After much persuading from Brody, im writing. Mikelucas1 - This is mostly for you,too. You seem like one of my biggest fans and I want your opinion on something - I just read the whole Not So Perfect story, and it seems like my best. I was thinking of deleting all the 'ending' chaps, and starting over from where Summer fell and continuing the story - what do you think?
The Surprise
After Seths flat-line, and Summers blood-curdeling scream, doctors rushed in to save Seth.
They electrocuted Seths chest once, then twice when they heard the reasuring "beep beep beep" sound of Seths heart-beat.
"I'm never leaving you again." Summer wispered into his ear.
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Summer snuggled up to Seth, as close as she could and dossed off. Ocassionally she woke from little noises inside the hospital, or the 'beep's of Seths heart-monitor but other then that she was peaceful. Until something interupted the peace.
Summer breathed as quietly as she could, her eyes open. She was stairing intently at the room, as someone came in. She got a glimpse of something shiny clutched in his hand. Who was he? It was too dark to see features or clothing, but she already had an idea. The person came closer, and as they did their features got more distinguished.
"Your done once and for-all." Mike wispered into Seths ear.
Mike? Mike Mike?
Mike brought the shiney thing up, and he almost stabbed Seth. Until Summer did something that surprised them both. She kicked the knife right out of Mikes hand.
"Holy shit!" Mike yelled. He hadn't even seen her.
Summer ran to where the knife was, grabbed it and yelled for a doctor.
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Right. Short chapter. I know. Im working on it.
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