The Notebook
Chapter Three: The Model Home
Ryan woke up the next morning to find an empty bed next to him. He groaned, got off the couch, and walked over to the bed which still had a faint imprint in it left by Marissa's body. He sat down on the bed and took a deep breath, taking in Marissa's vanilla scent that still lingered in the sheets.
He then looked to his left and saw a piece of paper folded neatly and left on the pillow of his bed. Ryan smiled slightly and picked up the note that had his name written on the front in Marissa's girlie handwriting.
Opening the note he began to read what it said:
'Ryan, thanks so much for what you did for me last night. And I'm sorry about Luke, sometimes he can be such an idiot. Well anyway, I hope to see you again today. Maybe you and Seth can come over and hang out. My friend Summer is coming over today too, so it might be fun!'
Marissa
Ryan folded the note back up, stuck it in his pocket, and then began getting dressed. He put on a worn out pair of pants and a wife beater with a black button down shirt over that. He ran his fingers through his messy hair that hadn't been washed in a couple of days. Then, he headed out the door of the pool house.
Ryan walked past the pool and walked into the back door of the Cohen's house that led to the kitchen. He figured that Kirsten and Sandy would be at work since it was Monday at about 11 o'clock. Since the kitchen was empty Ryan decided to go up to Seth's room.
He reached Seth's bedroom door and knocked a few times before entering. Once inside the room he saw Seth listening to his headphones and reading a comic book. "Hey, man." Ryan yelled over the music, as he walked over to where Seth's bed was.
Seth who was clearly startled looked up suddenly, seeing Ryan standing next to him, he took off his headphones, "Oh, hey. What's up?"
"Not much. I just thought you might want to do something today." Ryan replied.
"You mean time for us to bond?" Seth asked, excitedly.
"I don't know. I was thinking we could maybe hang out with...umm...Marissa?"
Seth sat up in bed, confused, "What? Why would we do something with Marissa?"
"I don't know." Ryan said, shrugging his shoulders.
"Ryan..." Seth said, getting up from where he was seated on his bed. "Did something happen between you and Marissa?" he asked with a mischievous grin.
"Oh, umm...nnnooo...of course not...she has a boyfriend..." Ryan mumbled, nervously.
"Right...And I own like all the pudding in the world..." Seth replied, as he continued to think about what he had just said, "Oh, how I wish that oh so wonderful dream would come true." Seth added, dreamily.
"Umm...Okay, whatever you just said didn't make any sense.." Ryan said, confused.
"No, what doesn't make sense is why you won't tell me what happened between you and Marissa!" Seth said.
"Nothing."
"Nothing is something, so tell me what happened before I make the rest of your stay here hell." Seth replied, forcefully.
"I don't see how you can do that."
"Well, you must not know me to well. Because I will force you into going to every comic book convention with me...and...I can whip some pretty good ass." Seth said smiling, as he flexed his muscles.
"Dude, do you not realize how many things were wrong in that sentence...I mean bad image!" Ryan replied, as he shook his head in disbelief.
"Well, all I know is that you might not be alive to see Marissa tomorrow if you don't tell me what happened between he two of you."
"Right..." Ryan said, with a light laugh.
"Okay, I might not be able to beat you up, but that's strictly because you are from Chino and have plenty of experience...Anyway, I will still force you to go to every comic book convention starting tomorrow..."
Ryan shook his head and the replied, "Okay, okay...I went outside to smoke a cigarette last night and saw Marissa drunk and knocked out in her yard...and, I couldn't find her keys to her house, so I brought her to the pool house to sleep..."
"Uh huh. Continue." Seth said, the satisfaction evident in his voice.
"Well, she slept in the bed and I slept on the couch...and this morning when I woke up there was a note on the bed...here..." Ryan said, taking the note from his pocket and giving it to Seth to read.
Seth took the note with satisfaction and began to read it...After a few seconds, Seth looked up, folded the note up, and handed it back to Ryan. "Dude, this is great!" Seth exclaimed.
"Uh, why?" Ryan asked.
"Because you get to flirt with Marissa...." Seth started. "And I get to hang out with Summer Roberts!"
"Umm...I'm not going to flirt with Marissa...and who is Summer Roberts?" Ryan asked.
"Only the hottest girl at Harbor High." Seth said, dreamily.
"Okay man, you are starting to freak me out!" Ryan stated.
"Yeah well I do that to a lot of people...Now let's get going..." Seth said, heading out the door with Ryan following right behind him.
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Knock. Knock. Ryan and Seth waited patiently outside the front door of Marissa's mansion. After a couple of minutes, the door finally opened revealing an excited Marissa, "Oh, hey guys! I'm glad you came!"
Ryan just smiled at Marissa, not having anything to say...Luckily Seth decided to speak up, "Yeah, well thanks so much for the invite."
"Yeah, sure...Umm, come inside." she said, stepping aside and letting them come inside.
"Thanks." Ryan mumbled, shyly.
"Sure..." Marissa began, "Oh, Summer's here too..." Marissa finished, leading them into the living room where Summer sat on the coach watching a TV show.
"Sum, this is Ryan...and you know Seth..." Marissa said, gesturing to the two of them.
"What?" Summer said looking up. "Oh, hi. What are the two of you doing here?" she asked coldly.
"Marissa invited us." Seth said, with a smile.
"Really?" Summer asked turning towards Marissa. "I wonder why she would do something like that?"
"Sum, I just thought it'd be fun for the four of us to hang out...I felt bad about them getting punched by Luke yesterday and..." Marissa began.
"Since when do you feel bad about what happens to Seth Cohen and his little poor friend?" Summer asked.
"I don't know...Maybe about the same time you started being such a b!itch!" Marissa yelled.
Summer stared, stunned at what her 'best friend' had just said to her, "Coop I can't believe you!"
"Sum, I just thought we could all get together and hang out...It might be fun!"
"I guess..." Summer said. "But I want to watch The Valley!" Summer said, excitedly.
Marissa turned to the guys as if to ask if they were okay with this, "Okay...sounds good..." Seth said, taking a seat next to Summer.
"Yeah, okay." Ryan replied.
"Okay, great. Summer you and Seth put the DVD in and Ryan and I will go get the popcorn." Marissa said, heading to the kitchen.
Ryan shrugged and followed Marissa into the kitchen...
"So...." Marissa said, getting the popcorn package from the cupboard and putting it in the microwave. "Thanks for last night." she added, walking over to where Ryan was standing.
"Yeah, sure..." Ryan said with a small smile.
"Well, I just wanted to say thanks."
"Yeah, you're welcome..." Ryan replied.
"So? How long are you going to be staying with the Cohen's?"
"Maybe just the summer..." Ryan said.
"Oh. So then you'll go back to umm...Chino?" Marissa asked.
"Yeah."
"Oh...." Marissa added, awkwardly. "Well, umm...I wish you could stay longer..."
"You do?" Ryan asked.
"Well, yeah...I mean I want to get to know you a little better."
Ryan just stood there, silent.
After a minute or so he spoke up, "Marissa...."
"Yeah?"
"Umm...Never mind..." Ryan said.
Just as, Ryan and Marissa leaned in a little closer to each other the microwave went off.
Marissa who was startled pulled back quickly and went to get the popcorn from the microwave. She took the bag out and out it in a bowl and then turned back to Ryan, offering him a warm smile.
"So, I guess we should go back out there?" Marissa said.
"Yeah."
Marissa smiled and walked out the kitchen door as Ryan followed close behind her.
After a few minutes, all four of them were all situated on the couch watching 'The Valley' and eating popcorn...Ryan glanced over at Marissa who was watching the TV intently. He smiled at her expression and her overall beauty. With satisfaction Ryan turned back to the TV, trying to focus more on it than Marissa...But that would be hard to do...
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"So, I guess we'll see you guys later?" Marissa asked, as she walked Seth and Ryan to the door.
"Yeah." Ryan replied, "If that's okay."
"Sure. Summer will probably be here too and we can maybe go down to the beach or something."
"Okay, great. That sounds fun." Seth said, relieved that Summer would be there too.
"Okay, well bye." Marissa said, looking in Ryan's direction.
"Bye."
"Bye, Marissa." Ryan muttered.
She waved goodbye to them and closed the door. Meanwhile, Ryan and Seth walked next door to their house.
"Dude, you like so got me hooked up with Summer Roberts!" Seth said, excitedly.
"Ugh...Yeah, I guess I sort of did..." Ryan said, "So, does this mean no comic book conventions or any of that crap?"
"Well, we'll have to see about that..." Seth replied, giving Ryan a light, manly pat on the back. "So, how did things go with you and Marissa? You know it seemed like you two were in the kitchen for a while!"
"Oh, umm....Well, popcorn takes time, you know?"
"Yeah, those two and a half minutes really take up a lot of time in your life." Seth said, sarcastically.
"Whatever..." Ryan said, entering the Cohen's house.
"So, man. What do you say you and I share a little bonding time? You know, go chill by the pool with a hole package of pudding?"
"Oh, I don't know, man. That might be kind of weird."
"Hmm..." Seth replied, thinking hard about this, "I guess you're right...But it's worth a try!" Seth finished.
"Yeah okay, I guess." Ryan said, "I'll just go put my bathing suit on..."
"Okay, cool. Me too." Seth said, heading towards his room and Ryan towards the pool house.
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"So man, I had fun today." Seth said, as he floated around on a raft in the pool.
"Yeah." Ryan replied, not really wanting to talk, especially about things that reminded him of Marissa.
"Well, Summer's one hot chick..." Seth said, with a sly smile overcoming his face.
"Yeah I guess...If you're into that kind of thing. " Ryan replied, with complete honesty.
"Dude! What guy wouldn't be into her? I mean she's hot and sexy...and can be a complete bitch, which is cool!" Seth said, excitedly.
"Okay man, don't ever say the words and sexy again." Ryan said, trying to suppress his laughter.
"Okay whatever...Now we can talk a little more about Marissa!"
"What? Why?" Ryan asked, nervously.
"Umm...Maybe because you can't stop thinking about her."
"What? I'm not thinking about her..." Ryan lied.
"Dude, you can't hide it! I can see through you!"
"Umm...Okay that's wrong...And I'm not thinking about her! Why would I be doing that?" Ryan asked, trying to play it cool.
"Hmmm...Let's see...Maybe because you like her!" Seth replied.
"What? I do not like her...And she has a boyfriend anyway..."
"No, not really...I mean Luke's not much of a boyfriend, more of a bastard..." Seth said, truthfully. "Wait, did you just say that you'd go out with Marissa if she didn't have a boyfriend?"
"What? No..." Ryan lied once again.
"Oh, I see...You just don't want to admit that you like Marissa Cooper! It's okay man, I know what it's like to be a guy..."
"Really? For some reason that surprises me." Ryan joked.
"Hahaha...Very funny! But at least I'm manly enough to admit that I like Summer Roberts." Seth shot back.
"Yeah. Well, you like pudding."
"Do not bring the pudding into this conversation...The pudding and I have a special connection!" Seth cried.
"Oh sorry...Didn't mean to make you cry, Seth." Ryan said, trying not to laugh.
"I am not crying, just a little emotional..." Seth replied, wiping away a fake tear, "I think it's my time of the month.(lol)" he added, sarcastically.
"Oh, yeah...That explains the cravings for pudding..."
"No, actually that's there all the time." Seth said.
"Oh..."
"Well, what's the GP, RA?" Seth asked.
"No clue what you just said." Ryan stated, confused."Game Plan, Ryan Atwood."
"Oh, so now you're just using initials?" he asked, curiously.
"Yeah. It saves time." Seth replied.
"Not if you have to translate."
"GP." Seth said, thinking hard.
"Game Plan?" Ryan asked.
"Good Point."
"Oh." Ryan said, still very confused.
"Maybe, we can work on that a little more..."
"Yeah." Ryan replied.
"But for now let's just do nothing." Seth said, closing his eyes and relaxing on the float, "Nothing makes you feel like you're doing something..."
"GP." Ryan replied.
"What? Game Plan? That doesn't make sense."
"No. Good Point."
"Oh...I like the way you think RA!" Seth said, smiling.
"You too SC." Ryan replied. (Meaning Seth Cohen.)
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Ryan laid in bed, staring up at the ceiling, thinking about all the things that had happened to him since he had gone to stay with the Cohen's. Ryan had been doing a lot more thinking lately, about his future and just about life in general...Ryan had also been thinking about where he would go at the end of the summer and what he would do...But most of all Ryan had thought about the fact that he didn't really fit in with the high society that was Orange County...There were so many rich people who were all so self centered and materialistic...And this wasn't the type of people Ryan was used to being around.
However, in some weird way he had found a friendship with Seth, one that was completely unexpected since they were two complete opposites...And there was also Sandy and Kirsten who had been so nice and welcoming to Ryan since the first day he got to New Port...They were kind of like parents to him, even though he had only been with them for a couple of days.
'And then there's Marissa' Ryan thought to himself. The one person who had really intrigued Ryan, in the fact that she was completely different from what he thought she'd be. She was excepting of him and they just had some sort of unexplainable connection. 'But it would never work out between the two of you!' Ryan told himself. And this was true, they were two different people living separate lives...
After Ryan couldn't stand it any longer, he got out of bed, grabbed his bags and began packing...Ryan had to leave...If he stayed in New Port for the summer he would get to comfortable with that way of life and the people in it...So, with one last glance at the pool house, Ryan picked up his things and walked out the door.
He crept quietly by the pool and walked around to the Cohen's front yard. Ryan smiled to himself as he thought about the night he met Marissa for the first time...Then, with no hesitation Ryan walked down the driveway to the curb.
And just as Ryan was about to step foot on the road he heard a voice behind him, "Dude, where are you going?"
Ryan sighed and turned around to face Seth, "I don't know...Somewhere other than here."
"Ouch. That was cold. Very cold...Now I've got the shivers." Seth replied with a laugh.
Ryan stood there staring at Seth, angry at how he had to make everything sound so stupid. "That made no sense." he finally managed to get out.
"Yeah well at least I'm not using the initials anymore." Seth said.
"Yeah, I guess..."
"So, dude where are you going and why wasn't I invited?" Seth asked, anxiously.
"I can't stay here." Ryan replied.
"Why not?"
"Because New Port isn't where I need to be this summer." Ryan stated, truthfully.
"Well, where do you need to be this summer?" Seth asked.
"Not here." Ryan said, turning around and beginning the long walk to 'Somewhere.'
"Well, I know a place you can go..." Seth replied.
Ryan stopped and turned around, "Where?"
"You'll see..." Seth said with a smile. "You can stay there for the night until we figure something out...Plus this will give me more time to convince you to stay..." he added, playfully.
"Let's go." Ryan said.
"Wait, dude. We need to get the essentials!"
"What?" Ryan asked.
"Essentials. You know things like pudding..."
"Oh, right. The cravings." Ryan replied, referring to the conversation they had earlier.
"Yeah. Plus it'd be easier to take the bikes..." Seth said, turning around and heading
inside.
Ryan waited impatiently for about 5 minutes, before Seth appeared with the bikes and some pudding.
Ryan shook his head in disbelief, "So, are you ready?"
"Yep. I've got the essentials!" Seth said, excitedly.
"Yeah."
"Okay well seeing that we've got our GP(Game Plan), let's go." Seth said, hopping on a bike.
Ryan did the same and the two of them biked quickly down the driveway...Just as they had reached the road Marissa pulled up in her car, beside them.
"What are you guys doing?" She asked, curiously seeing that Seth had pudding and Ryan had his bags.
"Ummm..." Seth said, trying to hide the 'essentials'. "Summer doesn't need to know about this..." he added, referring to the fact that he had pudding and comic books.
"Yeah, I won't tell her if you don't tell me where you guys are going." she said, looking at Ryan.
"Ugh. I don't really know." Ryan replied, truthfully.
"We were going to hide out behind the Comic Book Store." Seth said, with complete honesty.
Ryan looked at Seth, "What? That's where we were going?"
"Umm...Yeah, they have like a tent set up in the back for some weird reason." Seth said, with a laugh.
Ryan shook his head in confusion...Seth was taking him to a Comic Book Store...
Marissa laughed at this. When she noticed Seth staring at her she smiled, "What it's just really funny...And I bet Summer would find it pretty funny too!"
"What?" Seth asked, with a frown. "You can't tell her."
"Okay, okay." She replied, "But I've got an idea!"
"You mean a GP?" Seth asked.
Ryan looked at Marissa, "He means Game Plan."
She smiled, "Oh okay. Yeah, I've got a Game Plan."
"Cool. What?" Seth asked.
"Hop in. I'll drive you."
"Umm...How do we know to trust you?" Seth asked.
"I don't know. But if I can trust you which I don't think I can, I'm pretty sure I can trust
Marissa." Ryan replied.
"GP(Good Point)." Seth said.
"I thought you were going to stop using initials." Ryan said looking at Seth.
I don't know...I've gotten kind of attached!"
Oh." Ryan said.
Okay, well you can just put the bikes in the back." Marissa said.
Thanks." Ryan replied.
Don't worry about it." she said with a smile.
Ryan and Seth loaded the bikes in the trunk and got in the car.
-----So, where exactly are we going?" Seth asked.
You'll see." Marissa replied.
Well, I still think the Comic Book Store would be better." he replied.
No, man." Ryan said.
Well, at least I got one thing I wanted tonight!" Seth said.
What's that?" Marissa asked.
"Pudding." Seth stated.
Ryan and Marissa looked at each other and sighed...Seth was really not your average teenager...
"So, tell me if you like this." Marissa said, taking out a CD and putting it in the CD player.
Music by Rooney began to fill the car...Ryan looked out the window, trying to focus on the music.
After a minute or so, he replied, "I like it."
"Really?" she asked, surprised.
"Yeah." he replied.
"I didn't see you as the type to listen to music, especially this."
"Yeah well I'm full of surprises." Ryan said with a smile.
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"Okay we're here." Marissa said, pulling into a driveway and getting out of the car, Ryan and Seth did the same.
"What is this place?" Seth asked.
Marissa looked at Seth then at Ryan,"The Model Home." she said with a smile.
"The Model Home?" Seth asked. "I still think the Comic Book Store would be better.""Sorry Seth, we'll try there next time." Ryan replied.
"Thanks man, at least someone cares about me besides Captain Oats."
"Who's Captain Oats?" Marissa asked curiously.
"Seth's fake plastic horse that he talks to." Ryan said with a smile.
"Oh..." Marissa replied, trying not to laugh out loud.
"Thanks, man." Seth said, looking at Ryan, "Now everyone is going to know about 'The Captain' and I."
"Sorry, dude. But that's like the first thing you showed me when I got to New Port, so I kind of never forgot it." Ryan said.
"Uh huh." Seth said, walking up to the door of the model home and stepping inside.
"So, I guess we should go check it out." Ryan said to Marissa.
"Yeah, I guess so..." she replied.
And with that Ryan and Marissa followed Seth into the home.
The three of them walked throughout the building looking at all the construction that had been going on. "So, this is kind of cool." Seth said, trying to break the awkward silence."
"Yeah." Ryan and Marissa replied at the same time.
"Not cooler than the tent in the back of the Comic Store though." Seth pointed out.
Ryan and Marissa shook their heads and said with a laugh, "No of course not."
"Well, anyone up for some pudding?" Seth asked, taking a seat on the floor and opening a package of pudding.
"Ugh...I don't know..." Ryan said, sitting down next to Seth.
Marissa sat down as well, "Come on Ryan! You've got to have some!" she said, taking a thing of pudding from Seth.
"And why is that?" Ryan asked, playfully.
"I don't know." she said with a smile, "Because I'm having some."
"Well, in that case I guess I will." Ryan replied, as he got some pudding for himself.
"Okay, well now that the two of you are done flirting I can actually eat my pudding without throwing up." Seth said.
Ryan and Marissa looked at each other, "What?" they asked.
"Oh come on. You two are all over each other!" Seth said, taking another bite of his pudding.
"No we aren't!" Marissa replied.
"Okay, okay." Seth said, raising his hands in the air, "But if Marissa didn't have a boyfriend the two of you would be making out right here, right now."
"Seth, that is not true!" Marissa said, getting angry.
"Yeah man..." Ryan said.
"Okay. If you say so." Seth replied, going back to his pudding.
For about an hour the three of them just sat there in silence, not knowing what to say...
"Wait. What time is it?" Seth asked.
"Umm...4:30a.m." Marissa said, looking at her watch.
"Damn! How did it get to be so late...Or should I say early." Seth said, getting up.
"Dude, what are you doing?" Ryan asked, confused.
"Sorry man. I forgot that I was grounded. And my parents get up at like 5 to get ready for work, so I've got to get home..." he muttered.
"Oh okay. I'll drive you home." Marissa said getting up.
"No that's okay I'll take the bike, it's not that far...Plus I could use the exercise, you know I've got to get in shape, because Ryan's going to teach me how to fight. Right, man?" Seth asked Ryan.
"Umm...Yeah I guess." he replied.
"Okay, cool. Well, you two have fun! And I'll be back later when my parents are at work. Okay? Okay cool. Bye." Seth said, rushing out of the model home not giving Ryan and Marissa time to speak up.
"So..." Marissa started. "What do we do now?"
"Umm...You don't have to stay if you don't want to." Ryan said, looking Marissa straight in the eye.
"Well, what if I want to?" she asked, moving closer to him.
"That's good because I want...." Ryan started, "Umm...I want you to stay too."
Marissa smiled and took Ryan's hands in hers, giving them quick kisses. When Marissa stopped and looked up at Ryan she couldn't resist and well neither could he.
Ryan grabbed Marissa by the waist, pulling her into him as he kissed her passionately on the lips...
Ryan pulled away from Marissa, scared that she would be upset by what had just happened, because she did have a boyfriend. But instead she was smiling and seemed to be content with what had just happened. "I'm sorry Marissa. I shouldn't have..." Ryan began but was cut off by Marissa's soft lips.
After a minute she broke away, "Ryan. I know this might be hard to believe, but I want this more than anything right now!" she said, truthfully.
Ryan smiled, "Me too...But what about Luke?" he asked.
"Don't worry about him. I've been meaning to break up with him for a long time but never have. And now you're here and I have a huge reason to break up with him." she said, tracing her fingers on his muscular arm to make little circles.
Ryan nodded his head and then leaned down kissing Marissa tenderly on the lips. He ran his hand up her shirt, feeling her soft skin.
Then, Ryan playfully picked Marissa up and carried her into another room, placing her on the floor since there were no beds. Marissa giggled a little at this, but was cut off buy Ryan's short kisses on her neck, moving up to her lips.
Marissa who was on top of Ryan gently pushed him down on the floor and kissed him deeply. She took her shirt off quickly, throwing it across the room. Through the kisses she helped Ryan take off his shirt, revealing a very muscular body.
Marissa smiled at this, "You work out?" she asked, playfully.
"No. But I'm from Chino." Ryan replied with a smile.
"Oh, right." Marissa said, as she went back to kissing him.
Ryan unhooked her bra, and it fell to the floor...Marissa smiled as she took off Ryan's pants and boxers. Marissa then slipped off her skirt and the two of them went back to the long passionate kisses that felt so meaningful...
Ryan Marissa laid on the floor with nothing on. Marissa who was a little cold began to shiver, so Ryan wrapped his arms tighter around her trying to warm her up.
Marissa smiled, feeling safe and content to be in Ryan's arms. However, she knew that in a few minutes she would have to go back to the real world and her mom. She checked her watch to find that it was 6:30a.m.
"Ry, I've got to go. My mom will kill me if I'm not home when she wakes up." she said, getting up and putting her clothes on.
Ryan began to do the same, "Okay..."
When they were both dressed they looked up at each other and smiled. Marissa walked over to Ryan giving him a quick kiss and taking his hand, "Do you want to come with me?" she asked.
Since Ryan was going to stay in New Port now and Kirsten and Sandy would already be at work Ryan decided it would be okay, "Do you mind?" he asked.
"No. Of course not." Marissa said with a smile, "Now let's go." she said taking his hand and leading him out to the car.
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At about 7a.m. Marissa pulled into her driveway. She and Ryan got out of the car.
"So, I guess I'll see you sometime later today?" Marissa asked Ryan.
"Yeah, maybe...maybe not." Ryan replied slyly.
"Okay. Well it doesn't really matter." she said sarcastically.
"Yeah. I mean you're kind of annoying." Ryan joked.
"And you are always brooding and it's really annoying." she shot back.
"Yeah."
"Okay. Well bye." Marissa said, turning and walking up to her front door.
"Bye." Ryan said, walking next door...
Ryan and Marissa got about halfway before stopping and turning around...They walked
back over to each other Marissa taking Ryan's lips in hers. After a minute or so, they pulled away smiling. And this time they turned around and went their separate ways...for now!
It was funny how Ryan and Marissa had only known each other for a very short period of time and already felt like they had known each other for their whole lives...But that probably had something to do with the fact that they were complete opposites and usually when you have two complete opposites they will attract!
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A/N: Wow! That was long. lol. I'm sorry if their were any confusing parts or you thought that it was to unrealistic. But I did my best! So, please REVIEW!! Thanks so much. You guys rock!
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