((yawns and rubs sleep from her eyes)) Sorry for such a long update people....I had mild author's block and tons of homework including a big project. This is a more humorous, adapted version of First Ever. More humor...((falls asleep)) enjoy ya? And...review please? And...review Gone?
Dedications: Misori Chan for putting up with my constant badgering about reviewing my stories. sorry bout that. I can be annoying. And thank you for reviewing my stories and telling what you thought about it.
Ryuujitsu: For getting out of hibernation for me to review. Thank you. Actually, this candid version was sparked by your idea so..yeah. You are one of the best authors around so thank you for reviewing my fic!
Pork Steak the Grand(e): Well...another victim to my review maker machine. ;; I could make it infamous if I wanted to. Meh....thanks for reviewing anyway. Thanks for critisicms and the like.
manacial-intellect: Yet another victim of my seemingly nice badgering. XD Thank you for reviewing!
All other reviews are on bottoms!
First Ever: Candid Version
-Flashback-
As soon as Bakura walked in through the door of the classroom, Ryou's jaw dropped. This Bakura person had the same silver white hair as he did. So much for an original hair color. The only difference was that it was spikier, and longer. MUCH longer. He wasn't totally like Ryou who was a petite, shy person. He was not petite, he was thin, but in a strong sense. His arms were the sort of which you would want to be caught in should you ever slip and fall. He was much more tall then Ryou bout a couple of inches more. His eyes were the same brown as Ryou's but to Ryou (at that moment) they looked more like warm fudge. Warm fudge was hot wasn't it? Both sweet and dangerous.
Ryou's eyes (unconciously) went down to Bakura's chest....and down to his legs...and down to the very tips of his Coverse clad toes. Suddenly, Ryou noticed what he was doing, blushed slightly, and returned to his compostion.
'What the hell am I thinking?' he thought, ' checking out a GUY?' But he did have to admit though,Bakura was hot. Same thought went to all the girls in the class...save Anzu.
Bakura noticed Ryou and was mildly shocked at the fact he was staring at his near twin. This person had silver hair that was more tame then Bakura's (his stuck up everywhere) his was shorter. Ryou's hair went up to the middle of his back. He's eyes were a warm chocolate
brown and they looked like rich warm hot chocolate. Ryou's body was small and petite but (Bakura guessed) they could be very strong if Ryou wanted it them to be. His legs were long and slender and could run really fast.
Abruptly, Bakura was brought out of his 'daydreaming' by Mrs. Chuzuwaki, who said, " Bakura, you can have the seat...next to....Ryou!"
'Oh my Ra," thought Ryou.
'Holy shit!'
((End Flashback))
It was the dance night at school, and Yugi and Malik had lured Ryou and Bakura into a bench to make them confess to each other.
Well...currently...it wasn't working. The two of them were sitting there, still as the statues on Easter Island. They weren't talking or anything, not moving one muscle at all. But somehow, either Ryou moved closer to Bakura or Bakura had moved closer Ryou.
Yugi and Malik were just going to jump down there and smack the pair of them for their stupidity when, without warning, shooting stars suddenly appeared in the night sky. Glittering as they made their way across the blackness of the sky.
"Ryou...I have something to say to you,"
Silence. Then, "What is it Bakura?"
"Well...the fact is...well maybe this isn't a good time to say this,"
" Just tell me Bakura,"
"All right...truth is...Ryou, "he took a big breath, " I love you...the moment I laid eyes on you. D-do you love me back?"
Ryou smiled and answered in a soft voice, "Yes Bakura...I love you too,"
Bakura smilied and leaned closer to Ryou so that they could share their first kiss.
It was during the heat of the kiss when all of a sudden, Malik sneezed, and since Yugi was standing on his shoulders to peek over the branches of the tree, he released his hold on Yugi's legs, causing the youth's balance to teeter. And fall...into the rosebushes in front of Ryou and Bakura's snogging bench. Malik fell as well, when Yugi fell over.
WHAM! The fragile branches of the rosebush snapped and cracked as the two teens collapsed into the bush.
Startled, Bakura and Ryou looked up from their kissing to stare at the sudden disturbance. Groaning, Yugi and Malik rose up from the bush, their faces mercifully spared from the thorns of the roses.
One of Bakura's eyebrows shot up and disappeared into his hair, his face a combination of mingled horror, embrassment, and shock. Ryou blushed beet red and shrunk his head down from the place it was (next to Bakura's face) and looked away, embrassed that his friends would see him in a situation like this.
For a while, the silence was so proclaimed that you would have heard a spider sneeze. The silence was only broken when Malik said, "Umm..lets all forget this ever happened.." he said, all the while edging away bit by bit, Yugi following him grinning sheepishly. " We won't mention this...and neither will you okay?" Soon the pair of them had edged away from the back of the school and Bakura turned to Ryou, "Now where were we?"
((End Flashback))
((Flashback))
On the day of the homecoming prom, some (people) must have found it funny, cause when the principal stepped up to the podium to announce the homecoming king and queen, everyone expected the usual, Anzu as queen and Yami as king.
" This year...we have some very..uh...strange votes for the position of homecoming king and queen. The nominees for homecoming queen are, Anzu Mazaki! Akari Nosaka, Shizuka Jonouchi and....Ryou Bakura!"
A murmur went through the crowd, Ryou Bakura? A guy? As homecoming queen? That was outrageous! But then...it said so clearly in the rules that whoever was choosen or nominated as king or queen regardless of race, gender, and disablities had to go up on the stage.
Blushing madly, Ryou made his way up to the rather large stage. And he took his place next to Honda's ex-crush, Ribbon Nosaka who smiled shyly at Ryou.
"Now the nominees for the homecoming king are Yami Nishimoto, Katsuya Jonouchi, Seto Kaiba and Bakura Kazamura!"
Another murmur went through the crowd, Otogi wasn't even nominated at all? Normally, the nominees would have been Nishimoto, Jonouchi, Kaiba and Otogi but this year it was Nishimoto, Jonouchi, Kaiba, and Kazamura?! Weird!
"And the winner of the homecoming queen's crown is..." the principal, Mr. Sakurane, flipped open an envolope (like the Oscars) "is...Ryou Bakura!"
"WHAT?!" Anzu screamed. "That's impossible! How can a GUY get nominated for a queen position and win?! That's not fair! I demand that you recount the votes Mr. Sakurane!"
Mr. Sakurane smiled a small polite smile. "Ms Mazaki...I advise that you contain your temper. Yes...it is strange that a male gets nominated for the homecoming queen and wins as well. But I assure you, me and the student council have counted the votes meticously for a number of times."
Anzu shut her mouth, folded her arms and sulked as she watched Ryou (nervously) step up to the mike, and accepted the crown and scepter.
" And....the homecoming king is.....Bakura Kazamura!"
Yami (unlike Anzu) smiled happily as Bakura, looking slightly confused, went up to the principal to accept his crown. Yami had been quite unhappy that over the past two years, Anzu had been forcing people to vote for Yami and her so that she could reign over school with Yami as her 'king'.
"Now...people, it is common tradition that the king kiss the queen. So ah...Ryou and Bakura?"
The audience laughed, it wasn't every day you get to see two guys being forced to kiss each other. Bakura leaned forward and, quite unhesitantly, lightly kissed Ryou on the lips, who was blushing furiously at that moment.
The audience doubled up with laughter, from seeing Ryou blush beet red and from the kiss altogether. Several cameras flashed and that moment would forever go down into history, both in the yearbook, the news, and in people's heads.
((End Flashback))
Ryou smilied dreamily at the swaying branches of the centuries-old willow tree, some of it's branches touching the babbling creek causing ripples. Several robins chittered from somewhere above of Ryou's head, and a squirrel chattered nosily.
Ryou drifted off into a light slumber.
The End
Well...that sucked....-.- I must be losing my touch. Ah well...these are the ten reviews I got! Seriously people I almost burst in joy when I saw those reviews in my email! I couldn't have been happier that day. Ten reviews...wow o.o ((is in shock))
Reviews for Chapter One "First Ever"
Misori Chan: Wow! o.o You actually remembered to review my ficcie? THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH! And you thought it was kawaii and fluffy too??? Thanks! And you said it wasn't OOC too? Thank you so very much! Muchos gracias! ((huggles))
Kimpisces: Wow! Thanks for telling me you liked it! You were one of my first reviewers! Thanks for saying it was cool yes...if Bakura didn;t surprise Ryou you would have thought something was wrong with him. Lovs you! ((huggles))
maniacal intellect: THANK YOU FOR REVIEWING! ((huggles)) Yes...evil Baku-kun is cool!
Pork Steak the Grande: LOL. Your first story deserved five rotten tomatos? laughs too bad it isn't up anymore XD I would have went to review it! Emotions are very hard to put down in words and but I try! OOCness bothers me kinda but I sorta figured out that Bakura isn't like the TV show portrays him. He't too kind and teasing. .--;; Normally he would be all mean and tough. Thanks for the cristisms as well i appreciate it! Update something ya? ((huggles)) I agree...friends ALWAYS try to get you with your crushes looks at lildaedweamer and they make you blush while they're at it!
Ryuujistu; Wow 0.0 you came out of hibernation for me? ((blushes slightly)) Thanx! And you said my story was cool too? Thank you! XP personally I thought that it went off in the end but ya.... you get high on cereal? o.o Ah well..I get high on coffee weird ne?
snow-shadow-wolf: Thank you for reviewing...I think I saw you somewhere in Nek0-chan's "Youth of the Nation" maybe or maybe not....meh...screw that....--;; I have a weird memory. ((huggles))
lildaedweamer: Well...madamoiselle Viv...this review sounded more like a email then a review....-.- All you did was rub it in that you actually reviewed and it took you long enough...sighs anyway lovs ya girl ((huggles half-heartedly)) review "Gone" for me ya?
Yami no Marik: well...I was about to upload my fic when I saw your review. You wouldn't have known this was my first fic? Thanks! smiles Why does everyone delete their first fics? Like Misori, Pork Steak, Cloud-1-3-5 and now you! Thanks for reviewing BOTH my stories! . ((huggles))
orangeaura868: It was unrealistic! o.o ((dies)) oh dear....((worries)) ah well... thanks for reviewing! ((huggles))
Seren147: IT WAS KAWAII? Thanks! Ya...I know they were OOC ((huggles))
loathed wolf spirit: Thank you for saying that wasn't bad! n.n Personally I thought the ending ran off a bit but ya....n.n ((huggles)) By the way...you spelled choking wrong
WOW! TEN REVIEWS? COOLIES! ((gives a tackle-glomp to everybody)) Oh and Pork Steak the Grande...what do you mean have a scandalous night? gets the wrong idea Thanks to everybody who reviewed and told me it was good!
Ta!
((Psycho & Company)) Yokuryu-sama 2004