated and then he started to walk over to Ryou's door.
"You're brave to mess with him and his bitchiness." Malik commented.
When Bakura got over to Ryou's door he noticed Marik squatting by the door still growling at Ryou.
"Uh...Marik?" Marik just glared at him and then went back to growling at the door.
"You're in my way Marik, move." Bakura demanded. But Marik still squatted by the door.
"Goddammit MOVE!" Bakura shouted at him. He then proceeded to kicking him away from the door. "Hey Ryou! When was that party of Yugi's?" He shouted through the locked door.
"The party is at eight. Now leave me alone!" Ryou shouted through the door, not even wondering why the spirit would want to know such a thing. Bakura walked back over to Malik and Marik. Marik had crawled his way over to where Malik was sitting on the couch. Bakura pulled up a chair facing the couch.
"He said that the party is at eight. Why do you wanna know?" Bakura asked Malik puzzled.
"Well..." Malik started grinning, "We could go and have a little...fun." Bakura thought for a moment and then an evil grin appeared on his face too.
"Sounds good." Bakura said.
"Wait what?" Marik asked still in a daze from the evil foot of Bakura.
"We're going to ruin the Pharaohs day." Malik told his other half.
Marik just sat there for a minute. Then he broke out in maniacal laughter. "Mwuahahahaha! Finally, the day has come!"
"Yea..." Malik said rolling his eyes.
"So what are we going to do?" Bakura asked Malik.
Malik thought for a moment. "We could go in uninvited."
"No that's not evil enough. We're evil. We should have an evil plan." Bakura disagreed.
"Well then what do you have in mind?" Malik frowned.
"I say we go over there and just annoy the hell out of them." Bakura said smirking.
"Yea, and how do we do that?" Malik frowned again, doubting Bakura's plan.
"Stop being so difficult! We'll wait until it's dark and then go over to Yugi's house. Then we'll plan there okay?" Bakura shouted at him. Then they waited until dark.
Once they decided it was dark enough, they crept out of the house so that Ryou wouldn't hear. They walked down the street all quiet like until they came to Yugi's house. Bakura looked around for a place to hide so that no one would notice them. He spotted some bushes and grabbed the two other boys and pulled them over to the bushes before anyone noticed them.
"Oh Bakura! I love when you act all rough with me!" Malik said nuzzling his cheek up against Bakura's cheek.
"Stop it will you." Bakura pushed Malik out of his face. "How can you stand that?" He turned and asked Marik.
"You get used to it."
"Right...anyway we gotta be quiet so that they don't hear. Let's look through this window to see who's in there. Only one of us should though so they don't notice. Uh...Marik how about you?" Bakura suggested. Malik nodded an okay and got up to look through the window. He put his face just so that he could see into it. He noticed that Yugi and the Pharaoh were there. With them was the usual gang of Jonouchi, Anzu and Honda. Then he also saw the dice fiend Otogi, Jo's annoying sister Shizuka, and Seto's younger bratty brother Mokuba. He lowered his head again and reported who he had seen.
"So what do we do now?" Malik asked the white haired spirit.
"Hmm...uh...lemme think." Bakura said. Malik sighed. Bakura looked at him. "Hey you know you could help think too."
"Fine fine, I'll help." Malik said. And then they both started thinking.
Marik however had heard a strange noise. He looked through the bushes out towards the street. There in the middle of it stood a black and white cat. The cat had a white streak that ran over the top of its mouth that made it look like he had a milk mustache. The cat also had a scar that ran across his nose. Marik was intrigued by this cat. It was mewing and looking around. Marik crept his way out of the bushes. The others were thinking so hard that they didn't even notice he had left. Marik made his way over to the cat and started petting it. He looked like a little kid who had found an awesome toy. But then Marik must have pet the cat wrong because it turned around and bit him. Marik tried to keep his scream inside. And it worked because no one heard him. But now he was angry with the cat. It had dared bite him!
Meanwhile the other two boys noticed that Marik was gone.
"Shit! Where did he go!" Bakura looked out through the bushes and saw Marik leaning over something.
"I can't believe this. MARIK!" He tried to scream in a whisper. Marik turned around and looked at him.
"What?" He asked the enraged Bakura.
Bakura just looked at him. "Get the hell back here before someone sees you!" Bakura looked at Malik like it was his fault.
"What?" Malik said innocently.
"He's your crazy sadistic other half." Bakura replied.
"He still has a mind of his own." Malik said, just as Marik returned with something in his hands.
"What is that?" Malik asked him pointing to the limp black thing in his hands.
Marik looked down at it. "I think it's one of the Pharaohs evil minions that goes out and does his bidding. But don't worry. It's dead now." Malik looked at it some more.
"Wait a minute....MARIK! That's just a poor kitty cat! Tell me you really didn't kill it!" Malik said on the verge of tears.
"Yea I did." Marik replied. "Malik, it's for the best. This hell spawn of the Pharaohs was out to get people like you and me. I saved you."
Malik just sat there. Suddenly he began crying. "I can't believe this!" He sobbed. A little too loudly.
Bakura glared at Malik. "Shut it Malik! They might hear us. It's just a cat anyway."
"He is my weaker half." Marik added. Then he raised his arm ready to throw the cat out into the street. Suddenly, Bakura stopped him.
"Wait...we could use that dead carcass." He started laughing evilly. Marik just looked at him while the other Malik kept on crying.
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Well that's all for now. Please keep on reviewing! Oh and if you have any other people you want to show up at the party, then just tell me in your reviews. I can make them show up late or something. :]
