Okay, for that person that gave me the really critical review...all those reasons are why I am rewriting the first few chapters, because it was too cliché. Also, Natsu is not way too perfect, which you will soon find out in other chapters. I know that there isn't really a good reason to let four people be in the cell, but, come on, if there wasn't I would have no story line. And by the way, the version of Naruto that I read does suck. I read the Shonen Jump graphic novels, and they don't translate anything very well. Also, the random stuff at the beginning and end of each chapter is just for people who want to read it...I thought it would be entertaining and funny. Anyway, thank you for noticing my good spelling. I think that it's the most annoying thing in the world to come across a good story that is hard to read because people are lazy and their spelling sucks. I was hoping someone would say something about that. Also, thank you for giving me a more critical review, I appreciate when people tell me what is wrong and what is good when they review instead of just saying "oh good story".......not that I don't appreciate it! I was actually feeling kind of big for a while because nobody was saying anything bad about my story! Haha, well I'm almost done rewriting the first chapters so hang in there!