Thanks for the reviews! XD I went to the New York state fair today and I got this awesome Ankh necklace. I also got a headache and I was gonna wait to update till tomorrow, but I decided against it cause of all you awesome reviewers.
To my good friend Actually: I don't know what to say. And that is because I agree with you. Everything you said I understand and I agree with it. But I still think that they could've helped him! They are able to destroy the evil spirit. They did destroy it. Just later on in the series. But with most every other 'evil' character, Yugi and friends would go after them right away. Right when they are threatened they go after someone. Like Marik, Pegasus and Dartz. Yea they had some pretty big reasons to go after them right away. It was imperative that they went after them right away. But I think that if they had really wanted to, they could have gone after the spirit, Zork butt, whatever it was! And they didn't. So they had to do it later. And they probably made it much tougher on themselves by waiting to destroy him. Well after all that, really all I mean to say is that they could have, but they didn't. The helping him in danger is really just saving him from an evil spirit that wants to take over the world. I think that's pretty dangerous, but ya know. That's just my opinion. Sure he needs Ryou now, but if someday, somehow, he finds a way where he wouldn't need Ryou anymore, then Ryou could be in danger. So you think my story is sloppily done? Because you don't like my idea? That hurts. [jk] Anyway, even if I did write the idea that you came up with, Bakura would get anything he damn wished for. I just like Bakura more than any other character. That's just me. And I'm not going to write something that I think is boring like that. Some people like to see something different. Some people like it to be more along the story lines. Mine obviously isn't. You made that clear and I understand everything you've said. I also think you would know before clicking the link to my story, that it was not going to be normal Yu-Gi-Oh! story and such. It says in the summary that Yami B and the Mariks team up to crash Yug'is party. That would never happen. I know you know that :] So yea...[the stabbing thing was that I needed an example...] You're a damn good arguer! Yay! :] But I did ask for flames, so I'm not going to complain. In fact you could almost say this is kind of fun.
Yami No Marik: I'm soooo sorry! I totally forgot about her! I forgot my own story! How pathetic is that?! Anyway, I will have her join the party. Sorry again! [God I feel so stupid...heh]
I have Boom Boom Dollar stuck in my head....:]
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Malik was still crying when a car pulled up to the house. Bakura slapped his hand over his mouth.
"Shhh! Someone's here!" He whispered.
A young lady with wavy blonde hair stepped out. She walked up the path and then stopped a minute to check something inside her purse. This was of course the time when Marik had to make a noise. He sneezed. Mai stopped rattling around in her purse and looked up. She looked around for a while. Then she just stood there. Finally she must have decided it was safe because she walked to the door and rang the door bell. Bakura and the Mariks saw a little spiky haired shadow and knew it was Yugi. Marik hissed, but Bakura slapped him so he would shut up. Finally the two went into the house. Bakura let go of Malik.
"Yay! I can breath again!" Malik shouted happily.
"Maybe I should shut you up for good." Bakura replied. Malik glared at him.
"Hey hey! Let's start the evilness already! Tell me about your plan with the dead Pharaohs minion. " Marik said to the two.
"Right. Now first we'll-" Bakura was cut off by Malik beginning to cry again.
Bakura had had enough of his whining. He took the dead cat's body in his hand and whacked Malik upside the head with it. Malik stopped crying, stunned. He looked at the cat Bakura still held in his hands, and some of the remains that were dripping off his head.
"O-okay...I'll stop." Malik mumbled, stilled stunned by the whole thing.
"Good. Now let's save this treasure for later evil doing." Bakura put the dead body into the bushes out of sight in case any retard was walking out late at night and decided to look into people's yards and snoop around or something.
"So...what are we going to do now." Marik asked Bakura anxious to do something evil to his enemy and other innocent people he hated.
"Hmmm...." Bakura sat there thinking. Suddenly he had an idea. "Do you still have your millennium rod?" He asked Marik grinning. [Because in my story he didn't give it back :P] Marik nodded and started digging around in his...pants.
"What are you doing...?" Bakura asked nervously.
"Getting my rod."
"NO NO that's not what I meant-" Bakura started but he then saw that Marik pulled out the millennium rod. "What the hell? How did you fit that in there! And without it being obvious!" He asked surprised and also grossed out.
Marik just twirled the rod around in his hands and stuck out his tounge. "That's a secret."
Bakura frowned. "That's okay. I probably wouldn't want to know how anyway."
"So what's the plan. What are we going to do with my beloved rod?" Marik asked again intoxicated by the sight of his wonderful rod.
"Every time you say, 'My rod', it sounds wrong and sick." Bakura made a disgusted face. "Well whatever, here give me your...rod." Bakura reached out for the millennium rod.
"NO! You can't have it! It's mine!" Marik held the rod close to him to protect it from the unworthy hands of Bakura.
"If you wanna do evil things with 'your rod' to the Pharaoh, then give it to me!" Bakura demanded again.
Marik just hugged it tighter and closer and hissed.
"Fine! You can do it then! But you better do what I say!" Bakura shouted at him again.
Malik was still in a daze, Bakura and Marik were fighting over Marik's rod, and it was amazing that no one from the party heard them outside.
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Well sorry it's so short but I'm tired...Anyway I got Mai in there...and theres room for more, so if you have any more characters you want, then just let me know! And keep reviewing, Oh wonderful people! Thanks thanks thanks!
