AN about my other fic, No Title Yet I GOT A FLAME (a mild one but ITS STILL A FLAME!)!! ! YEAH!!! Does happy dance with flames Sry...anyways on a more serious note.
PLEASE, PLEASE don't try to correct by usage of words or technological knowledge, I know that different places use different terms; my friend and I confuse each other cause she uses different terms then what I'm used to. And also, I've been a computer/ internet/ other addict for umm...my whole life, I might do stuff differently but oh well; it's a free country!
Falls on floor laughing DEA A MARY SUE???? Please! She is partially based on KRIS (get her name right or she'll hunt you down) and trust me Kris is the opposite of a Mary Sue, although she might give that impression at first. Have you tried CAREFULLY reading the chapters over? You might notice she gets overly emotional, and that's not the end of it.
ONTO THE STORY!
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"MY FAULT I WON? Excuse me! I'd say its because I had a better idea!"
"You had a better idea? Please! You have got to be kidding me!"
"At least MY idea had some SENSE behind it!"
"At least mine SELLS better!" Opal shouted; her eyes alight with fire. Foaly noticed how pretty she looked, in a deadly sort of way.
"Okay,"
"Okay? Okay!"
"Thank you!"
"What for?"
"You just agreed that mine is better."
"WHAT?"
"I said Okay, implying that mine is the better one. You agreed with Okay and that means mine is better!"
"No I didn't!" She said sticking out her tongue in a childish, but to Foaly, cute way.
"Yes you did!" Foaly got up and walked over to her. Just then the door was flung open and Holly stepped in. Unfortunately, as she opened the door, she had knocked Opal into Foaly's arms.
"Oopps!"
"Err...yea...Well...you see," said Foaly, blushing.
"Time to go, you can come back later. Foaly, save it for never why don't you?" and grinning, Holly escorted Opal back to prison.
You like? Good, cause it was utterly pathetic. BYE!
Snuffles